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It's In the Script
Part 42.


When Stian signed on to being the main character in a movie he thought everything was going to be run according to some sort of plan.
He expected to learn the dialogue in a scene, memorize it, then regurgitate his lines on the set and hopefully make it all look natural
and not robotic. However, nothing seems to take place in a way that he expected. Such as now, as he floats on a black rubber innertube
in a small swimming pool, as his co-star grips his legs and looks luridly toward the bulge in his Italian style vintage speedo. Miss Bartlette
looks at Stian's barely concealed crotch in a way that could only be described as overdramatized and melodramatic. "Why do boys have
balls?" the young actress asked, then she smiles and awaits a reply.

The director won't call out "Cut" so the scene must go on...

Stian can feel himself blushing. He feels bad for blushing, but it does feel natural to what the character will be feeling at this moment. His
character would be just as shocked by the question that could be considered impertinent in polite society. Stian stutters his way into a reply.

"Uh...uh...ummm, I guess you haven't been shown a s..s..sex education film in school. A uh...a guy uses them to become a daddy. (Pause)
You know...when a man gets married.."

Miss Bartlette lifts her head up and she looks curious and perplexed. "Married? Why does he have to be married?"

Another blasted unanswerable question. Stian kind of bites his lip as he looks around with his eyes.

"Cut, cut" Mrs. Flanders shouts out, and thank goodness that scene is stopped.

Stian and Miss Bartlette get out of the pool. The actress goes toward the makeup lady to have her hair touched up. Stian stands by the side
of the pool and he listens to what the Director and the DOP have to say about the scene just shot. There apparently were some hesitation issues
but Mrs. Flanders decides it works out to establish a baseline for Stian's character. It's not unreasonable that the young Cutty Cuthbert might
seem a bit nervous around a pretty girl at the pool.

There was another page of dialogue to do and Stian and Miss Bartlette said their lines while each held onto opposite sides of the innertube.
That was shot in only one take, and then it was get out of the pool and get ready for the next shot. And on it went without a hitch till the scene
where Stian has to lie down on a towel next to the pool and Miss Bartlette climbs on top of him. This scene wasn't in the script a few days ago.
In fact, it wasn't placed into Stian's binder till this morning and he only had time to go over his lines a few times, with the girl getting all the
interesting lines to say of course.

Miss Bartlette is crouched down on Stian, sitting on his stomach as she holds his wrists down near his head. The move is very much like a
schoolboy pin. For some reason her character is interested in the rodeo, and she is treating Stian like he's an animal to ride. Miss Bartlette
grinds her bikini clad bottom up and down on Stian's stomach.

"I aways wanted to be in the rodeo," Miss Bartlette says in a seductive fashion. "I love watching the barrel races and the calf roping."
Then the actress rises up and down rapidly, nearly knocking the wind out of Stian. "How come women don't get to do the bronco busting?
Girls can ride horses just as good as the boys."

"I don't know. Maybe they are afraid to let the girls get hurt. Girls have to be protected from danger," Stian says in his most manly and reasoning
voice.

Miss Bartlette comes down hard one more time and this time she slides backwards. Her rump bumps up against the bulge sticking up in Stian's
speedo. The actress bumps and grinds on it for a few seconds, then she stops and turns her head back to look downward.

"Oh dear. I seem to have bumped into something. And I thought the saddle horn was on the front of the saddle." Miss Bartlette turns forward
again, and she giggles and smiles like a naughty schoolgirl who just got caught sexting with a boy in class.

The combination of getting the wind knocked out of him every time the actress landed her behind on Stian's tummy, combined with that
same firm behind slamming up against the partly erected dick tucked into the speedo, had Stian's mind somewhere else than his lines. The
next line of dialogue is totally forgotten.

"Cut...Let's do it again. The line is "Slow down young missy, this horse hasn't been ridden in a long time"...you got it Stian?...Slow down
young missy."

So they had to do the scene over again, as Stian wonders how the dialogue somehow had turned into that of a B-Western. Four times they
did the scene, four times getting the butt of Miss Bartlette slammed into his crotch as she grinds down on it. The third and fourth times
Stian was aware enough that he could feel the gap between the actress's butt cheeks as she wiggled side to side and up n down. How many
patrons at a strip club have had similar sensations during their exotic lap dances?

After half an hour of repeating the same scene, the same bump n grind motions on his crotch, Stian's bulge is pointing upward again like a
volcano, and will Mrs. Flanders finally be happy with the shot before the volcano has thoughts of rumbling to life.

"Okay, that should do it. Great work everybody. Take ten and then get ready for the scene with the deck waiter."

Stian is ready for a break. It takes the full ten minutes for his boner to go back down and his breathing to return to normal.

The next scene is a fairly easy one. It starts off with a shot of Mrs. Loren Sophia on her deck chair. The actress has been lying on the deck
chair, being background, as Stian and Miss Bartlette did their scenes. Now it's her turn to be on camera. The actress sits up and she fluffs
her magnificent brown hair. A waiter walks by and an order is made for a pitcher of mimosas. Yep she is going to order a whole damn pitcher
just for herself. This scene will probably be spliced in between two of the scenes with Stian and the girl in the pool. The big drink is delivered
and then Mrs. Sophia wants to go back to her cabin. She has to pick up her handbag and her towel and now she has no more hands to carry
the tray with the pitcher of mimosas. The actress looks around the pool area and she spots a nice boy sitting at the edge of the pool.

"You there, young man. Could you do a lady a favor? Can you carry this tray to cabin 123? It's not far, on this level of the boat."

The rest of the shot is Stian, still dripping wet, following Mrs. Sophia as she leads the way to her cabin.
Stian was looking forward to this next scene. His character gets to spy on Mrs. Sophia as she changes out of her swimsuit. There is an extra
bounce in his step and already an extra flow of blood back toward his groin which had already been given quite the workout from rodeo
wrestling with Miss Bartlette's tight bum.
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A lovely surprise to get a chapter about Stian, always great to see what's going on with him.

The next scene sounds like it'll be fun for Stian and he won't be the centre of attention for once, but surely things will backfire for the poor boy? it always does...
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It's In the Script
Part 43.


It was on day one on the Skorpio that Stian was able to go through the early scenes with the other actors. The older and experienced actors
all has things to say about their characters and commented on what they liked or didn't like about particular scenes. Everybody wanted more
screen time. The actor playing the captain wanted more to the scene of him steering the boat. He wanted to add lines about how he had made
it through a hurricane back in 58. For a moment Stian was confused. Then he remembered the story is taking place in the 1970s. Even though
Stian is the main character, he is the new guy, the unknown actor with no movies credited to him, so he just sits there and he listens to the
other actors moan and complain about their parts.

Stian perked up when he saw what happens in Scene Number 12. There are lots of details written down on the page but Stian quickly scans
past the little details to focus on the big picture of the scene.

Cutty carries a tray with a pitcher of mimosa, following the Lady Verona into her cabin.
The boy is still in his swimsuit, still wet, droplets of water falling from the suit onto the floor.
Inside the cabin the Lady gives Cutty a drink.
Lady Verona steps into the bathroom, leaving the door open.
Cutty looks around the room, but does not depart. He hides behind a curtain that covers up the porthole window.
Cutty can see into the bathroom when he peeks out from the curtain.
Lady Verona, looking at herself in the bathroom mirror, takes off her swimsuit.
While undressed the Lady brushes her hair.
Cutty gets excited as he sees Lady Verona naked from the side view.
Lady Verona puts on a light robe. Leaving the robe open at the front she enters the main cabin room.
Lady Verona lies down on the bed and she begins rubbing herself between the legs, obscured by the robe.
Cutty gets carried away with peeking and he nearly falls over. He grabs the curtain.
Lady Verona gets out of the bed. She draws back the curtain to find the embarrassed and ashamed Cutty.
Lady Verona drags the boy over to the bed. She sits down. She yanks down the back of the boy's swimsuit.
Lady Verona spanks Cutty.

This is the best scene in the early part of the movie and Stian looked forward to it. He practiced his dialogue with Miss Ginger back in his
own cabin which he had to share with her. Stian memorized his lines as he sipped cup after cup of the mababas tea. The excitement of seeing
the voluptuous Loren Sophia even partially naked had his parts a tingling down below. During breaks in rehearsing Stian leaned some interesting
tidbits about the actress. Her original name was Berga Albengali, a combination of Spanish and Italian heritage. That's not the best name for
an aspiring actress so a flip flop of Sophia Loren, Italy's most famous actress, was adopted. The actress may have had the boobs size and similar
hips to the great Sophia Loren, but she never made it to the big time. Mainly she showed her assets in tv commercials and Stian was amazed
he had a common acting background with Mrs. Sophia.

On the day of the shooting Stian could hardly contain his excitement as he followed Mrs. Sophia into her cabin. This scene should be loads of fun. He did feel a little strange walking across a ship's deck and into a cabin while wearing only the Italian speedo, but hey, what could his character
do when pressed into duty directly from the swimming pool?

LADY VERONA: Put the tray down on the table next to the bed young man. What is your name by the way? I'd like to thank
you properly.

CUTTY: I'm Cutty, Cutty Cuthbert. This is the first time I've been on a cruise ship. Lots of interesting people
on a cruise ship."

The Lady picks up a glass from the tray and she starts to pour a drink.

LADY VERONA: Do you find me interesting, Cutty? (hands the glass to Cutty)

CUTTY: Oh yes Lady Verona (takes a sip) I find you very interesting (takes a sip) I think you are the most unique person on board the
whole ship (takes a sip)

The Lady squeezes the boy's cheek. The Lady rubs a finger on the boy's tummy.
Cutty smiles and looks bashful.
[camera pans down Cutty's body from the chest down to his thighs, lingers on the speedo]

LADY VERONA: Now finish your drink and thanks for your assistance. I'm going to change into something more comfortable. You can see
yourself out. Perhaps I'll see you again at the pool. (give Cutty a kiss on both cheeks, turns and walks into the bathroom)

Cutty watches the Lady cross the room. He lingers in his position, looks around the room. Cutty takes several steps toward the door, turns
to look at the open door of the bathroom. Quickly Cutty moves over to the wall and gets behind the curtain.

"Cut, cut" the director yells out. "Okay, that was good. Reposition camera for Mrs. Sophia's undressing. We'll use the handheld camcorder to
get the closeups of Stian's face as he watches the undressing. Now Stian, I want you to express yourself in a way like you've never seen a woman
get undressed before. I want excitement and lust in those eyes."
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It's In the Script
Part 44.


Everybody gets into position for the Lady Verona stripping scene. Stian is partly hidden behind a curtain that covers up the room's port hole
window. Stian is glad the main camera is placed far enough from the bathroom doorway that his view into the bathroom is not blocked.
When Mrs. Sophia actually takes her swimsuit off, and stands naked in front of the mirror to brush her hair, Stian will actually be seeing things
much like his Cutty character would be seeing it. The backup director stands nearby with the handheld camcorder ready to record. This camera
is going to spend much of its time focused on Stian's face as he observes. Stian is ready to go, the word "Action" eagerly anticipated.

For the next ten minutes Stian gets to observe, like a hidden intruder in the woman's room lusting for her like a pervert, as the big boobed and
hefty hipped actress strips off her swimsuit. Stian had never seen breasts that large, not in real life that is. He always assumed huge breasted
ladies he saw in tv commercials had implants, but the word around the boat was Mrs. Sophia was au naturel. Even from the distance of being
on the other side of the ship's cabin, and seeing from the side, Mrs. Sophia's nipple stuck out like a baby bottle nipple only much wider than
a bottle's thin nipple for sucking. Immediately Stian imagined the actress, being of Spanish and Italian heritage and having the right looks and
skin color, being stripped by a masked Zorro. Stian imagines himself as Antonio Banderas, except in this movie version the rating isn't PG-13 but
a hard NC-17. He can't help himself as he starts to rub himself on the outside of his Italian speedo. He can't help but get hard up as he imagines
straddling the actress on the bed as he squeezes those massive tits together, and the reason he's squeezing them together is because his "Sword"
is thrusting back and forth between them. Zorro is going to give the lovely Lady a pearl necklace.

"He's stroking himself," the assistant director shouts toward Mrs. Flanders. "Do you want me to get a shot of that?"

The words take Stian out of his daydream. He looks down at his hand grabbing hold of the bulge in the speedo. Stian looks up again and he
shakes his head. He doesn't want this change in the focus of the scene...but it's too late...

"Of course shoot that," Mrs. Flanders shouts back. "Good actors have good instincts and it's best to trust them. Stian knows his character will
be excited about seeing Lady Verona and touching himself is the natural thing to do."

Stian curses silently to himself as the curtain is readjusted, a light set up in the corner of the room, the assistant director coming over to the
other side to shoot the scene with the camcorder.

"Okay bud, watch the lady strip and start touching yourself."

Stian looks toward the open bathroom. The Lady Verona has her arms raised up as she fluffs her hair using just her fingers. The arms raised up
enhances how much the tits jut outward. Stian uses this awesome moment to grab his bulging crotch again.

"That's it. Give yourself a good squeeze," the assistant director says, and for the first time ever in his career Stian is "playing with himself" in
front of the camera. If he knew then just how many times he would end up "playing with it" or somebody or even something else playing with
it he would have considered jumping into a lifeboat to abandon the ship and the movie.

Mrs. Sophia finishes with her hair, and she puts a small bathrobe on. This is followed by Mrs. Flanders yelling out "cut".

"Stian, you remain behind the curtain, peak out just enough to see Mrs. Sophia as she crosses from the bathroom to the bed. Mrs. Sophia, you
know what to do. You have to pretend you believe you are alone in the room. Really get into touching yourself like you did in "White Hot Nurses".

Stian hasn't heard of that movie, but it must be sexy hot as Mrs. Sophia blushes and looks shy and guilty of something all of a sudden. Stian makes
a mental note to ask Mrs. Ginger is she knows where to find a copy of "White Hot Nurses".

Stian shakes the daydreaming out of his head as he hears the word "Action". Mrs. Sophia steps out of the bathroom and her robe is open. Her
tits are mostly covered but further down an unobstructed view of the actress' lightly trimmed bush can be seen. Stian is amazed. It's his first
time seeing bush that's not on a computer or tv screen. Everything looks different in real life. Stian can't believe how good he's got it. He's
actually being paid to watch a sexy grown woman undress and walk around with her pubic hair showing. He basically knows what happens next
but he's still not prepared for how hot it turns out to be.

Mrs. Sophia walks to the bed. She sits down on the bed, plumps up the pillows against the headboard, then she lies down with her back against
the pillows. The robe opens up and her ample breasts are visible again. The tits are great but the real sight is lower. Mrs. Sophia places her
left hand down just below her belly button. The hand slides down and her fingertips disappear into the miniature forest covered mound. For
several seconds those fingers twirl around the dark black pussy hair. The actress spreads her legs wider. Stian can see the camera is positioned
in a way that the thighs and the robe partially obscure what is going on between the legs. However, Stian has a better angle to view things.

Stian sucks in his breath when he sees Mrs. Sophia slip two fingers down deep to where they disappeared from view as if swallowed up. As if by
instinct Stian grabs the front of his bulged out swimsuit. This is probably where the scene of him touching and grabbing his crotch will be spliced into the scene. Stian can see it already. His touching himself will be split screened with Mrs. Sophia as she bucks and grinds her hips. The Lady
on the bed and the hidden watcher rubbing themselves on their most intimate places simultaneously. Mrs. Sophia starts to moan as her fingers
rub faster and deeper. Are those moans real. They sure sound real. Stian's crotch is starting to throb and his suit is pushing out a ridiculous
amount. Why is the suit so stretchy? His dick pushes out farther and farther and he's moaning himself now.

"Okay Stian. Stick your head out more. Lean outward then you nearly fall down. You fall but catch yourself with the curtain," Mrs. Flanders
gives the directions. Stian wonders how it is that the director can give out verbal commands while the scene is playing out. But there is little
time to wonder about the mysteries of movie making. Stian pokes his head out some, leans too far out, slips down and grabs the curtain.

This is all caught by the camcorder. The reaction from Mrs. Sophia is captured by the main camera.

Mrs. Sophia sits up on the bed and she closes her bathrobe. "What is that? Who is there?" she shouts in Stian's direction. Stian hides behind the
curtain. He can't see what is going on now, not till the curtain is thrown wide open a few seconds later. A very angry looking Lady Verona
stands before a scared and cowering, slender and barely dressed in a speedo Cutty Cuthbert.

Lady Verona: You naughty peeping tom. (grabs the boy by the ear, pulls him toward the bed)
I'm gonna have to teach bad boys like you a good lesson.

Cutty: Ow, ow...please don't. I didn't see anything. Really, I didn't. (tries to grab ear, tries to pull back as the Lady pulls him to the bed)
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Very happy to see a TeenFan return chapter. It singlehandley made my day. Can't wait to see more of 'Cutty's' struggles. I hope we get to see more of these hiccups make it into the actual film!
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Fantastic to see you back! The wait for a new chapter felt awfully long!

Wonder how "Cutty" will be punished? Hopefully much more to come.
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It's In the Script
Part 45.


When the actress playing Lady Verona grabbed him by the ear, to drag him across the room toward the bed, the pinch on the earlobe was
more than Stian expected. It hurt like a mudderflubber. The "Ow, ow" that Stian shouted out wasn't faking it even though that is exactly
what he's supposed to say when his ear got grabbed and pinched. So far everything had been going to plan. "Ow that hurts" Stian said again,
and surprisingly Mrs. Sophia stopped pulling on his ear. That was good but now what? Mrs. Sophia looked down and her eyes lit up like she had
spotted something tasty on the buffet table in the ship's galley. Stian had seen that look in her eyes before, just before she picked up a small
fork to spear a big juicy Spanish olive from the snack tray. This time her eyes lit up just before she grabs the front of the poking out speedo,
her fingers grasping tightly on the sensitive head of Stian's dick. Stian knew he was poking out down there, but he didn't think it would become
a target. The pointy thing in the Italian swimsuit made an easy thing to grab and hold on to, something bigger than an earlobe.

Getting grabbed like that down lower made Stian look down lower. What he saw made a new surge of energy rush through his groin. Mrs.
Sophia's robe is still wide open and he's getting a much closer view of her neatly trimmed treasure trove. Seeing a grown woman was awesome
enough from his vantage point behind the curtain, but now the firm and full-figured woman was showing off her most private part up close
and nearly personal. If she's got a hold of his cock, then her pussy is within an arm's reach. Any further thoughts about the exotic woman's
exposed parts, which included glimpses of her ginormous pointy nipples, cease when Mrs. Sophia yanks hard and getting dragged toward the bed resumes. Fortunately Stian remembers the next line.

"Please my lady. I'll do anything. Don't tell the Captain."

Mrs. Sophia laughs as she reaches the bed. She sits down at the corner of the bed and finally she releases her two finger grip on Stian's hard
rod. She gets back into the prepared dialogue.

Lady Verona: I have two choices as best as I can figure it. I can ring for an officer to escort you the ship's Captain, and he will most likely
inform your poor mother about her son's deviant behavior. (runs a hand up and down Cutty's thigh) Or I can punish you myself.

Cutty: Well, I... (looks concerned and worried) I'll uhh, I'l take what punishment you see fit to give me.
(nearly whimpers but cuts it off before making too much of a sound)

Lady Verona: (smiles, grabs the back of the swimsuit) I do believe a spanking is the ideal method for dealing with juvenile delinquents
like you. (yanks the back of the swimsuit down)

This is where a second deviation from the written screenplay happens. Mrs. Sophia yanks down on the back of the swimsuit all right, but she
yanks down too far. Instead of stopping at the bottom of the boy's curvy butt cheeks as planned, the suit slips down past Stian's thighs and
continues to slide all the way down to the floor. Stian expected the actress would stop at that point, since things hadn't gone exactly according
to expectations, but Mrs. Sophia grabs him and suddenly he is bent over her leg and the corner of the bed. Stian puts a hand down to stop his momentum toward the floor. With his upper body angled down over the legs of the actress, his own legs are nearly lifted off the floor and
splayed out wide to balance himself. One foot does come up off the floor and the swimsuit is now dangling from his left ankle.

Things are very much out of place now and Stian expects to hear the words "Cut, Cut" from the director. Surprisingly the word doesn't come.
The next words are from Mrs. Sophia.

"Hold still little doggy."

The actress proceeds to wallop Stian on the butt cheeks. It stings and it sounds loud and Stian can't hold still. Whack...whack...goes the hand
on the ass.

"Stop your squirming. (whack, whack) You keep fidgeting and I'll double your punishment. (whack, whack)

Stian can feel his butt burning. He can feel his face getting flushed, especially since his head in so close to the floor.

"Umm, Mrs. Flanders, we're getting a lot of balls with this butt shot," the DOP says out loud.

Stian's glad something else isn't hanging down. His erected dick is lying on Mrs. Sophia's thigh. He can feel every movement of it, each slide
back and forth across the skin of her leg and he's getting harder and harder as the scene continues. It's going to be totally embarrassing if he
loses control and something happens.
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It's In the Script
Part 46.


After the fourth or fifth whack of Mrs. Sophia's hand on his exposed rear end, hits that are harder than Stian anticipated, he wonders why there
isn't a way to fake a spanking. After all, sounds are added as an effect all the time in movie scenes. In his research on film making Stian learned
that in old westerns those guns weren't always making loud gunshot sounds. Loud sounds like gunfire would scare the horses too much, so the
sounds were added later.

Stian isn't sure what is worse. Is it the real spanking that is being laid upon his ass? Is it that his ass is the focus of attention of the camera
and that his legs are spread wide while his dangly balls swing back and forth. Now having his rear end seen in a movie, after a thorough reading
of the screenplay, it was expected. Even in a PG rated movie a boy, or sometimes a girl, will be filmed naked from the backside. At the beach
some girls wear bikini bottoms that have almost no material on the butt side. A short list of actors who showed off their butt in a move were Ryan Phillipe, Leonardo DiCaprio, Kevin Zegers, Devon Sawa, and there was even a bare butt scene in the Peter Pan movie made twenty years ago, so
bare butt is no big deal. Having the balls getting in on the act is not what Stian expected during the filming of this scene. It just states there is a bare bottom for a spanking in the screenplay.

"Cut, cut. We're going to change positions and camera angles," Mrs. Flanders gives orders to the crew.

Stian wonders if the director is pleased with the shot or not. Will it get tossed out for showing too much? Will it be kept in? Stian stands up,
yanks up his swimsuit, then he moves over to the side of the room to get out of everyone else's way. Stian is glad to get his throbbing dick under
wraps, even if it's only for a short break. Mrs. Sophia steps over to the bathroom where the makeup lady attends to her. They're always worried about their hair those actresses are, no matter their age. While things are rearranged, Stian notices that between takes there is movement into
and out of the room. Some people step out. Other people step in. Most of these are members of the production team. Two other people
step into the room. Mary-Anne, the assistant to the director who will also be playing the sister of Cutty Cuthbert, along with Miss Bartlette,
enter the room to observe. Up until this moment Stian didn't think about the other actors being there during the shooting of a scene. And
what a scene they chose to come watch. Stian checks on the condition of his cock. It's still more hard than soft, but at least the full erection
is gone.

"Angle the boom over the bed," the director shouts out. "I want to get a shot from above and directly from Lady Verona's point of view."

The camera is set up next to the bed. The large mobile arm called The Boom is situated to where the camera will aim down from above.
After a few minutes the scene is ready to resume. Stian and Mrs. Sophia get back where they were before. Stian has to drop the swimsuit
down his legs, the suit barely hanging on by the left ankle and assume the position over the actress and corner of the bed again. A giggling can
be heard and it sounds like it comes from a young girl. Miss Bartlette must be enjoying the view. Mrs. Flanders shouts out for quiet, that the
scene is about to be shot and everybody get into position, and she has last second directions for Stian.

"Okay Stian, the Lady Verona is going to swing you around into a wheelbarrow position. You are going to have your feet on the bed, a foot on
each side of her and about two feet behind her. You will be in an elevated pushup position from which you will get a round of spankings. Now
continue with the adjusted dialogue....and...action."

Mrs. Sophia lifts up on one of Stian's legs. "Move your body in front of me. Keep your feet where I put them. Keep your hands on the floor.
I'm not done punishing you yet. Not by a long shot."

The changes in position are made. The dangling underwear falls off of Stian's foot and plops onto the floor during this transition of body parts.
When it's all done Stian is in an elevated pushup position, a wheelbarrow position. Stian wonders what this adjusted dialogue is. Nothing new
was told to him to say. He did see Mrs. Flanders talking with Mrs. Sophia for a couple minutes as the camera got set up. The punishment gets started again and Mrs. Sophia resumes her dialogue. 

Lady Verona: Did anyone ever tell you Cutty that bad boys are a turn on. (whack, whack) I never though such a cute and innocent looking
lad like you would spy on a woman in her bathroom. (whack, whack). I'm getting all excited.

The shot is from above. All that the camera sees is Stian's backside and the hand coming down on it with the spanks. This round of punishment
is taking some time, and Stian is glad he's gotten stronger lately due to the vigorous exercise regimen that Mrs. Ginger has been putting him
through. However, the actress spanking him is getting quite a view of his balls and cock hanging down. Over on the other side of the cabin
Mary-Anne and Miss Bartlette are sitting down on the floor. They are in perfect position to see just how much his boy bits dangle.
With the movements of the spanking, Stian can feel everything moving back and forth just enough to be able to sense the movement. Glancing
over toward Miss Bartlette he sees the young actress is smiling. Somehow Mary-Anne looks bored, almost as if this bare assed punishment
with a boy's parts on display is not enough to get her excited. What kind of kinky stuff is that woman into?

Lady Verona: Well? (whack, whack) What have you got to say for yourself young man?

Cutty: I swear I'll never spy on anyone ever again. Cross my heart and hope to die....Ow, ow...

Lady Verona: Oh, look what I found...It's my riding crop. I wasn't sure if I was going to get some riding in during the stopover on the Island,
but now that I've found this...I'll put it to good use.

So that is another change in the dialogue and now a different type of swat comes down on Stian's ass. It's the sting of a riding crop. Where the
hell did that thing come from?

Lady Verona: Turn your head and look at me boy.

Stian turns his head back as much as he can. He can see Mrs. Sophia's face. He can see the boom arm coming down as it brings the camera
down to the same level as the actress's head, the camera just to the right side of her face. So that is what Mrs. Flanders meant when she said
"Lady Verona's point of view".

A new and supremely horrible sensation begins. Mrs. Sophia has switched from swatting the butt to lightly swatting the balls. They are gentle
taps in comparison to the butt smacks, but any kind of contact with a riding crop onto a boy's nutsack will send a shiver up and down his spine.
Another glance over at the other actors in the room shows Anna-Marie with a lecherous grin on her face. The use of the riding crop suddenly
has her interested.

Lady Verona: What's the matter? You don't like it when a woman busts your balls?

The pain isn't bad bad, but each little tap of the riding crop onto one of the testicles sends a little bolt of pain into his crotch to radiate into his
abdomen. He not counting but it seems the right nut has been hit five times and the left one only twice. None of this dialogue was Stian
prepared for. He's just going to have to make up a response.

"Please Lady Verona, I'll never be a bad boy again. Use me in any way you want to, just stop...please," Stian says, as he feels sweat seeping out
of his hair to drip onto the floor. His arms are starting to shake. He won't be able to hold this position much longer.

"Okay, Cut" the director says.

The scene ended in a different way than originally written. Stian's swimsuit had come off and was lying on the floor. This changed how he was
to leave the room. He was supposed to just walk out after the punishment by Mrs. Verona, but since the suit had been removed a change was
added. Mrs. Verona picks up the swimsuit and she steps over to the porthole window. The window is opened up and the speedo is tossed outside
to land on the ship's deck. And that is how the scene ends, everyone congratulating each other on the completion of an exciting moment in the movie. Meanwhile Stian stands there with his hands over his crotch wondering what he's supposed to do next. Where is the wardrobe person to
give him a robe? Stian had heard that in most movies the instant a director yelled "Cut" to end the shooting of a nude scene a robe is immediately handed to the naked person or persons.

"So where is my robe?" Stian asks.

"We don't have one. You weren't supposed to end up naked," the assistant director tells him. "Somebody run to wardrobe department and grab
a robe for Stian."

While Stian waits for his robe to arrive, Miss Bartlette and Mary-Anne come over to congratulate him.

"That was wonderful," the young actress tells him. "That was so believable. You really looked like you were in pain. You were actually
trembling."
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Re: It's In the Script

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This chapter was great, the filming is in session and there have already been some shenanigans. His speedos are thrown out so easily and he gets a robe. As the scenes continue will there even be a need for cover? I guess we readers will have to find out. But wow, it's looking great.
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Re: It's In the Script

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Another fantastic chapter and I love how there are more and more things happening to Stian that weren't written in the original script. Are they testing how far he's willing to go?

Can't wait for the next update.
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