Camp Valiance (Chapter 2 - July 29)

[Diapal]

Amazing start for your new story! Looking forward to the next chapter!!

[perseus]

Incredible start! I love the set up to this! I love the idea of treating boys and girls completely different when it comes to nudity, definitely when the girl's get the short end of the stick. I can't wait to see how this experiment develops and what the boys have in store for them.

Great idea! I love it already!

[superevil7]

Okay, but the girls are older, so if they decided not to submit to the spanking, then what?

I like the premise, but I also think there should be boundaries/limits as well or else it would turn into an orgry in a natural situation.

There will be boundaries, for sure. The boys aren't just going to be able to do anything they want with the girls. They have the responsibility of looking after them, and then, I'm really not into hardcore stuff like that anyway, so that won't be happening just because I'm writing it.
As for submitting to spanking, boys usually are stronger than girls, so I don't foresee it being a problem.

Younger girls from other cabins could be enlisted to help get the miscreant into position and hold her there for the duration of her spanking and other punishments.

A good point too!

Wow! So begins yet another masterpiece!

Two weeks will fly by for the males, and seem like eternity for the females.

Amazing start for your new story! Looking forward to the next chapter!!

Incredible start! I love the set up to this! I love the idea of treating boys and girls completely different when it comes to nudity, definitely when the girl's get the short end of the stick. I can't wait to see how this experiment develops and what the boys have in store for them.

Great idea! I love it already!

Thank you! I hope it ends up being a fun ride for everyone reading.

[Wastelander]

I hope you do more visuals of the girls walking around nude in flip flops! Loved that little aspect and maybe they'll take a field trip here and there and be forced to either be nude or wear camp t shirts but with no bottoms

[superevil7]

Chapter 2

“Hey Alex…”

“Hey Beth.” After Dr. Richardson had told the boys to find their cabin mates, Alex had headed straight for Bethany. He was in the position of already being best friends with two of his bunk mates, Bethany and Erin, so that part was easy. The part he was finding difficult was trying to keep his eyes off of one of his best friend's naked bodies. Unlike most of the other girls, Bethany stood with her hands clasped behind her back, displaying all of her assets to him and anyone else looking. The naked blonde 14-year-old had already decided she wasn't going to fight the rules of this camp, she was just going to go along and enjoy them. “This must be weird for you, huh?” The boy asked, making his 10th sweep of his eyes over her naked body.

“A little, but when in Rome…” Bethany could feel her cheeks burning as her male best friend examined every inch of her. She might have decided to go along with the rules of the camp, but that didn't mean she wasn't embarrassed about being naked in front of him. “Have you seen Erin yet?”

“Oh, uh?...” Alex took his eyes off of her long enough to look around the room for their other best friend. He spotted Erin off in a corner, huddled together with a few of the other girls who had not met their cabin mates yet. The group of girls, including Erin, were all doing their darnedest to keep their private parts covered. Alex made a wave towards Erin, beckoning her over. Erin made a show of shaking her head at him. Alex got an annoyed look on his face, and waved harder, and Erin finally caved in and came over. “Hey Erin.” Alex greeted her as she arrived. He couldn't help feeling a little tickled about the way she was desperately trying to hide herself from him. “This camp is pretty cool, huh?”

“Maybe for you!” Erin said in a frustrated tone. “You're not the one standing here without clothes…!” She said through gritted teeth.

Alex got an amused smile. “Well, I think it's great, Erin Mathews. You've been needing to be brought down to Earth for a long time. The attitude you've gotten lately has been totally unacceptable. But I'm in charge of you now, and I'm going to make sure your attitude gets corrected.”

“You're in charge???” Alex had pissed her off. “What gives you the right…?”

Alex cut her off. “Because I'm a boy, and Dr. Richardson said boys are in charge!” He squared up with her, and Erin started to get very nervous. “That's better. Now, I want you to apologize to Beth.”

“Me?” Bethany asked with surprise.

“Beth?”

“Yes. You've been treating our best friend like dirt lately. Making her carry your shopping bags, teasing her with the other girls when they tease her, especially about her smaller boobs. Well, I think Beth's boobs are hot! And I'm glad to have seen them!” Alex declared, making Beth very self-conscious about the size of her boobs. He may have said that they were hot, but all she could concentrate on was the word small.

Erin hadn't realized that she had been treating her best friend so badly until Alex had brought it up. She had to agree, after thinking about it for a moment, that she had been being a lousy friend towards Bethany lately. She turned towards her friend, hands still clinging to her private parts, and started making an apology. “Beth, I'm sorry. I didn't realize I had been treating you so badly. I promise not to do it anymore. Please, can you forgive me?”

“Yeah, I forgive you.” Bethany smiled, taking her friend into her arms for a hug. Bethany wasn’t the type to hold grudges, and she was used to being teased by the other kids at school, so didn’t know much different. She just wanted a friend. After a moment, Erin wrapped her arms around her too, and the two girls' naked bodies pressed against one another.

The two girls smiled at one another as they let go of their hug. They both turned to Alex and gave him a big smile too. It was only after Alex had gotten a good look at Erin's naked front, that she realized that she had left herself totally exposed! “Shit, Alex!” She reacted with wide eyes, and scrambled to block his view of her privates again.

“Oh, Erin, calm down. Boys are in charge here, and part of that is you girls being naked. I think you better just lower your arms and let me get a good look at you.”

“But! But!” Erin complained, before letting out a sigh. “Fine…” She looked to Bethany as an example and copied her. She moved her hands behind her back, and squared her shoulders off in Alex's direction. Her whole body felt hot as she followed his eyes, darting every which way to take in the sight of her naked body. The dynamic of their friendship was going to change forever because of this!

“Hey.” A boy came up behind Alex, and his eyes too started roaming over the two girls’ exposed fronts. “You guys are in the 14-year-old cabin, right?”

“Shit! Mason!?” Erin realized who the boy was, immediately covering up her private parts again. Why did it have to be Mason, she thought to herself? All last year, she had the most massive crush on Mason, and now here he was, seeing her naked!

“Hey, Mason.” Bethany gave him a little wave, not bothering to cover up like Erin. She knew there was no point in that, as the boys were going to be seeing her naked for the next two weeks, and it would be impossible for her to stay covered up that whole time.

“Hey Bethany. Sorry if I scared you, Erin. I didn't mean to interrupt.” He gave the pretty redhead a reassuring smile, that was making her feel weak at the knees.

“No, I was just… You know, we were… it's nice to see you again, Mason.” Erin found herself babbling, trying to play it cool in front of him, and not give away her secret. But how was she supposed to play it cool when she had no clothes???

Mason smiled, as one of Erin's nipples popped out from behind her forearm. “So, pretty wicked rules they got here. Are you girls ready to rough it without clothes?”

Bethany made a little nod. “It's going to take some getting used to, but I don't think we're going to be roughing it here, exactly. This building has air-conditioning.”

“Yeah, it's making all you girls nipples hard.” Mason commented, licking his lips as he stared at Bethany's bare chest. Bethany flushed, as she felt her nipples getting even harder under his gaze.

“Umm, anyway…” Erin said, wanting to change the topic to anything else. “Have you guys seen our cabin?”

“Yeah, it's cool! There are two bunk beds. Alex and I get to sleep on top since we're boys, and you girls get the bottom bunks. You can tell since the bottom bunks have no blankets or sheets, just a pillow.”

“We don't get any blankets?!?” Erin was flabbergasted.

“Dr. Richardson explained that it's important for you girls to keep your entire naked bodies on show to us boys as much as possible. That way, you always have a reminder of who's in charge.” Alex explained to her. “I think you better start getting used to it, like Bethany. There's no reason to keep trying to hide yourself from us, Erin.”

Erin struggled with herself before dropping her arms to her sides. How could he make her do this, display her naked body to her crush?? Alex knew she had a crush on Mason! Was he trying to kill her with embarrassment?! Despite her shame, Erin gave Mason full access to look at her entire naked body from head to toe, as she stood there naked in front of him. She was trying not to squirm, as she watched the boy scrutinize everything that had once been private to him. Was he judging her, for the way her tits jutted out, or the size of her areolas? Was he enjoying the sight of her, or was he laughing at her in his head? Being a 14-year-old girl, Erin was very self-conscious about how her body looked.

Mason finally smiled up at her face, and commented, “Nice rack!”

Erin found herself giggling at what he said. “You think so?... Wait, rude!” She blushed hard at receiving the validation she was looking for from him.

“Sorry, but those tits rock!”

“Stop it, or I'll cover them up again!” Erin giggled and blushed at the boy of her dreams.


Charles had also been taking the opportunity to get to know one of his cabin mates. He had found the girl he went to school with, the one he had seen getting on the bus earlier, and found out her name was Jane. Jane was another little blonde, and 13 years old, like him. Like Charles’ older sister Danielle, she had been quite appalled with losing her pubic hair in the shower incident. Though it did hide the fact that she got her blonde hair from a bottle of bleach and not naturally. She'd rather that fact be found out than be standing so naked in front of a schoolmate of hers at the moment, however!

“Let's see, we were in math, science, and wood working together, correct?” Charles was asking, counting out with his fingers every class he remembered sharing with the girl.

“I guess?” Jane clutched her private parts tightly, like most of the other girls were doing, or had been doing until their boys had convinced them to stop. She was starting to find it weird that Charles was not paying attention to her the same way the other boys were paying attention to the other girls, and she was feeling a little rejected because of that. “Is this really what you want to talk about right now?”

“I'm just trying to get a baseline for how much we already know about each other.” He looked up at her face from his hands finally, causing her to start blushing harder.

“I just can't believe you aren't making me show you my naked body like the others are doing.” Charles gave her a confused look, so she continued. “Look around. All the boys are making the girls display themselves.” She flushed deeply as she said the words, wishing that she could take them back. Now she was sure Charles was going to demand the same from her.

Charles didn't do anything of the sort, though, instead surprising her with what he said next. “Why would I do that? We're going to be spending the next two weeks together here at camp Valiance, and you will have to remain naked the entire time. I'm inevitably going to see you naked; whether that happens now or later is immaterial. I was given the task of looking after you, and you seem to be nervous to display your private parts to me at this time. Why would I exacerbate your nervousness by demanding that you expose yourself to me at this time? That would only hurt the trust you have in me being able to look after you.”

“Oh…” was all Jane was able to say for a few moments, as she processed what he just said. “But you want to see my… privates?” She found her mouth going dry as she said the word. She tried to gulp, but her throat had gone dry too.

He looked the naked girl up and down, finding her very pleasing to look at, even with her private parts covered by her arms at the moment. He nodded, with a reassuring air about him. “Yes, Jane, I would. Whether that's now or later, I'm looking forward to seeing your private parts.” He made a grin that she couldn't help laughing at.

“I guess… I guess you can see them now then…” She said, finding her cheeks starting to burn. “Like you said, you're inevitably going to see them anyway, so there's really no point in me trying to hide them from you now.” Charles nodded, happy that the girl had understood his logic. Jane let out a breath she was holding, and she slowly lowered her arms, revealing the last bits of her naked body to him. She tried not to squirm as she watched the boy's eyes moving around rapidly to take in the sight of her just developing, small chest, or her now hairless pussy. Unlike a lot of the other girls present, her pussy lips opened up like flower petals, letting her insides peek out a little. It was something she had always been ashamed of, and she was worried about how Charles would react to seeing her pussy in particular.

Charles finally smiled up at her face, with an ear to ear grin, after he felt like he had long enough to burn what Jane looked like naked into his memory. “Jane, you're beautiful. Thank you for letting me see you like this. I really like your vulva. It's a lot more revealing than a lot of the other girls' vulvae.”

“Really??” She asked hopefully. There was no way he could know that she was really self-conscious about her pussy, was there?? “Um, thanks… But it's not like it's my choice to…” She started to say, but was unsure how to continue.

“I get what you are saying, but you did have the choice to show me now or wait for me to see you this way later. I'm thanking you for choosing now.” He said, with a toothy grin for her.

“You're welcome?” She was having a hard time pinning down what Charles' agenda was. Was he just using his logic to get her to expose herself to him, or was he really going to look out for her like he said? One thing she could tell, he really did seem to enjoy seeing her naked, as she was able to watch his eyes roaming up and down her naked body again and again. Her instinct to cover up was going into overdrive, as he looked at every nook and cranny she had, but she was able to fend that off with only the slightest wriggles. Being naked in front of Charles was just something she would have to get used to, she decided.

Charles found himself adjusting his erection in his shorts without even thinking about it. He could still remember seeing the little slits and nipples of his sisters before they had become too modest not to wear their bath towels back to their rooms after bathing, but this was the first real chance that he had ever had to study a girl totally naked. His eyes kept alternating between the points of her hard nipples, on the ends of puffy but pleasing to look at pink areolas, which were situated on the cutest pair of tiny boobies he had ever seen. Then his eyes would travel lower, to take in the sight of her flower petaled pussy. Her inner reddish pink lips each folded over and on top of her flesh colored outer lips, and he could clearly see her clitoris poking out near the top! As she wriggled in place, she would also sometimes spread her legs open, and he was sure he could detect a bit of wetness clinging to the opening where her inner lips parted! She was becoming sexually excited to show herself to him, he realized! Charles was enamored with this girl's naked body in a way that he never thought possible.

The two were caught off guard as an older boy started shouting, trying to get the attention of everyone. “Can I have your attention, campers! Our very own Danielle Arthur has volunteered to demonstrate what she looks like when she masturbates for the entire camp!”

Charles recognized his sister's name in an instant, deciding he would intervene only once she called out about the boy threatening to spank her. “Would you excuse me for a moment, Jane?” He said, but his focus remained on his older sister.

By the time he got over to her, Danielle was already displaying her privates to the older boys with her. “Excuse me, but can I ask why you are threatening to spank this girl?” Charles asked, tapping Stephen on the shoulder.

Stephen turned around, confused, looking down at the younger boy. Stephan was hardly a bully, but he was annoyed with the younger boy trying to get into his business. “Get lost!” He demanded.

“Charlie?” Once Stephen had turned around, he had left enough of a gap for Danielle to see her younger brother. “Shit! Charlie!” She exclaimed, as she realized she was just standing in front of her brother with her entire naked body on show! The embarrassment of her own brother seeing her privates overtook her, and she went back to covering them.

“You know this little guy?” Stephan asked, looking between the two siblings and noticing the familial similarities for the first time.

“Danielle is my sister.” Charles explained, trying to keep the smirk out of his voice, as he found Danielle's reaction to him seeing her naked after all these years amusing. He still had a responsibility towards her, and didn't want to encourage the older boys if they were treating his sister unfairly. “Can I ask why you were threatening to spank her?”

“She is? Ah, shit…” Stephen rubbed the back of his head with shame. He had a little sister of his own, though she was only 9 years old, and not at camp with them. He knew he'd probably have the same reaction if some random boy he didn't know was threatening to spank his little sister. “I just wanted her to stop covering herself, but she wouldn't. I had to threaten her with masturbating in front of everybody, and then a spanking when she still wouldn't listen. Sorry…”

“No need to be sorry.” Charles turned towards Danielle. “Drop your arms and display your naked body to your cabin mates now, Danielle.” He commanded, using the authoritative voice he always used when scolding his sisters.

“What? But?...” Danielle's lip quivered as she thought about what he was telling her to do. It was bad enough to be naked for her bunkmates, but if she lowered her arms, then he was going to see her naked too! It had been years since he had seen her naked, and she had developed into a woman since then. Despite her parents having insisted her nakedness as being no big deal, she had always been ashamed of him seeing her naked. She could still remember the way her face would get so hot as she rushed down the hallway to get to the safety of her room past him. It had been so unfair, because her parents had always encouraged him to bring a fresh set of clothes into the bathroom with him to put on when finished, but had not allowed her to do the same. When she was younger, they wouldn't even let her tie her bath towel around herself to return to her room, but she had finally convinced her mother to acquiesce to that when she began to grow pubes. Returning to her room wearing only a towel had still been a source of contention, as when Charles was younger, he would tease her by grabbing the towel in the back and pulling it up to expose her butt! Danielle's complaining about such things fell on deaf ears, as her parents would just say he was messing around, and that he probably just missed seeing her naked behind running past him. The perturbed preteen had needed to make it a point to rush to the safety of her room so as not to give him the opportunity to snatch the back of her towel. Charles was still satisfied though, as for a few more years, he was still able to enjoy squeaky clean Bethany in the all together after her baths, until she too finally grew some pubic hair, and made the same plea for modesty that her sister got. Though, she was much older at 12 before her pubes finally started coming in, whereas Danielle was just 10.

“Listen to your big brother.” Charles folded his arms, giving her a look that showed her he meant business.

Danielle made a shiver, before lowering her arms at his command. It was silly of her to forget her brother was here, but she had other things on her mind since nurse Rachel had explained to the girls they would be naked for their stay at camp. She knew her brother had always wanted to see her naked, as he still made it a point to complain about her and her sister wearing their towels to their rooms. Now he was not only able to see her naked, but he was being given the opportunity to examine every part of her without interruptions! At least at home, she would have been rushing to the privacy of her room! Here, she could only stand in front of him and let him look at her developed breasts and her now bare slit!

“Very good, Danielle.” Charles stepped forward and patted her on the head. She gave him an annoyed look, but couldn't bring herself to even speak. The shameful situation she was in prevented her from doing so. Charles stood at her side, and took her wrists, poisoning them behind her back. “This is how you will stand from now on when not doing other things, until we get on the bus to go back home.”

“But Charlie!...” Danielle complained, as he moved his hand in between her thighs in order to get her to spread them. He gave her another look, like she better not argue. “Yes, Charles.” She hung her head, as she spread her legs open to shoulder width, knowing that her brother could make her life hell here if she didn't comply. He knew so many secrets about her that she wouldn't want anyone, her parents especially, to learn, and that's why she was always so compliant with him.

“Now, you're going to masturbate for everyone.” Charles was finally unable to hold back his smirk as his sister's eyes opened wide. “Do it now, or I will let this boy spank you.”

Danielle's hands started roaming around her body, mainly from her tummy up to her chest. “I hate you…” She glared at her brother as her fingers pinched her nipples. She let out a tiny moan, already worked up from just being naked in front of the boys from her class.

Charles only smiled at his sister’s harsh words. “You don’t really mean that. You are just frustrated about the girls being treated differently than the boys here, but you need to remember that it is the natural order of things for girls to be submissive and subservient to boys. It is the only way to keep order in the world.” Danielle had heard her brother speak this way before, Dr. Richardson’s world view through her brother’s lens. They had both had intellectual discussions, as well as full-blown drag out arguments about the views of the doctor their parents found most influential and insightful, though she was always on the back foot when it came to his writing, since her parents wouldn’t allow her to read his books. They had told her it was better for her to learn by experience than to try to understand the ideas on an intellectual level. That kind of thing was meant for her brother, not her. It had bothered Danielle to no end, but then why would it make her privates buzz with annoying excitement? Even now, as her brother spoke the words, it made her pussy ache in the most annoying way! It was an irritating horniness that she could no longer ignore!

Danielle couldn’t hold back any longer. The bothersome ache in her pussy, combined with how good it finally felt to let her fingers tease her hard, tender nipples, had gotten her so wet to the point of forgetting where she was, and who was watching her. While all the campers, boys and girls alike, formed a semicircle in front of Danielle to watch her, the 15-year-old girl closed her eyes to just focus on her arousal. Her hands moved to her pussy lips, and spread them open wide! Then her hips started gyrating in a circle, as her fingers touched and teased her delicate clitoris! It only took her about a minute to start cumming, and she snapped her eyes open as she heard the gathered crowd clapping and cheering her on! Something about what her brother had said, that girls should be submissive and subservient to boys, had brought about her orgasm more quickly than she had ever had in her life, and she blushed deeply about that. Even after cumming, she couldn’t stop herself from continuing to rub her pussy at the idea! It was only when her brother stepped beside her, and took her wrist into his grasp to pull her hand away, that she was forced to stop touching herself. The shame that she couldn’t even stop on her own, and that her brother had to stop her, was fresh on her mind as she looked out at the other teens, all watching her, and judging her.

“Let this be a lesson for you girls.” Charles explained, standing beside his panting older sister, still with her pussy dripping wet, with a firm grip on her wrist. “Listen to and obey us boys, as we’ve been put in charge of you for a reason, or this may very well be your fate too.”

[Hooked6]

I loved the first two chapters so far! I especially liked how the girls were deliberately kept in the dark leading up to the embarrassing camp rules, being given just enough information to get them to do what they needed them to do and no more.

This is one heck of a set-up! I can't wait to read what happens next.

Hooked6

[TeenFan]

I certainly like the age range for this social experiment, but I am having a hard time feeling the Charles character is 13 years old with
the way he talks. I guess I'm used to a tv character such as Malcolm from "Malcolm in the Middle" as an example of a brainy 13 year old.

[student]

Two more weeks of camp to go!

[Skylar21]

Wonderful chapter! Charles lays down the law for his sister as well as the other girls. His sister's internal reaction to the speech about being subservient and obedient to the boys is hot.

I foresee a lot of changed girls by the end of the camp as they enjoy their newly found submission.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

[perseus]

Another amazing chapter! I loved everything that happened between Charlie and Jane! It was fun to see him not force her. But on the other hand, I also loved how Charlie dealt with Danielle too! I cannot wait for the third chapter!