itty bitty titties

[EddieDavidson]

This is sort of a rough draft/idea. I am not sure that I want to continue with this story, or write it in third person narrative like this. I may want to tell it from one of the character's POV.
It's based loosely on a youtube video I just watched.

https://youtu.be/CagX7MOLERI?si=KcgdR6Mqj_Ml70a2
(no nudity, but obviously PG-13+)

Taylor's dad stood with his arms crossed, looking at his daughter, Taylor, with a stern expression. She just walked in with her shopping bag. The caption on the bag read "Talk Nerdy to Me". She was wearing a comfortable blouse and tight stretchy pants, like most girls her age did.

“Forty minutes late, and you didn’t even give me a call,” he began, his voice steady but frustrated.

Taylor shifted uncomfortably. “I called your phone three times,” she responded, trying to defend herself.

“That does not prevent you from calling me,” he retorted sharply. “We paid for that phone. I got you a charger for the car, a charger for the house, everything you needed. You wanted unlimited mileage, minutes—everything for that phone. The whole purpose was for me to be able to reach you!”

Taylor smiled nervously, but her father’s face hardened. “You better lose that smile,” he warned, his voice lowering. “You know what? I’m gonna help you lose that smile.”

His tone left no room for argument. “Get your butt out to the shed, and you get undressed. I’ll be right out there,” he finished, turning away, leaving no doubt that the conversation was over.

Her little brother was outside mowing the grass. He snickered when he saw his older sister walking out of the house in a huff. He knew there was only one reason Taylor was going to the shed, and that his sister would soon have a sore ass and an even bigger scowl on her face.

"Stop watching, creeper!" she chastised him for rubbing it in - even though Peter hadn't said a word.

"Peter, didn't say anything to you, and Peter is outside doing chores to help around here. I think you owe Peter an apology," Taylor's father said from behind her while she froze in place and cringed.

She pursed her lips and offered an insincere apology through her gritted teeth to Peter.

"Sounds like you want an audience for this spanking, Taylor!"

"No, Daddy! That's gross!"

"you had a choice. You could apologize to Peter like a normal person, but you chose to show your ass out here by being a brat. Spanking you alone in the shed hasn't born any fruit, and now that you are older, I'd prefer Peter be a witness so that you won't make up some story to your mom about inappropriate touching!"

"Daddy, I would never!"

"I don't know what you are capable of Taylor! and frankly, I think the pain of a bare-handed spanking isn't going to put the fear in you. You obviously don't want your little brother to see the crack of your little ass get tanned, so I think that's going to ensure you take the time to call me or your mom if you are going to be late."

"Dad! no way!"

"You are under the opinion that this is a negotiation, Taylor. It isn't. Get in that shed, get those bottoms completely down around your ankles, bend over and wait for me, while I talk to Peter."

Fuming, Taylor stormed off to the shed to obey her father's instruction.

"Okay, Buddy! You don't actually have to go in there and watch your sister. I kind of got carried away because your sister likes to push my buttons and poke the bear. I don't know if you'd even be comfortable watching," he said to his son after Taylor was out of earshot.

Would anyone have some ideas/twists they would like to suggest/brainstorm with me?

[Hooked6]

Great start. I do hope you continue. Lots of possibilities.

Hooked6

[student]

How much as Taylor upset her mother? Father is really irritated by the cumulative series of insults Taylor has inflicted on him, the brother is bothered enough that there's no sympathy, and it is unlikely that Mother wasn't unaffected. If Mother takes Taylor's side and Father is outraged enough, Mother will share her daughter's punishments.

Is there more to this family? Just mother, father, brother and Taylor? How close are the neighbors? Far enough away, it appears, that nobody objects to yelps from the shed.

Taylor didn't become a brat overnight. She isn't going to change for just a one-off spanking. To fit in with ENF, there is going to have to be one or more embarrassed naked females, of course, but it is going to take more than a single session. Perhaps if this story universe had legal extended female nudity and Taylor was voluntold into that program this story could be kept short and have a satisfying ending. One school of thought is that misbehavior is a cry to be noticed, to be the center of attention.

[Freesub]

Peter has to find a way to convince his father to watch the spanking of course!
I think it would be interesting if Taylor misbehaves incrementally, exposing her bare butt, then maybe her breasts and finally her pussy to her brother.

[jimmythehand]

An enjoyable first chapter; looking forward to the continuation.

Would anyone have some ideas/twists they would like to suggest/brainstorm with me?

Given the title of the story, I assume her breast size will come up at some point. My own preferences around that would run to her being exposed as having been stuffing/padding her bras, unbeknownst to anyone else up to that point, which would be a source of great embarrassment to her and something she's desperate to keep secret.

I'd personally prefer to stay away from any enforced nudity laws/programmes for this one, only because we've had a lot of that in stories recently and it's not something that's been mentioned as existing in this story's universe so far. That's not to say I'll stop reading if you do go in that direction - I'm sure it will be good either way.

[mars357]

Maybe she turns out to be a real cry baby who can't take a more serious spanking. Will agree to humiliation (naked lawn mowing or gardening) instead?

[EddieDavidson]

These are good ideas! I have another story I am going to finish first, but I can use more brainstorming.

I think I'll start with the mom, not the father as the punisher, and it is because she is stuffing her bra. That's a brilliant way to do this.

"You want to show off tits that you don't have? you want the neighbors to think you have big boobies? Okay, stand topless in the window, press those little puffy nubs to the glass, and let everybody see what you REALLY have..."

"MAW-AWWWMM!!"

"You want me to make you take down your shorts too?"

"But...But...But!"

"Fine, shorts down, you can show your butt off to your dad and brother, while I make dinner...anytime you tell me But from now on, shorts on the ground, little girl!"