Seth's High School Humiliation (New Dec. 14)

[dsweenz71]

Bradbury, huh... Seth's dad's boss? You keep making things more and more interesting

Oh, you caught that one Can't get a trick past you!

[Trundle]

Great to see you back writing! Hope you continue to improve and get back to full health as soon as possible.

Intriguing latest chapter, I actually really liked it was a little more low key than the last chapter. I know a chapter where Seth is forced to display his erection in front of his basketball friends and a talent scout plus a girl in class saw his erection poking out over his shorts and squealed in delight is still pretty damn embarrassing, but compared to the last chapter it wasn't as bad for him. I think it helps the story breathe having the really big humiliations spread out a little.

Justin sabotaging the shorts, that should come into play at some point and I can't wait to see that. I liked seeing Sara playing a bit with Seth, we've seen a lot of her being slightly annoyed and confused at Seth so it's nice to see her being amused by him. I still wonder if we'll see any fun between Sara and Seth in his room captured by the camera, what if she thinks Seth has been filming her without consent? Could be very bad indeed.

Love all the little teases for potential future incidents, the sabotaged shorts, Joseph spending more time with Clementine, we still have to see Seth take the white pills and of course our first sighting of Mrs Bradbury. And she's Mr Zincks boss! What could all this mean?

Fantastic to see you and the story back!

[Lefanto]

One thing I appreciate is that Seth's team was successful. Seth gets sexually embarrassed, but beyond this, not everything that happens to is bad.

I still wonder if we'll see any fun between Sara and Seth in his room captured by the camera, what if she thinks Seth has been filming her without

In this case; Sara would be humiliated, not Seth. Sara might leave him, but this would not embarrass him, but just make him sad. Of course I leave it to author, but if Sara gets involved at all, I'd prefer her to become involved in Seth's teasing. Maybe she finds it arousing when she learns how Seth has been treated and discovers her own playful nature?
(In the latter case, if Sara worked with Mrs. Masters, she might know that when she and Seth are being videotaped together, her face will be blurred out, but not Seth's.)

[Trundle]

Yeah I wouldn't want Sara humiliated, only Seth.

So maybe that wouldn't be a good route to go down story wise.

[dsweenz71]

Nurse's Association of Knowledge, Education and Demonstration

Interlude: The Order

Mrs. Masters dialled the phone number she had been given by Mrs. Bradbury and asked for Ferdinand Donahue. Supposedly, he was both a psychologist and a salesman, and would be able to provide all the materials the principal would need to carry out the plan involving her student, Seth Zinck.

“Yes, Mr. Donahue? Good afternoon. I was told you would be able to help me with some… rather unique procurements?”

Mrs. Masters scrolled through the webpage as she spoke. “I’m on the device page right now, and I think a #16 would be useful. Yes, that’s the full butt plug package. All the sizes. And with remote access please. And I’ll also take #22, the vibrating cock ring. Standard size.”

The man confirmed the two choices, then offered a third. “Oh no,” Mrs. Masters declined. “I already have the Samplesuction Pro actually, from Bradbury. I gifted it to our science department some time ago, so I’m sure I can just use that one if I find the need.”

Mrs. Masters then clicked over to a different part of the website. “In terms of medication, I am going to need you to prescribe it to Seth Zinck. That won't be a problem? Perfect. That’s Z-I-N-C-K. Right. Okay, I’ll take the ‘Salute-Me Blue’. Are two doses per day viable? It would be beneficial to keep him hard for the entire school day. Fabulous. I'll take a month's worth then.”

“Now as for the other medications, I see there are four different options. You have capsules SE, HS, OS, and MI. Is it true that they all look identical, even though they have different functions? And they all respond well with the Salute-Me Blues? Alright. I was told I could get a medley of the four... is that possible? Yes, I am aware of the risks. I accept them. Please add a month’s worth of those to my cart."

"Now, just one more thing I am curious about for today… What do you have in the way of hidden cameras?”

A knock at Mrs. Masters’ door made her jump ever so slightly, but she saw that it was just the boy. “Yes, Mr. Donahue, I just have a student at my door. Can I place you on hold for just one moment?”

Seth stood at the entrance to the principal's office. Mrs. Masters fixed her gaze at the exasperated boy before her. She couldn't say she was surprised.

“Is there something I can help you with?”

“I… yeah… this club that I signed up for. The nurse’s thing… It’s not that I don’t want to… but is there anything else?”

“No, as I said earlier, it’s this, twice per week, or you don’t graduate.”

“Okay… but… they wanted me to take off my clothes. Like, all of them. They said you knew.”

Mrs. Masters scanned the boy, up and down. He had an attractive body, which he had achieved through consistent hard work as an athlete. His shoulders were broad and strong, while his abs were pronounced, showing ever so slightly through his current thin t-shirt. What a tease. Yet here the jock was, practically begging to not strip naked.

This was to be the first day of his humiliation, but certainly not the last. And with the order Mrs. Masters was placing, his days would only get worse.

Part 24 - The Pool

[TeenFan]

Interesting... a mystery guinea pig for the program. Another athletic young guy who has no idea what he's in for. Looks like double trouble
from here on.

[lugro]

So we still have to see two interesting devices in action.

And those special pills... I'm having a million ideas about their acronyms...

[Trundle]

Short but very sweet latest chapter.

Nice to get a little flashback scene, as we see Mrs Masters arranging things that were yet to come at that point. If only Seth knew as he stood in the doorway what was about to happen to him over the coming days.

I really liked this technique, showing us a previous scene but with a little different perspective. Hopefully you use this technique again at some point.

Also, butt plugs! Oh dear oh dear. Poor Seth

[imanewb]

Oh I like the flashback... sheds some light on things which, depending how you choose to read it, clears a few things up, or makes them even more unclear

Is, for example, Mrs. Masters the instigator or simply 'following orders'... (not a request for clarification, just thinking out loud) - it's unclear, adding intrigue - which is good... and could easily go either way (although with comments like being 'aware of the risks' and going ahead regardless, I'm leaning towards instigator, for reasons as yet unknown) and curiosity about that and outcome will likely keep me reading...

That said, without wishing to detract from anyone else's enjoyment of the story, things like bad drug interactions & butt plugs would be a step too far for me... that's moving from 'merely' humiliating (for whatever reason) to, potentially, being very physically / psychologically harmful, potentially fatal even - not that I'm suggesting you'd necessarily go that far (unless you've changed your mind from when we were discussing ways Seth might be expected to react)...

e.g. A butt plug for a straight guy (who knows he can't trust anyone to keep it secret), is not something I could see any character willingly submitting themselves too, regardless of how keen they might be to graduate/take up a scholarship (a suspension of disbelief issue), whereas forcing/coercing the issue would, to me, feel too rapey... either of which would likely be the end point for me.

Although, even as I typed that the little hamster was running circles on the wheel in my head - using the butt plug as a catalyst for something like

• She says something to the effect of 'you'll wear that, or else...'
• Seth says no, and storms out... in a blind panic, probably... worrying about what the 'sick bitch' is doing to him...
• Returns home to find school has pressured parents who, not knowing what's going on, get on Seth's case...
• Seth, not trusting parents, the school (remembering how the coach backed down), etc goes back with a plan, secretly records Mrs. M...
• Seth, says no again, storms out & goes to police and/or the press to **try** and get her stopped
• we find out a little more about the background / how highly this is sanctioned by the police response/newspaper article...
• and the story moves on from there...

She might respond to an article, for example, by revealing the 'legitimacy' of what she's doing, giving the story of all of Seth's 'exploits', spreading his humiliation far and wide (even if the story doesn't mention him by name, being a minor and all)... dropping Seth out of whatever 'this' is, opening the field for things to spread/continue whether he ever goes back to school / goes to college... and depending how 'malicious' you want to be towards the character, of course.

No reason he couldn't have a 'mental breakdown', for example, and still suffer at school/home - even if that does take some of the 'fun' out of it for the 'nurses'... oh, he's just doing whatever we tell him, and not reacting any more.... i think we broke our toy... or maybe he's just pretending...

or, (at the end of this story arc) a scene something like... Seth, all out of fucks to give, strips himself bare in the cafeteria... yelling out his angst... 'what am I doing? Who cares? You've all seen me like this already... enjoyed watching me suffering while the evil bitch ruined my life... that's it, laugh it up... but watch your backs... if she can do this to me, what's stopping her from doing it to you too... (yelling as he's dragged off)...

i.e. dramatically revealing what's been going on... and force her to 'read in' the rest of the staff/student body, some of whom take great pleasure in continuing/enhancing his torture (either continuing in the current story, or in a new, post HS environment)

Not that I'm trying to tell you how to write your story, do whatever you like to your characters - all I can ask is that you use your 'evil genius' to include a believable response (particularly to more extreme provocation) and then work your way around that as, fantasy or not, maintaining suspension of disbelief is important.

edited for clarity, hopefully.

[dsweenz71]

Another athletic young guy who has no idea what he's in for.

My apologies - I realize my wording almost seemed as if there was a new person. It was meant to be a flashback scene... the wording is adjusted and I hope you'll read it again!

And those special pills... I'm having a million ideas about their acronyms...

Purposely vague for suspense, but you'll come to learn all of them soon enough.

I really liked this technique, showing us a previous scene but with a little different perspective. Hopefully you use this technique again at some point.

I was planning to revisit an early scene initially and then saw I'd set things up perfectly having her on the phone with a Mr. Donahue... I wonder how many authors' foreshadowing is completely accidental like this.

things like bad drug interactions & butt plugs would be a step too far for me...

Always good to know what people like and don't like. I am not planning any bad drug interactions (meaning they will work exactly as intended) but if I use the plugs in a chapter, I'll ensure to include a disclaimer. Don't forget though, Seth did get a lot of enjoyment out of the fingering which he didn't exactly welcome at first either. My characters are rarely found in super dark situations... and while I can't promise realism, suspension of belief might allow you to see how a straight boy ends up accepting... well, everything he has accepted so far (and the escalating activities that he will continue to accept).