It's In the Script: New Jan 31

[Thesyguy]

I started reading this story from the start a few days ago and I am nearly caught up to the current chapter. It is very well done. I just want to focus on two elements i like, which is how u have woven in his jerkoff sessions and flashback/dreamlike scenes to the main story. Doing that really enhances understanding of the psyche of the main character. It helps understanding how, why and what he is thinking due to the situations that have been taking place.

[TeenFan]

Thanks for your comments Thesyguy.
Poor Stian will want to find the time and place for a jerkoff session, but find it difficult to find some time to be alone.
Will there be some unintended "oops" moments when he finds himself aroused when the camera is rolling?
Tune in to this channel for the next exciting chapter, or you can wait till you can purchase it on demand at your favorite overpriced
streaming service. If you find it on Disney plus be warned, it's slightly edited. There are rumors this might be made into a musical.

[Thesyguy]

Thanks. U actually brought up the other thing that’s been in the back of my mind. If Stian feels embarrassed now, I can’t imagine how embarrassed he will be when his classmates and cute crush back home see his film. Especially if a lazy/sloppy Editor gets completely wasted on Bahamian Rum Punch and just approves every scene as is.

[Dulcetpenguin]

I can totally see the ‘fat boy’ from chapter 1, breathing a sigh of relief that his ‘fatty’ body couldn’t make the cut when this provocative show gets released onto Disney+. He so narrowly avoided showing off his “truffle shuffle” and more to the entire world.

[TeenFan]

It's In the Script
Part 47.


It seemed like forever passed till a crewmember finally showed up with a robe for Stian to put on. As soon as he had the white cotton robe
on his body and tied on Mrs. Flanders wants him to take it off. She decided she wanted to do a quickie scene where Stian retrieves his
tossed out swimsuit from the outside deck of the ship. All Stian had to do was exit the cabin, run over to where his suit lies on the deck, pick
up the suit and put it on. Seems simple enough. The boom arm with the camera was next to the railing, leaned out as far as it would go.
This was to do the whole thing in one sweeping shot. Stian comes out of the room, his hands clutching his private parts. He rushes over to
the swimsuit and he slips it on. The camera just getting another broadside of his butt as he puts the suit on.

And that was the end of a long day of shooting. Stian had gotten in two major scenes. First the swimming pool scene with Miss Bartlette and
the cabin scene with Mrs. Sophia. It probably only added up to ten minutes of screen time, but it takes all day to shoot those ten minutes.
Most of that time Stian was at some level of being aroused and he can't wait to get back to his own cabin and tend to his boyish needs, but
Mrs. Ginger is always there. A vigorous and whole hearty penis jerking is the only prescription for what ails him, but Mrs. Ginger is always there. First he has to report back to the wardrobe department and turn his swimsuit in. Of course they wouldn't let him hang onto it.

Stian has been on the dilapidated and aging cruise ship for three days now and not one time has he been by himself. He shares his cabin with
the ever resourceful and diligent tutor and movie scene practice partner. Stian is woken up promptly at 7am. He does a round of exercises while wearing the same undies he went to bed wearing, followed by a shower. Then he gets a big cup of the mababas tea followed by a breakfast of oatmeal with slices of banana, toast with jelly, and a hardboiled egg. The second part of the morning is taken up with a quick review of the
scenes that are planned to be shot that day, which ones require Stian to be in. Then Stian has to report to the cargo bay that has become the makeup and wardrobe department so he can get makeup applied if needed, hair trimmed if needed, and finally he's given what the scene
requires for clothing.

Following the days shooting schedule, Stian is expected to put in three hours of school lessons. Stian's workday can't be longer than the hours allowed by the labor union for actors under the age of eighteen (which doesn't really happen since the movie company is registered under
Bahamian jurisdiction and there is little enforcement of labor laws). The rest of the crew and actors might work up to twelve hours a day, but
the kids have to do their schoolwork and get to bed by a specified time. After tutoring time Stian is given the day's second cup of mababas tea
along with a small bowlful of vitamin and herbal supplements. Stian asked Mrs. Ginger why she didn't tutor Miss Bartlette as well. Well, the little
miss priss semi-famous actress has her own special tutor on board. She's busy learning French and Italian so she can also do fancy-schmancy
artistic foreign films on top of her Hollywood movie options. "Creole French is the only Frenchie I speak, which I picked up in both Haiti
and Louisiana," Mrs. Ginger said.

After the tutoring Stian and Mrs. Ginger go to the ship's galley for dinner which is served around 8pm. Having gotten up so early, and been so
busy all day long, Stian is ready for bed at the hour of 10pm. One time he didn't fall asleep right away, but since the light in the room was still
on, and Mrs. Ginger was sitting near his bed as she read a book, he couldn't follow through on an urge to jerk off.

On the third day on board, after finishing up the day's shooting, Stian gets back to his cabin to find it empty. No Mrs. Ginger. With the near
constant penis popups due to how sexy the day's scenes were Stian wastes no time in taking off his clothes and jumping into the shower. The
hair gets washed as Stian sings a tune appropriate for washing up, Bobby Darin's "Splish Splash" rock-n-roll tune.

"Splish splash, I was taking a bath
Long about a Saturday night, yeah
A rub dub, just relaxing in the tub
Thinking everything was alright..."

Stian sings as he shampoos his luxuriously longish locks of blond hair. The peppy happy tune fades out from his mind, replaced by images
recently burned into his memory banks. As he gets his hands all soapy, as he starts stroking his cock with the right hand, massaging the balls
with the left, the images are recalled of Miss Bartlette's hand hanging onto his bulge. The focus of her gaze was so intense as she stared at
the hardon stretching out the loose swimsuit. Stian thinks back to how that hand felt, thinks about how her character wanted to know all about
his boy parts and what they were for. Before long Stian's dick is back to hard throbbing. It's the first time feeling himself like this in several days
and it could just be his imagination fueled by seeing the breasts and bush of the stunning Mrs. Sophia up close, but it almost feels like he's gotten
bigger down there. Now of course he's still a growing boy but...could he be bigger than he remembered himself to be?

Bigger than expected were those bottle like nipples on Mrs. Sophia's movie actress breasts. All the grabbing was done by her in the scene in
Lady Verona's cabin, but Stian would like a chance at doing some grabbing of his own. Would there possibly be a scene where he gets to touch
those massive tits? Could such a scene end up in the screenplay? So many other changes have taken place already. Oh that feels so good to
finally get to release the built-up pressure. The balls are getting tighter. It won't be long and Stian recalls his momentary lapse when he imagined
tit fucking the hot actress. That almost made him forget his lines and that would have been embarrassing. No actor wants to be the one to screw
up the dialogue.

Suddenly there is a loud knocking at the door and the bathroom door swings open. Stian can feel the change in the air pressure in the small
bathroom.

"Hello hello Stian. I see you are back already," shouts Mrs. Ginger, and before Stian can do or say anything the shower curtain is thrown back.
"We need to get started right away on your tutoring session. There's going to be a cast and crew meeting at 7:30 in the ship's galley. I'm
expecting Mary-Anne to be dropping by as well. I think there may be some additions to the screenplay. I heard Mrs. Flanders say the team is
happy with how your scenes with both Miss Bartlette and Mrs. Sophia ended up. I suspect they will be interested in some more personal time between Cutty and the ladies aboard this ship. Cutty is becoming very popular. Now rinse off and get out while I get your tea ready. Today we
start work on vocabulary for Freshman English. I wonder how many synonyms you can think of for BIG and HARD," Mrs. Ginger says, as she smiles while gazing down on Stian's soap suds covered erection.

[Trundle]

Brilliant chapter, you have to feel sorry for poor Stian. Constantly aroused all day and yet not able to find a moments peace to get some much needed relief. How much more desperate will he get? Will he be willing to take bigger risks to be able to jerk off successfully? Can't wait to find out.

Very intrigued by the line "Cutty is becoming very popular"

What do they have in store for Stian I wonder?

[DrWhoFanJ]

Brilliant chapter, you have to feel sorry for poor Stian. Constantly aroused all day and yet not able to find a moments peace to get some much needed relief. How much more desperate will he get? Will he be willing to take bigger risks to be able to jerk off successfully? Can't wait to find out.

Just so long as he doesn’t lose control while shooting the next scene! (pun very much intended!)

[Thesyguy]

Wonderful. The good Dr.Who and I are thinking exactly alike. So much embarrassment, so little private time for release.

[TeenFan]

It's In the Script
Part 48.


The Cast and Crew meeting was not as eventful as Stian expected. Mrs. Flanders did say some changes were going to take place, but she was
vague on the specifics. Mrs. Sophia was pleased with the mentioning there will likely be another one-on-one scene in Lady Verona's cabin.
However, there won't be any scenes shot with Stian for the next day or two. Other actors will get their scenes shot. Stian will just continue
to improve on fitness and work on the scenes already written. "What good is learning dialogue to those scenes" Stian wonders when changes
are already being planned.

"With Cutty having told the Lady that he would do anything, she takes him at his word and basically uses Cutty as her servant. For a couple days
on the boat he has to assist her with various things and do some odd jobs. But to get to the fun n games part of their relationship, Lady Verona
is going to get her young boy servant to try out a device hitting the market back in 1974. But first we'll have to shop around to try to find an
authentic replica of the device. We'll be on the Island in a couple days. Hopefully it will be delivered by then."

"Um, just out of curiosity. What is this device you speak of?" Mrs. Sophia asks.

Mrs. Flanders takes out a piece of paper. She writes something on the sheet, folds it up, then has the paper passed over to Mrs. Sophia.
The actress unfolds the paper, reads the note, and immediately a guffaw of laughter comes out of her. Everyone wants to know what's going
on but Mrs. Flanders says nothing more. Mrs. Sophia looks over at Stian to wink at him, as tears run down from that winking eye. Whatever it
is it's hilarious.

With no scenes for Stian to do for two days he spends more time in his cabin. He gets ahead of schedule on his tutoring. He does plenty of
exercising and getting in an extra nap or two. Outside of his cabin he watches as other scenes are shot. It's amazing how long and tedious it is
to observe movie making when one isn't in the scene.

The first morning of his no scenes to shoot days Stian wakes up with morning wood as hard as an oak tree. He was sleeping with pajama
bottoms on this time with nothing else underneath. His dick was sticking up through the fly...and you wonder why that is unusual?... Well,
these jammie bottoms have a button fly. Stian's morning erection was so big and intense that it pushed right through, popping the button off
never to be found again.

"That is the second item of clothing you've damaged that way," Mrs. Ginger chastises Stian. "From now on you wear nothing to bed. First you get
a rip in your boxers and now you've busted the buttons off your peejays. On top of that you've torn two shirts and lost a pair of socks. You'll end
up walking around naked by the time this boat gets to the Island. Not that it matters much. You won't have need for most of it after the Island
scenes get shot, which is most of the movie."

Stian doesn't like the idea of sleeping naked. It's so warm in the cabin with the ship being in tropical waters, with the humidity so high that any
clothing gets soaked through with sweat, with the ventilation system on board the old cruise ship sending barely a whisper of air out of the vents,
Stian goes to sleep with no top sheet. It's too warm for sheets.

The next night is just as hot as the other nights, if not hotter. Stian lies naked on the bed. Now if it was cooler and he had the sheets over him
it wouldn't be such a big deal. Lying on the bed with nothing to wear and nothing to cover him makes his falling asleep take longer than usual.

"I see you are having some trouble sleeping," Mrs. Ginger says. "I'll read you to sleep. I'll read a chapter from "Lord of the Flies". Now they need
to make a new movie of that story. You'd be perfect for it Stian. You should play Jack, the mean boy who takes over the Island. Jack is the one
who takes off his clothes and paints his body like a savage. This story is amazing for being written by a Brit back in 1954. Now the first two movie
versions are both pretty good, but I think it can be done better, more realistically."

"You mean more nudity?" Stian responds.

"Well it does say in the book that Jack, at the height of his power over the other kids, wears nothing but the paint on his skin. The movie should
be filmed exactly the way it's written. Nude is not lewd."

For half an hour Stian listens to his tutor reading to him from "Lord of the Flies." The story is at the part where the bad gang of boys, led by the
former second in command Jack, keep taking things from the good group of boys led by Ralph the highest-ranking member of the kids on the
Island. The exciting part of these chapters is the way the author describes a wild boar hunt. It must have been dangerous to hunt large
wild pig using nothing but spears, while the kids wear nothing but scanty loincloths or the shreds of their original clothing. Finally Stian drifts
off to sleep to dream about being stranded on an Island...

[Trundle]

Bet I'm not alone in being very interested what this device is.

Cannot wait to see what they've got planned for the poor boy!