"Compromising Situation": For those who have read it...

[CaughtOfLore]

I've had a persistent desire to resume this story for over a year now. When I was originally writing it, I had a document of notes about each character, their personalities, wants, even a log as to what they knew, what they were currently wearing, etc. The point of this was because there were so many characters and moving parts, and this enabled me to focus on writing the story without having to go back and re-read everything each time I went to write a new chapter, just to check whether someone had put their pants back on at some point, for example.

Well, that reference document is long gone, and so I've started putting together a new one. But I kind of want to check in with people who would be interested in me returning to this story, to know what was/wasn't working for you. Were there any characters you wanted to see focused on more? Plot threads you think are worth exploring? Which character, if any, should be given a happily ever after? I'm not asking for how any of these things should be achieved - that's my job as the writer. I'm just interested to hear what elements were the reasons people liked it, and where they would like to see me take it in the broadest of senses. I hope that makes sense.

I do know where I originally intended the story to go, and how it would ultimately wrap up, but I feel that if that idea is completely misaligned with what people would want in a continuation of these characters, I'd like to know that before committing to that particular direction.

For those who haven't read it, or need a refresher themselves, here's the link to Compromising Situation thus far.

Anyway, any thoughts, notes, big or small, are welcome. I will ultimately write the story that I want to write, but I wouldn't be asking for your thoughts if I didn't feel they'll help my confidence in turning the ignition key in this dusty old story and steering it back onto the right road.

[Freesub]

Honestly after reading this, I think if the girls actually sent Hayden's pictures to Amy, that would not be enjoyable because it would be too cliché.

One plot point I think could be interesting is some accident that causes Rina to end up naked in front of Hayden, which would be interesting as a brief role reversal.

Also I think Hayden getting permission to cum just a millisecond before it happens anyways would be fun, with Hayden not hearing it and fearing the worst, before he pieces it together before the girls realise he didn't hear. I think the disconnect could be entertaining.

Lastly maybe a potential ending of every girl having Hayden's pictures but an argument between the girls ending up with Hayden having all of their pictures too, sort of in a Mutually Assured Destruction situation like Nuclear Warfare, would be a really interesting ending.

Also apart from the obvious humiliations, my favourite subtle humiliation was the girls forcing Hayden to give them what was essentially a sex ed lesson about Boys' secrets.

[Themarble]

I'd be very excited to see any continuation of this story. I rememeber it had me coming back for months on end to see if there would be any continuation.

Personally I had no gripes with anything on the story, it was moving well and I really liked how the girls acted. It was cruel in a perfect way for a story like it.

Perhaps Hayden staves off of an orgasm? Or he doesn't. Regardless I hope the stakes remain. It is what builds tension! The idea that they just keep teasing him till just a singular touch could set him off is hot. Perhaps then something accidental could happen and that would set him off?

I also hope you finish some of your other stories like a frame of shame. The place that left off has had me coming back to it for years!

[Executionus]

One of the things I always loved about that series was how the focus and power was constantly shifting around, so each character was taking turns being in control and each one had a turn being humiliated and exposed. The shifting around kept things exciting.

The subplot of Chantelle's pic and video stash being used to trade for porn of hot guys in school (and used to make her do things in front of Hayden) is also a fun aspect and could continue for a while before she somehow managed to gain control (possibly by allying with Hayden again.)

[Blondie]

Your post motivated me to reread this story, which I did over the last few days. After doing so, I have to say that it needs a lot of work. You need to work on many more chapters, because the story and the quality of writing is too good to allow it to sit dormant any longer, and once picked up, it should go on for a long time.

I love how each scene slowly unfolds, and how you allow the tension to build. The beauty is in the details, and you are masterful in that regard.

I won't begin to tell you how to continue your story, but I will say that I won't be surprised if the Josh character eventually joins the party, and if so, that it will not quite be what he had in mind. Will his appearance somehow further exacerbate Hayden's humiliation?

Will Hayden have the pleasure of witnessing his sister's due comeuppance? If so, it could be interesting. If not, that's okay, too.

Young, underdeveloped Abigail might be my favorite of those you've chosen to strip so far. I wouldn't be opposed to the birthday girl (still naked in her sleeping bag, I think?) being faced with further embarrassments. But whatever; I've enjoyed all of your characters, and I'm sure I'll appreciate reading about whomever you decide to victimize next.

Carry on, my wayward son.

[Hooked6]

Young, underdeveloped Abigail might be my favorite of those you've chosen to strip so far. I wouldn't be opposed to the birthday girl (still naked in her sleeping bag, I think?) being faced with further embarrassments. But whatever; I've enjoyed all of your characters, and I'm sure I'll appreciate reading about whomever you decide to victimize next.

Oh I agree, besides Hayden, Abigail is my favorite character out of this larger cast and I hope she will continue to have more embarrassing and revealing situations in the future!! She is such a joy to read about.

Hooked6

[CaughtOfLore]

I truly appreciate you all taking the time to provide these thoughts. I think I picked the perfect time in my preparations to get this feedback too. I'm not saying I can incorporate it all necessarily, but it's given me enough to know I'm not going to make any major missteps here.

I think I'd like to get a couple of chapters ahead before I start posting again, as the last time I posted a chapter I realised after the fact that a couple of throwaway lines prevented me from exploring something that could have been a lot of fun in a future chapter, and then that's where I started to lose drive for the story. I want to make sure this time I don't do that to myself by keeping a level of flexibility on hand.

But this has all been incredibly beneficial, and I'm excited to get Abbie's party started again.

[CaughtOfLore]

Okay, one question I was hoping people might weigh in on unprompted, but didn't...

How do you see Hayden feeling about Chantelle's situation at the moment? Do you think he feels any portion of responsibility or guilt for a photo of her now being in Josh's hands? I know he's got major problems of his own right now, but has anyone else thought about this? Conversely, do you think Chantelle is harbouring resentment toward Hayden for being the catalyst of this, or does she feel like this is purely (admittedly disproportionate) comeuppance for her own actions?

[Executionus]

Okay, one question I was hoping people might weigh in on unprompted, but didn't...

How do you see Hayden feeling about Chantelle's situation at the moment? Do you think he feels any portion of responsibility or guilt for a photo of her now being in Josh's hands? I know he's got major problems of his own right now, but has anyone else thought about this? Conversely, do you think Chantelle is harbouring resentment toward Hayden for being the catalyst of this, or does she feel like this is purely (admittedly disproportionate) comeuppance for her own actions?

The reason that Hayden is naked, about to cum, humiliating himself utterly, and constantly threatened with his own pictures being sent out is the direct result of Chantelle turning on Hayden after they had been allies against the other girls originally. He was definitely betrayed by Chantelle, especially when she was falsely telling the girls that Hayden's dick was small even when erect. If anything I'd say that he sees Chantelle being betrayed by the others as karma for her flipping on him first. I doubt he feels much guilt of any kind for her pictures leaking after she so happily took blackmail pictures of him first under threat of leaking them.

If anything, Chantelle probably feels guilty and foolish for her role in all of this. The entire reason that Hayden couldn't try to defend her from getting her pictures sent out (like she defended him with the towel) is because he's afraid of his own being sent out next if he tried. When you really break it down, the worst thing Hayden ever did to Chantelle was being horny for her and perving on her. Which Chantelle did to him as well the moment he first had his wardrobe malfunction.

[Blondie]

How do you see Hayden feeling about Chantelle's situation at the moment? Do you think he feels any portion of responsibility or guilt for a photo of her now being in Josh's hands? I know he's got major problems of his own right now, but has anyone else thought about this? Conversely, do you think Chantelle is harbouring resentment toward Hayden for being the catalyst of this, or does she feel like this is purely (admittedly disproportionate) comeuppance for her own actions?

Putting myself in Hayden's shoes (okay, I know he's not wearing any ), I would be much too concerned about my own predicament to even think about Chantelle's feelings—or for that matter, anyone other than myself.

As far as Chantelle is concerned, sure, if she wanted to blame someone for the photo getting out, Hayden would be one of her choices. But Brylee is right up there, too. After all, she is the one who sent the photo.