Seth's High School Humiliation (New Dec. 14)
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Nurse's Association of Knowledge, Education and Demonstration
Part 10: The Assignment
Seth’s eyes flew open and he froze, seeing his younger brother standing in the doorway. He quickly assessed his situation. He was fully naked, on a hospital bed, in a classroom. He was as hard as he'd ever been. He was dangerously close to cumming. His clothes were out of reach, but visible on the teacher’s desk. His boxers were closer, but were also out of reach, and although he couldn’t see them at the moment, he was pretty sure they were beneath the bed. Four clothed females surrounded Seth, with one that had, until recently, been massaging his dick. Likely in surprise of someone opening the door, Clementine’s hand had stopped, but it still remained in place.
Seth had done a pretty thorough assessment of his situation over approximately four seconds, but he was still frozen. “Joseph,” he mumbled, somewhat coherently.
“You might as well come in and close the door,” Marcy sighed. Judging by the reactions of everyone else, it seemed to her that she was the most capable to handle the situation.
Joseph proceeded into the room cautiously, closing the door behind him. With the latch of the door, a few things happened. Seth made to stand up, but was easily pushed back down by Lyndsey, perhaps accidentally, as she used the stud as a prop to pull herself from the floor to her feet. Clementine had also regained her composure, and her fingers suddenly started massaging Seth’s dick again. Although he was now in front of his brother, it had done nothing to deflate his erect penis, which had previously been about to erupt.
“Who are you, again? You look familiar,” Marcy said, squinting at the younger boy.
“I’m, uh, Joseph. And that’s my brother… What even is this?”
“We’re a school club for hopeful future nurses and your brother is a patient of ours,” Marcy rattled off.
Joseph looked from person to person as Seth tried to push Clementine’s hand away from his dick. She slapped his hand away. “This is good for your blood flow,” she whispered.
“Joseph,” Seth blurted. He had seen his brother look from Clementine to him and remembered that he had a crush on her. “It’s not what it – ahhh – looks like.”
“Hmm…” Joseph posed. His mind felt like it was racing a million miles an hour but not getting anywhere. This was a club for nurses, and Seth was a patient. He had obviously been told to strip, and now the girls were playing doctor? And Seth obviously hadn’t expected anyone else to find out, or he would have told Joseph by now. “Is this club thing… is it official?”
“Of course,” Marcy smiled. “You can ask Mrs. Masters. I’m pretty sure she even had a meeting with your parents and helped convince your brother to sign up.
Joseph looked at his brother incredulously. “Mom and dad know about this!?”
“They do, but not exa-ahhh!” Seth suddenly shouted. He was so close to ejaculation at this point that he had to clench everything not to shoot. Clementine finally took the hint as she took her hand off the jock’s dick.
“We’re unfortunately on a tight schedule, Joseph. So, I’ll ask that you either leave or take a seat and let us carry on.”
Joseph’s mouth had already been agape, but now it fell open. He was being invited to watch? Since he’d entered the room, he’d avoided eye contact with his brother, but now his eyes met Seth’s. His brother’s expression begged him to leave. His whole expression was brimming with embarrassment and pleading to be left to his torture on his own. Joseph slowly sat down.
Joseph sitting and watching. In the background, you can see the door to the closet where the patient bed is usually stored. Image generated with AI.
“Back to work ladies,” Marcy chirped. “Where were we?”
“I finished the measurements,” Lindsay said.
“There seems to be a problem,” Eva replied, looking at her clipboard.
Seth did not like problems. Especially if problem meant inaccuracy.
“Is something not accurate?” Lindsay asked, as if reading Seth’s mind.
“No, it’s not that. At least, I don’t think so. It’s just that the resting heart rate and the active heart rate are quite similar. They really shouldn’t be.”
“Oh, I was afraid of that,” Marcy said. “When we developed the exercise plan, we must not have considered the fact that our patient is an athlete. It’s an easy fix though. Seth, would you mind completing another set of exercises for us?”
“Yes, I mind,” Seth blurted out. He was furious at his brother right now for deciding to stay, and he was not about to do naked exercises in front of him.
Marcy sighed and looked at the clipboard with Eva. “Unfortunately, we can’t submit these results to Mrs. Masters. She won’t be happy.”
“I don’t care if she’s happy!” Seth fumed as he stood up. He squatted down and felt around for his boxers. Feeling cloth, he pulled them from their confines.
“Okay, well if you’re going to leave, I’m sure Mrs. Masters will come around and get follow up results later. We can go discuss your non-compliance with her right now.”
Seth had one leg already in his boxers, but he paused. Would Mrs. Masters make him exercise naked in the hallway? Definitely not. Right? Then again, she made him measure his dick in the hallway. ‘That was semi-private though, since I was only facing her,’ he thought.
It was Joseph’s comment that suddenly made him reconsider. “Mrs. Masters has Sara in her office right now!” he blurted out.
Seth was beyond annoyed, frustrated and upset. He kicked his boxers off the leg he had started on, and they flew across several tiles, draping over Clementine’s right shoe. Seth began doing jumping jacks without another word.
Joseph observed his brother’s body for the first time. He hadn’t seen it since the two were children. Seth was positioned slightly away from him, facing the four girls, but Joseph was still able to see all his features. He had a similar body to him, fit from wrestling and sports, but Seth was obviously more developed. His dick was longer too, though it was hard to tell if it was just because he was hard, or if he would be longer flaccid as well. His pubic hair was neatly trimmed, and he had muscular thighs that led into a firm ass. Although he wasn’t into guys (or family members for that matter), Joseph could at least recognize that his brother was attractive.
After jumping jacks, squats and running in place, Seth finally sat back down. Even without the additional workout, Seth was sure that his heart rate had increased over last time. His anger, though now under control, coupled with humiliation pretty much guaranteed it.
As Lyndsey retook the first pulse point, Clementine asked Eva if she would do both the notetaking and the massaging.
“I guess so,” Eva shrugged. “What are you going to do?”
“I need to talk with Marcy in the closet for a minute. It’s pretty important.”
The two girls disappeared into the closet as Joseph observed his brother’s further humiliation. Eva and Lyndsey had just finished their measurements when Marcy and Clementine finally re-emerged.
“Seth,” Marcy started, “Clementine has raised some genuine concerns about your level of pre-ejaculate fluids.”
“Huh?” Seth inquired.
“Your boxers are soaked,” Marcy said flatly. “And the paper on the bed had a noticeable damp spot earlier near your groin when you were massaged.”
Seth looked down at the paper. Sure enough, it had dried, but a stain remained.
“We understand your developmental stage, and that you’re producing a lot of this stuff right now. However, as your nurse team, we can’t run the risk that you’ll get a rash or an infection.”
Seth didn’t know where this was going, but he didn’t like where this was going.
“We have an assignment for you, to make sure you’re as healthy as possible. Consider it medical advice. For the next 14 days, you are not to wear any additional layers underneath your pants.”
“Commando?” Seth choked out. “I can’t do that… the guys on my team… we change together.”
“If it wasn’t important, I wouldn’t ask you to do it,” Marcy said with a note of compassion in her voice. “And Clementine had an additional idea which I agree with.” Marcy looked towards her colleague.
Clementine cleared her throat. “You need to masturbate daily to purge your pre-ejaculate.”
Seth shook his head. He pretty much already jerked off daily anyway, or came another way, if he had alone time with Sara. He was still shocked at the fact that he was being told to do it.
“Mrs. Masters will want to make sure you’re following our advice,” Marcy said. “So we will check each day at school that you don’t have underwear on, and you will masturbate to completion in our company.”
“What!?” Seth protested. This was too far now. “No offense, but you’re in ninth grade, and I’m in twelfth. We never cross paths, except for Tuesdays and Thursdays. I’ll do it with you on those days, but that’s as much as you’re getting.”
“Then Mrs. Masters will have to do it,” Marcy said with a smirk. Her compassion seemed gone now that the patient was complaining. “She’ll just call you in the hallway during third period, have you pull down your pants, and do a quick release.”
Seth cringed at the thought and cringed again when Marcy said quick release. He would prefer the girls to observe him over Mrs. Masters, but would they do it in private?
“What about weekends?” Lyndsey asked. The girls looked at each other, unsure.
“I can do it.”
The girls turned toward Joseph, but not as fast as Seth did. He couldn’t believe his ears. His own younger brother had just volunteered to make sure he wasn’t wearing underwear on weekends, and to observe him jerk off?
The girls spoke quickly in hushed voices as Seth glared at Joseph, who looked back, but at a spot just over his brother’s shoulder. “It’s decided,” Marcy shared, “We’ll make a formal plan by tomorrow, but Joseph, you’ll be responsible for Seth on the weekend. Now, we have seven minutes left of lunch, and we might as well make sure you ejaculate now so we don’t need to meet again today. Did you want to do it on your own, or with Clementine’s help?”
“On my own!” Seth shouted, losing his temper again. His dick was still hard, but no longer throbbing. He put his hand on his penis, and began pumping, purposely turning his back to Joseph. The boy was going to be watching him on the weekend, but that was no reason to give him a free show now.
It took Seth three minutes to cum, and as he began to shoot, Clementine held out his boxers, catching the full load in them. She then tossed them in a small garbage bag that Eva had retrieved from the nurse supply bin, tied it off, and placed them in the classroom trash bin. Marcy said something about collecting the urine sample next meeting since they were short on time, and Seth was finally allowed to dress (sans boxers).
This gave Joseph the opportunity to make himself scarce. He had no doubt that he would soon be facing his brother’s wrath at home.
Part 11 - The Game
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Author note: Might not be exactly where you thought it would go, but I hope you enjoy anyway. I've finally mapped out where I want the story to go, at least for the next couple (in story) weeks. You might be happy to learn that the next two weeks will take us at least to the Part 20-25 range!
Slight spoiler (not really): Look forward in future chapters to Seth getting in some trouble with Mrs. Masters, and Seth participating in Spring Spirit Week (in ways he will regret)!
Finally, something I feel is important to mention is that there will be no inc*st between Seth and Joseph. The two characters will be used as humiliation pieces (what teenage boy wants his brother to see him naked and masturbating) but I know interests on these boards are varied so I just wanted to nix any idea of the two fooling around. We can save that fantasy for a different story on a different board.
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Always a joy to see a new chapter has been posted and this was no different. This is maybe the most humiliated and angry we've seen Seth so I loved it. Or should I say the most humiliated and angry we've seen Seth so far...
Before the notes at the bottom I was definitely getting the impression Joseph may have had weird feelings for his brother, noting how handsome he was and offering to be the one to observe him masturbating at weekends. Hell, even the fact he sat down and stayed in the room in the first place instead of just leaving made me think that. I knew nothing would ever happen between them though because I knew Seth wouldn't be into any of that. Now I'm thinking if Joseph doesn't have a weird crush on his brother why is he doing this? Is it some deep seated resentment to Seth? Is he taking the chance to be the one with power in their brotherly relationship?
Is he just jealous because of Clementine or Sara?
LOVE the idea of the girls telling Seth he isn't allowed to wear underwear anymore and he has to report to them to masturbate every day, that's exactly the sort of thing I love in these stories. How on earth is Seth going to be able to go commando every day? Or have to report to the girls every day? Surely more people will find out his secret? Cannot wait to see Mrs Masters, maybe my favourite character, and whatever spirit week is
All in all a brilliant chapter in it's own right that also set up several stories for the future.
Before the notes at the bottom I was definitely getting the impression Joseph may have had weird feelings for his brother, noting how handsome he was and offering to be the one to observe him masturbating at weekends. Hell, even the fact he sat down and stayed in the room in the first place instead of just leaving made me think that. I knew nothing would ever happen between them though because I knew Seth wouldn't be into any of that. Now I'm thinking if Joseph doesn't have a weird crush on his brother why is he doing this? Is it some deep seated resentment to Seth? Is he taking the chance to be the one with power in their brotherly relationship?
Is he just jealous because of Clementine or Sara?
LOVE the idea of the girls telling Seth he isn't allowed to wear underwear anymore and he has to report to them to masturbate every day, that's exactly the sort of thing I love in these stories. How on earth is Seth going to be able to go commando every day? Or have to report to the girls every day? Surely more people will find out his secret? Cannot wait to see Mrs Masters, maybe my favourite character, and whatever spirit week is
All in all a brilliant chapter in it's own right that also set up several stories for the future.
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Just wait 'till "phase 2"
Joseph may wrestle with that very question himself. He's always considered himself as looking up to his big brother, but now he's seeing him in a different light. Should he explore that side of himself? He doesn't even know the right answer at the moment.
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He's probably always looked up to Seth and saw him as this cool alpha jock, but there could still be some little brother insecurities or jealousy going on. Or maybe seeing him in that position, being dominated by girls has made him lose respect for Seth?dsweenz71 wrote: ↑Thu Nov 02, 2023 9:02 pmJust wait 'till "phase 2"
Joseph may wrestle with that very question himself. He's always considered himself as looking up to his big brother, but now he's seeing him in a different light. Should he explore that side of himself? He doesn't even know the right answer at the moment.
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Nurse's Association of Knowledge, Education and Demonstration
Part 11: The Game
Seth was fuming, and it surprisingly had nothing to do with his younger brother.
He had finally made it to the end of one of the most embarrassing school days of his life. He sat in the driver’s seat of his car, sending a quick message on snapchat to Sara. He knew he’d have to explain lunchtime to her, and though he didn’t feel very prepared, he figured the sooner the better.
His message remained unopened when he got a notification from Rowan. “On your way?” it said. Seth sent a question mark as a reply. The two hadn’t made plans.
“The game” Rowan replied.
Seth’s heart fell into his stomach and he rubbed his open palm across his eyes, sighing deeply. He had forgotten the basketball team had a home game after school. He should be in the locker room right now, getting dressed so he could warm up. The rival team would be on their way at this moment. This frustrated him because he wanted nothing more than to make out with his girlfriend, then lay in his bed and jerk off. He didn’t know why, but ever since he came at lunch time, his horniness had never fully dissipated. He’d wanted to stroke one out ever since.
Reluctantly, Seth turned off his car and headed back inside the school.
“There he is!” Rowan shouted, and the rest of the team cheered. Seth had just entered the locker room and saw that most of them were already changed into their jersey and shoes. The coach, standing in the corner with a clipboard, was finally able to account for his final player.
“Yeah, yeah, don’t act like you’ve never forgot a game,” Seth said, playfully throwing a fake punch toward Rowan’s stomach and making him flinch. “I got a problem though. I don’t think I have my ball clothes.”
“No uniform? I can’t put you on then,” the coach said plainly.
“Uh…” Rowan looked at Seth then back at the coach, “We really need Seth in this game. If we don’t, we’re basically flushing any chance of making the semifinals down the can.”
“He’s right,” said Preston, another player of high ranking on the team.
“Well, what do you suggest?” asked the coach. “No uniform – no play. Figure it out… as a team.”
It wasn’t out of the ordinary for the coach to challenge the group like this if a decision was to be made. He did the same thing if the group couldn’t agree on a practice day, or if an argument broke out. Most team members hated his passive leadership role, but they could at least respect that it facilitated stronger teamwork among the players.
“Collin, you’re second string,” Rowan recalled. “Can Seth wear your uniform?”
Collin hesitated as the other guys pressured him. On one hand, he wanted to do whatever would help the team. On the other hand, like most second-string players, he wanted the opportunity to be put in the game and prove himself. He was younger than most of the other guys, and it was important for him to show what he was made of so he could be first-string next year. If he wasn’t in his uniform, he’d have no chance of being put in the game.
“Fine,” he agreed begrudgingly after a minute of being hassled. He pulled off his shirt, “But you all better appreciate this.”
Seth pulled off his shirt too, and as he turned to his sweatpants, he suddenly remembered he was commando. His teammates had seen him naked before, but he knew they’d still tease him for skipping boxers. His fingers hesitated on his pants before he ultimately decided to put on the jersey first. As he did, Collin shucked his shorts, revealing heather blue boxer briefs. He tossed the shorts to Seth, who tried to cover up as he switched from his pants. Despite his efforts, his state of undress was far too obvious.
“Bro, where are your boxers!?” That was Rowan.
“You forgot more than your basketball kit,” Preston snickered.
“You can burn those shorts when you’re done with them,” Collin smirked.
“Save that shit for home,” said Vance, a teammate that was usually a man of few words.
Everyone else was just laughing. Even the coach let out a snort before settling the group down.
Seth hadn’t realized how much the gains he was getting at the gym were paying off until right now. Though any onlooker would say that Collin and Seth looked to be a similar weight, Seth could feel how the uniform fit him more snugly than it would have fit Collin. Instead of the shirt being baggy and loose, the arms and torso were tighter. It didn’t quite show off everything, but if he reached in any direction, the shirt tightened. Due to a slight height difference, the shirt also only just reached his waist, and he knew it would not stay tucked into the shorts.
And that was another problem. The shorts were tighter too. They hugged his butt firmly and, though there was enough space in the front, Seth couldn’t imagine what would happen if he started to get hard in these. ‘Good thing I’ll be too focused on the game’, thought Seth, reminiscing that he typically didn’t get hard during a game.
Seth pulled on the final article – Collin’s shoes. They were just slightly too tight and felt a bit weird to walk in. Regardless, the team left the gym, ready to warm up for the game.
That’s when Justin entered the locker room. Seth had humiliated him a few weeks ago, and Justin hadn’t forgotten. He’d been trying to get as much dirt on the jock as he could, but so far, he didn’t have much. He knew he only had a few weeks left before Justin’s graduation for a truly epic retaliation but was still trying to finalize what it would be. And if it could involve Seth’s younger brother Joseph at the same time, that would be all the better.
On this occasion, Justin pulled his phone out of an otherwise empty locker. He’d planted it there at the end of his final period gym class, knowing the basketball team would be in there moments later. He popped in his Airpods, ready to listen to a twenty minute voice memo, and about to discover that for some unknown reason, Seth was going commando in school.
The game was tied, 39-39 as it entered its final quarter. During the first half of the game, Seth had tried to be as focused as possible. It proved challenging when every time he took a shot at the net, he would expose part of his stomach. Every time he ran from one end of the court to the other, he would feel his dick bounce. This whole game was reminding him of exercise with the nurse group, and it was not doing him any favors.
To top it off, West Beach High had not been prepared for the boys of Lakeside Prep, who played so rough that several team members of both teams had been injured. West Beach High had exhausted all of their second-string players. Seth had even rolled his own ankle during the third quarter, and without his help, Lakeside had caught up.
The cheerleading team was going wild, cheering on West Beach High. Justin had long ago exited the locker room, rushing out of the gym when he saw the cheerleaders. Recognizing Carly, Jasmine, and several other girls, the last thing he needed was for one of them to spot him and remember him from his traumatic experience in their locker room.
A whistle sounded as the referee approached Rowan, who had fallen to the ground. A tall and menacing player from the other team stood over him, a sadistic look on his face. The referee talked with Rowan for a moment, and then approached the couch, who was obviously swearing under his breath. The coach approached the remaining teammates on the bench.
“We have another injury. Zinck, I need you back in.”
Seth stood up, used to the coach referring to him by his last name. Unfortunately, as soon as Seth stood up, he fell back to the bench. His ankle was still too sore to put weight on.
“I can’t, coach.” Seth said, feeling defeated. He wondered if he’d caused this somehow. He might not have rolled his ankle if he had his own shoes and was comfortable in his own clothes. Seth was feeling like a disappointment, and just wanted to go home and punch his mattress.
“Figure it out,” the coach spat. “As a team.”
Seth looked at the other players who were as injured or more injured than him. The only one who wasn’t was Collin.
“Let’s go to the locker room and you can give my clothes back,” Collin suggested. “Then I can sub in.”
“I can hardly stand,” Seth said, and tried again, with no luck.
The ref again approached the coach, who glared back at the team. “We need a plan, now.”
Seth swallowed and looked around. There wasn’t much of a crowd at this game. There were a couple sets of parents, a few boys who came to watch the cheerleaders, and a girl with a camera from the yearbook committee. If he could just quickly swap clothes with Collin, unnoticed, right here and right now, they could finish the game.
As if hearing his silent plea, the cheerleading team suddenly blocked their bench from view, standing between them and the audience. Seth realized his opportunity was passing, and turned to Collin.
“Switch with me. Now,” he said, and pulled off his shoes, shorts, and shirt in a little under six seconds.
Collin, completely unintentionally, had been paying more attention to the cheerleaders than the jock beside him, and this unfortunately delayed his response time. He had only got his sneakers off by the time Seth was fully naked and though he started on his shirt, a golden ten second period of cheerleader-blocked luck came to a screeching halt.
The ladies had just finished their routine and split in the middle, revealing the boys on the bench. As they turned around, their gasps and laughter gained attention. Soon, everyone was laughing as Seth picked up one of Collin’s shoes and used it haphazardly to cover his dick. Collin had frozen in place, clad in his basketball shorts. Only with encouragement (and quiet pleading) from Seth did he finally finish stripping to his boxers. Seth was finally able to dress, covering up as much as possible at the same time, and blushing profusely at being seen essentially naked by a bunch of parents, cheerleaders, and other spectators.
The girl from the yearbook committee laughed as she reviewed the shots she had taken. She couldn’t use these in the yearbook, but they would be gold for her and her friends.
The coach was shaking his head, but smiling at last, happy as Collin arrived on the court. Seth was still blushing, wishing he could turn invisible. Rowan sat beside him, in Collin’s place, teasing his friend, but all in good fun. Seth just focused on watching the game, his face burning, amazed at his own boldness, but also that just when he thought today couldn’t be worse, he was proven wrong.
West Beach High won the game, with a final score of 45-44. But still, somehow, Seth was feeling he was on a losing streak, and it wasn’t about to get better.
Part 12 - The Injury
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As always, pure joy to come onto the site and see a new update posted.
Again brilliantly written, so many little touches to make it seem more real and realistic. Everything so far feels logical, there's been nothing that's felt strange or as if it makes no sense. Obviously it's a fantasy story with the concept but there is so much internal logic, it makes it so much more fun to read when it feels so genuine. An example being the coach letting the boys figure out a problem for themselves to encourage leadership and teamwork. Only a minor thing but that totally feels like what a real coach would do.
Lots of stuff I loved, Seth feeling increasingly horny since all this started which makes sense. Even though it's humiliating and he must hate it there's clearly a part of him that can't help but find it arousing. Which probably makes him feel even more ashamed, fantastic ! I
Seth stripping his clothes off on the sidelines of the basketball game to give to a teammate, he's trying to be a team player and help the school out, he's doing it for good reasons but of course he backfires and he ends up embarrassing himself greatly. Is this a sign of Seth being his own worst enemy? maybe up until now he's just been unlucky but this was pretty risky by him even if he had good intentions. I really hope we get more examples of this sort of thing backfiring for Seth, of him making things worse for himself.
Justin now knows Seth goes commando...
Next chapter The Injury? If only Seth knew some nurses who could help him
Again brilliantly written, so many little touches to make it seem more real and realistic. Everything so far feels logical, there's been nothing that's felt strange or as if it makes no sense. Obviously it's a fantasy story with the concept but there is so much internal logic, it makes it so much more fun to read when it feels so genuine. An example being the coach letting the boys figure out a problem for themselves to encourage leadership and teamwork. Only a minor thing but that totally feels like what a real coach would do.
Lots of stuff I loved, Seth feeling increasingly horny since all this started which makes sense. Even though it's humiliating and he must hate it there's clearly a part of him that can't help but find it arousing. Which probably makes him feel even more ashamed, fantastic ! I
Seth stripping his clothes off on the sidelines of the basketball game to give to a teammate, he's trying to be a team player and help the school out, he's doing it for good reasons but of course he backfires and he ends up embarrassing himself greatly. Is this a sign of Seth being his own worst enemy? maybe up until now he's just been unlucky but this was pretty risky by him even if he had good intentions. I really hope we get more examples of this sort of thing backfiring for Seth, of him making things worse for himself.
Justin now knows Seth goes commando...
Next chapter The Injury? If only Seth knew some nurses who could help him
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I have to say:
I just can't stop thinking about this story. It's just incredible.
As Trundle said, it's always a pleasure coming here and seeing that there's a new chapter.
I just can't stop thinking about this story. It's just incredible.
As Trundle said, it's always a pleasure coming here and seeing that there's a new chapter.
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Can't say that ENM's really my thing, but this has been a well written and enjoyable (if somewhat vicariously embarrassing - all to easy to imagine oneself in a similar position!) story
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I'm glad to hear that! I'm keeping a list of loose ends that I will try to tie up, and sometimes I catch details I didn't even mean to put in, and then I have to work with them. If you ever catch something that doesn't make sense, let me know please!
Seth has a lot of respect for his team and his coach. He definitely had a momentary lapse in judgement (maybe the result of being so horned up) but at least he wasn't embarrassed in front of a full crowd... for now
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