Re: Extreme Therapy - Book 1 Complete Book 2 Chapter 20 Posted (11/14/2024)

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This story is going into a strange area since it's not an ENF story anymore, and it seems it is not about Annie anymore, it is more about I guess her alternate personality which is Sophie who believes she is a dog. I was really hopping that Annie would find a way to get her body back and get rid of the alernate personity.

[edithdick]

This story is going into a strange area since it's not an ENF story anymore, and it seems it is not about Annie anymore, it is more about I guess her alternate personality which is Sophie who believes she is a dog.

No arguments here. Annie has somehow managed to normalize her predicament. I had started down a path where Dr. Crowe would use her knowledge of psychology to break down Sophie/Annie and then piece her back together. That was the intent, prior to rewriting Chapter 13. I realized that I did not have the writing skills to pull that off convincingly and entertainingly, so instead, I decided to rewrite Ch 13 and spend the next few chapters getting back to the basics of what made this story fun to write.

I was really hopping that Annie would find a way to get her body back and get rid of the alternate personity.

On this, I don't want to spoil anything here, but I would point out that Annie is narrating this story to *someone*, therefore she will eventually get back to being Annie at some point. My challenge is figuring out how much story is left once she has reclaimed herself and become "normal" again.

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There are several things I like about this story. First, it makes me think about what might be going on with Annie. It is rather like those complex British murder/mysteries that give possibilities and clues which may or may not be germane to the actual plot or solution but they give rise to speculation in the reader's mind as to what might be happening. It reminds me of putting a1000-piece jigsaw puzzle together. Just when you think you found a piece of the puzzle, another chapter comes out in your story and I find myself saying, "Oops, that didn't fit. I need to look further."

Second, the story is filled with great erotic scenes that feed my baser instincts that I crave when I read erotica.

Third, you are slowly revealing bits and pieces as to why Annie was going to therapy in the first place and the guilt her brother is dealing with - presumably which is why he is also in therapy. "The plot thickens," as the old cliché goes.

This is a beautiful tale that has captured my attention and imagination. Looking forward to seeing what you will do with this.

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It is rather like those complex British murder/mysteries that give possibilities and clues which may or may not be germane to the actual plot or solution but they give rise to speculation in the reader's mind as to what might be happening. It reminds me of putting a1000-piece jigsaw puzzle together. Just when you think you found a piece of the puzzle, another chapter comes out in your story and I find myself saying, "Oops, that didn't fit. I need to look further."

Hooked6

This makes sense to me, as my writing technique is similar to the Murder/Mystery writers. While I have never taken a creative writing course, I did read "Characters and Viewpoints" by Orson Scott Card (linked below). He essentially described writing that type of story as planning a murder, (Who, what, when, where, why & how) and what you would do to get away with it. Then, the story starts with the discovery of the body, and you reverse engineer your murder plan via clues that would likely be left behind until the murderer is revealed.

My technique has two similarities to this. For one, I always start by thinking of a scene that I want to see. For instance, Janet walks naked onto the plane hoping beyond hope that her clothes will arrive when she gets to her destination. Or Cat walks naked onto the stage in her high school fashion show... or in this case, Annie comes out of her hypnosis only to discover that she has been running around naked all day.

From that scene, I think of how that could possibly happen. What would motivate a girl to put herself in that situation? Then I reverse the clock to the beginning and write toward that scene. Sort of the opposite of Mystery Writers who are writing away from the crime scene.

Most of the time, when I am writing a story, I don't think of anything that happens after that scene when I begin writing. It is only when I have reached that scene that I decide whether that is the end of the story or the beginning. If it is the beginning, then it is a mad rush of twists and turns until the character either gets back to normal or accepts that they are no longer who they once were and lives with the new reality.

The main difference here is that, at the end of the murder mystery novel, the detective has either solved the mystery or not. In my stories, there isn't a predetermined ending to the story. Janet accepts the new reality that she is a permanent nudist, or Janet finds a new job and gets dressed... I do actually have an ending in mind for Annie/Sophie. I am hoping that it will be satisfying to the reader.

I’m still learning how to keep my long form stories from going off the rails. So far all I’ve come up with is 1) writing 2-3 chapters ahead before posting and 2) taking breaks until I can come up with a new scene that I can write towards. I’m not sure how other writers do it, but I’ve learned that I have to work within my strengths.

P.S.
For those of you interested in writing believable/complex characters in your story, I cannot recommend highly enough the aforementioned "Characters and Viewpoints"
https://www.amazon.com/Characters-Viewp ... E0qZ6ponv8

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"A friend is one soul abiding in two bodies." — Aristotle.

More Therapy – Chapter 16

In the morning, Dr. Crowe poured Chloe and Sphhie each half a bowl of dog food for breakfast. Chloe had gotten to the water bowl first, and when Sophie drank it there were bits of kibble floating in it. Again, I wanted to gag, but since Sophie didn’t care, I had no choice but to watch she she swallowed it all down.

Josh arrived while we were still drinking. Chloe noticed him first and ran over for some pets and licks. As soon as Sophie saw him, she did the same. She had begun picking up more of Chloe’s manerisms, such as licking people she liked on the hand or cheek. Josh got both, but blushed and pushed Sophie away when he noticed Dr. Crowe staring at him curiously.

“Josh,” Dr. Crowe said. “I need to to take Chloe and Sophie to the park for some exercise. Also, here is a list of commands you need to work with Sophie on.”

Josh accepted the paper with the commands written on it. “I have patients until 4:00 PM, so you will need the key to my house so you don’t get her sunburned.”

Josh nodded. “I could just take her to my house.” Is offered.

“I spoke with your mom yesterday. She is not keen on you bringing a dog into your house.” Dr. Crowe said. “You can feed Sophie again at lunch time. I left some snacks in the fridge for you as well, so when you get hungry, help yourself.”

“No problem. Thanks!” Josh said.

“Just make sure that Sophie eats her entire bowl, or else put the rest on the counter. Chloe can’t take that many calories and she’ll be shitting all night if she eats too much.:

“Understood.”

Dr. Crowe handed Josh the keys and two leashes. “Before you leave, here is some sunscreen for you and Sophie. She has a lot of exposed skin, make sure you don’t miss any spots.”

“Anything else?” Josh asked.

“Just, lock the door when you leave and when I get back, I’ll show you how to bathe them.” Dr. Crowe said before leaving for work.

“Hey Annie.” Josh said. “I hope that this doesn’t bother you too much that I am doing this.”

Sophie smiled at him and he let her lick his face a bit more before saying, “Stop. Stop. Stop… I need to put sunscreen on you and take you to the park.”

At the mention of the word park, Chloe’s tail began to wag, and she started doing little circles in anticipation. Seeing Chloe get so excited made Sophie do the same thing.

“Sophie, sit.” Josh commanded, squeezing out a generous squirt of suntan lotion onto his palm. He was very thorough applying it. He seemed to get confused at how much to apply to my pubic hair, since it seemed to soak up as much as he put on. He reapplied it 3 times before it had a glistening wet look to it.

The third time, his finder actually went inside me just a bit. There was a sudden pleasure and pain at the same time as the lotion stung on my tender area. Sophie winced and pulled away.

“Sorry Annie, I think I got some inside your pussy. Are you okay?” Josh asked.

The stinging only lasted a couple of minutes. I could feel my own wetness flushing out the area. Fortunately, with the extra thick layer of suntan lotion on my pubes, my own wetness wasn’t especially noticeable.

After that, Josh latched the leashes on the two of us and we headed out to the park. It wasn’t the park I was thinking of though, where there would be tons of children playing. Instead he brought us to a dog park. There were a few older kids walking their dogs, and a few adults.

“There’re other dogs here, so I’ll need to keep you two on leashes this time.” Josh said, almost to himself.

We drew a lot of attention, like always. Most of the people there tried to keep their dogs from interacting with dogs they didn’t know, for fear of getting into a fight. But everyone at the park, men and women, were sort of hovering in the area where Josh had setup to go through the commands Dr. Crowe had given him.

Sophie was excited. She liked meeting new people, and now she really liked meeting new dogs. She was excited that she might get to do both right now. As she was looking at all the new faces, I was trying to pay attention to see if I recoginized any of them.

There were two teens who I knew in that croud. Jack Adleman was a grade behind me in school. His sister Kate was in my grade, though she wasn’t hear today. The other person I knew was a girl also in my grade named Connie. We used to be friends up until 5th grade. She had a crush on my big brother Craig, and when he rejected her, she blamed me. Ever since then, she had at best kept a distance, though I suspected that she was one of the people spreading the nudes of me from last summer.

I noticed that everyone was on their phone. A couple of them, Connie included, were not even hiding the fact that they were recording me run around naked in broad daylight. Part of me knew that, in a week I would be walking into school just as naked as this, but another part of me wanted to walk up and slap the taste out of Connie’s mouth.

“Sit!” I heard Josh command.

Just then, Sophie sat perfectly in the grass. “Good girl!” Josh said. “Stand.”

Quickly, Sophie scrambled up to a standing position. I could feel pride in her heart that she had done so well. Josh seemed pleased with it too. “Up.” Josh said.

This one was one Dr. Crowe wanted him to work on for some reason. From a standing position, if he said, ‘Up’, Sophie knew to stand up on her tip toes. If he said, “Up, up” she would extend her arms over her head as well.

“Down.” Josh said. Which, from an ‘up’ position, just meant coming back off of her toes. It was more complicated than that though, if she was in ‘up, up’ and he said ‘down’ it just meant toes down, but arms still up. He had to said ‘down, down’ to get her arms back down.

Josh went through all of those positions several times. From sit, and lie, and beg (this was Sophie in an upright posture while on her knees, with her hands just under her chin).

After it was clear that Sophie was being obedient, Josh decided to take the leash off of her. “Sophie, Stay.” Josh commanded while she was in the ‘up,up / down position’. Arms up high over my head, but not on my toes, I could hold this pose for up to fifteen minutes, based on the training at the facility.

Josh took Chloe for a walk around the dog park. “You need some attention to, don’t you Chloe?” I heard him ask as he walked away.

Unfortunately, with Josh and Chloe gone, the other dog owners lost their hesitancy to come closer. “What the fuck, Annie!” Connie said in a sharp voice. “I knew you were a slut, but this is pathetic, even for you.”

Sophie was feeling nervous. She wanted to go play with her new friends, but Josh told her to stay. Sophie was a good girl, and did NOT want to go back to the facility again.

Jack walked up as well. “Hey Jack, I dare you to touch her.” Connie taunted.

Jack blushed. “Where?” He asked.

“Where do you think? How about that unkempt bush she had between her disgusting legs.” Connie clarified.

“It looks wet.” He said.

“Yea, she is really gross.” Connie said with a laugh. “Just touch her boobs then.”

“Hey Annie, can I touch your boobs?” Jack asked.

Sophie had no clue what they were talking about, but it wouldn’t have mattered. She was told to stay, so she stayed.

“She didn’t say no.” Connie offered.

Jack nodded. “You’re right. Annie, if you don’t want me to touch your boobs, then tell me.”

Jack got closer. He reached out his hands to take hold of my breasts. Just then I heard Josh call out, “Sophie, Come!”

Without hesitation, Sophie took off like a bolt and was halfway across the field before Jack and Connie could even react. “She’s a tease. I knew it.” Connie said with a laugh. “See you in school, Annie. So will everyone else.”

She had no idea how right that was.

When we got back to Dr. Crowe’s house, Josh said, “Sorry about leaving you alone in the park like that Annie. Dr. Crowe said I had to do it to see how you will react. In school, you won’t have me with you all day long. I don’t know how it will work, but they won’t let me take you to class with me all the time.”

Josh fed Sophie lunch, then Sophie and Chloe shared another bowl of water. No floaties in this one, but still. In the afternoon, Josh let Sophie and Chloe go play together for a while. They chased one another around the house, playing a doggie version of tag. Josh sat on the sofa and began watching TV while Sophie and Chloe played together.

It took about an hour for Chloe to run out of energy. I was feeling quite sweaty and tired as well. Chloe found Josh sitting on the Sofa and hopped up onto his lap. Sophie decided that it was too crowded up there, so she sat on the floor and rested my head on his leg. Sophie closed my eyes to take a nap. I felt Josh’s hand gently stroking my head as we fell asleep.


It had been a long time since I remembered one of my dreams. The last time, Sophie was chasing me around nightmare scenarios. This time, I dreamed of Sophie and I playing together at the park. We ran around chasing one another. There was a pond. I had never seen it before, but it seemed so natural for us to go for a swim. The water felt cool on my skin as I waded into the gentle waters.

In my dream, Sophie was a real dog. A big fluffy sheep dog as clumsy as ever. In my dream, I was me. I looked down at my reflection in the pond. My hair was as I used to wear it before all of this happened. I had it pulled back into a braid and tied with a yellow ribbon. The sun reflected off of my bare shoulders.

In the pond water, I could see ripples as I walked. Suddenly, I stopped walking. I looked at my reflection again. My bare shoulders. The curve of my bare breasts. I felt a jolt of shock as I was dreaming of myself, but in my dreams I was still naked! I heard someone calling me… “Sophie… Sophie…”

In a heartbeat, Sophie was wide awake and we were practically sprinting toward the door. Chloe had beaten us there and was jumping up and down. Dr. Crowe was taking off her shoes and trying not to step on the little dog as she made her way into the house.

“Sophie, I have a present for you.” Dr. Crowe said in a delighted voice. I could see her holding a shopping bag with the Amazon logo on it. Sophie responded by bouncing on her heels. With my new awareness of my body, I felt my breasts bouncing as well. We followed Dr. Crowe into the kitchen feeling every bit as excited as a 3 year old on Christmas morning.

Dr. Crowe set her purse down on the kitchen table and pulled a box out of the bag. Sophie was getting so excited, I was afraid she was going to pee on the floor. She didn’t care about the box or the bag. She had missed Dr. Crowe. All of those weeks in the facility, I realized that Sophie was now very attached to my therapist.

“Sit, Sophie.” Dr. Crowe said.

Sophie sat. As obedient as ever, she was eager to please Dr. Crowe. I felt Dr. Crowe fumble with the collar I was wearing and after a few seconds slip it off of my neck.

“You get a new collar!” Dr. Crowe said excitedly. Sophie was excited too, though I have no idea why. I felt her wagging my butt on the linoleum flooring. It was odd to me then that, as weird as it sounds, my butt wagging felt normal now.

Dr. Crowe examined the new collar. I could see it had 3 knobs on it that looked odd. “What is it?” Josh asked. I hadn’t noticed him entering.

“This is a safety device.” Dr. Crowe said. “It has a tracker built in and three cameras. They will record her interactions. That way, whoever is in charge of her at school each day will be held accountable.”

Sophie understood none of that, by in my head I took a huge sigh of relief. At least if someone tries molesting me, there will be a recording of it.

“That’s crazy. How does the tracker work?” He asked.

“It’s an air tag, like the one in my suitcase. I just need to pair it to my phone, and I’ll be able to find her if she runs away.” Dr. Crowe explained. “I just need to see how… There”

I heard a CLICK and the collar opened up. “What if someone takes it off of her?” Josh asked.

“It has a lock, plus if they cut it off, it acts like an ankle bracelet the police use and will even call 911. Hopefully it doesn’t ever come to that. This thing was expensive!” Dr. Crowe said. “Hold still, Sophie.”

That was not a command that Sophie knew, but she still managed to sit there patiently until I heard the CLICK sound repeat. Dr. Crowe took a step back and had a look. The new collar was a bit heavier than the old one, but it was also more conoured and softer feeling on my skin. Dr. Crowe opened her phone and then tapped on an app.

“See, look.” She held the phone out for Josh to see. Josh looked at his phone and then moved his hand up and down in front of me.

“This is LIVE!” He exclaimed. “Look Annie, look what you’re wearing.” Josh took Dr. Crowe’s hand and turned it slightly so I could see the screen of the phone. The collar had 3 wide angle lenses built into it. One pointed directly in front of me. The other two were perched over each shoulder. This provided a 360 degree view of my suroundings.

The cameras were very clear and the view was wide enough that in the front camera, I could clearly see the tops of my bare breasts, still bouncing from Sophie’s excitement. On the other cameras, though my hair partially obscured the views, however, it showed everything from my sides and rear. Even my butt was in plain view from these two cameras.

“I still need to get it sync’d to the cloud,” Dr. Crowe said, “but for now I am getting livestream of Sophie 24/7. What’s that smell, anyway?”

Josh subconsciously took in a deep breath through his nose and answered, “Oh, Sophie and Chloe were playing earlier. I think she worked up a pretty good sweat.”

“Well, this is supposed to be waterproof up to 50 meters. Guess we’ll find out if it’s worth the money I spent on it.” Dr. Crowe said.

“Bath time?” Josh asked. Chloe started jumping again.

“Not for you Chloe. You just had one.” Dr. Crowe suggested. “Sophie needs a bath every day, but Chloe doesn’t need so many. You’ll get sick, girl!” Dr. Crowe said to her little companion. “Josh, take Sophie upstairs and I’ll put Chloe into her kennel.”

“Let’s go, Sophie.” Josh said before we followed him up the the bathroom. Josh had me sitting on the floor as we waited for Dr. Crowe to come up and put on the bath water. She showed him how hot it should be and explained that this will be his job from now on.

“In the tub, Sophie.” Josh said. Again, this was not a command that Sophie knew, so he helped me get into the bathtub while the water was still running.

Dr. Crowe handed Josh the handheld shower head. “Go ahead and get her wet.” Dr. Crowe told him. Josh began spraying warm water onto my body.

“What did you do to her?” She asked.

“What do you mean?” Said Josh.

“Look here.” She said, pointing at the water running through my pubes. “Did she fall asleep in wet paint or something?”

“You mean that white stuff? That’ sunscreen.” He told her.

“Did you use the whole bottle in this one spot?” Dr. Crowe asked through a long howling laughing fit.

“I rubbed some in, but it kept disappearing.” Josh said defensively. “So I added more.”

Dr. Crowe was rubbing tears from her eyes and she kept laughing. “Well, I did tell you to make sure she had enough… How about this. We’ll shave that area so you don’t need to run me out of sunscreen every day.”

“Okay… can you show me?” Josh asked.

Dr. Crowe agreed to teach him how to shave my pubes. She started by having him put a generous portion of shaving cream all over the area. Dr. Crowe explained that shaving in the same direction that the hair grows will make it less irritated. “No sense in giving her razer burn down there.” She said.

Josh followed her instruction and after several minutes of gliding the razer top to bottom down my pubic area, he asked, “Done?”

“Spray it off and let’s have a look.” Dr. Crowe said. “See, you missed a bunch of hair here and… Sophie, spread your legs… there.” She said. Sophie didn’t know that command either, thankfully, but Dr. Crowe used her elbow to push my legs apart so they could get a better view. “You’ll want to use your other hand to move things around to get the proper angle on these areas.” Dr. Crowe told him.

Josh looked really nervous as he slid his hand up and began adjusting my labia, trying to get a flat surface to shave against. “Not too deep.” Dr. Crowe said, noticing that his fingers were penetrating me. There was pleasure in the touch, but both Sophoi and I were nervous as he worked. I’d never had sex before, and other than visits to the doctor, nobody had touched me like that before.

I have no idea what Sophie was thinking, but I could feel my heart beating 100 miles an hour. By the time Josh had finished, Sophie was panting like Chloe had been when we were playing tag. For different reasons, of course.

Josh dried me off before heading home for the night. “Oh, almost forgot.” Josh said. He then handed Dr. Crowe the house key he had used earlier when he took me to the park and then headed home.

We went to bed shortly afterward. I kept waking up to find Sophie rubbing my pussy. At first I thought it was because she wasn’t used to having a clean shave there. Later I realized, she was pleasuring herself. She was pleasuring me too…

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“It's only awkward if you let it be.” - Silvia Donahue

More Therapy – Chapter 17

I don’t know why it seemed so odd to me that Dr. Crowe slept in the nude. I mean, I had not worn a stitch of clothing for the past several weeks, and by this point that seemed perfectly normal. Each morning when we woke, Dr. Crowe would slip on a thin satin robe and slippers when she took Sophie for her walk to pee. Once back inside the house, Dr. Crowe would often remove the robe again while Sophie, Cloe, and she would eat breakfast.

If it seemed strange to me, Sophie was quite indifferent to Dr. Crowe’s nudity around the house. I think that Sophie’s mentality toward clothing was the exact opposite of my own. At least, back when I was me, the very idea of walking around my house naked, even alone, but especially with another human present would have had me hiding under the bed for hours.

When Josh showed up the next morning, Dr. Crowe nearly answered the door naked before remembering to slip her robe back on. Even then, whilst the two of them discussed the plan for today, Dr. Crowe seemed unconcerned about how her robe seemed on the verge of falling open. I never saw any of her bits slip out, but I did notice Josh staring in case it happened.

The plan for today was much like yesterday. Josh was to work with Sophie. Make sure she completes each command and is obedient. I listened to her giving Josh instructions. I’m not really sure what Sophie understands and what not, but I was making mental notes anyway.

“You really need to keep her obedient.” Dr. Crowe said. “Her time in the facility was helpful for instilling in a strong self-discipline, but if she is anything like Chloe, she’ll start seeking independence if you cut her any slack.”

“What should I do if she doesn’t obey?” Josh asked, cautiously.

“Hmmmm… I don’t normally suggest corporal punishment, but Sophie is like a toddler, able to understand commands but struggles with understanding consequences.” Dr. Crowe said. “Start with a verbal warning. Tell her she is a ‘bad girl’. If that doesn’t get her attention, you should try raising your voice. Do not yell at her, or show your anger, just adjust your voice louder and firmer.”

Josh was nodding as she spoke.

“If that doesn’t work, or she refuses to listen to you, you may spank her bottom. But always tell her why you are doing it.” Dr. Crowe said.

“I don’t know if I am comfortable hitting Annie.” Josh admitted.

“Remember that this isn’t Annie. This is Sophie. She needs our protection. Our best bet in protecting her is to make sure she doesn’t get into mischief. Do you understand?” Dr. Crowe asked carefully. “Just a swat on her bottom and a firm ‘NO’ is all it should take.”

“So… spanking Sophie will protect Annie?” Josh asked slowly. “I think I can handle that.”

“Good, do you have any other questions?” Dr. Crowe asked.

“What about the other thing?” Josh asked. “You said I need to leave her alone and see how long she will stay… what is that for?”

Dr. Crowe said, “Next week, school starts, right?”

Josh nodded

“You won’t be able to be in class with Sophie. She will need other students to mind her.” Dr. Crowe said. “So she needs to be disciplined, even if she thinks you are not looking.”

“But the other students…” Josh started.

“They will be in charge, for sure… but Sophie knows you. She will obey you more than them. If she gets into trouble, she will come find you.” Dr. Crowe said. “Frankly, I think Sophie prefers you even to me…”

For some reason, Sophie decided to crawl up and lay her head on Dr. Crowe’s lap. This caught Dr. Crowe off guard, but realizing what she had said she petted the back of Sophie’s neck. “I know you love me… Sophie is a good girl.”

Dr. Crowe reached down and gave Sophie a hug, which Sophie took as a sign to play. Sophie scootched back, wagging her ‘tail’. This happened so quickly Dr. Crowe’s chair slid forward with Sophie. Somehoe the edge of Dr. Crowe’s robe got caught under the foot of the chair. Of course, Dr. Crowe didn’t notice this and proceeded to stand up to go chase Sophie.

The robe, which was already loose and barely even tied at this point slid off of Dr. Crowe. In an instant, Josh’s eyes bulged as he was suddenly staring at yet another naked woman.

Dr. Crowe also noticed what had happened. But instead of reacting, she merely turned back, bent down, and unhooked the robe from the bottom of the chair. “I suppose it’s time for me to get dressed now anyway.” Dr. Crowe said. She calmly draped the robe over her left arm and walked to the stairwell, turning just before leaving the room to ask Josh, “You might as well come up so I can go over the plan for today. Sophie, stay. Eat your breakfast.”

I didn’t see Josh’s face, but I heard him sputter for a second before sprinting upstairs. By the time they had returned, Sophie had finished eating the dog food, and the water bowl was licked dry. Dr. Crowe was dressed for work and Josh looked… uncertain.

“One more thing.” Dr. Crowe said. “Here is my house key. Just hold onto it. That way you can come and go whenever you need to pick Sophie up or take her home. Make sure she gets plenty of water.”

“Sure!” Josh exclaimed. His excitement had returned by the time he had finished applying today’s coat of suntan lotion. Well, Sophie was waiting for him anyway… I was just there. The three of us left the house together. Today, Dr. Crowe took Chloe to work with her, and the rest of us headed back to the park.

Josh spent the morning going through the training notes with Sophie. She had become exceedingly obedient to his commands. On three occasions, Josh told Sophie to stay, and then he went out of sight. I could feel her impatience and nervousness, but Sophie never moved a muscle.

We always drew a lot of attention whenever we were out in public. Most people were not comfortable approaching us, but the stares were neverending. Men, women, children… So far I had not passed anyone I knew, but even with strangers, it seemed like I should have felt humiliated to have everyone staring at my naked body. I didn’t feel that way anymore. I don’t know when it stopped, but I realized when we were running around the park that it was just normal for me to be naked now.

The first time Josh told Sophie to stay, after a few minutes standing there alone, a women in her 30’s came up and asked if I needed help. She pestered Sophie for a while, but when she didn’t get a response, she went and sat on the bench watching me. After Josh had returned, we began playing fetch again and when we were done she was gone.

The next time he did it, a police officer stopped by and began questioning Sophie. I still wore the prescription on a chain around my neck. Fortunately, he noticed it and called Dr. Crowe. He was still standing there when Josh returned. They talked for a minute where I couldn’t hear and then the officer left.

The third time, the woman from earlier had returned with two of her friends. The three of them tried wrapping a blanket around Sophie, but she wouldn’t let them. After several minutes, Sophie began growling and Josh returned. The women scolded him to no end, so we left the park to get away from them.

“Let’s go somewhere else to practice, is that okay Sophie?” Josh asked.

Sophie smiled. She was happy whenever Josh returned. She didn’t care about the park or anything else, just Josh. She was safe with Josh. We began walking down the sidewalk. We passed a coffee shop I used to go to when I worked at Dr. Crowe’s office. We passed her office, Sophie got excited when we got close, but when we passed by she didn’t seem to care. We kept walking.

The area was familiar to me. He took me down a side street and across a field I used to play at when I was a little puppy. I mean, when I was a little girl. Also when Sophie was a little puppy, though I have no memories of her nights running around this area. Just some memory of the bruises she accumulated as a result.

Everything was so familiar. Is this what Dr. Crowe told him to so with me today?

“Whao! A naked girl.” I heard a familiar voice yell.

“Is that Josh?” Asked another familiar voice.

“Holy shit, that’s Annie!” The two boys rode their bikes as fast as they could across the field. Billy and Andrew were Josh’s age. We all grew up together in this neighborhood.

When they finally got there, they became flummoxed. “How…” One said while the other seemingly cut him off with “Why…” They stared at me openly for a few minutes while Josh tried to explain about Annie and Sophie.

They didn’t seem to understand about how I was suddenly not me, but clearly I was ME, but not me. Billy finally settled on, “Can we touch her?”

“I guess…” Josh said. “She likes it when I stroke her head… HEY Don’t molest her!”

Billy and Andrew had each managed to get a firm grip on each of my breasts. “These are a lot bigger than last time.” Andrew commented. “Still firm though.” Billy added.

“Look, I didn’t bring her here so you two could get your rocks off.” Josh said firmly. “Let go!”

They backed away, looking forlorn. “What? Don’t say you never touched her!” Billy said.

“Not like that.” Josh said. “She’s still Annie… or at least, she will be Annie. We are not going to abuse her.”

“Did you do that?” Andrew asked, pointing at my cleanly shaved pussy. “I know she didn’t shave herself… not if she thinks she’s a dog.”

“Dr. Crowe made me shave her. It wasn’t sexual.” Josh complained. “It’s just so I can put suntan lotion on her without making a mess.”

“You get to put suntan lotion down THERE?” Billy laughed. Andrew chimed in. “How did you get so lucky?”

Josh tried explaining about seeing me back when I was still Annie, having to wear a blindfold just to walk down the hall. “She was naked and blindfolded? What did you do then?” Billy asked excitedly.

“Why didn’t you say something to us before? I mean, you get to see Annie naked now every day?” Andrew scolded. “Dude!”

Just then, Josh’s phone rang. “Hello? Hi mom.” He said. “Yea… No, not now…. I’m taking care of Annie.” He said. I could hear the muffled sound of his mom complaining about something. “But mom… I’m… Well, I’m in Cross Field… Billy and Andrew… No, I’m not supposed to leave her with them. Mom? Oh… I guess. Okay, I’ll see you in a few.”

“What happened?” Andrew asked sadly.

“My mom needs me to come home and help move the sofa. Can you two watch Sophie for fifteen minutes?” Josh asked.

Both boys were eager to assure him that they wouldn’t take their eyes off of me. Before he left, Josh gave the final command, “Sophie, stay.” He then borrowed Andrew’s bike and disappeared into the treeline.

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The tension builds as we get closer to school and Sophie interacting with more and more of her (former) peers. I can't wait to see what happens and the issues she gets into.

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[edithdick]

Friendship is being there when someone’s feeling low and not being afraid to kick them. – Randy Milholland

More Therapy – Chapter 18

With Josh gone for the moment, I began to worry about what Billy and Andrew were planning on doing to me. Sophie didn’t seem too worried about them, but I felt her being anxious that Josh was no longer in site. He had been playing that trick, where we would tell Sophie to stay and then pretend to leave us, but he always returned shortly after. I think Sophie expected him to pop out of the tree any second and tell us to go fetch or something.

Josh and Billy were discussing the situation between themselves. I only made out a few words here or there, but they were clearly taunting each other to try grabbing my boobs. “Okay, I’ll do it.” Billy said after a whispered debate between the two.

“Annie, can I touch your boobs?” Billy said to Sophie.

Sophie smiled at him. She normally smiled at anyone who tried talking to her, especially if they called her Annie. Billy took that as a yes, and proceeded to fondle my breasts. First the left one, but pretty soon he was holding onto both. “See? They’re firm, but squishy.” Billy called back to Andrew.

Next, Andrew started on as well, and took possession of the right one while Billy held onto the left one. “Holy F! Man. Annie, your boobs are sweet!” Andrew declared. His other hand began making its way down my stomach towards my shaved slit.

“Dude!” Billy said.

Andrew stopped. “I just want to feel it.”

I felt my heartbeat spike as they were stimulating me. My nipples are normally quite tender, and the sudden feel of these two boys playing with them was making me wet. Sophie noticed it too, but her reaction was different. She began to growl. I could visualize her thoughts… if they touched my pussy someone was about to get bit.

Fortunately, Billy stopped Andrew from crossing that line. I’ve no idea what would happen if I suddenly had a reputation of biting people on top of everything else. They seemed quite content to play with my breasts. It was making me tingle down there, but thankfully, Sophie didn’t react. Last time I felt like this, she went all in on masturbation. I am glad that she didn’t do that in front of these two boys.

I’ve no idea how long they stayed there fondling my boobs. Physically, this was causing my entire body to begin tremors of erotic waves. Sophie closed our eyes. In the darkness, I imagined Josh’s hands caressing me. This made me want to scream, but Sophie just began panting like Chloe would after playing for a while.

“What are you boys doing?” came a shrill woman’s voice from across the field.

Sophie opened her eyes and focused on the newcomer. It was Josh’s mom. She was walking fast across the field straight toward us. Both boys has reactively taken a couple of steps away from me and feigned innocence.

“Oh fuck!” Whispered Andrew. Billy was scrambling for his bike, as if escaping would somehow help him out of this situation.

I thought for sure he was going to ride off leaving Andrew alone with me to face the music. But before he could make up his mind, Josh’s mom had already closed the gap, still screaming at the boys to stay where they were.

“Annie! I should have known.” She said to me. “I saw you two years ago out in your yard like this! Now you just wander around wherever you want like a caveman?”

Her tone even made Sophie scared. “You boys head home. I’ll be calling your parents and tell them what you were doing out here.”

Billy let Andrew stand on the back wheel studs and they rode away as quickly as they could. Turning her attention to me she continued her scolding. “What is god’s name are you doing running around naked as a jaybird? Your parents will also be getting a call.”

Sophie stared at her, expressionless. “Josh is waiting in the car. Now you come with me and we’ll get this all straightened out.”

She turned to walk away, but Sophie didn’t move.

“Didn’t you hear me?” She demanded. “You come with me this instant. I need to find something to put over you.”

Sophie didn’t budge, so Josh’s mom did was seemed natural in this situation. She picked up the leash and said, “Walk!” Sophie knew that command and was too frightened not to obey. We walked with Josh’s mom across the field and through a small patch of trees. The street my house was on was just a block away, but her car was parked on the roadside at the edge of the woods.

Josh was sitting in the back seat, he had been crying. She insisted I sit in the front seat. When Sophie didn’t fasten her seat-belt, Josh’s mom began scolding me again. Finally, through his tears, Josh managed, “Mom! This isn’t Annie. It’s Sophie. She doesn’t know about seat-belts.”

“What is that even supposed to mean?” She responded to her son. “This is obviously Annie.”

“Annie is in there, but this is not her… I don’t know how to explain it.” Josh pleaded. “Just… fasten it for her. Sophie. Stay!”

Looking exasperated, Josh’s mom leaned over, pulled the seat-belt across, and clicked it into place. Shaking her head at me, she started the car and drove. I was certain we were going back to her place, but instead, she drove straight to Dr. Crowe’s house.

When we got there, she went to the door; leaving Josh and me in the car. “Good girl, Sophie.” Josh said when his mom was out of earshot. Sophie’s mood perked at the sound of these three words. She was a good girl. Josh and I stayed in the car for a while. He kept asking me what Andrew and Billy had done when he left, but then reminded himself that Sophie can’t really talk.

After a lot of time had passed, his mom and Dr. Crowe had come out to the car. “Josh.” His mom said calmly. “You are Annie’s caretaker.”

Josh nodded as if that were a question.

“Dr. Crowe explained what she is going through. You are responsible for her. Do not leave her with those two boys again.” She told him sternly.

Josh looked pale as his mom laid this responsibility on him. “I know Mom. I tried to…”

“I mean it! She can’t take care of herself like this. You have to be there to protect her.” She said.

“Mom, I… I understand.” Josh said solemnly. “Sophie… um, Annie is my responsibility.”

“You come home when you are done.” She said just before leaving. Whatever Dr. Crowe had said to Josh’s mom, her attitude toward her son spending time with a naked teenage girl had shifted 180 degrees. She was also no longer looking at me like I was a poisonous snake that she had to figure out how to get rid of.

I had no way of really keeping track of time in this state, but I did notice that the sun was just a few degrees over the horizon and the skyline was beginning to turn orange. I also noticed my stomach was empty.

Josh led Sophie back inside. There was a full bowl of kibble and about half a bowl of water. It looked like Chloe had already eaten. Dr. Crowe was seated at the kitchen table wearing her reading glasses. There were stacks of papers in front of her and she had her laptop opened.

“Hi, Dr. Crowe.” Josh announced. He hesitated for a second before saying, “Did my mom… uh…”

“It's fine, Josh. She and I had a long chat.” Dr. Crowe said without looking up from her work. “Please let Sophie eat and get her cleaned up.”

Josh nodded. His mom seeing me clearly had him unsettled, but he did as he was told. I was still not a fan of the dog food Dr. Crowe had been giving me to eat, but Sophie didn’t seem to mind.

Chloe had come in when she heard us eating and tried to finish the water before Sophie managed to get any. We ended up drinking it together. After that, Josh took Sophie upstairs for our bath. He was very gentle, the way her tested the water to make sure it was not too hot or too cold.

He started by rinsing me off with the handheld shower head. Then, he used a squeeze of doggie shampoo to wash my head. Immediately, he rinsed my hair off to keep the soap from my eyes. He then spent extra time scrubbed the soap all over my body. My breasts were still very sensitive, and I could feel myself being aroused when he washed me there.

He then took some shaving cream and the razor to remove any pubic stubble that had grown in since yesterday. Sophie had gotten used to this, and she bowed my legs apart to give Josh better access to the area. We were looking down at him as he carefully stroked the razor the way Dr. Crowe had showed him. He used his fingers to manipulate my vagina. I felt myself getting goosebumps as my pussy became wet.

Josh’s eyes shot open. “I’m sorry, Sophie. Are you getting cold?” He asked. “I’m almost done.”

He quickly finished shaving me, taking a second to smell his finger when he was done. Then he used the shower head to rinse me off again before draining the tub and toweling me dry. As his hands passed over my left breast, I watched in horror as Sophie grabbed his hand and pressed it there. I knew what she was doing, but this was Josh.

For his part, he didn’t know what was happening. Sophie wanted him to caress my breasts, but he clearly wasn’t comfortable taking advantage of me. He didn’t pull away, but neither did he caress or squeeze, the way he had when he was washing me.

“Josh!” Dr. Crowe called from downstairs. “When you’re done washing her, please take Sophie for a walk before heading home.”

That interruption was all that was needed to break the tension. Josh pulled his hand away and hung the towel on the hook before attending to my wet hair with the hairdryer. Josh was pretty good at manipulating the hairdryer and the brush at the same time. It normally takes about 30 minutes to dry my hair, but since he was using the brush at the same time, it felt considerably shorter. When it was done, my hair wasn’t all tangled either.

Josh brought me downstairs. He clipped the leash back on my collar and took me out to pee. Fortunately, that was all I needed to do. There were always people and cars in the neighborhood. I had gotten so used to people staring at me that I barely noticed them anymore. Even when the cars honked their horns as they passed by, I just blocked the noise out and went about my business. Well, not that I had any choice in the matter.

Josh brought me back inside and hung the leash back on the hook by the door before leaving. Sophie decided to lie in the floor under the table by Dr. Crowe’s feet. Chloe was already there, so the two of us sort of snuggled up to Dr. Crowe’s legs. I heard the door lock click when Josh left, but after a few minutes Dr. Crowe wandered over there to make sure.

When she had returned she said, “Sophie, Chloe. You two upstairs!” while pointing at the stairwell. This was not a command that Sophie had learned, but she seemed to know what to do. Slowly, she crawled out from under the table and followed Dr. Crowe up to the bedroom.

Remembering what had happened before, Sophie clamored to the bigger bed before Chloe could claim it. There was a bit of a growl and scuffle, but in the end, Sophie curled up onto our bed while Chloe moved over to the smaller one next to us.

“Good Night.” Dr. Crowe said as she clicked the lights off and closed the door. It had been a long day, and we fell asleep quickly. Sometime later, I heard Dr. Crowe come to bed. She didn’t mind when Chloe and Sophie crawled into the bed with her. I didn’t mind either…

[edithdick]

The secret of your future is hidden in your daily routine. - Mike Murdock

More Therapy – Chapter 19
I woke up the next morning snuggled up with Chloe and Dr. Crowe stroking my head. It was comforting to be cared for like that. Sophie appreciated it to as she nuzzled close to Dr. Crowe and rested my head on her bare breast. My heart skipped a beat as I was unsure if we were about to be punished. But instead of lashing out with anger at her private space being intruded on, Dr. Crowe smiled down at me and continued stroking my head.

The beautiful moment was interrupted by my stomach, which chose that inopportune moment to make a loud rumble. “Good morning, Sophie. Are you hungry?” Dr. Crowe said in a chipper voice.

In a moment, Sophie and Chloe were out of bed and scampering for the door. We made it to the kitchen, but Sophie headed to the front door. I felt the pressure on my bladder while Chloe and Sophie waited impatiently to be taken for their morning walk. Dr. Crowe had followed us downstairs. I heard her in the kitchen, seemingly unaware that we needed desperately to go outside.

When Sophie turned to go see what was taking Dr. Crowe so long, I heard the door lock click. Sophie turned around excitedly to see Josh walk in. “Is that you, Josh?” Dr. Crowe called from the kitchen.

“Yes, Dr. Crowe.” He said.

“Please walk the girls while I fix breakfast.” She called back.

With that, Josh had gotten our leashes attached to our collars and took us for our morning walk. The neighbors had gotten used to him walking me around the block each morning wearing nothing but a collar and leash. When I say ‘gotten used to’ I mean that they now all managed to go for their own walk at the same time to see the naked teen girl being led through the streets. Men and women came out to gawk at me. I have no idea how many cell phone photos were being shared, but so long as Josh was there, none of them tried anything more than take a photo.

Sophie was oblivious of the attention we were getting. If someone wasn’t specifically interacting with her, she seemed content to ignore them. Both Chloe and Sophie did their business and Josh headed back to the house. As soon as Josh had unleashed us, Sophie and Chloe sprinted to the kitchen for breakfast.

I felt a brief shock rush over me as I realized that Dr. Crowe was still naked. Josh was equally shocked, based on the redness of his face. “Sorry!” he blurted out. “I didn’t mean…”

“What’s wrong, Josh?” Dr. Crowe asked.

“You’re…” He pointed at her and trailed off in astonishment.

“Naked? You already saw me naked before.” She said.

“For a second.” Josh protested. “I didn’t look, I swear.”

“It's okay, Josh. You can look.” She said calmly. Then Dr. Crowe adjusted her stance, spread her legs slightly and cocked her head to the side as she studied Josh’s response. When Josh didn’t move, she continued her explanation. “I’m trying to gain some insight into Annie’s situation.”

“What do you mean?” Josh said, finally approaching Dr. Crowe, now staring intently at her body. For a mature woman, Dr. Crowe was rather stunning. She was in her late 40’s, but her breasts were as firm-looking as mine. She was petite, with no tattoos or other imperfections. Her nipples were redish-brown round disks that looked completely proportional to her small breasts. My guess is that she would have a hard time filling out a B cup.

Between her legs, I could see her labia peeking out behind a well-trimmed bush that reminded my of how I looked when I was 13 years old. I could see as Josh took all of this in while Dr. Crowe continued talking.

“School starts next week. My plan right now is to let Annie attend in this state. As a doctor, I think that this is the best way to help Sophie heal. As a woman, I wonder if I am doing the right thing for Annie.” Dr. Crowe said. “Josh, no. Look at me, please.”

“I’m s-s-sorry.” Josh stammered.

Sophie looked up from her food bowl in time to see that Josh had turned away from Dr. Crowe and seemed to be hiding his crotch with his hands.

“I had no idea how shy you were around women.” Dr. Crowe mused. “Perhaps when you are done bathing Sophie, I’ll have you give me a bath as well.”

Josh looked terrified. “Bu… I.” I could see it now. Josh had an erection and was trying not to let her see. A sudden pang of jealousy flashed through me. He sees me naked every day, and he sees her one time and is suddenly aroused.

She let out a laugh. “It’s okay, Josh. If you need to go take care of that first, then…”

Josh’s jaw nearly hit the floor from what she was insinuating. He looked back at her one more time and slowly nodded. Josh went into the bathroom and turned on the fan. When he returned a few minutes later, he was sweaty; but looked a lot calmer.

Dr. Crowe had taken her seat at the table and Josh sat next to her while they continued talking. Sophie and Chloe had finished their breakfast and curled up on the floor between Josh and Dr. Crowe.

“When you start school next week, Sophie will get the chance to interact with Annie’s former classmates. My hope is that this interaction will help bring Annie back out to the surface. If that works, then Annie will be aware that she is running around the school naked. Considering her sense of modesty, this should give Annie the fighting energy she needs to regain control.” Dr. Crowe said calmly.

Josh nodded along while she spoke. “But won’t Annie be mad at us for exposing her like that?”

“Probably furious.” Dr. Crowe agreed. “But my bigger concern is how she will cope after she has regained herself.”

Josh gave me a concerned look before asking, “What’s gonna happen to Annie?”

Dr. Crowe put her hand on Josh’s wrist for reassurance. “Don’t worry. Annie’s going to be fine. But as a woman, I need to experience what she is going through as best I can. What is it like to be deprived of clothes day after day? I need to experience that for myself for a while so I can understand better how to treat her when she comes back to us. Do you understand?”

Josh hesitated for a moment before nodding, “I think so. So you’re going to the office like… THAT?”

Dr. Crowe pressed her lips to a tight line for a second and she thought through the question. Finally, she decided, “Not today. I don’t think I’m so bold as to go outside the whole day like this. Today I’ll work from home.”

Josh nodded. “So you don’t need me today?”

“Need you? Of course I need you today. Who else is gonna walk Sophie and Chloe? Besides, I need to see my patients. This whole week I scheduled virtual visits until I get used to the idea of treating my patients like this.”

I was amazed that she was putting herself through all of this just to learn how to treat me when I had regained control. I truly admired her commitment to her patients, to me in particular. Dr. Crowe had opened up her home and taken me on as a ward. Now she was putting herself in the same humiliation situation that I was in just so she could gain a sense of empathy.

The rest of the week passed with Dr. Crowe remaining naked the entire time. The only thing I saw her wear was a long jacket when she went to work the first day. Presumably, she took it off when she got to the office. The next day, when Josh showed up to take Chloe and I for our morning walk before breakfast, Dr. Crowe insisted on accompanying him, this time without the jacket.

Up until then, she had not realized that all of our neighbors were lining the streets each morning to get a glimpse of the naked girl as Josh took me around. “Is it like this all the time?” She asked Josh, quietly.

Josh explained how, as word spread of his schedule, the neighbors all seemed to want to see Sophie go for the morning walk. It’s usually quieter in the afternoon.

Many of the neighbors, cell phones in hand, took more interest in Dr. Crowe than they had in Sophie. Nobody said much more than “Good morning, Dr. Crowe.” For her part, she merely smiled and gave a brief nod. She dared not engage, lest she’d have to explain her nudity to the entire neighborhood. Since nobody asked, she just kept walking.

I was astonished as Dr. Crowe found a soft patch of grass on the side of the road to relieve herself on. She really was going all in on building empathy for me. After she had finished, she had a satisfied expression that she had learned something. “Josh, would you mind walking with me to the office before heading back home?”

Josh agreed and we all headed back the way we came, passing by the outside of the house before heading the rest of the way to the office. Dr. Crowe thanked Josh for accompanying her and went inside. We spent the rest of the day at the park, Sophie was getting very good at following Josh’s instructions, and even when Josh was out of sight for an hour, Sophie never panicked.

Dr. Crowe made it home in time for dinner. Josh stuck around and ate with us. I always got excited at dinner because I knew that bath time was next. Josh was now very used to washing Chloe and Sophie. He had become very skilled at keeping my pubic area smooth and shiny. His fingers rubbed on my wet pussy as he manipulated the area to not miss any stray hairs almost always made me cum.

“I think we’ll skip that part when you wash me.” Dr. Crowe said through the bathroom door. Josh about jumped out of his skin, he didn’t realize she was standing behind him. He tried protesting, he still was not THAT comfortable with her nakedness. She insisted that she needed to endure as much of what Sophie endured for Annie’s sake. Josh reluctantly agreed and proceeded to wash Dr. Crowe while Chloe and I headed downstairs to play for a while before bed.

After Josh left for the evening, Chloe, Dr. Crowe, and Sophie all crawled into bed for the night. I was a bit taken aback when I realized that Josh had indeed shaved Dr. Crowe’s pussy after all. Did he make her cum as well?

We cuddled together as we fell asleep. The next rest of the week, after breakfast, Dr. Crowe went to the office alone and without her jacket. Josh spent the days training with Sophie and continued giving Sophie, Chloe, and Dr. Crowe a nightly bath.

I had lost track of the days, so when the morning came that Josh didn’t show up, and I saw Dr. Crowe getting dressed, I was a bit confused. It wasn’t until we arrived at school that I realized my summer vacation was now over. Sophie was about to be introduced to my classmates.

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Ok, so I've started reading More Therapy and I'm currently on chapter 3.

So far I'm really enjoying it. There's a lot that I like and one or two things I'd change. I really like how Annie acts like she is vulnerable and traumatised, because well, she absolutely has been traumatised. I like how her body language does in fact reflect that in terms of not being able to make eye contact much and general signs of depression/self esteem issues. (Though I'd love to see so much more of that throughout)

I also just enjoy Annie's personality and spending time with her overall. I like how Craig is her sort of knight in shining armour and the dynamic those two have. Her parents are nice, and it's always fun when the girl's parents/siblings, especially male family members, witness her naked such as the mall scene.

I like the mental health angle that you've taken and how you lean heavily into that. Never can have too much of that imo, but then you know that I enjoy darker stories such as this. (Though I still love light hearted stuff too. It's just nice to have a darker story such as this as they are rare) Moments where Annie is literally trembling is great, as it shows that she's extremely anxious about her entire situation and once again adds another layer of vulnerability.

I'm currently at the point where the Dr. got Annie to strip when she has to pee and really enjoying all of that so far. (Peeing can be fun and erotic so long as it doesnt go overboard like people pissing on each other lol. A girl wetting herself for example or having to per in front of an audience such as Annie had to is always fun to read)

As for things that I would change, I do like the whole - Sophie/Annie - situation, but instead of Sophie completely taking over and Annie seems to cease to exist, I would much rather Annie often be present during the Sophie take over. Moments where Annie has moments of extreme mortification due to what Sophie... or Annie... however you want to put it Lol.

Perhaps Annie drifts in and out of control whilst being Sophie. When she's walking around nude, she suddenly is aware of her surroundings and nearly screams from just how deeply embarrassed and horrified she is. The mall scene would have been so much better had Annie, as well us, the readers, experienced a lot of what Annie/Sophie was going through.

If when Sophie takes over Annie blacks out and only gets told what happened later, it detracts from the whole "embarrassed naked female" trope hugely. I do like Annie's "trigger" though, where seeing herself naked triggers Sophie to come out.

Also, as much as I'm enjoying the scenes where Annie is blindfolded a d nude in the Dr's office, when Annie says that's she's not particularly bothered or embarrassed, it totally contradicts how she has acted in the past, as well as, again, detracts from the enf aspect. Definitely would like to see Annie mortified every time she's exposed in any way. I really enjoyed the moment between Annie and Jenny, the young girl though. It was quite a cure moment, where a girl younger than Annie is fully dressed whilst Annie isn't was a nice touch.

One more thing I'll add is that I'dlove to see Annie getting very aroused when exposed. Like a sort of reluctant exhibitionist.

Lastly, in terms of constructive criticism, I wouldn't want to see that Annie is simply naked all the time. Like I mentioned in the "mute girl" thread, her being fully nude in front of an audience as much as possible sort of desensitizes you to Annie's exposure and embarrassment a bit, and makes "upping the ante" harder to do.

Like I say, perhaps moments where she has to remove her underwear with a very short skirt on, or even a shirt that doesn't cover her lower half, thereby making her bottomless, as well as other situations like it would help. Though, again, don't worry too much about her being fully nude often too much, as a naked girl will never not be hot lol.

Granted, I mostly base that last paragraph on book 1, where's totally nude all the time. I'm not very far into book 2, so the last part doesn't necessarily apply to book 2. (So far)

Overall, I am actually really enjoying it! Maybe even more than book 1 in truth. I'll add more as I continue reading of course, though I've run out of time for now. I'll likely continue tomorrow.

Thanks for writing this btw. I'm thoroughly enjoying Annie as a character. She's got quite a cute, pleasant personality in spite of her trauma.