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Re: The Unraveling (New 8/12)
I’ve been thinking a lot about the website idea and I really like it! I’m trying to think of a way to implement it where the girls still hold power over Riley. I feel like by them posting photos of her for anyway to view online, it takes away some of the threat of them sending people photos. I really love the idea, just trying to think through the best way to do it!Darky wrote: ↑Wed Aug 14, 2024 8:13 pmWell a sort of OnlyFans for Riley isn’t a bad idea. Good bring a lot of bucksdestroyer008 wrote: ↑Wed Aug 14, 2024 7:47 pm
Now, you asked for more suggestions. I personally think that later on in the story Riley's girlfriends should get some sort of monatery compensation for all their hard work. After all, they plan and organize all those nice tasks for Riley, so is the idea of maybe profiting off of it so far-fetched?
Maybe they put the content of their actions up for sale on the internet. Put up a website for Riley; people could visit and pay money to get access to pictures and videos. Maybe they should ask for a small fee each time they find someone that uses Riley's helpless situation to their advantage, if you know what I mean...
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If it doesn’t fit, don’t do it. But in your latest chapter you admit that Riley keeps losing clothes due to assignments which already means she had to walk home bottomless after the waxing, naked after the party, in her dorm hallways. And still the girls have power over her.Emily wrote: ↑Sun Aug 18, 2024 10:55 pmI’ve been thinking a lot about the website idea and I really like it! I’m trying to think of a way to implement it where the girls still hold power over Riley. I feel like by them posting photos of her for anyway to view online, it takes away some of the threat of them sending people photos. I really love the idea, just trying to think through the best way to do it!Darky wrote: ↑Wed Aug 14, 2024 8:13 pmWell a sort of OnlyFans for Riley isn’t a bad idea. Good bring a lot of bucksdestroyer008 wrote: ↑Wed Aug 14, 2024 7:47 pm
Now, you asked for more suggestions. I personally think that later on in the story Riley's girlfriends should get some sort of monatery compensation for all their hard work. After all, they plan and organize all those nice tasks for Riley, so is the idea of maybe profiting off of it so far-fetched?
Maybe they put the content of their actions up for sale on the internet. Put up a website for Riley; people could visit and pay money to get access to pictures and videos. Maybe they should ask for a small fee each time they find someone that uses Riley's helpless situation to their advantage, if you know what I mean...
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Re: The Unraveling (New 8/12)
They got dressed after the waxing, and then had to toss their bras out the window, and they lost the rest of there clothes when they had to leave them in the bathroom when taking the shower and walk to the dorm room naked.Darky wrote: ↑Mon Aug 19, 2024 4:47 amIf it doesn’t fit, don’t do it. But in your latest chapter you admit that Riley keeps losing clothes due to assignments which already means she had to walk home bottomless after the waxing, naked after the party, in her dorm hallways. And still the girls have power over her.Emily wrote: ↑Sun Aug 18, 2024 10:55 pmI’ve been thinking a lot about the website idea and I really like it! I’m trying to think of a way to implement it where the girls still hold power over Riley. I feel like by them posting photos of her for anyway to view online, it takes away some of the threat of them sending people photos. I really love the idea, just trying to think through the best way to do it!
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But Darky does have a point, alot of people have already seen her naked, and more videos and photos were taken after the video that started this mess, so I agree I think no matter what is done she has no way to get out of this mess, and I mention in a comment also a while back about her posting the stuff online. So yeah I think I said, that would be a good punishment, making her post it herself online, and having to send to x number of people each time she has to post something.computerphoto wrote: ↑Mon Aug 19, 2024 5:01 amThey got dressed after the waxing, and then had to toss their bras out the window, and they lost the rest of there clothes when they had to leave them in the bathroom when taking the shower and walk to the dorm room naked.Darky wrote: ↑Mon Aug 19, 2024 4:47 amIf it doesn’t fit, don’t do it. But in your latest chapter you admit that Riley keeps losing clothes due to assignments which already means she had to walk home bottomless after the waxing, naked after the party, in her dorm hallways. And still the girls have power over her.Emily wrote: ↑Sun Aug 18, 2024 10:55 pm
I’ve been thinking a lot about the website idea and I really like it! I’m trying to think of a way to implement it where the girls still hold power over Riley. I feel like by them posting photos of her for anyway to view online, it takes away some of the threat of them sending people photos. I really love the idea, just trying to think through the best way to do it!
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computerphoto wrote: ↑Mon Aug 19, 2024 5:04 amBut Darky does have a point, alot of people have already seen her naked, and more videos and photos were taken after the photos and video that started this mess, so I agree I think no matter what is done she has no way to get out of this mess, and I mention in a comment also a while back about her posting the stuff online. So yeah I think I said, that would be a good punishment, making her post it herself online, and having to send to x number of people each time she has to post something.computerphoto wrote: ↑Mon Aug 19, 2024 5:01 amThey got dressed after the waxing, and then had to toss their bras out the window, and they lost the rest of there clothes when they had to leave them in the bathroom when taking the shower and walk to the dorm room naked.Darky wrote: ↑Mon Aug 19, 2024 4:47 am
If it doesn’t fit, don’t do it. But in your latest chapter you admit that Riley keeps losing clothes due to assignments which already means she had to walk home bottomless after the waxing, naked after the party, in her dorm hallways. And still the girls have power over her.
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Re: The Unraveling (New 8/12)
As long as the material isn't distributed to people like Riley's parents and such the threat of sending them something is still relevant, as the website footage would be accessed by anonymous people from all over the globe. But I agree that some level of threat must be kept up to keep her make do things she otherwise wouldn't do.Emily wrote: ↑Sun Aug 18, 2024 10:55 pmI’ve been thinking a lot about the website idea and I really like it! I’m trying to think of a way to implement it where the girls still hold power over Riley. I feel like by them posting photos of her for anyway to view online, it takes away some of the threat of them sending people photos. I really love the idea, just trying to think through the best way to do it!Darky wrote: ↑Wed Aug 14, 2024 8:13 pmWell a sort of OnlyFans for Riley isn’t a bad idea. Good bring a lot of bucksdestroyer008 wrote: ↑Wed Aug 14, 2024 7:47 pm
Now, you asked for more suggestions. I personally think that later on in the story Riley's girlfriends should get some sort of monatery compensation for all their hard work. After all, they plan and organize all those nice tasks for Riley, so is the idea of maybe profiting off of it so far-fetched?
Maybe they put the content of their actions up for sale on the internet. Put up a website for Riley; people could visit and pay money to get access to pictures and videos. Maybe they should ask for a small fee each time they find someone that uses Riley's helpless situation to their advantage, if you know what I mean...
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Re: The Unraveling (New 8/18)
Yet another new chapter, and so soon too!
Many thanks for giving us regular updates on this astonishing story! As I say, this is one of my favourite stories on here, probably top 2, so it's so nice to get new chapters so quickly. Hope there's another 50 chapters coming soon.
I've yet to actually read the latest two chapters. I might just go ahead and read them this week, or perhaps wait for one more chapter. I love binge reading several chapters at a time.
Anyway yeah, thanks for the new chapter!
Many thanks for giving us regular updates on this astonishing story! As I say, this is one of my favourite stories on here, probably top 2, so it's so nice to get new chapters so quickly. Hope there's another 50 chapters coming soon.
I've yet to actually read the latest two chapters. I might just go ahead and read them this week, or perhaps wait for one more chapter. I love binge reading several chapters at a time.
Anyway yeah, thanks for the new chapter!
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Aww thank you. Comments like this mean a ton to me and definitely motivate me to keep writing.Bucket wrote: ↑Mon Aug 19, 2024 7:27 pm Yet another new chapter, and so soon too!
Many thanks for giving us regular updates on this astonishing story! As I say, this is one of my favourite stories on here, probably top 2, so it's so nice to get new chapters so quickly. Hope there's another 50 chapters coming soon.
I've yet to actually read the latest two chapters. I might just go ahead and read them this week, or perhaps wait for one more chapter. I love binge reading several chapters at a time.
Anyway yeah, thanks for the new chapter!
I can’t wait to hear your thoughts on the new parts!
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Glad to hear it, and will certainly give you my thoughts soon!Emily wrote: ↑Tue Aug 20, 2024 2:07 amAww thank you. Comments like this mean a ton to me and definitely motivate me to keep writing.Bucket wrote: ↑Mon Aug 19, 2024 7:27 pm Yet another new chapter, and so soon too!
Many thanks for giving us regular updates on this astonishing story! As I say, this is one of my favourite stories on here, probably top 2, so it's so nice to get new chapters so quickly. Hope there's another 50 chapters coming soon.
I've yet to actually read the latest two chapters. I might just go ahead and read them this week, or perhaps wait for one more chapter. I love binge reading several chapters at a time.
Anyway yeah, thanks for the new chapter!
I can’t wait to hear your thoughts on the new parts!
Finding an amazing story such as this, knowing you've got plenty of chapters to read ahead is just so nice. As you're reading it, you're having so much fun and knowing there's still a few more chapters to read makes for a great time.... and then you catch up, and there are no more chapters left and you have to wait for the next chapter which sucks lol.
So that's why I say, I'm so happy to see you giving us new chapters on what seems like a weekly basis (give or take) and it's just so damn appreciated.
So yeah, keep up the extraordinary work!
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