The Unraveling (New 11/03)

[Kimmik]

Love all of this!

Orgasm control, denial and constant edging in particular. Constant edging to the point of Riley "blue beaning" (female equivalent of blue balling) would be unbelievably fun, (and could play a huge part in Riley becoming a girl who squirts, assuming that's the direction the story goes in) and would make Riley a constantly horny mess haha!

Also, making Riley not allowed to orgasm without permission so she has beg for permission to climax each time would be great to see as well. Would make her even more submissive. The more submissive Riley becomes the better.

Public stimulation is also a personal favourite of mine, so Riley having to have toys inserted in public whilst having to act normal or talk to people while the toys are driving her crazy, especially if she's been edged for a while is 100% something I want to see on a regular basis.

Riley trying DESPERATELY not to moan in public or collapse due to very weak knees equals infinite fun!

Since squirting is a thing that only really happens in porn; the girls essentially just piss themselves; I don't think it should play a big role. I mean, you could make it so that Riley gets conditioned by the girls to humiliate herself by pissing herself during orgasm, but "squirting" is not a natural behavior. Maybe Riley gets just really wet, but squirtimg as seen in porn where a fountain of "cum" gets shot through the air is not narural...

I have to disagree with you there, at least to certain extent.

I've witnessed first-hand fluid literally squirting out due to orgasms, and on more than one occasion. Full body, quivering and shaking type orgasms. I know that squirting orgasms can be almost like this mythical creature of sorts, but I can 100% attest to it's existence, and it definitely wasn't pee. I do like your suggestion of humiliation through Riley peeing herself in front of an audience though.

There's another story that I'm reading (waiting for new chapters though unfortunately) where the main character has to ask permission to use the toilet to relieve herself and it often results in her wetting herself. It's actually surprisingly effective, and incredibly fun to read, so I'd absolutely be good with Riley wetting herself in front of others for sure.

What's this story? Could you perhaps link it or point me to it?

[Bucket]

Since squirting is a thing that only really happens in porn; the girls essentially just piss themselves; I don't think it should play a big role. I mean, you could make it so that Riley gets conditioned by the girls to humiliate herself by pissing herself during orgasm, but "squirting" is not a natural behavior. Maybe Riley gets just really wet, but squirtimg as seen in porn where a fountain of "cum" gets shot through the air is not narural...

I have to disagree with you there, at least to certain extent.

I've witnessed first-hand fluid literally squirting out due to orgasms, and on more than one occasion. Full body, quivering and shaking type orgasms. I know that squirting orgasms can be almost like this mythical creature of sorts, but I can 100% attest to it's existence, and it definitely wasn't pee. I do like your suggestion of humiliation through Riley peeing herself in front of an audience though.

There's another story that I'm reading (waiting for new chapters though unfortunately) where the main character has to ask permission to use the toilet to relieve herself and it often results in her wetting herself. It's actually surprisingly effective, and incredibly fun to read, so I'd absolutely be good with Riley wetting herself in front of others for sure.

What's this story? Could you perhaps link it or point me to it?

Sure, no problem!

So long as it's ok with Emily? I don't want to be a nuisance by posting other writers stories within this story, and forgive me, Emily, if it's not a cool thing to do. The story is called The Housekeeper and it's on the first page of this site. The Housekeeper and this story, The Unravelling, are by far my two most favourite stories on here by quite some distance.

[Bucket]

Ok, so I've just read the latest 3 chapters and I have to say, you've truly outdone yourself, Emily!

Seriously, chapter 30 is jaw droppingly good, and has just taken this story to a whole other level! The edging and constant arousal with the orgasm denial stipulation is absolutely sensational! Riley literally dripping wet is ludicrously hot and I hope to see it it as a running theme. Having her thighs constantly coated in her own juices is unbelievably brilliant, and I love how it makes her feel so uncomfortable in her own clothes. (The few times she's actually allowed to wear underwear/clothes in general, thereby conditioning her even more)

She'd actually likeky get quite dehydrated if she continued on like this. Could potentially set up a scenario where she's encouraged to drink a lot more water which could lead to a fun situation where she accidentally wets herself in company.


Riley having to beg to cum is exactly what I was hoping to see, so loved that. The only thing I'd like to see more of is her huge reluctance to stop. Not for her to defy any demands from the girls, but for her to be desperate for release more often so instead of just stopping, she instead pauses & tries her luck and begs, only for the request to climax mostly get rejected.


Speaking of reluctance, I'd personally like to see more reluctance from Riley. (Not defiance though) I absolutely want Riley to be as submissive as possible, but with visible reluctance. For example, she clearly doesn't have it in her to push back in the slightest, (which I'm 100% all for) so instead of arguing or talking back, she'd whimper and look at the girls with a desperate look in her eyes pleading them for mercy. Mercy she never/very rarely gets. Whimpering is very effective within submissive ENF stories imo.

It'd be nice to see the girls demand Riley do something that just pushes her boundaries too far that, even though she knows that she has to do it, protests in the only way she knows how by giving them the pleading puppy dog eyes, only this time, she's about to cry from the demand being too much for her to handle, and the girls see she's starting to cry so they reach out to her, perhaps hug her, and say it's ok, she doesn't have to do that particular thing they wanted her to do and they give her something else to do instead.

The gyno visit was huge fun and I enjoyed that quite a lot. I did think the Dr. was going to be male though (not a problem that she was female) and I had a feeling that the doctor's touching was going to push her over the edge and she was going to accidentally cum without permission. It's totally fine though. It's not necessarily a missed opportunity, as you still handled it very well. Eould like to see an accidental orgasm at some point though.

Small things that would be great to see is Rileys body langue changing, and people noticing. What I mean by that is with each passing moment that Riley becomes more and more submissive, I'd love to see her body language reflect that. Her looking down at the ground more often. Her not being able to make eye contact much anymore unless she's told to etc, and fellow students pick up on that. Lily in particular picking up on it too, and consoling her.

Also, maybe it's just me, but I love to see the mental health aspects of what's going on with the girl in these stories. Like as in just how much she's changed and what's happening to her, and just how much shame she's experiencing. She's not in the best headspace at all. It makes the story more realistic imo. There was a moment in... I think it was chapter 28 or 29 where Riley's walking to her room from the showers and her eyes begin to tear up and one of the girls asks if she's ok when clearly she's not ok. She was such a good girl, and she's now become (reluctantly) the total opposite.

Again, maybe it's just me, but I love this side of the story and would love to see more if it.

Chapter 32 was absolutely phenomenal, and I LOVE what's going on between Riley and Lily here! I've mentioned before that I would very much like to see Riley develop a genuine crush on Lily, so if that's where this is headed, I'm so damn on board for that! If not, well that's fine too, but this chapter REALLY sets that up flawlessly.

Speaking of the dynamic between Riley and Lily, I think I mentioned it before, but I'd truly much prefer if the heart and soul of this story revolved strongly around Riley's humiliation and nudity, with Lily's humiliation and nudity nowhere near as mortifying or regular as Riley's.

Moments where Lily also goes through her own trials and tribulations alongside Riley is totally fine, but Riley being the main subject of the most humiliation and exposure, where Lily is a bit submissive and a bit exposed, but Riley being extremely submissive and very exposed and vulnerable is incredibly preferable imo.

Anyway, apologies for the ridiculously long post, but again, you just took this story to a whole other level, and I had so much to say about it.

I said that this story is in my top two stories  online with this being my second favourite, but after reading the latest three chapters, I'm actually thinking that this could actually be my all time favourite! It really is essentially flawless, and there are still so many fun possibilities.

There's still more I could say about this story, but I've left about a hundred thousand word review for the last three chapters, so I'll stop there for now lol.

I can't express enough how much I wish you could release another 10 chapters within a week, but I know that's not exactly a realistic target.

Anyway, many thanks again for writing this masterpiece, and Holy hell can I not wait for more!

[Emily]

Chapter 33

Riley and Lily’s hearts skipped a beat in unison. The thought of facing the whole group, of being put on display in their new bikinis, was almost too much to bear. But they had no choice. They had given up their autonomy to Claire's whims, and now they had to face the consequences.

The walk to the pool was a blur of heat and anticipation. The sidewalks stretched out before them like a runway, each step a silent admission of their fate. Riley's hand clutched her bag tightly, the fabric of her bikini bottoms riding up with every stride, the friction against her sensitive skin a constant reminder of her vulnerability. Lily's cheeks were flushed, her eyes darting around nervously, as if searching for an escape route.

When they arrived, the pool was a glittering oasis surrounded by lush greenery and the low murmur of a few students basking in the sun. Claire led them to a set of lounge chairs, the plastic creaking under their weight as they sat. Riley felt the heat of the metal frame through her bikini, the stark contrast with the cool water just a few feet away making her acutely aware of her surroundings. She grabbed a towel, wrapping it tightly around her waist, the fabric sticking slightly to her damp skin.

“Now, let’s see those bikinis in their full glory, shall we?” Claire’s eyes gleamed with excitement as she took a seat beside them.

With a deep breath, Riley peeled off her shirt, her eyes darting around the mostly empty pool area. The few students lounging nearby didn’t seem to pay them much mind, lost in their own conversations or scrolling through their phones. The towel dropped away, revealing her barely covered body to the world. Lily followed suit, her cheeks flaming as she bared her midriff. The cool air kissed their skin, sending goosebumps down their spines.

They removed their shoes, the rubber soles peeling away from their damp feet with a faint sigh of relief. The scent of chlorine and coconut sunscreen hung in the air, a peculiar mix that seemed to underscore the tension between them. They sat back on the lounge chairs, the plastic squeaking in protest beneath them, the sound echoing through the stillness of the early afternoon.

As they settled, the sound of laughter grew closer, the unmistakable tones of Ellie and Aria cutting through the air like a knife. Riley’s heart skipped a beat as they approached, their eyes scanning over the trio with a predatory glint. "Well, well, well," Ellie said, her voice laden with amusement as she took in their bikini-clad forms. "Looks like someone’s been busy playing dress-up."

Aria's gaze fell to Riley's chest, a smirk playing on her lips. "It's cute, really," she said, reaching out to poke at one of Riley's breasts. "So... barely there. It's like a teaser for what's not to come."

“Turn around for us, Riley,” Ellie said with a sly smile, her eyes gleaming with mischief. Riley’s heart pounded in her chest as she slowly swiveled on the lounge chair, the plastic squeaking beneath her. She could feel their eyes on her, a physical weight that made her skin crawl.

“Looks like someone’s been playing peekaboo with their bikini bottoms,” Aria giggled, pointing at the way Riley’s bottoms had ridden up slightly in the back. The fabric clung to her skin, leaving a small strip of bare flesh exposed.

Riley’s cheeks burned with embarrassment as she quickly adjusted herself, the heat from her face radiating down to her neck. She knew she was the butt of their joke, but she couldn’t help the thrill that shot through her at the thought of their eyes on her body. The power they held over her was intoxicating, a heady mix of fear and desire that had her body responding in ways she couldn’t control.

But she wasn’t the only one in the spotlight. Ellie and Aria’s gazes shifted to Lily, who sat frozen, her legs clamped together. The wet spot on her bikini bottom was a beacon of her arousal, a dark splotch against the pale blue fabric that grew more prominent with every passing second. The two girls giggled, their eyes sparkling with amusement.

Ellie leaned in, her voice a conspiratorial whisper. "Looks like someone's more than just a little excited for our pool party," she said, her eyes glued to the wet spot on Lily's bikini.

With a dramatic flair, Ellie and Aria peeled off their shirts, revealing their own bikinis. The fabric clung to their bodies like a second skin, leaving nothing to the imagination. Ellie's was a daring red, the strings tied in a bow at the back, emphasizing her toned abs and the curve of her hips. Aria's was a daringly low-cut black number, the kind that seemed to be held together by a miracle of physics and goodwill.

They held up a third bikini, a matching set to their own, for Claire. "You didn't think we'd forget you, did you?" Ellie said, her smile wicked.

Claire took the bikini with a knowing smile, standing gracefully. "Give me a moment," she said, before sauntering off to the changing room. The door swung shut behind her, leaving Riley and Lily alone under the watchful eyes of Ellie and Aria.

"Come on," Ellie said, her voice a purr of excitement. "Let's go for a swim." She didn't wait for a response, standing up and striding towards the pool. Aria followed, her eyes never leaving the two friends on the lounge chairs.

Riley and Lily exchanged a tentative glance before they, too, stood and made their way to the pool's edge. The water glinted in the sunlight, the surface rippling gently from Ellie and Aria's recent entry. The coolness of the water was a stark contrast to the heat of their bodies, the chill sending a shiver through them as they dipped their toes in.

"Come on," Ellie called out, already treading water in the deep end, her breasts bobbing slightly with every movement. "Don't be shy."

Aria splashed water in their direction, her laughter echoing off the tiles. "Yeah, let's go!"

Riley took a deep breath and stepped into the water, the coolness enveloping her like a liquid embrace. Lily followed, the two of them staying in the shallow end while Ellie and Aria swam away, their laughter fading slightly as the distance grew. The water was a refreshing relief from the heat of the day, the sun's rays piercing the surface in shimmering shafts of light.

They waded in slowly, the water lapping at their waists, and finally reaching the point where they could stand without fear of their bikinis slipping. Lily leaned against the edge of the pool, her eyes locked on the retreating figures of Ellie and Aria. "What do you think they have planned?" she murmured, her voice barely audible over the gentle splashing of the water.

Riley shrugged, the movement causing her breasts to jiggle slightly in the water. "I don't know, but it can't be good," she replied, her voice tight with tension.

“Well, whatever it is, we’re in this together,” Lily said, her voice a little shaky but filled with determination.

Riley nodded, the coolness of the water a stark contrast to the fire in her belly. She felt a strange mix of fear and excitement, the kind that came from knowing you were about to do something you never thought you’d dare. “We’ll get through it,” she murmured, trying to convince herself as much as Lily.

Lily’s eyes searched hers, a silent question lingering in the air. “You know, Riley, I can’t believe all the stuff you told me you did last night,” she whispered, her voice barely carrying over the gentle splash of the pool.

Riley felt her cheeks heat up, the coolness of the water doing little to ease the burning embarrassment. She nodded, her eyes flicking to the side to avoid Lily’s gaze. “I know, it’s... intense,” she murmured.

Lily took a step closer, her eyes searching Riley’s. “I mean it. You’re so brave,” she said, her voice low and earnest. “I could never do something like that. I don’t know how you... handle it all.”

Riley felt a warmth spread through her chest, the words surprisingly comforting. “Thanks,” she murmured, a small smile playing on her lips. She felt a strange sense of pride, as if she had just confessed to a heroic deed instead of a night of humiliation.

“Lily, can I ask you something?” Riley’s voice was soft, her eyes searching her friend’s for any signs of judgment.

Lily nodded, her eyes flicking briefly to where Ellie and Aria were playing in the deep end. “What’s up?”

Riley took a deep breath, the water lapping at her bare shoulders. “Were you... were you given the same rule?” She asked, her voice low and trembling slightly. “The... the rule about not... you know, climaxing?”

Lily’s eyes widened, the question hanging in the air like a ripe fruit ready to drop. She bit her bottom lip, the pink flesh disappearing between her teeth as she considered her response. Then she nodded, a small, almost imperceptible movement. “Yeah,” she murmured, her eyes flicking back to the deep end where Ellie and Aria were splashing each other playfully. “They said I couldn’t either. Not without their permission.”

Riley felt a strange sense of relief, as if confessing her own rule had somehow made her less alone. The water was a balm to her burning skin, the chill soothing the ache in her pussy. She hadn’t realized how much she’d been craving release, how much she’d been yearning for that sweet oblivion that came with an orgasm. But now, with the knowledge that Lily was in the same boat, she felt a strange camaraderie.

“It’s weird, isn’t it?” Lily whispered, her voice barely carrying over the sound of the water. “I mean, I never really... did that before college. And now it’s all I can think about.”

Riley nodded, understanding dawning in her eyes. “Yeah, I get it,” she said, her voice a soft murmur. “It’s like... it’s like something’s been unlocked inside of me, and I can’t go back to how it was before.”

Lily’s cheeks flushed a deeper shade of pink, and she looked away again, her eyes searching the pool water for answers. “I never knew it could be like this,” she admitted, her voice barely a whisper. “It’s... it’s so intense. And the fact that we’re doing it in front of them... it’s like they own us, in a way. Like we’re their little toys to play with and tease and...” She trailed off, her voice catching in her throat.

Riley’s heart skipped a beat as she watched Lily, the water lapping gently against their legs. She knew exactly what she meant. The power dynamics had shifted so dramatically in such a short time that it was hard to remember a time when they hadn’t been at the mercy of Claire, Ellie, and Aria’s whims.

Just as the silence between them grew thick with unspoken truths, the changing room door swung open, and Claire emerged, the matching black bikini hugging her curves like a second skin. She strode towards them with the confidence of a lioness, the sun casting a halo around her fiery hair. The strings at her hips and neck were tied in perfect bows, her eyes gleaming with satisfaction as she took in their reactions.

"Alright, my little mermaids," Claire announced with a smirk, her voice carrying across the water. "It's time to play a little game."

Ellie and Aria swam over, their strokes powerful and purposeful, the water sluicing off their bodies as they approached. Riley's stomach flipped at the sight of them, so confident and in control. What could they possibly have in store for them now?

"Welcome to 'Bikini Steal'," Claire announced with a wicked smile as she slid into the water, the fabric of her bikini hugging her body in a way that left no doubt about her intentions. "The rules are simple. You two," she said, pointing at Riley and Lily, "will compete to see who can remove the other's bikini first. No touching your own, and no leaving the water. Last one standing wins."

Riley's eyes widened in horror, darting to Lily's. The water around them grew still, the only movement coming from their own bodies as they tread water. "But..." she began to protest, her voice trailing off as she realized the futility of her words.

"But what, Riley?" Claire's smile was cold, her eyes gleaming with a challenge. "Don't tell me you're not up for a little friendly competition?"

Riley's eyes widened further, and she gave Claire a pleading look that was both desperate and hopeful. Lily's eyes met hers, and she could see the same mix of fear and excitement reflected there. They had to play along, for now at least.

The game began with a splash as Aria and Ellie cheered them on from the sidelines. The water was a ballet of limbs and bubbles as they tried to outmaneuver each other. Riley's heart raced as she reached for Lily's bikini strings, her fingers brushing against the soft flesh of her stomach. Lily squirmed and squealed, her own hands flailing in an attempt to protect herself. It was a dance of anticipation and dread, each movement bringing them closer to exposure.

As they struggled, Riley's eyes fell on Lily's chest, rising and falling with the effort of treading water. A glint of strategy flashed in her mind. If she could just get a good grip on the strings of Lily's top, she could pull it clean off in one swift motion. She waited for the perfect moment, watching the ripples of the water for any signs of Lily's weakness.

Then, she saw it. Lily's guard dropped slightly, and Riley struck. Her fingers closed around the strings, and with a swift yank, she pulled. The top of Lily's bikini came free, and the fabric fluttered away, revealing her bare breasts to the cool air and the water's embrace. Lily's eyes went wide with shock, her mouth forming a perfect "O" of surprise.

“I’m sorry, Lily,” Riley whispered, her eyes flicking to Lily’s bare chest, which bobbed just above the waterline. The shock on Lily’s face was a mirror of her own feelings.

Riley’s eyes darted around the pool, her heart racing as she searched for any onlookers. The few students scattered about were either lost in their phones or deep in conversation, their eyes oblivious to the erotic dance unfolding before them. The waterline lapped at their chests, their breaths coming in quick gasps as they circled each other. The emptiness of the pool was both a blessing and a curse—a stage for their humiliation but also a shield from the prying eyes of their peers.

It was in this moment of distraction that Lily struck. With a swiftness that belied her shaky legs, she reached down and grabbed the strings of Riley’s bikini bottoms. Riley felt the sudden tug, the fabric giving way with a wet snap. She squealed, her hands flying to cover herself, but it was too late. The bikini bottoms were in Lily’s grasp, and she held them up in victory, the strings trailing in the water like a battle flag.

Riley’s eyes went wide with horror, her cheeks burning as she looked down to see her pussy exposed to the world. The water was cool against her bare skin, sending a shiver down her spine. She could feel the eyes of the others on her, their gazes like hot coals on her most intimate parts. The embarrassment was crushing, a weight that threatened to pull her under.

Lily looked equally mortified, her breasts bobbing in the water as she clutched the remnants of her own bikini. They were both at the mercy of the game now, each with just one piece of their swimsuits remaining. The water was a blur of movement as they circled each other, their breaths coming in quick, shallow gasps.

Seeing an opportunity, Riley took a deep breath and dove beneath the surface, her eyes locking onto Lily's bikini bottoms. The world went silent except for the muffled sounds of the water rushing past her ears. She reached up, her fingers wrapping around the strings of Lily's bikini, and began to pull. The fabric felt slippery in her grasp, but she held firm, her eyes never leaving the prize above her.

As she tugged, she caught a glimpse of Lily's pussy, the top of her slit peeking out like a secret waiting to be revealed. The sight sent a thrill through her, a mix of excitement and terror. She was so close to victory, but she could feel Lily's desperation to keep her own modesty intact.

Just as she was about to pull Lily's bikini bottoms down completely, she felt a sudden release. Her own top unclipped, and the fabric fell away, exposing her breasts to the cool water. She gasped and surfaced, her eyes flying to Lily's shocked face. Somehow, amidst the chaos of their underwater struggle, Lily had managed to free Riley's breasts.

Their eyes met, and for a brief moment, the world stilled. The weight of the game and their new reality settled between them, their chests heaving with the effort of their fight. The silence was deafening, the only sound the distant echo of Ellie and Aria's laughter as they watched the spectacle unfold.

"Looks like Lily wins," Claire announced with a smug smile, her eyes lingering on Riley's exposed chest. "Well done, Lily."

Riley clutched her crotch, the cold water doing little to ease the burning embarrassment that flooded her body. She darted her eyes around the pool, praying that nobody had noticed their intimate battle. The few people nearby were still engrossed in their conversations, but she couldn't shake the feeling of being on display. Her heart pounded in her chest, the throb matching the pulse between her legs.

"Now, now," Ellie chuckled, swimming over to them with a grace that seemed almost predatory. "No need to be shy, Riley. After all, you're part of the entertainment." She reached out and tweaked Riley's exposed nipple, the sensation sending a jolt through her body.

Aria followed suit, her eyes gleaming as she retrieved Lily's discarded bikini top. "It's only fair we collect all the pieces," she said, her voice a low purr as she held the fabric up like a trophy.

Riley felt a sinking feeling in her stomach as she watched the girls collect the remnants of their swimsuits. It was as if they were taking pieces of her dignity, one soggy scrap at a time. Her cheeks burned with a blend of humiliation and arousal, the latter a traitorous response to the power they held over her.

With a tremble, she took a deep breath and submerged herself again, trying to keep her body as hidden as possible. The water swirled around her, a temporary reprieve from the glares of the sun and the eyes of her tormentors. She felt the coldness envelop her breasts, the sensation both comforting and a stark reminder of her vulnerability.

As she surfaced, she saw Ellie and Aria waving the bikini pieces in the air, their laughter taunting and cruel. "Now, Riley," Ellie called out, her voice dripping with mock sweetness, "it's time for your little edging session. You remember the rules, don't you?"

Riley nodded, the humiliation stinging like the saltwater in her eyes. She knew what was coming—a relentless tease, bringing her to the brink of climax without ever letting her fall over. It was a twisted form of punishment, one that seemed to bring her tormentors an endless source of amusement.

Her eyes flicked to Lily, who was still treading water, her arms crossed over her chest. The sight of her friend's bare breasts had only served to amplify her own embarrassment. Lily looked at her with a mix of pity and determination, her eyes saying, "We're in this together."

"Please, not here," Riley whispered, her voice shaking with fear and arousal. "It's too public."

"Public?" Ellie scoffed, her eyes scanning the mostly empty pool. "This is just the warm-up, Riley. Besides, nobody's watching."

Riley's heart sank as she realized the futility of her protest. Ellie was right—there was no escape from this game. With a resigned sigh, she allowed her arms to fall to her sides, her breasts bobbing slightly in the water. The coolness of the pool was a stark contrast to the fire burning in her cheeks as she felt the eyes of the trio on her.

With trembling hands, she reached down to touch herself, her fingers grazing the sensitive skin of her clit. The sensation was electric, sending shockwaves through her body. She closed her eyes, trying to focus on the feeling rather than the embarrassment. But it was hard, knowing that every movement she made was being scrutinized by the three girls who had so effortlessly stripped her of her dignity.

"No, no hands," Ellie chuckled, swimming closer and gently swatting Riley's hand away. "Let's see how creative you can get."

Riley's face contorted with a mix of shock and embarrassment. How could she possibly climax without touching herself? She felt like a trapped animal, desperate for escape but with no means to do so. She took a deep breath, the cool water doing little to calm her racing thoughts.

Her eyes darted around the pool, looking for anything she could use to satisfy the insatiable hunger that had been building in her. That's when she had an idea. She swam quickly to the stairs, her heart pounding in her chest. The girls watched her, curious as to what she could possibly do without her hands. Riley's skinny butt was on full display, the muscles rippling under the water's surface as she propelled herself through the pool with surprising speed.

Once she reached the stairs, she didn't hesitate. She pulled herself up onto the second step, her legs wrapping around the thick metal railing that served as the banister. It was cold against her skin, sending goosebumps up her spine. She took a deep breath, feeling the eyes of the trio on her, watching her every move. Her cheeks burned, but she knew she had to play along.

With a shaky hand, she reached down and adjusted herself, moving the railing so it was perfectly aligned with her pussy. Then, with a grimace, she began to grind against it, her body moving in slow, rhythmic motions that grew faster with each passing moment. The cold metal was unforgiving, the friction almost painful as she rubbed herself against it. She bit her lip to keep from crying out, the sensation jolting and uncomfortable.

But it wasn’t working. Her body refused to respond, frozen with the fear of being caught and the embarrassment of her situation. The pressure mounted, the need to come growing more desperate with each second that ticked by. Her legs began to tremble, and she knew she couldn’t keep this up much longer. She looked over at Lily, who was now swimming closer, her eyes filled with a mix of concern and curiosity.

With a frustrated sigh, Riley slid off the step and back into the water. She floated there for a moment, feeling the cool liquid caress her bare skin, trying to calm her racing heart. "I can't do it," she admitted, her voice a whisper that seemed to echo across the pool.

Lily, who had been watching with a mix of worry and fascination, swam closer. She leaned in and whispered, "Why don't you try the pool jets?" Her eyes flicked to the side, indicating the powerful jets along the edge of the pool. “Claire made me do it once, and it was... intense.”

Riley's gaze followed hers, and she saw the jets bubbling with promise. The idea of using the jets had never occurred to her, but desperation was a powerful motivator. She nodded and swam over to one, her bare skin gliding through the water. The jet was situated at the perfect height to press against her clit, and she felt a flicker of hope.

As she positioned herself, the water rushing against her most sensitive spot, she couldn't help but feel a twinge of exhibitionism. The trio watched with rapt attention, their eyes devouring every inch of her exposed flesh. The sensation was strange—part humiliating, part thrilling. She took a deep breath and leaned into the jet, the water pressure pummeling her clit with a force that was almost too much to handle.

The feeling was exquisite, the pulsing water sending waves of pleasure through her body. Her hips began to move instinctively, grinding against the jet as she sought relief from the unrelenting ache that had been building inside her for days. The sensation grew more intense with every second, her breath hitching in her throat as she felt herself getting closer and closer to the edge.

Ellie, Aria, and Claire watched with smirks on their faces, enjoying the show she was putting on. Riley could feel their eyes on her, their amusement a twisted form of validation. It was as if their gazes were a spotlight, illuminating her most intimate moments and leaving her no room to hide. The humiliation was a strange aphrodisiac, making her feel both exposed and desired.

Her hips began to move more frantically, her breath coming in short, shallow gasps. The water churned around her, the jet's pulse matching the rhythm of her own heart. The pleasure grew, a crescendo of sensation that threatened to overwhelm her. She was so close, the edge of climax just within reach.

But as she felt the orgasm begin to build, Ellie's voice cut through the air like a knife. "Remember, Riley," she said, her tone mockingly sweet, "no coming without permission."

Riley gritted her teeth, her body trembling with the effort of holding back. The jet's pulse grew stronger, the water's touch more insistent. Her eyes squeezed shut as she fought the wave of pleasure that threatened to consume her. Her legs trembled, her thighs quivering with the strain of maintaining her position.

"Please," she managed to choke out, her voice hoarse. "I need to come."

Ellie's smile grew wider, more predatory. "Not until you've earned it," she said, her eyes gleaming. "You know the rules."

With a whine of frustration, Riley backed off the jet, her body screaming for release. The sudden absence of the water's relentless pressure was almost painful, leaving her feeling empty and denied. She hovered there for a moment, her legs trembling with the effort of holding herself above the water.

Lily, still covering her breasts, swam closer, her eyes filled with a mix of pity and something else—something that made Riley's stomach flutter. "You okay?" she whispered, her voice a soothing balm to Riley's frayed nerves.

Riley nodded, though she felt anything but okay. The water lapped at her skin, a gentle caress that did nothing to ease the ache between her legs. "Yeah," she murmured, her voice barely audible over the rush of the pool's waterfall. "I just..."

Her words trailed off as Lily reached out, her hand brushing against Riley's arm. The touch was gentle, almost tentative, as if she was afraid to break the fragile spell that had been cast over them. But it was enough to send a jolt of electricity through Riley's body, a reminder that she wasn't alone in this.

"Take a little break," Ellie said with a smirk, her eyes gleaming with mischief. "But don't get too comfortable. We're not done with you yet."

[Bucket]

As per usual, much appreciated for the new chapter! ❤ Will wait for another chapter or two once again before reading. Looking foward to it already!

[destroyer008]

Making the two love birds fight against each other in order to keep what's left of their dignity was genius. Keep up the great work!

I'm sure Riley is eager to get that sweet release but I guess the girls want to keep her on edge for a bit longer. When she gets to orgasm eventually, Riley should be made to achieve it in an outmost humiliating manner. The girls will find a way

[Bucket]

When she gets to orgasm eventually, Riley should be made to achieve it in an outmost humiliating manner.

And it should the most earth shatteringly insane, toe curling, eyes in the back of the head orgasm that Riley has ever experienced in her entire life!

[Emily]

Love all of these fun ideas! Please keep them coming!

[Emily]

Chapter 34

Riley nodded, grateful for the reprieve, and swam over to the side of the pool, her legs feeling like jelly. Lily followed, and they both sank onto the cool tiles, the heat of the sun a stark contrast to the chilly water. They sat there for a moment, their bodies glistening with droplets, the silence between them thick with unspoken tension.

“This is not what I expected college to be like,” Riley murmured, her eyes on the pool's horizon. The sun was high, casting a warm glow over the water.

Lily leaned back on her elbows, the sun's warmth kissing her bare skin. “You and me both,” she said with a sigh. “I thought I’d be studying and making friends, not...” Her voice trailed off, her cheeks flushing at the memory of their recent exploits.

Riley nodded, her eyes flicking to Lily's chest before darting away. "Yeah, I never thought I'd be... doing this," she murmured, her voice filled with a mix of wonder and embarrassment.

Lily took a deep breath, letting the sun warm her skin as she tried to calm her racing thoughts. "So, Riley," she began, changing the subject, "what's your family like?"

Riley leaned back on her hands, the tension in her shoulders slowly easing. "They're pretty strict," she admitted. "My dad's a pastor, and my mom's a teacher. They've got this whole 'good Christian daughter' image of me. And then there's my brother, Jake. He's older, and he's like their golden child."

Lily nodded, her eyes softening with understanding. "It sounds tough," she said. "I've got a younger sister, Chloe. She's starting college in a year, and I'm kind of scared for her. I don't want her to go through the same crap I did."

Riley looked at her, the connection between them growing stronger. Despite their current situation, she felt a sense of kinship with Lily. They had both been thrown into this bizarre world of power and submission, and somehow, they were managing to find a bit of themselves in the chaos.

"Yeah, it's... intense," Riley said, finally meeting Lily's gaze. They shared a moment of silent understanding, their eyes speaking volumes about their shared experiences and fears. Without thinking, Riley reached out and took Lily's hand, their fingers interlocking in a gesture of support.

Their conversation was abruptly cut short by the sound of Ellie's voice, echoing through the serene pool area. "Girls, we can't have you burning to a crisp," she called out, her tone light and teasing. "Time to get out and let us slather you up with some sunscreen."

Riley's heart skipped a beat as she glanced around the pool. The few other groups of people had left, leaving only one small gathering—three boys and a girl. She felt a cold sweat break out on her forehead as she realized the implications. They were going to be seen, and not just seen, but seen in their most vulnerable state.

The trio of Ellie, Aria, and Claire climbed out of the pool, their laughter grating on Riley's nerves as they approached with bottles of sunscreen in hand. She tightened her grip on Lily's hand, her eyes wide with fear. "We can't do this," she whispered, her voice trembling. "They'll see us."

Aria stepped forward, her expression switching from amusement to something more serious. She leaned down and spoke in a low, soothing voice. "Don't worry, I've got this," she assured them, her eyes flicking to the small group in the distance. "Trust me."

With a wink, she turned and sauntered over to the gathering, her body moving with the confidence of a lioness approaching a watering hole. The three boys and the girl looked up as she approached, their eyes wide with curiosity and a hint of fear. Aria had that effect on people—she could command attention without uttering a word.

"Hi there," she said, her voice a purr that seemed to carry on the warm breeze. "I hope you guys are enjoying the pool."

The group looked up at her, their eyes immediately drawn to her confidence and beauty. The girl in their group looked slightly annoyed, while the boys couldn't help but ogle her body.

"We've got a little situation over here," Aria continued, gesturing back to Riley and Lily. "These are my friends, and they're actually nudists. I know it's a bit... unconventional, but it's important to respect everyone's choices, right?"

The group exchanged glances, a mix of surprise and confusion. The girl rolled her eyes, but the boys looked intrigued. "Is that so?" one of them finally spoke up, his gaze flicking to the naked forms of Riley and Lily.

“They are about to get out of the pool, and it’s really important that you guys don’t stare,” Aria said, her voice a mix of sweetness and steely resolve. “I know it’s a bit of an eyeful, but we all have to be respectful of each other’s choices, right?”

The group murmured in agreement, the boys trying and failing to be subtle about their glances. The girl in the group rolled her eyes, but even she couldn’t deny the allure of the situation.

"So, if you guys promise not to stare, they'll be more comfortable," Aria said with a smile that didn't quite reach her eyes. "And if I catch any of you looking, I'll have to report you for underage drinking. You wouldn't want that, would you?"

The group of onlookers exchanged nervous glances, the boys' faces paling slightly at the mention of the alcohol. The girl rolled her eyes but nodded begrudgingly. "Fine, we won't stare," she said, though the curiosity in her voice was palpable.

Aria turned back to Riley and Lily with a wink. "You're safe," she murmured, her voice a secret shared between them. "Now, let's get that sunscreen on before you two turn into lobsters."

“Now get out of the water, Riley, unless you want to make this even more interesting for our audience," Ellie’s voice was laced with a dangerous smile. Riley felt a chill run down her spine despite the warmth of the sun beating down on her body. The trio had always had a knack for making her feel vulnerable, but this was a new level of humiliation.

Her legs trembled as she pushed herself off the side of the pool, the water sluicing off her bare skin as she took a tentative step forward. The coolness of the concrete was a stark contrast to the warmth of the water, sending a shiver through her. She kept her eyes on the ground, unable to bear the thought of meeting the gaze of the small group Ellie had just convinced to 'respect' their 'lifestyle'.

The moment she was clear of the water, she felt the full brunt of the sun's glare. It was like a spotlight had been shone directly on her, highlighting every inch of her exposed flesh. Her nipples tightened into hard little points, and she could feel the heat of the sun on her pussy, making her even more aware of the ache that hadn’t been fully sated.

Her eyes remained glued to the concrete, the coolness of it under her feet a stark contrast to the warmth that suffused the rest of her body. The sensation of being so utterly bare was overwhelming, a mix of vulnerability and a strange, thrilling sense of liberation. The wind whispered across her skin, raising goosebumps and making her hyper-aware of every sensation.

"Now, Lily, you start with Riley's back," Ellie instructed, her voice a purr of excitement. "Make sure you get every inch."

Lily's cheeks flushed a deep shade of pink, but she nodded and took the sunscreen bottle from Claire. Riley turned around, presenting her back to Lily, her eyes squeezed shut. She could feel the heat of Lily's body as she stepped closer, the warmth of her breath fanning over her shoulder blades. The first touch of the sunscreen was cold and sticky, sending a shiver down her spine.

Lily's hands began to glide over her back, the cool lotion a stark contrast to the warmth of the sun. Riley felt her muscles relax slightly under the gentle touch, the tension in her shoulders and neck slowly releasing. It was almost soothing, the rhythmic motion of Lily's hands as they spread the sunscreen across her skin. But she knew better than to let her guard down—this was just another game, another way for the trio to exert their power over her.

When Lily's fingers reached the small of her back, Riley tensed, waiting for the inevitable. "Keep going," Ellie's voice was a low purr, and she could feel the anticipation in the air thicken. Lily's touch paused for a moment, her breath hitching in the silence. Then, ever so slowly, her hands began to move downward, the lotion leaving a trail of tingling sensation as it coated her skin.

Riley felt her cheeks burn as Lily's fingers danced over the curve of her buttocks, gently squeezing and spreading the sunscreen in a way that was definitely more than just necessary for protection. The touch was feather-light, almost tickling, and she had to bite her lip to keep from gasping. The crowd's presence was a constant reminder of her vulnerability, but she couldn't ignore the spark of arousal that was building within her.

As Lily's thumbs dipped into the sensitive valley between her cheeks, Riley's breath hitched. The lotion was cold, and the sensation was jolting against her hot skin. She could feel her heart hammering in her chest, the blood rushing to her face. The trio watched with amusement, their eyes glinting with the satisfaction of knowing they had her exactly where they wanted her—exposed and at their mercy.

"Good," Ellie murmured, her voice a soft caress in Riley's ear. "Now, the front."

Lily's hands grew more tentative as they moved to Riley's front, the sunscreen cold against her skin. She took a deep breath and started at Riley's shoulders, her fingers sliding over the smooth, tanned flesh. Riley felt a tremor of anticipation as Lily's touch grew closer to her breasts, the moment stretching out like a tightrope walker suspended over a chasm.

When Lily's thumbs brushed over her nipples, Riley couldn't hold back a gasp. The sensation was electric, sending shockwaves through her body. The trio's eyes were glued to the show, their smirks growing wider with every little sound she made. Riley felt her cheeks burn as she realized that she was enjoying the attention, the humiliation mixing with a strange thrill.

"Good girl," Ellie praised, her voice dripping with satisfaction. "Keep going, Lily."

Lily's hands trembled slightly as they moved lower, tracing the contours of Riley's stomach. The anticipation was almost too much to bear, the tension in the air thick with the scent of coconut sunscreen and arousal. Riley's breath grew ragged, her chest rising and falling with every shallow inhale. When Lily's thumbs finally brushed over her mound, Riley's knees threatened to buckle.

The lotion was cold against the warm, damp folds of Riley's pussy, sending a shiver of pleasure through her. Lily's touch was tentative at first, her fingertips lightly grazing the sensitive skin. She spread the sunscreen over the plump outer lips, taking care to cover every inch. They were tight, the color of a freshly bloomed rose, the sight of them making Ellie's own sex clench with desire.

Riley's breath hitched as Lily's thumb slid along her perineum, the tender strip of skin between her pussy and anus. The sensation was unexpected, a strange mix of pleasure and discomfort that had her toes curling against the rough concrete. She could feel the trio's eyes on her, watching her reaction with rapt attention. Her face burned with embarrassment, but she couldn't deny the thrill that shot through her at their intense scrutiny.

Lily's hands continued their journey down Riley's body, moving to her thighs. Her touch was gentle, almost reverent, as she smeared the sunscreen over the soft, pale skin. Riley's legs trembled, the muscles tightening as the cool lotion met her overheated flesh. The contrast was exquisite, sending waves of sensation through her body that she hadn't anticipated.

When Lily was done, she stepped back, her own cheeks flushed from the intimate act. Riley felt a strange sense of loss as the connection was broken, the cold air rushing in to fill the space where Lily's hands had been. She took a deep, shaky breath, trying to compose herself. The trio watched her, their eyes dark with hunger.

"Now, Riley," Ellie said, her voice a silky command. "It's your turn to return the favor."

Riley's eyes snapped open, her heart racing. She turned to face Lily, who was now standing in front of her, her own skin glistening with water and sunscreen. The blonde's eyes met hers, a mix of embarrassment and excitement reflected in their depths. Lily's nipples were peaked, the small bumps of her areolae standing out against the pale skin of her breasts. The sight sent a fresh wave of arousal crashing through Riley, and she knew she couldn't resist the challenge.

With trembling hands, Riley took the sunscreen from Lily, her eyes never leaving hers. The coolness of the bottle felt like ice in her grip as she squeezed a generous amount into her palm. She stepped closer, the heat of Lily's body warming her own, and began to spread the lotion over the soft, supple skin of Lily's shoulders. The blonde's eyes fluttered closed, a soft moan escaping her lips as Riley's hands began to glide down her back, the lotion smoothing over every curve and dip.

The trio watched, their breaths hitching in sync with the rhythm of Riley's movements. Each stroke was deliberate, each touch calculated to maximize the humiliation. But as Riley's hands moved lower, she found herself lost in the sensation of Lily's skin beneath her fingers. The smoothness, the warmth, the slight dampness from the pool water—it was intoxicating.

Lily's bikini bottoms remained in place, a silent reminder of the game they were playing. Yet, she didn't need to remove them to be just as exposed. Riley's touch grew bolder, her hands sliding over the curve of Lily's hips, her thumbs grazing the elastic band of the bikini. The fabric was wet, clinging to Lily's skin, revealing the shadow of her pussy beneath.

As Riley's fingers moved closer to the apex of Lily's thighs, she felt the other girl's body tense. The fabric was a barrier, a last piece of protection in this dance of power and vulnerability. But the way it clung to Lily's pussy, outlining her sex, was almost more revealing than if she were naked. The trio watched with bated breath, their eyes hungry for every moment of the intimate display.

"Don't forget the front," Ellie reminded Riley, her voice a low purr of amusement.

Riley's gaze snapped up to meet Lily's, her eyes wide with a mix of excitement and trepidation. Lily's cheeks were flushed a deep pink, her pupils dilated with arousal. With a tremble in her hand, Riley reached around to the front of Lily's body. She spread the sunscreen over the soft skin of Lily's stomach, the blonde's breath hitching as her touch grew more intimate.

Her fingers danced closer to the modest swells of Lily's breasts, each one a perfect handful, topped with small, pink nipples that pointed upward like the tips of aroused buds. The contrast between the cool lotion and the warmth of Lily's flesh was stark, making Riley's own nipples pebble in response. As she applied the sunscreen, she could feel the firmness of the underlying flesh, the slight give of Lily's breasts beneath her palms.

They were not large, but they were beautiful, with the delicate slope and gentle curve that Riley had always envied. The skin was unblemished, save for the light dusting of freckles that scattered across the upper slopes, leading down to the soft, pale pink of the areolae. Riley's breath grew shallower as she felt Lily's pulse quicken under her touch, the rapid beating a silent testament to her own arousal.

With a flick of her wrist, she allowed a drop of sunscreen to fall onto one of Lily's nipples. The reaction was instant, the pebbled flesh tightening further as Lily gasped. The sound was music to Ellie's ears, the sweet symphony of a well-orchestrated humiliation. She watched with a predatory smile as Riley's thumb traced a slow, torturous circle around the nipple, never quite touching the sensitive peak.

Lily's eyes remained closed, her breathing shallow. The only sound in the air was the faint sizzle of the sunscreen mixing with the wetness of her skin. Riley's hands moved with purpose, teasing and taunting, spreading the lotion in a deliberate pattern that avoided the most sensitive areas. Her own heart was racing, the thrill of the moment a heady cocktail of excitement and fear.

The trio's eyes were glued to the performance, their faces a study in rapt concentration. Claire's eyes were dark with lust, her teeth sinking into her lower lip as she watched Riley's hands glide over Lily's body. Ellie's smirk grew wider, her eyes flicking between Riley's face and Lily's exposed flesh, savoring every little gasp and tremble. Aria leaned back on her lounge chair, her arms folded under her breasts, watching with a detached amusement.

"Alright, that's enough," Ellie said finally, her voice cutting through the tension like a knife. "You two can sit and tan now."

Riley and Lily exchanged a look of relief, their cheeks still flushed from the intimate sunscreen application. They took their places on the lounge chairs, the plastic sticking slightly to their skin as they lay down. The sun was relentless, beating down on their bodies with a fiery passion that seemed to mirror the heat of the situation.

“And no covering up,” Ellie added with a wicked smile, as if reading their thoughts. “We wouldn’t want any unsightly tan lines, would we?”

Riley felt a jolt of panic at the thought of lying there, completely exposed to the sun and the trio’s gaze. She glanced at Lily, who was also visibly uncomfortable but trying to play it cool. They both knew the rules of the game—there was no hiding from Ellie, Claire, and Aria.

With a dramatic sigh, Ellie unfolded herself from her chair and sauntered over to the one next to Riley. She lowered herself with a grace that seemed almost predatory, the smug look on her face saying she knew exactly what she was doing. Riley’s heart hammered in her chest as Ellie stretched out, her toned body a stark contrast to her own more modest curves.

"Riley," Ellie began, her voice a lazy drawl. "You really do have the most... interesting body."

Riley's stomach clenched as she felt the weight of Ellie's gaze on her. She knew what was coming, the cruel dissection of her most intimate parts. But she also knew that she couldn't fight it, not here, not now. She was the trio's plaything, and she had to play by their rules.

"Your pussy is so... small," Ellie said, her voice a mocking purr. "It's like a little pink button just begging to be played with. If I didn’t know any better, I'd say you're not even a woman yet."

Riley felt a stab of pain at the words, her cheeks burning. It was true, she'd always had a petite frame, her pussy a delicate slit that had barely changed since puberty. But she'd never felt self-conscious about it until the trio had pointed it out, using it as another tool to control her.

"And your tits," Ellie continued, her eyes raking over Riley's chest with a dismissive look. "They're like two little mosquito bites. No wonder you're always so eager to please—you're just trying to make up for what you lack."

The words hung in the air like a noose, tightening around Riley's neck with each passing second. But before she could respond, Lily's voice cut through the silence, firm and unyielding. "That's enough, Ellie."

Ellie's eyes snapped to Lily, surprise etched on her features. "What did you say?"

Lily sat up straight, her own cheeks flushed with a mix of anger and embarrassment. "I said, that's enough. You're being cruel, and it's not funny."

The air around them grew thick with tension, the playful atmosphere of the poolside dissipating like a fog under the scorching sun. Ellie's smirk faltered for a moment, but she quickly regained her composure. "Oh, are we feeling a bit sensitive today, Lily?" she taunted, her eyes glinting with a challenge.

But Lily didn't back down. She turned to Riley, her eyes filled with a fierce determination that Riley hadn't seen before. "Your body is beautiful, Riley," she said, her voice firm and unwavering. "You don't have to let them make you feel any less than you are."

Riley's eyes widened in shock, her breath catching in her throat. She hadn't expected Lily to stand up for her, not like this. The words were like a cool breeze on a scorching day, soothing the sting of Ellie's barbs. "Thank you," she murmured, her voice barely audible over the sound of the pool.

Ellie's smile grew tight, the edge of annoyance sharpening her features. She sat up, crossing her legs and leaning closer to Riley. "I'm just teasing you, darling," she said, her voice dripping with honeyed sweetness. "You know I think you're absolutely delicious, in your own little way."

Her hand reached out to Riley's cheek, her thumb brushing over the girl's flushed skin. But before Riley could react, Ellie's expression changed, turning cold and calculating. "Lily, however, needs to learn her place."

In a swift move, Ellie grabbed the edge of Lily's bikini bottoms and yanked them down, exposing her completely to the sun and the trio's gazes. "You will never speak to me like that again," she said, her voice as sharp as a knife. "Do you understand?"

Lily's eyes widened in shock, her cheeks burning as the coolness of the air met her bare skin. She looked down at her own nakedness, the humiliation searing through her. She knew better than to argue with Ellie, especially when she was in this mood. With a quiet nod, she whispered, "Yes."

The tension lingered in the air, thick and palpable, as Ellie held onto Lily's bikini bottoms, a silent reminder of who was in charge. Riley's heart raced as she watched the power dynamics shift before her eyes. The bond between her and Lily had grown stronger in that brief moment of solidarity, but it was clear that the trio was not to be trifled with.

Lily's cheeks burned with a mix of anger and embarrassment as she sat there, her legs clamped shut, trying to cover herself with her hands. "I'm sorry," she murmured, her voice tight with humiliation. "It won't happen again."

Ellie's eyes narrowed, and she leaned in closer, her breath hot against Riley's ear. "See what happens when you don't follow the rules?" she whispered. Then, with a flick of her wrist, she let go of Lily's bikini bottoms, tossing them aside. "Now, lay back and let the sun kiss every inch of you," she ordered, her voice a low growl.

Both girls obeyed, their bodies trembling with a mix of fear and arousal. The sun's rays warmed their bare skin, a stark contrast to the coldness that had settled in their hearts. The trio watched them, their eyes raking over every inch of exposed flesh with a hunger that was almost tangible.

[Bucket]

Holy shit, Emily!

Another new chapter, back to back!? You're on a freaking roll! I swear, if you post another new chapter this week, I know what I'm reading later in the week.

Legend! ❤