Seth's High School Humiliation (New Dec. 14)

[dsweenz71]

Things only getting worse and worse for him (and better for us )

And we've just started phase two!

[dsweenz71]

With there being different Phases to this, and other people involved that Mrs. Masters must keep informed, it suggests a giant conspiracy.
Is the government involved?
Is there some serious threat to humanity that can only be solved using healthy young men with a high level of sexual vitality?
Is semen the savior of the world because grown men are becoming sterile?

I love your take on it hahahahaha

[imanewb]

So he now;

he's a reasonably bright young adult who...

recognises the little blue pills,
recognises the unnecessary fingering,
recognises the the unnecessary nudity,
has at least one witness who should be sympathetic,
has a phone he could use to record a confrontation with the girls/principal to obtain further evidence,


so decides to do nothing other than continue going going along with things over, i don't know, trying to talk to college over admission, asking what'd happen if refused graduation on non-academic/unrelated grounds (such as not having x hours in a school club), or saying fuck it and punching one of the girls, walking out naked and calling their bluff, or trying to confront mrs masters, or telling his parents/police, or palming at least one of the 'vitamins' to keep as evidence, or using his phone to record the girls' demands / coercion...

yeah, not so great for continuing this thread of the story (although offers different arcs with the same characters, including but not limited to role reversal) but you can only push people so far until they're all out of fucks to give.

[Trundle]

LOVED this chapter. I thought it would maybe take a little while to get to the next phase but to be there so soon was a lovely surprise!

More teases from Mrs Masters on the phone, who is Mrs Bradbury?? I love the mystery surrounding Mrs Masters. She's the one who started and created all this, she's such an interesting character. Why does she have it in for Seth?, what is she planning next for him? and what is her end goal for all this? I cannot wait to find out, it's so much fun to speculate. I wonder if she has plans for Seth outside of school too? Will he be summoned to meet her somewhere else? Maybe her home for something humiliating?

I think you've done a wonderful job explaining why Seth feels so trapped in this situation and unable to say no to anything. The college application, his ego not wanting people to know especially his GF Sara, he's an alpha jock and so he's never been vulnerable like this and doesn't know what to do plus he's only a schoolkid really and Mrs Masters has done an amazing job manipulating him.

The girls are definitely getting bolder, especially Clementine. I really like how she is emerging as the one who seems to be enjoying his embarrassment the most so it makes sense she's the one to "accidentally" ruin his clothes. If you go back to their first nurses club meeting who would have thought we'd end up here with the girls basically fingering him and teasing him. They're no longer just being clinically medical, they're having fun with the boy.

What an ending and tease for the next chapter, Seth is trapped naked and panicked at school, forced to hide in the classroom. If the blue pills are what I think they are too he's also going to be trapped naked and with a massive erection too, did he swallow the pills though I wonder?

Story gets better and better. Keep doing what you're doing dsweenz71, it's incredible!

[dsweenz71]

yeah, not so great for continuing this thread of the story (although offers different arcs with the same characters, including but not limited to role reversal) but you can only push people so far until they're all out of fucks to give.

I mean, none of this would likely ever happen in an ordinary high school regardless. It's important to suspend belief a bit for stories of this genre. I'll take your feedback though and consider having Seth challenge his situation a little bit more. At least that way he won't just be a passive victim. Feel free to not read further if you expect a lot of pushback though. I have a direction to this story and it involves a lot more humiliation for our protagonist.

[Trundle]

I mean this is the ENM section anyway.

Anyone wanting a role reversal, there are tons of stories like that in the ENF section.

You always have to suspend a little disbelief with any of these stories, if everything was ultra realistic every story on this site and others like this would end almost immediately and where is the fun in that. I think Seth was very combative at first and argued back a lot but he's been broken by the situation and Mrs Masters in particular. One of the things about the story i love is that, Seth is trapped.

[dsweenz71]

I love the mystery surrounding Mrs Masters.

More will be revealed about Mrs. Masters in coming chapters! Don't worry.

They're no longer just being clinically medical, they're having fun with the boy.

Were they ever really medical though? You try to find a single ninth-grade girl who is mature, with a passion for medicine, let alone four of them! Then see if you can find one, or four, who would love to strip a senior athlete. One of these missions is far easier than the other.

did he swallow the pills though I wonder?

I guess in my excitement of wrapping up the chapter, I forgot to indicate that he did. Mistakes happen... I fixed it now though!

Keep doing what you're doing dsweenz71, it's incredible!

Thank you. Expect the next chapter in a couple of hours since it is the one-month anniversary of chapter one!

[Trundle]

Were they ever really medical though? You try to find a single ninth-grade girl who is mature, with a passion for medicine, let alone four of them! Then see if you can find one, or four, who would love to strip a senior athlete. One of these missions is far easier than the other.

Good point

I suppose I meant at first maybe Seth could console himself the girls were only following orders and they were trying to be professional. So it wouldn't take long each Tuesday and Thursday. But now he knows they're enjoying his shame and embarrassment. It must make it so much worse for him to know how much fun they're having as they torment him, especially Clementine it seems.

[imanewb]

Feel free to not read further if you expect a lot of pushback though. I have a direction to this story and it involves a lot more humiliation for our protagonist.

NB for whoever mentioned it, role reversal was meant as nothing more than an example of the type of response that might have ensued in the world picture you've created for me.

With regards to pushback - A lot, not necessarily, some almost certainly (*even if it's only an internal dialogue at each stage things become 'worse') - based solely on the way I've read his character from your excellent descriptive writing - even if (if? as if) it's doomed to fail...

Notwithstanding which, something I would expect to see (even with suspension of disbelief allowing him to try and 'gut it out') would be some degree of personality change... happy go lucky --> sullen and uncooperative, or increasing aggression for example (which also gives scope to extend his humiliation to home when his parents get in on the act, punishing him for same... 'we're so disappointed, just don't understand where this is coming from, why your grades are falling when you're so close to graduation, don't you want to go to college....' (and so on)

And/or some self-destructive behaviour (the building angst has to go somewhere) - like falling grades (mind's understandably elsewhere), fighting with his brother, dumping the girlfriend or throwing away the college acceptance.

I doubt I'll give up reading the story, not until his initial four months are up, 'revenge porn style'' material is released to the internet, his 'secret' is known to everybody, the loving girlfriend's lost (and/or switching to dominatrix mode), the college place is lost/rescinded due to 'his perverted nature' being discovered, his parents have disowned him, all hope lost... and he still doesn't do anything about it (by which point suspension of disbelief would be thoroughly shredded) - most likely at that point attempting to blow the school up or slashing his wrists :/

[dsweenz71]

Notwithstanding which, something I would expect to see ... would be some degree of personality change... happy go lucky --> sullen and uncooperative, or increasing aggression for example (which also gives scope to extend his humiliation to home when his parents get in on the act, punishing him for same). And/or some self-destructive behaviour (the building angst has to go somewhere) - like falling grades (mind's understandably elsewhere), fighting with his brother, dumping the girlfriend or throwing away the college acceptance.

Please keep in mind that it has only been a single week in-story. That's not a lot of time to have grades drop, or throw away a college acceptance (which he only learned about half-a-week ago). At times, Seth has almost lost his temper, but he is a wrestler, trained to get an elbow to the face and not react with aggression. He's trying his best to keep it all together, and a part of him likes the humiliation after the fact (he jerks off to the memory of it). He does have a college fair coming up when he can explore whether it is worth it to keep going with this club, and his brother and girlfriend will come in and out of the story (I have too many ideas, loose ends, and detail to include them in every chapter, and I'm NOT a professional writer. I am just doing this for fun).

I doubt I'll give up reading the story, not until his initial four months are up, 'revenge porn style'' material is released to the internet, his 'secret' is known to everybody, the loving girlfriend's lost (and/or switching to dominatrix mode), the college place is lost/rescinded due to 'his perverted nature' being discovered, his parents have disowned him, all hope lost... and he still doesn't do anything about it (by which point suspension of disbelief would be thoroughly shredded) - most likely at that point attempting to blow the school up or slashing his wrists :/

That is a dark take on where this story might be going, but my lips are sealed Thanks for reading and providing feedback regardless.