Zayden and Cathy - Monday Morning - 2023-07-30

[student]

Take the time you need to get your story right. Better to be later than unreadable, or boring. Water parks have a lot of potential. Back in the bad old days, males (both adults and juveniles) routinely swam nude in public pools.
The old-fashioned male bathing suits might as well have been long underwear. Small children were an exception. In the 1956 Disneyland USA short subject, part of the People and Places series, the Disneyland Hotel scene shows young girls topless in the pool (3.55 min).

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Tg3lAQ9pjlw

[LittleFrieda]

Take the time you need to get your story right. Better to be later than unreadable, or boring.

Always one of my fears. Casanova complained that Zayden became a nudist too fast, so now I am 20+ pages (as counted by the document writing app) into a drop-in replacement. And dang it, now I have to rewrite a bit about Cathy's water park bikini. The first trip is not sexy, but it sets up the second trip.

Water parks have a lot of potential. Back in the bad old days, males (both adults and juveniles) routinely swam nude in public pools.

If BOTH males and females swim nude, how does one take care of over-sexed teen boys having a normal reaction in one of these stories?

The old-fashioned male bathing suits might as well have been long underwear. Small children were an exception. In the 1956 Disneyland USA short subject, part of the People and Places series, the Disneyland Hotel scene shows young girls topless in the pool (3.55 min).

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Tg3lAQ9pjlw

[student]

How does one take care of oversexed teens in these stories? Hoses. Lots of cold water. If it's good enough for man's best friend, treat 'em like dogs!