Excellent and exciting chapter Jastes! Love the reveal of Mark being behind it all. *Chef's Kiss* Louise being turn on by every thing, and being taunted about it by Hailee, and then the blindfolded tickling, all just icing on the cake at this point. And you left a hint of there being more with Mark constantly feeding off of Louise's embarrassment. I can already imagine the fun situations he's going to put that poor girl through.
Again exceptional story! Keep up the great writing!
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Le chef kiss? You flatter me. Thanks! This one took a little experimenting getting the right balance, so perhaps a cooking metaphor is appropriate.superevil7 wrote: ↑Tue Jan 31, 2023 2:11 pm Excellent and exciting chapter Jastes! Love the reveal of Mark being behind it all. *Chef's Kiss* Louise being turn on by every thing, and being taunted about it by Hailee, and then the blindfolded tickling, all just icing on the cake at this point.
I'm considering creating some vignettes of sorts centered around Louise, so if you got some ideas, send them my way!I can already imagine the fun situations he's going to put that poor girl through.
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The first thing that comes to mind is Mark and Louise taking a group of boy scouts out camping. I'm sure you can come up with what happens from there I'll let you know if I come up with any other ideas.
Edit: Oh, and if Louise somehow convinced Mark to help her get some revenge on Hailee, that could be fun too.
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