Lia's new reality (Part 15 - 10/1)

[imanewb]

Not saying the story's not been fun so far, far from it, but doesn't anyone else find it at least a little incongruous that we go from a snap reaction based on 'concern about Lisa's potential effect on Steve's campaign':

Lisa’s family are big campaign contributors. I was just upset that Lia put that at risk, but she didn’t know that; it wasn’t fair to hold that against her. I was planning on calling Lisa tomorrow to call it off and arrange something else for Lia to do to make it right.

Too, 'yep, ok, let's parade our naked teenage daughter around in public' (as opposed to only in 'controlled settings') after a brief chat, because that couldn't possibly have any impact on the way contributors and voters view the man seeking re-election, deciding at the same time they'd leave her with, and just 'trust' Lisa wouldn't let Carol go 'too far'.

Can't wait now for Lia to 'snap' at some point in the future (e.g. the end of this story arc), after all the forced exposure (that she's enjoying at least in part), having chased bigger & bigger thrills (if she's truly the exhibitionist her brother/father seem to think her to be)... and do something 'crazy' that opens avenues for future stories involving the family...

Something like attending an election rally, stripping naked on stage, masturbating in front of the cameras and saying, responding to the 'what are you doing type question' with something like "only what my daddy's made me do all summer!".

With future stories being having scope for either ENF/ENM whether it's the wider world going, hey that's a great idea, let's all start punishing our kids like that... or a 'judicial' punishment of the 'abusers' in the situation... you thought it was a good idea to do this to your daughter, well let's see how you like it... sentence of X months of enforced nudity, and corporal punishment including public masturbation, fail to comply and you're going to jail.

[student]

It wasn't a snap decision--nearly three weeks have passed since Lia drank herself into a stupor and was dancing top less on a tabletop. When Lia misbehaved, she was punished immediately to correct her behavior. Then there was this exchange:

“Diana, seeing Lia in that ambulance was the most scared I had been in my life. Trevor is right; if we don’t control this with our daughter, she could get herself hurt. What if the police had arrived at the party just ten minutes later? What would have happened to her? Lia is a lot like your sister. Your parents took the opposite approach with her; look how that turned out.”

“Wait, Aunt Laurel was like this?” Trevor asked.

Trevor has been thinking about this for weeks, observing his sister's behavior and how she has changed over the past two-plus weeks. How long has it been since Lia violated being grounded? Does Stacey's home invasion count against Lia? If so, how much blame does Lia get? Aunt Laurels story is going to be interesting to read--same problem, different treatment, results not optimum. As for poor Claire...

[student]

Trevor was correct--nobody at the convention and nobody in comments have remarked on Trevor being underdressed. Just a tee shirt and a pair of swim trunks:

“You are still wearing swim trunks. Won’t that be weird?” Lia shot back.

"Yeah, but next to you, no one is going to notice.”

Did anybody notice if Trevor had shoes? A tee shirt and swim trunks aren't exactly proper dining attire. No remarks on Trevor because Lia (and now Claire) are attracting everybody's attention on both sides of the fourth wall?

[imanewb]

It wasn't a snap decision--nearly three weeks have passed since Lia drank herself into a stupor and was dancing top less on a tabletop. When Lia misbehaved, she was punished immediately to correct her behavior.

Sorry, but that's mostly irrelevant - the decision to send her to Carol's for the day (which is what I was referring to) was a snap-decision, made in anger, because of the 'risk her actions posed to campaign contributions'.

“What about letting her spend the day with Carol, mom? Who knows what that girl is already planning?”

“I suggested that, in the heat of my anger, Lisa’s family are big campaign contributors. I was just upset that Lia put that at risk, but she didn’t know that; it wasn’t fair to hold that against her. I was planning on calling Lisa tomorrow to call it off and arrange something else for Lia to do to make it right.”

Trevor has been thinking about this for weeks...

Yes he has, but is again irrelevant to the point I was trying to make as it was his parents who, after a few idle moments conversation decided that yes, despite their initial anger at what he'd done, Trevor was right and (and notwithstanding the 'minor' omissions from his version of events that they, obviously don't know about), they should just "parade her round publicly" - with no apparent consideration given to how that could play out for the campaign contributors & voters they were so worried about on shortly beforehand (literally the day before).

edit: none of which precludes continuation/expansion of punishment in controlled, private settings - they could limit Lia's attendance, for example, to functions attended only by people they 'know' (or at least suspect) won't be upset by the way they're punishing their daughter - expanding her exposure in a comparatively safe (for them and her) way...

Though quite how this latest development chimes with the earlier assertion that "everyone in her family still cares about her and won't do anything to hurt her" I don't know...

[student]

Now I see imanewb's point. There is a work-around: sent Trevor to keep an eye on things. Tell Lia that Trevor is there to keep Carol from going too far and tell Carol that Trevor is there to keep Lia in line--there's more than a little truth in both statements. I suggested a game of Truth or Dare and it will be interesting to see what Carol comes up with--er, what author Perseus does with it. There will be a lot of possibilities.

Meanwhile, what is happening with Claire? Claire has no clothes and cannot get into her own hotel room.

[fuwafuwataimu]

Whew, great chapter! Nice and long with plenty of public nudity. I love to read about Lia embracing her duty to be seen by as many people as possible!

[perseus]

I guess it's now really obvious now that I'm just making it up as I'm writing

The ideas I have are changing often when I think I have a better idea, I'm doing my best to keep things consistent and in line with previous chapters but I'll probably make some mistakes here and there. I do apologize if any inconsistency takes you out of the enjoyment. My main goal with this story is to have fun writing it and hopefully people will enjoy reading it as well.

My thoughts on the parents being concerned that Lisa's family contribute financially is just with her specifically. Lisa is a friend of the family as well and one kid embarrassing the other like Lia did can cause a lot of tension between the two families and Diana's snap decision to turn Lia over to Carol was an attempt to keep the peace and show that Lia is going to pay for embarrassing Carol like she did.

I'll probably add a part in the next chapter or two that Steve and Diana are more concerned with doing what they think is best for Lia and if that ends up hurting the campaign then so be it, Steve would rather lose the election and help Lia in the process.

Obviously this type of punishment wouldn't help any teen girl anywhere, but it's an ENF story and I'm definitely using ENF logic.

I'm glad for the discussion and thank you all for being invested enough to leave comments like these, as always, I'm really enjoying reading them!

[imanewb]

I guess it's now really obvious now that I'm just making it up as I'm writing

The ideas I have are changing often when I think I have a better idea, I'm doing my best to keep things consistent and in line with previous chapters but I'll probably make some mistakes here and there.

Nothing wrong with making it up as you go along! Your story's been good too, which is probably why this 'issue' stood out to me (that'll learn you for doing so well earlier! )

Mistakes - meh, we all make them, I certainly do - but you're doing better than a lot of people who visit these boards silently, mistakes or not you're actually contributing something (and enjoyable something at that).

I'll probably add a part in the next chapter or two that Steve and Diana are more concerned with doing what they think is best for Lia and if that ends up hurting the campaign then so be it, Steve would rather lose the election and help Lia in the process.

That works for me, restores the internal consistency - we'll do this for her, the election be damned (or he could just withdraw his candidacy and finish out his term?)…

And hopefully, Trevor could be made to 'suffer' a little too consequently (just a little, in the background so as not to distract from the story, for a bit of 'colour') - maybe he starts feeling guilty as he realises it's his actions that have led to his father giving up on the job he loves, or a conversation where he's told (words to the effect of) "We're so proud of the man you're growing up to be, but you were right, we need to focus on Lia right now... income gone bye bye, we'll do what we can, but you'll have to get a job to help with those college fees...

My main goal with this story is to have fun writing it and hopefully people will enjoy reading it as well.

Obviously this type of punishment wouldn't help any teen girl anywhere, but it's an ENF story and I'm definitely using ENF logic.

Not as much fun as we're having following Lia's (and Claire, and whoever else follows in their footsteps) little problem, I'm sure.

Now, a thought, as we're using EN logic... might the parents decide hey, if this is working as punishment for Lia (as well as somehow 'helping her' with her latent exhibitionism), it'd probably work for the boys too, after all, Trevor's arguments were sound. (possibly as a separate story, although there's no reason there couldn't be some ENM content in a primarily ENF story)... and that'd be a funny way to 'punish' Trevor - you did such a good job with your sister, time to help out your brother (sorry, my mind wanders at times)

[perseus]

Thanks for your kind words! It definitely gives me motivation to keep going! And I have enjoyed the discussion as well.

As for Trevor or Chuck being under a similar punishment, I hope it's won't disappoint anyone but there won't be any ENM parts in the this story. I have nothing against ENM, but it's not really something I'm interested in so even if I tried it probably wouldn't be as good. Also one of the things that I am interested in when it comes to these types of stories is nudity being applied unfairly. However big this story eventually gets, it's only the girls that are going to be under any kind of nudity punishments. I'll do my best to justify this more as I go.

Thanks again for the discussion!

[Casanova]

Your initial comments had suggested that the story was to end by now.
It was the enthusiasm of the board that pushed you to continue and go in some unexpected directions. And it has been a delight.

Now, back to the story.
Lia's parents won't make her go naked in public settings just yet.
Thanks to Trevor, they have had to accept that Lia is a true blooded exhibitionist. So what was initially a punishment to embarrass her will now have to be modified to give her a safe outlet. Cause of the Aunt factor.

We now know the approach taken by Diane's parents did not bring a good outcome. Either Laurel lost all zest for life and became a jaded schoolmarm, or turned into a turbo exhibitionist/slut.
I prefer the latter just cause we're all pervs here. The kind of woman who only kept her proclivities from the kids a secret cause the parents begged her to. Hell, now that the secret's out she'll point you to the 'Girls gone wild' video from a decade ago she made a sizeable appearance in.

And it may seem Steve decided to become active, seeing that Diane is inept at the job.
Assuming he has dad vision and always thought of his daughter as an adorable 7-8 year old, the frat house bust was a shock. Given time, things could have gone back to normal. But Diane instituted Lia's nude punishment and he had to come to terms with seeing her naked, seeing her get turned on being in his presence cause of the taboo and worst of all seeing her masturbate. So he might have a bone to pick with his wife given her methods don't work and only helped to shatter the illusion of his lovely princess. Give her a taste of her own medicine.