I haven't had very much feedback, except for a couple of polite people who were nice enough to say that my stories were good/they liked the pictures. I want to write a pure "ENF" story, and to do that, I want the Mom of it, to be seemingly impossible to humiliate, but drag her daughters along with her. I don't want to just start though, I thought I would solicit some ideas.
I kind of base her loosely on this woman, Tracy Kiss, whose had Youtube channels about drinking cum for health reasons and does OnlyFans.
https://www.dailymail.co.uk/femail/arti ... bands.html
I would cross her a bit with Kim Kardashian, and that's what I am going for, although she is a typical suburban housewife, and not a billionaire
Is there a forum or place for a suggestion/collaborative way on writing a story? I have this half-baked idea, but nothing else.
This is the rough draft brain dump:
Feed me, Seymour.. My Mom kept begging in a funny voice. She held her pussy flaps between her well painted nails, and moved them as she spoke like the hungry man-eating plant in the movie Little Shop of Horrors. My father laughed and watched as she joked with him.
My mom was wearing fishnet stockings, and a thong, but she had pulled her labia out of the thin satin lingerie, so she could tell the joke. She wasn't wearing any top, and stood flat footed in the middle of our living room with her huge tits bouncing.
Kim! This is why we can't have people over, I complained. My brother Steven was also annoyed but this was my mom's typical behavior around the house and it really didn't matter to her that I complained.
Sure you can, they can feed me too! Mom turned to me and pulled her lips apart wide playfully. I saw her massive clit pressing through the wafer material like a tiny erect penis, as she pushed them back in and gave herself a huge camel toe in the process. She sighed. "Your sister Brandi doesn't mind, do you?"
No, Mom, it's funny! Brandi giggled. She always sides with mom.
Why can't you be more like your sister, Nikki? my mom asked. I was named for the Prince song "Darling Nikki", and even though I look a lot like what my mom looked like before she had plastic surgery to enhance pretty much every part of her body, we are nothing alike..
Why can't I be more of an air-head who flaps her tits and slit at whoever wants a whiff? I asked sarcastically. I wasn't arguing or being mean to my mom. I was just a little frustrated because she can be a little over the top.
My mom is a force of nature, and she isn't like anyone you'll probably ever meet. She's very open about her body and sexuality, and she's usually as sweet as pie, unless you cross her. She gives everybody the benefit of the doubt, until they fuck up and then you are dead to her. She'd swim a thousand miles across the ocean and climb the highest peaks for her kids, but sometimes she isn't the best role model either.
You may think she is an extrovert, but that word doesn't quite do her justice. An extrovert is just an outgoing, overtly expressive person. She's more of a Maxivert - she sucks up all the attention in a room just by walking into it, and she loves it. She loves it when men stare at her awkwardly, and if you ever saw my mother in clothes or naked, you'd see that she gets all the attention she could want, but she still wants more.
I wouldn't say my mother is an attention whore. Whores charge money. She's more of an equal opportunity attention slut - and she exudes sexuality. She maintains an amazing all-over body tan, her nails are always perfect, she has long black hair with soft highlights, and knows how to use makeup the way DaVinci knew how to use paint. She has collagen injected lips, huge breast implants, a teeny-tiny waist, and an ass that looks like it could fit two additional asses inside of it.
My father on the other hand, is much more soft spoken. He's Swedish and laid back, and he dotes on my mother. He is handsome, muscular and very successful as an Engineer. I don't think someone could marry my mom if they had self-esteem or jealousy issues.
As you may have guessed, my mom is a little insatiable, and she has made no secret about that all of her life. She embraces her love of cock and pussy, and she isn't ashamed of it. In fact, I don't think it's possible to embaress or humiliate my mother.
As an example, my Dad showed her a gift he brought home for the both of them. "It's a shirt, Kim!" he said as he handed hers.
The white shirt said "Small Packages". My mom considered it awkwardly. It was just an ordinary woman's shirt, and it was large enough to contain her massive titties.
The matching man's shirt said "Good Things" on it, and my father stripped off his tank-top revealing his muscular chest, and put that on.
My mom didn't get it at all, but I did.
He means that he is good things, and he cums in small packages, Kim, I explained. My mom doesn't like it when we call her "Mom" or "Mommy", she never has. It makes her feel old. She told us a long time ago that she'd always be our mom, that she prefer we address her as Kim like everyone else.
Oh! that's a good one, my mom chuckled.
What I was thinking is that initially the story is about the mom being something of an extreme extrovert, going through typical days where the plumber comes over and she asks flirty questions like "Does this thong make my butt look fat?" and playfully teases her sons and daughter's friends, etc. At some point, I'd have one of her regular lovers come over, and she introduce them to her kids like "This is Leonard, he's going to be living with us for a while" etc.
It's important to know that while the marriage is an open relationship, the father is not a cuckold. He loves that his wife has sex/pleasure and he usually tells her who to fuck, more like a hot wife.
However, as the story continues I was thinking either, the mom wants to start an onlyfans, and she solicits the family to help her pose/set up scenes in increasingly humiliating ways, challenging them to make her blush (which they cannot). It may even become a bit of a competition to see who can help mom get the most views, and in the process, she is doing increasingly embaressing/sexual things fairly openly.
I base this idea somewhat on a real life "Mum" from the UK, Tracey Kriss, who is open about the fact she has a family and even a tattoo to measure the size of cocks (in inches, which is weird since they are metric)
https://www.dailystar.co.uk/love-sex/mu ... f-21718662
I also considered, or possibly both that the mom lays out new rules for the daughters, because she is tired of Nikki being a stick in the mud, and she feels it's only fair for both of them, which require them to be less stuck up/wants to get them new outfits. It could also be that she does it more as a "favor" to improve them.
I also thought about trying to just do normal vanilla things, like the girls have a boy pick them up for a date for prom, and see how that goes. I dunno. I could use some brainstorming thoughts to make it neat. I don't think I wnt to go down BDSM with this, btw.
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