Christine, Tiffany and Ginelle

[ENFfanatic]

I really enjoyed this story, though you should probably write down who the main character is a bit earlier. It changes the reading experience a lot if you don't know if the babysitter is male of female . It also helps a bit with the immersion if you briefly explain what everyone looks like at the start.

All in all a good read.

PS. I believe it's called a tawse. I had no idea what it was, and the spelling error made that a bit more interesting to find out:)

[PhilMarlowe]

No matter what you left out, it is a good story.

Please keep going.

Phil

[stupd]

Nice story!