Any ENF stories where the main girl is mute?

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Sorry, my saves are huge mess as well, so the first one I found is not really a proper devoicer story but just references it. It's still pretty good in my opinion, so I thought I'd share it anyway.

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“Oh come on Tracey, it will be fun” Emily wailed and Tracey had to admit she was tempted to go along with her plan.

Emily's “plan” and idea of fun was to take Tracey down to a slave processing center and sell her as a slave! Well not actually sell her but to basically see what she was worth as a slave. They had had a silly argument a few days earlier, it had started with Emily stating how much she liked Tracey's long blonde hair and had spiraled into a girly your prettier than me, no your prettier than me, type row.

Then at some stage Emily had thrown in the comment that she bet Tracey would fetch a good price as a slave.

They must have got a bit carried away because Emily's dad had come into the room to quieten them down and once he heard what they were rowing about he had laughed and said,

“Well why don't you take Tracey down to the center on East Street and get her registered, then you will see how much she's worth.”

Emily had immediately squealed and said what a good idea that was but Tracey wasn't so sure! Yes, like most other girls she had fantasied about becoming a slave but in truth she knew being a slave girl was no easy ride.

Emily's dad had laughed and left the room pleased that he had settled the argument and Tracey had left ten minutes later promising to come back a few days later so they could go over the plan in detail.

Female slavery had been legalized a few years earlier and was now big business. The government had legalized slavery because it was worried about the number of girls from abroad being trafficked into the UK for slavery and prostitution. Instead of clamping down on the illegal trafficking in women though it had decided that it was missing out on taxes and had made slavery legal, and taxable!

Slave processing centers were set up in most towns and cities and girls could be legally registered as slaves. Once they were registered they became the property of the state and were then sold to private individuals or companies and tax was paid on the transaction. Everybody was then happy, the government was earning taxes from the transactions, and the slave owners suddenly owned nubile young girls that they could do anything they wanted to. The only people who might not have been happy were the slaves!

The government had changed the slavery law quite often since it was first bought out. To start with all females convicted of any criminal offence were automatically converted to slaves. This included motoring offences and so a girl caught speeding would find herself up for auction as a slave the next day! Indeed, there was one case where a car was pulled over by the police for having a faulty brake light and all four women in the car were sold as slaves two days later!

According to the government records in the first year of legalized slavery 2,789 women were officially classed as slaves.

A year later the law was changed in a number of ways, firstly girls could volunteer to become slaves, they could literally walk into any processing center and be converted. Secondly girls could be forcibly registered by a responsible adult. This meant a girl’s father could register her as a slave, a boyfriend could do the same or even the girls brother or a teacher. In effect it soon became apparent that anyone who knew the girl could register her as a slave if they wanted to.

There were advantages to registering a girl as a slave, mostly financial. If you took a girl to a center to be processed, you automatically got £250 cash on the spot. You were then entitled to 50% of her sale price once she was auctioned. The other 50% going to the processing center and the government in taxes.

So if you wanted some quick cash and the prospect of more you just took a girl you knew down to the center and got her registered as a slave.

Last year the number of slaves officially registered was 567,987 and the number was expected to rise again this year!

In the first year the law was changed the average cost of a slave at auction was £15,000, last year it was £1500!

Of course once the girl was registered she was micro chipped and registered on to a computer, then when she was sold her now owners details were entered onto the data base much the same way as a car. Once the owner's details were on file he was allowed to sell the girl on to someone else as long as the slave record file was updated with the new owners details each time.

It was all very efficient and completely dehumanizing for the girl but that was the whole point, once a girl was registered as a slave she lost all her human rights, after all she wasn't a human after all, just a slave.

Like most girls Tracey had had occasional fantasies about what it would be like to be a slave girl. Also like most girls nowadays Tracey was a submissive girl, after all it wasn't a good idea to be anything else in a world where if you stood up for yourself you could quite easily be marched off to the nearest slave processing center!

In her own mind though she knew she wasn't ready to be a slave and the idea of letting Emily march her off to the center to see how much she was worth terrified her. So when she went round Emily's house that day she was determined to put an end to this silly thing.

“Oh don't be silly Tracey,” Emily had squealed,” I won't actually get you fully registered, they do free valuations now, I can take you down there and they will give me an idea of what you'd fetch at auction if you put up for sale.”

“Oh, I didn't know that.” Tracey replied feeling silly,” So I don't have to registered as a slave then?”

“No, I mean they have to do some stuff, I think your kind of half registered or something but basically it's just to see what your worth.”

“Oh, well I guess that’s okay then.” Tracey said feeling relieved but still with some apprehension in her voice.

Half an hour later the two girls stood outside the slave processing center and Emily smiled as she pointed to a sign;

Free valuation service available.

Let us value your girls, if they then sell for less

we will pay the difference!

Bring your pussy here!

Tracey had to admit it said it was a free valuation service but she couldn't stop trembling when Emily led her into the building. It was the first time either girl had been inside such a place and Tracey was unsure what to expect and was pleasantly surprised.

The interior was light and airy and nicely painted with a large reception desk at one side, some chairs against the wall and double doors at the other side.

Clearly taking the lead Emily approached the desk and said to the young girl sitting behind it,

“Hi, I'd like you to value this girl please.” she said nodding her head to Tracey standing timidly behind her.

“Okay that's not a problem Miss, I'll have to ask you to complete a registration form and we can get her valued and some money for you in no time at all.” the girl smiled cheerfully handing Emily a form.

Tracey didn't like what she had just said, it had sounded like not only was she about to be valued but registered as a slave at the same time. She looked at Emily and she must have picked up on what Tracey was thinking because she said to the receptionist,

“That sounds a bit final, I was really just looking for a valuation today?”

“Well that's okay, there's a box to tick on the form for valuations only but I wouldn't tick it if I was you until you know what her valuation is, I think you will change your mind once you know what we can offer you.” the girl giggled.

“Oh okay thanks.” Emily laughed and led Tracey to the chairs and sat down and started completing the form.

This involved asking Tracey some questions like her NI number, date of birth, address, etc. which Tracey answered as asked feeling totally surreal sitting there answering her friend’s questions as she completed Tracey's slave registration form!

“Okay that's that done.” Emily said as she signed the form with a flourish, “didn’t take long to sign your life away did it.” she giggled.

“Did you tick the valuation box only?” Tracey asked looking less than happy.

“No not yet, I didn't even see it to be honest,” Emily laughed, “the girl said not to tick it anyway until you've been valued, now let’s get this handed in.”

Tracey followed the seemingly very happy Emily back to the desk and watched her hand the completed form to the smiling girl who then proceeded to scan through it.

“I didn't see the valuation only box?” Emily asked and the girl looked the form up and down before saying,

“No you’re right, they must have changed the form and taken it out.” she said nonchalantly as she started to input Tracey's details into the computer.

Tracey was alarmed as she saw the girl inputting her details and felt like she should speak up but only managed a timid excuse me which to her dismay the girl looked up and then immediately at Emily and said,

“Do you want her devoiced now?”

The question seemed to take Emily as much by surprise as it did Tracey and the girl picked up on her confused look,

“I can devoice her for you, lots of owners have their slaves done now, it only takes a second.” she said.

For a second Tracey thought Emily was going to say yes but to her relief she just shook her head and said,

“Oh no that's okay, she won't say another word.”

Tracey was hoping that was it but instead the girl suddenly produced what looked like a large spray can and out it on the desk,

“Well if you change your mind let me know and I will spray her, just make sure you keep her quiet.”

Tracey did indeed keep quiet as she again watched the girl inputting her details into the computer, glancing at the form Emily had completed every few seconds until she suddenly looked up and smiled at Emily,

“Right that's her registered for you, I can give you £250 now and you will get half of her sale price, the next auction is this afternoon so you won't have long to wait for your money.”

“Really?” Emily said with a hint of surprise in her voice,” she's registered as a slave girl?”

“Yes, fully registered, is that a problem?” the girl asked confused.

“Well I thought I was only agreeing to having her valued?” Emily said as Tracey looked on horrified at what was being said.

“Well the valuation is all part of the registration,” the girl said, “she will be looked at by the grader shortly, coded and put in the auction pen for later but she is legally a slave now.”

Tracey couldn't believe what she was hearing! She had only agreed to come down here to be valued as part of a silly bet, not to become a fully registered slave girl!

“Oh,” Emily said “I just didn't realize she had to be fully registered to be valued, there's no going back now?”

“No, she's fully registered and belongs to the State now to be sold to the highest bidder and you as her seller are entitled to half her sale price, I can't unregister her now I'm afraid, she's a slave for the rest of her life.” the girl smiled before pointing Emily to some chairs and telling her to take Tracey over there and wait for the grader to come for them.

Immediately when they sat down Tracey tore into Emily,

“What have you done, I'm a slave now!!” she cried.

“Don't worry, I'm sure I can sort this out.” Emily replied but Tracey could see that she was not at all sure of her words, “let me ring my dad.” she snapped and within a minute she was gabbling away to her dad explaining what had happened while Tracey sat next to her listening with hope that he might have some good advice.

Instead after she'd told him what had happened Tracey was shocked to hear Emily giggle and say,

“Dad it's not funny!” and then another giggled before, “Well I guess it is really but I don't think Tracey thinks it is.” she shot a look at Tracey and Tracey shot one back confirming that was indeed not happy!

“Well I don't know; I guess we will find that out when she's auctioned off.” Emily giggled down the phone, “dad you pervert!” she squealed with laughter for a second and then said her goodbyes and hung up.

Tracey looked at her with expectation and she was sure that Emily was going to say nothing until she looked at her and shrugged her shoulders,

“He wasn't any good I'm afraid, he just joked about buying you.” Emily giggled.

For the next fifteen minutes they waited, both girls looking worried but only one having something really serious to be worried about! As they waited Tracey saw another five people come into the room, all with young pretty girls in tow and it was obvious why they were there! Soon the whole seating area was full and as the trembling Tracey sat there thinking to herself perhaps she should just make a run for it she heard an older man sitting beside Emily say to her,

“Are both you girls newly registered?”

“Oh no, I'm not but she is.” Emily laughed pointing to Tracey.

“Have you just registered her then love?” nodding to Tracey.

“Yes,” Emily replied and Tracey was dismayed to hear her say it so matter of fact!

“She's a nice looking one, you should get a good price for her.” the old man laughed and Tracey shuddered as she saw him eyeing her up.

“You've not brought one in then?” Emily asked.

“No, I'm here for the auction later on,” he smiled, “they let you inspect the goods before the sale starts so I'm going to have a good time.” he laughed and Tracey hated the way Emily giggled with him!

“I will have fun inspecting your one,” the old man laughed before saying, “it's a pity you don't come as a pair, you’re a little hottie too.” he laughed.

“Oh I'm not ready to be a slave yet,” Emily giggled, “you should buy Tracey here though, I'm sure you could have a lot of fun with her.”

Tracey couldn't believe the way Emily was acting, it was if she thought the whole thing was funny and exciting, not the two feelings Tracey was having right now! She heard the old man and Emily introduce each other and they seemed to be chatting casually without a care in the world!

Just then a biggish man came through the double doors and approached the seated group and with a gruff voice said,

“Okay ladies, I want all the newly registered slaves stripped naked in thirty seconds flat, any questions?”

Tracey sat there dismayed, surely he didn't mean for the girls to get undressed right here in the main foyer, could he? To her surprise though two of the new registrations stood up immediately and started to take their clothes off and they were soon followed by another two or three girls until Tracey was the only new girl glued to her seat.

“What's up with you two princesses?” the man suddenly snarled at Emily and Tracey.

“Oh I'm not slave, this one is though, I bought her in.” Emily said startled pointing at Tracey beside her.

“Are you sure you’re not a slave too, you look like good slave material.” the man snapped at the now slightly scared looking Emily.

“No, I just bought this one in and registered her.” she replied squirming in her seat.

The man looked at with slight contempt before turning his gaze onto the even more frightened Tracey and barking at her,

“Well, get those clothes off, I want you as naked as the day you were born in fifteen seconds.”

Tracey looked to her left and saw there were now six completely naked girls standing there and knowing she really did have no choice she stood up. She shot one last look at Emily for any guidance but all she received back was little smile and a look as if to say I would do as I was told if I was you.

Feeling totally wretched and wondering how it had come to this so quickly Tracey undressed, placing her clothes onto the chair she had just been sitting on until she was as naked as the other slave girls. It felt totally surreal being naked in a brightly lit foyer with lots of people milling about and to make it worse she heard the old man sitting beside Emily laugh,

“I thought she'd be a little stunner and she is, I wish I could afford her.”

“You never know she might go cheap.” Emily giggled.

“Maybe, I still think you'd be better as a pair though.” he laughed just as the man in charge snatched up Tracey's clothes.

“Well register her then, get it done now and we can sell them together.” he said to the old man.

Tracey saw a sudden look of panic in Emily's eyes as the old man looked up and said, “Could I do that then? I mean I only met her minutes ago.”

“Of course you can, if she bought this one in all her details will already be on the computer as an owner, simple enough job then to change her title to slave.

“Really?” the old man said with an excited tone.

“Sure, it will only take a few seconds, come with me to the front desk and we can get it done straight away.”

As the man rose from his seat Emily suddenly found her voice and sounding very scared she said,

“Excuse me, I don't want to be registered.”

Both men looked at her and instantly dismissed her protest

“Start stripping girl, you’re going to be in the same auction as your friend, you'd better be naked when we get back or else.” the man in charge snapped and as he started walking the old man towards the front desk Tracey couldn't help but smile as she saw Emily stand up and start to undress.

[Bucket]

Unfortunately, like a lot of authors, Katie's work is not all nicely catalogued/archived in one place. The one I linked to is the best archive of old stories, but there are heaps more. I don't know if any of the ones in that archive even have devoicers in them. The stories about Tracey Smith vary wildly. They usually all involve slavery, but otherwise it range all the way into very gory stuff that is way beyond what I can tolerate. I'll try to find a couple of the devoicer stories that I have saved and post them here.

Oh wow, thank you. ☺

I have to be honest though, I have no idea what Tracey Smith stories are. Are they all about a girl named Tracey, or is that simply just the name of the site? I'll definitely check it out and see for myself of course. I agree that gory content in anything to do enf or erotica is beyond what I'd like too. I mean, I love horror, but I never want to see the girl getting hurt (beyond maybe being slapped or BDSM type pain) or any gore in the stories.

Anyway, I'll check it all out and thanks again!

[Bucket]

I wonder how close this comes to your "Mute" kink. Obviously a girl who thinks she's a dog goes way beyond mute, but just the same, I would love to hear your feedback if only to help me understand if I write out something more specific to this genre.

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So I'm just briefly skimming over the prologue of More Therapy and already a few things stand out to me that I like.

Bare in mind that when I say I'm briefly skimming over it, I mean very briefly. I won't actually start reading it until earliest Thursady or Friday, (that's if I don't read Midnight Run first, as I've been wanting to read that for a while) but I do like what I'm seeing so far. This scene here was something that I enjoyed and I'll explain why in a sec:

"My dad didn’t say a word, but when I managed to make eye contact with him, he seemed more worried than my mom"

As you by now, I'm a fan of trauma and just the whole mental health side of fiction, (Annie certainly has trauma from what happened to her in Extreme Therapy) outside of, as well as within erotic literature. I'm also a huge fan of submissive female protagonists in these stories, and so far there seems to be an element of all three which I love. I don't know if that's a running theme, but I hope it is.

The reason I used that specific scene with her father, and I'm going to copy and paste from a comment that I posted in one of, if not my favourite enf story to further elaborate, is Annie not being able to make eye contact, which I like, and her father worrying about her, which I like as it clearly revolves around the state of her mental health. Anyway, here's the copy and paste:


"Small things that would be great to see is Rileys body langue changing, and people noticing. What I mean by that is with each passing moment that Riley becomes more and more submissive, I'd love to see her body language reflect that. Her looking down at the ground more often. Her not being able to make eye contact much anymore unless she's told to etc, and fellow students pick up on that. Lily in particular picking up on it too, and consoling her"


I copy and paste this because with that one scene with Annie and her father, as well as her nor really being able to look at both her parents really, I'm really hoping that's going to be a regular thing. Annie's self esteem will have taken an enormous knock from what happened to her in the past.

Small things like that make a story that much better, and It tends to make the protagonist tgat much more likable and you kind of almost want to give Annie a hug because of it.

Does that make any sense? I hope it did. It made sense in my head at least.

Anyway, just giving a quick few initial impressions. I do like what i see so far.

[edithdick]

As you by now, I'm a fan of trauma and just the whole mental health side of fiction, (Annie certainly has trauma from what happened to her in Extreme Therapy) outside of, as well as within erotic literature. I'm also a huge fan of submissive female protagonists in these stories, and so far there seems to be an element of all three which I love. I don't know if that's a running theme, but I hope it is.

The reason I used that specific scene with her father, and I'm going to copy and paste from a comment that I posted in one of, if not my favourite enf story to further elaborate, is Annie not being able to make eye contact, which I like, and her father worrying about her, which I like as it clearly revolves around the state of her mental health. Anyway, here's the copy and paste:

There is no doubt that Annie has endured an overwhelming amount of trauma. Her waking up in the very first chapter and realizing that she has been naked all day was bad enough, but then being mentally tortured by Tabitha and Heidi broke her brain. No spoilers, but More Therapy is dealing specifically with the fallout from Extreme Therapy.

I copy and paste this because with that one scene with Annie and her father, as well as her nor really being able to look at both her parents really, I'm really hoping that's going to be a regular thing. Annie's self esteem will have taken an enormous knock from what happened to her in the past.

Small things like that make a story that much better, and It tends to make the protagonist tgat much more likable and you kind of almost want to give Annie a hug because of it.

Does that make any sense? I hope it did. It made sense in my head at least.

Anyway, just giving a quick few initial impressions. I do like what i see so far.

It makes sense. I appreciate this kind of feedback. My writing is almost entirely done by 'train of thought'. I emotionally connect with the character and write out their perspective as best I can. Your feedback is important because it gives me a chance to see how well I am doing at communicating what the character feels.

I'll try to pay more attention to her non-verbals as I write. Anything to make the scene more immersive for the audience is helpful.

[Bucket]

It makes sense. I appreciate this kind of feedback. My writing is almost entirely done by 'train of thought'. I emotionally connect with the character and write out their perspective as best I can. Your feedback is important because it gives me a chance to see how well I am doing at communicating what the character feels.

I'll try to pay more attention to her non-verbals as I write. Anything to make the scene more immersive for the audience is helpful.

No problem whatsoever. Providing feedback whilst having fun reading a great story is always fun in itself.

[Bucket]

So, I am not 100% clear on what this "kink" is about. Bucket, you said you had not yet read the second book in Extreme Therapy (More Therapy)... The shorthand synopsis is that the Sophie personality, aka the part of Annie who things she's a dog, takes over and Annie becomes a voice in her head providing the narration.

The reason I bring it up is that, being a dog trapped in a teen girl's body, she cannot communicate directly throughout most of the story. Since the story is narrated by Annie, who is essentially just along for the ride while Sophie interacts with everyone... I wonder how close this comes to your "Mute" kink. Obviously a girl who thinks she's a dog goes way beyond mute, but just the same, I would love to hear your feedback if only to help me understand if I write out something more specific to this genre.

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Just left a few thoughts on your story. Ok, a lot of thoughts. It's a bit of a long read.

[edithdick]

Mute girls is also a kink for me, but I have never found a story themed around it. Just found mute girls in media sexy sometimes. I would also be interested if you find anything.

Discussing this story has been really helpful to my writing process. Sometimes, especially when I have a scene I am writing toward, I can get tunnel vision and my writing quality suffers. When I wrote the first one, I really had no plan. Chapter 1 was supposed to be a complete story of an ENF version of the emperor's new clothes... When a reader commented that I needed to work on adding tension to the story, I decided to continue the story and just focused on that... turns out he meant sexual tension, but I sort of liked the way it went from there, anyway.

Book 2 was more planned out, at least in large chunks. When I start to feel like I am writing on autopilot, I take a break. At one point I even deleted an entire published chapter and rewrote it because the chapter I had published was crap.

I think for the remainder of the story, I will take your words to heart and get back into Annie's emotional state. She is about to suffer the brunt of the consequences of everything that has happened to her when she returns to school. For the story to end correctly, she needs to be at a stress level of 11 anyway.

[Bucket]

Mute girls is also a kink for me, but I have never found a story themed around it. Just found mute girls in media sexy sometimes. I would also be interested if you find anything.

Discussing this story has been really helpful to my writing process.

So glad that if nothing else, this thread played some part in helping a writer, even if just a bit. ☺

[edithdick]

So glad that if nothing else, this thread played some part in helping a writer, even if just a bit. ☺

At this point I think it’s been concluded to myself that I’m going to write this story once More Therapy is closed out. I’ve noodled around in my head about the tone and flow of this story and at least have identified the main characters I will likely use.

I’m guessing 10-12 chapters, but who knows once it gets started.

[Bucket]

So glad that if nothing else, this thread played some part in helping a writer, even if just a bit. ☺

At this point I think it’s been concluded to myself that I’m going to write this story once More Therapy is closed out. I’ve noodled around in my head about the tone and flow of this story and at least have identified the main characters I will likely use.

I’m guessing 10-12 chapters, but who knows once it gets started.

Absolutely brilliant! Things you love to hear!

I've always found mute girls in fiction to be so very cute. The ways they can't express what they're feeling/thinking so they have to convey what little message they can through their eyes, (I'd recommend giving the protagonist big, beautiful blue or green eyes and making an emphasis on her stunning eyes throughout the story) mannerisms and body language.

It also adds a significant layer of vulnerability to the girl that otherwise wouldn't be there without mutism, and vulnerability within an enf story is incredibly vital, at least in my opinion. Plus the whole trauma aspect adds yet more vulnerability.

I'm sure you've likely picked up on how I've used the word "cute" a lot, both here and in More Therapy. A cute protagonist is by far my favourite kind, especially when it comes to this mute girl, so I'd recommend leaning into that as well. (You asked me before why mute girls and what is it about them, and a very simplified answer, though there are a few different reasons, would be the cuteness factor)

Well, cute but with an extreme side order of trauma that is. Again, if you have time and if you're up for it, I'd highly recommend you read that Life is Strange fanfic that I linked, as that'll help tremendously to find that balance imo.

I guess that's why I really do like Annie a lot too. She's also very cute, in spite of her trauma.

Lastly, if I may make a request? Short, petite girls in these these stories will always, always be my thing, so if you feel like it, that'd be my request. There's a story on here I love where the protagonist is tiny, 4'10, and It just makes an already phenomenal story that much better.

You absolutely don't have to of course, but just thought I'd throw that out there.

Anyway, really appreciate you putting so much time and effort into this!