blueballs wrote: ↑Sun Jan 29, 2023 5:35 am
Personally, I've never felt your stories cross any lines. I see it as just complete sexual fantasy and situations far out of the norm of real life. It's the same thing as when you watch horror movies or fantasy novels. It's not something you would ever do in real life but be able to escape to a fantasy world is not something you should feel guilty about in my opinion.
Everybody has got fucked up kinks when you dig deep enough and I see nothing wrong with a bit of fantasy and your stories are very well written and easy to submerge into them and I love how your stories go into the vengeful sexual side of things as its so different than the stuff you usually read about and it's fucking hot. For me the only line I don't like being crossed really on this board is that I don't like reading about anybody under the age of 18.
But yeah that's my two cents on it, I'd say just keep up the good work your an excellent writer, and its always exciting to see what your gonna do next.
It's not necessarily that I feel guilt, as I don't, especially not for the characters in my stories in that fantasy world, but at times I feel as if the level at which I take things is not totally unique by any means, but has became fewer and further on the board, and my stories always seem to be the ones going all out with the humilations(for example we used after school brawl as a test for if this board would have censor issues)
I like to go for thorough, complete humilation, and the board often is filled with people looking for something more playful, which I'm capable of but doesn't jump at me as often, I just feel like I should atleast warn the uninformed reader that my stories could actually have a bit of violence or legitimate cruelty on a very thorough level, not just mean bully pantsing.
But some of these very thorough extreme humiliations in the past, especially when I was younger and the ages weren't that far off from my own, featured younger characters, and some of those stories, simply dissapeared from the board without me deleting them which made me feel uneasy, and to be honest bad, hundreds or thousands of stories from others through the years, and worse ones than my own of course, but a couple of mine dissapeared, this was awhile back, and I was having login issues, and ultimately thought I was banned; I debated giving up writing because it made me feel so idk strange, I'm still not certain the exact cause; or hell maybe I got really drunk sometime and deleted them myself, but I doubt this very much. I don't feel guilty or bad as everything here is fantasy, but I felt strange when my stories were coming up missing, my first story ever, as well as Sammy's Lesson both going missing, and even after school brawl pushes it on ages+being so extreme on humilation, which was the norm on the boards throughout the years, but is a combo I don't plan on releasing anymore, Things like Sammy's Lesson or After School Brawl, great reviews and praised by the community, and overall good story but leave a sour taste on my mouth reading back the further I mature. The completeness of my humilations is one of my favorite aspects, but the number in the descriptions never meant anything to me, but I worry they could to others.
So knowing myself, my interests, my readers interests, and my expertise will continue to push me to the more sadistic or thorough humilation, I don't want to feature anyone who isn't 18 in such thorough humilations,
Once again, i know myself and I know I'm not a truly bad person and definitely not into younger people, but I don't if the many anon readers are good people, and that eats at me even though I know it shouldn't.
So mostly just going to stick with that rule of thumb unless the story leans into something more playful or lighthearted or mean but not explicitly thorough or sexual
But the warning of violence or sexual nature will likely remain just for the sake of how my stories go and how there's alot of levels of this that people enjoy, and some of them, I know I'm too much for, which is more than fair, but the warning is for them, and the no younger characters in such extreme humilations, is for me and my comfort; once again I know for me, it makes these stories more believable and goes with the fantasy world we've created of new adults or younger embarrassing one another, And many playful stories this makes sense. But it doesn't for the things that come out of my head and end up on paper, and I realize that now more than I did in the past; if someone doesn't think like me and that number actually means something, then I don't want to be a part of that.
Idk I've always had some of this in the back of my mind but stories being deleted just made me question myself and things and I feel the need to speak about it, for whatever reason, I'm a long-winded person, which seems to help my stories atleast
All that aside blueballs you've always hyped me and my stories and I appreciate your longtime support and the way you help to describe what my stories and what you think of them/saying things like they're immersive or hot or whatever it may be, as simple as it is, a "thanks" on here; a compliment, or a small discussion about the work, always gives me more motivation to keep at it and not get lazy.
Really I have atleast 2 additions to ALIK written already in my head, with the key things to happen already there, and a few side things to hit on, and all I need to do is the lines to draw in between these events, this is how most of my stories are written, usually the finale or key aspect of the humilation comes to mind first, I think up some more minor key aspects to hit on before that, and I write the story until I get the events that makeup the brute of the story.
Lifeguards last ride started with the simple thought of forcing someone down the slide nude
A Lesson in Karma started with me imagining up the nowhere near getting to grand Finale and Candace humilation, and then thinking, "Why would someone deserve this" queue full fleshed out albeit neglected series comes to life
For this one I thought up the main brunt of chapter 2, but had to write up the reason and drama behind it, and then largely winged this whole chapter other than knowing I'd have Ally spanked. It's a bit of a chaotic approach, as most of it is impromptu, but when I write it..it just flows and works. Often times I post these without reading much back other than double checking for clear spelling errors or typos. It's like I have all the bullet points of a serious pre writing attempt, but they're just in my head; thankfully I seem to do well with creating characters, personalities, drama, and "reason" for the humilation and don't just slop this together to get to the exciting stuff but it's truly strange to me how easy it all comes out, and how I can suddenly take a perverted idea and make it a fully fleshed story (sound like I'm tooting my own horn alot, not the intention) it comes so easy to me that I think it lends to me taking breaks, because if I wrote daily or even at a steady pace, I'd fill the board, or carry on the same story for far too long into novel lengths which I also don't know is what people want.
No stresses or overly guilty or being weird, just some stuff I feel the need to say/or am welcoming discussion on
Thanks again to you and everyone else for the support
Fun bonus curious question: what was some of your favorite aspects or moments from chapter 1? (Others feel free to answer to)
I mean, there are so many stories out there that are based around high school, and they're hot and I have no problem reading them but that's because you don't really think about age it's just the setting for the scene. I reckon for most people that come into these types of pages their kink started from high school so it's understandable that people often write high school-based fantasies, It's no different to porn in that sense. There's plenty of porn out there based around high school but they just use older porn stars and that's fine, it's not the age of the characters that matter. It's just the setting of the environment for me. it's just the place for a fantasy to take place and it's not the age that is important in creating that (at least for me). I hope that makes sense... It's all just complete fictional fantasy
As for my favorite parts in chapter one, It would have to be the thumb in the ass and getting her to admit she's a slut. I'm loving it so far though man, I always get excited for more with your stories and seeing how they end up unfolding. (Lifeguard's last ride and afterschool brawl have been my favs so far)
Almost feel bad for her, she tried SO hard not to cum but I feel she's just delaying the inevitable, could be a running theme, I know that's not the point of the story of course, but having her finding ways to avoid cumming before eventually in one of the chapters they just decide she isn't getting out of it would be amazing lol.
She pinched the shit out of her ex-friend who was ready to do it even as she was getting pinched and was SO close to losing it, looking forward to seeing future ways she could get out of it before being made to sit there while they finished. Besides that, fantastic story, karma is indeed a bitch for this one.
^The second I closed Ally's door, I was already making the rest of the magic for the night happen..She had assisted me herself in the setup of the tables and what nots, all me and the girls had to do was gather the people. Ally was once again never the brightest and editing the party posts to show Saturday for only her account, was easy. I made a couple of posts that only she could see, then excluded her from seeing the rest of the posts, stating the real date for the party, how it was a "surprise" party, and how Ally was not to know.
I had some of the girls down the driveway, directing traffic to park and insuring everyone remained at a whisper until the moment of surprise. The rest of the girls as well as myself were getting people into the backyard as silently as possible. This was no easy feat, I knew we had a bit of leeway as Ally's room was buried into the other side of the house, but we had to be vigilant that no one would holler or whistle or the like to alert my former friend of my plans.
There was alot of people, seniors from other schools, college kids, easily 150+ packed into Ally's backyard, lining every chair her and I had setup, with many sitting/leaning against the tall, wooden fence, or simply sitting Indian style in the grass. It had taken some time for everyone to arrive, find their friends, come up the drive, find a place to sit or lean, but the more they filed in, the more my vision was becoming a reality.. I was going to have quiet the audience here to witness my slutty ex-bestfriend's demise..My girls were like prefects, marching along, telling everyone how "worth it it'll be if you lot keep quiet and don't ruin the surprise."
Everyone was mostly playing along, happy to take part in a surprise party, but I'd also buttered them up in my posts, playfully telling them how Ally had been quiet a brat to me lately, and that I was going to prank her before everyone shouted SURPRISE, I'd left the "prank" vague but from the whispers I heard muttered throughout the backyard, they were eager to see this prank and surprise Ally, as well as "get on with the damn party."
Some people had taken to sipping their drinks, so I knew if I had to get my show on the road, my heart fluttered, my hands were a bit clammy, and if I sat still, my legs would shake, the adrenaline was building, I'd ran through this plan over and over since I'd found out about Ally and Adam's affair..it was finally coming to light. I got Leslie and Courtney to assist me in gathering Ally. Pausing at the back sliding door to meet eyes with Alice first, she nodded, she was going to maintain the crowd as long as possible, I then locked eyes with Jane, my tech girl, she's had a chair pulled up next to the projector..she nods, giving me a thumbs up. Everything's ready..and my audience is growing antsy..I slide out the back sliding door, turning off a few switches when I do, plunging most of the backyard into darkness, the whispers grow as the crowd gets excited something is finally happening..I slide the door shut, hoping Alice would keep the audience at bay while I retrieved Ally, I mean it wouldn't be the end of the world if they ruined the surprise, but I wanted my scheme to happen exactly as I'd pictured..
Leslie, Courtney, and I headed through the dark house, it was time to bring the slut down for her surprise party!^
*I'd fallen asleep..so I was very confused when I first woke, still sitting in the darkness of my room, I felt the cuffs against my wrist, and remembered all the humiliating things Sabrina had put me through earlier..and somehow I couldn't even feel sorry for myself, even as I shivered at the thought of it all being recorded for God knows why..I couldn't even feel sorry, because all I felt was guilt and shame, I'd betrayed my friend, in the worst way possible, and when she had confronted me..she found even more betrayal..I can't say I'd of done what she did to me..but I'd of atleast been as passionate in my revenge if the roles were reversed..I deserved this..I was a shitty friend..the emotions of shame and guilt, embarrassment and all of it were too much, I'd fallen in and out of sleep to avoid thinking about it, but now I was awake, my butt was a stinging reminder of the nights events, I'd learned my lesson..or so I thought..after an eternity of darkness or fever dreams, my door burst open..my light was switched on and I recoiled and flinched at the suddenness of the girls' return and the blinding light, after being bound in my dark room.
My eyes somewhat adjusted, and I saw Sabrina's shit grin across her face as she marched into my room, Leslie and Courtney in tow. They stood over me at the edge of my bed, staring down at me..I looked away..staring at the patterns in my ceiling momentarily, the patterns were the last thing I saw, Sabrina quickly wrapped a black blindfold around my head, not bothering to avoid pulling and tying my hair in the knot, I squeal into my gag, the first sound I've made since they returned..I'm once again plunged into darkness, the blindfold was made well, no lights beamed through the fabric. They moved quickly now that I was blinded, unlatching the cuffs from my bed and back to my other wrist before I know what's happening to even attempt to stop them. I'm pulled upwards into a sitting position on the edge of the bed. They aren't talking, or mocking me, which makes me more uneasy..they're strictly focused on whatever the hell they're doing to me now..
I gulp aloud when I hear the sound of scissors, but I'm quickly relieved from my fears as the scissors slice through the tape around my legs, freeing them from one another,
"If you kick or run even once I'm cutting off every stitch of clothing you got on, got it slut?" Sabrina said coldly.
I nod quickly in the general direction of her voice, unsure where her eyes were to meet or avoid them..
My cuffed hands lay in my lap, my legs are free to move, but I sit there..obediently waiting for Sabrina's next move..
I feel something pulled around my neck from unexpected hands, as soon as I'd realized this was happening, whatever it was, was clicked into place, I'd felt this feeling before, reaching my cuffed hands from my waist to feel the tight object..oh jeez..oh fuck..I don't know if I like where this is going..I'm unable to vocalize a protest or even see my surroundings, but I'm pretty certain she had just put a.."*
^A freakin collar! God it was too good, I couldn't help but giggle to myself as Leslie secured it into place, the pink leather collar was obviously intended for human use, the letters "S-L-U-T" were placed in bold white letters, contrasting the hot pink leather. The title was placed directly on my former bestfriend's neck, accurately labeling the betrayer, her own panty gag kept her lying mouth from speaking and her new blindfold had her looking around bewildered, nodding at the wall when I'd asked her if she understood me. I think she knew what the collar was, she'd told me one of her men had got her one, but she didn't expect me to put her ass on a leash!^
*I'd only just somewhat came to terms that there was what I believed to be a collar around my neck..when I heard a click under my chin, and then I was roughly yanked forward and off of the bed. I was on the floor of my bedroom, being pulled in what I assume to be the direction of my door..I tried to resist leaving the freedom of the room but the girls just laughed at my resistance, and pulled harder, yanking me forward by the collar, luckily enough it was padded and didn't hurt me that much when they pulled, but there was no resisting their wishes, I was pulled forward, scrambling on my hand and knees for a moment before managing to pull myself to my feet, I reached my shaky hands up..and felt the braided rope of the leash, confirming what I could only assume from under the black blindfold. I took a few more willing steps, sensing I was near the threshold of my door, I whined into the gag but this went ignored, the girls kept pushing and pulling me by the leash, marching me forward, if I stumbled or fell, they marched me on my hands and knees until I brought myself to my feet once more. I didn't know where we were going, but I could only fear the worst, my mind racing to a running car as I was marched down my stairs.. we reached the bottom and I felt myself being turned to the left and towards my kitchen, and the backyard, by my collar, and sighed a bit of relief, relieved they hadn't pointed me towards the front door and drive way..I felt the cold linoleum, and a few more steps and I felt cold glass against my nose..followed by a loud bang..I was so confused and uneasy, not knowing what Sabrina's rage was capable of, or where she was taking me.*
^We marched her through the house, the leash made it easy, but she wasn't exactly being noncompliant..she had no choice in the matter, but after a couple times of trying to dig her heels in, and being pulled forward anyhow, Ally resigned herself to walking where I wanted her too, we approached the back sliding door, and I pressed her against it, banging the glass once to announce myself to the audience, I then sent Leslie and Courtney out ahead of us, they made a very dramatic point of bringing the shush finger to their lips, reminding the audience it wasn't time to reveal themselves yet..I watched through the glass, listening, but miraculously the plan seemed to be working, the girls motioned me forward, and the time had truly come..
"You know I'm so angry with you Ally..but I couldn't never stay mad at you..you're my bestfriend..I just needed to teach you a lesson, and once the girls found out, there was no way I could just be a pushover about this..and you know I'm not a fighter, I don't know what tonight is..but I hope you've learned, and that one day we can be friends again. Play along a little longer and you'll be done..but don't you dare let the girls think I'm going easy on you.."
I whisper suddenly in Ally's here, she jumps at first, but as I speak, I see her shoulders relax a bit, and she seems to gain a bit of hope..exactly what I'd wanted, everything I'd just told her was absolute nonsense to further confuse her and make her think it was almost over, and that we had a chance of friendship or this remaining between us..I had to resist the urge to laugh. I slid open the glass.^
*What she had whispered confused me, but also gave me some sense of relief, I had truly learned my lesson..and Sabrina seemed like she was atleast a little sorry it had to go this far, but like before in bed..somehow I understood why she'd done what she'd done..I just hoped whatever this was, was close to done..her words comforted me, but only slightly so, because the next thing she did was open the sliding door, step forward, and pull me by my collar into the chilly summer night. I felt the cold cement under my feet, and thought I'd maybe heard someone's girly laugh, but I couldn't place a name to the laugh and it was quickly stifled. Sabrina kept pulling, and I kept walking, leaving the cold cement patio, for long, wet grass against my bare feet.
It's hard to explain the feeling, I was clothed, but felt so exposed, being marched like a dog into my own backyard, it was night, I lived on a country road, but yet I felt like I was in the middle of the school cafeteria. It was eerily quiet, the only sounds being my steps in the grass, and the fence creaking from what I assume to be the wind..
Ten paces or so later, the tension on the leash stops pulling, and so I stop in place, my vision trapped in darkness, uncertain of where all the girls are, or what I'm doing in my backyard..the air is cool, an early summer night, I feel goosebumps rising on my skin from the temperature and my unease.. I hoped they would just get on with this wicked punishment, the yard was silent..I could hear branches blowing in the wind above me, and I drew the conclusion I was near the large tree in my backyard. I stood still, shivering, waiting..*
^I had her right where I fuckin wanted her and all the guests had played along so well..my heart was thumping in my chest..my hands shaky as I passed Courtney the leash, quickly stooping to grab the bundle of rope at the base of the tree..
The crowd was in shock at the sight of my hot ex-friend, being dragged by a leash in her pjs, with tape across her mouth. Their shock helped them maintain their silence, gawking with mouths agape, uncertain of what would come next, just like the slut standing before me..
Before she could even realize, I've pulled the rope around the chain of her cuffs, tying one end of the rope to the chain securely, she tries to pull away but it's too late, I test the ropes strength, pulling Ally forward by her cuffed wrists. I put a finger to my lips with my free hand, looking around at the many eyes in the crowd..I motion with 1 finger to wait just moment longer..I take the spooled up rope in my hands, and toss it over a sturdy branch, probably 9 or 10 feet off the ground. The slack falls on the other side branch perfectly, I smile to myself and the crowd..it was time. I pick up the excess, and begin pulling it tight..my vision is achieved as Ally stumbles a step or two forward, the rope and wet grass gave her little ground to resist on, once she was under the branch, I continued pulling the slack of the rope..forcing her cuffed hands from in front of her, higher and higher, until they were past her shoulders, and over her head, deciding I was content when she was half tip toed..I tied the rope to the tree, securing her in place, her arms high over her head, her white T-shirt rising a little to expose her bare stomach. I stepped towards her, getting in her personal space..
I unclip the leash..whispering in her ear..
"You won't be needing this anymore.."
I turn to the audience using my hands to count down from 5 as I reach for the knot of the blindfold..^
*I'm stuck in a very uncomfortable position, my cuffed hands pulled high over my head and forcing me to my toes..I whine into the gag lightly, not really expecting mercy but whining all the same..I smell Sabrina's perfume, it's strong, she's like really close to me..she unclips the leash around my collared neck..whispering to me as she does..I feel her hand reach behind me, tugging on the knot she'd crudely made on the back of my head. She pulls little bits of hair as she undoes it..and I'm eager to have my fifth sense return to me..
Three things happen simultaneously, first, the blindfold falls to the ground, it's night and I can't make out much at first..but within seconds all the backyard lights turn on at once, I let out a horrified squeal at the first sight of the sea of my peers flooding my backyard..that squeal goes unheard as a chorus of countless people yell in harmony.
"SURPRISE!"
There's so many people..I feel a bit of terror recalling what happened in my bedroom and I begin to sweat nervous of an encore..being so trapped in the hands of the girls who hated my guts..seniors from my school and even nearby schools surround me..they line the fences and every chair and table we'd set up earlier was full..I shiver in place, only seconds had passed but I was growing more and more anxious as the crowd laughed at my predicament, some of them drinking. I looked around wide eyes..there were many familiar faces..and others who I'd never met..*
^That initial look of terror on her face was priceless, her eyes darted around the yard and she visually recoiled at the "SUPRISE" shout I had lead, I gave the audience and the slut a moment to take in the scene..letting the laughs subside before meeting eyes with Jane, she was eyeing me..awaiting my signal. I nod at her, then lock eyes with Ally..staring daggers through her, she looked at me with pleading eyes..I could almost hear her begging me telepathically to let her go..and not take this any further..I smile at her wickedly..the party is mostly silent..wondering what was next..my smile turns to a maniacal laugh as her eyes leave mine..a huge bright square has appeared on the back of her house..I continue to laugh to myself as the party and Ally watches the projector start up..
The video starts with me and the girls walking up the stairs..Ally's door comes into view..she's stands in front of me watching the projection..shaking her head in utter disbelief, I watch her body run through a range of emotions, as she realizes what comes next..^
*Oh my fucking God this can't be real..my adrenaline spikes and I shiver, I whine "No, No, No" over in over into my gag, it comes out unintelligible and I resolve to desperately shaking my head, looking to Sabrina to beg for her to stop the video..She's already glaring at me..laughing, she motions two fingers to her eyes, and points them to the projector, telling me to watch a third person view of what I'd experienced earlier that night..
I come into view on the projection, still laying in bed, within seconds Sabrina is on top of me, I look foolish bucking around while she tickles me, the crowd laughs and I hear my own through the backyard speakers..I cringe knowing what comes next..the rest of the girls pile onto me, tickling me everywhere and pinning me to the bed..the crowd roars when my shirt is pulled up, my tits jiggle all over as my underboob is tickled and my face burns red on the video and in the present..The crowd laughs at my demise, the start of the video probably seemed like a humorous prank, a candid video the public wasn't meant to see, a mean but funny playful girls night..
"You bitches!! You told them I was ticklish!?
Sabrina! How could you?! You really got me!" My recorded voice echoes through the night.
Did I really sound like that..?
My hands are suddenly cuffed in the video.
"No sis..now we got you.." Sabrina says coldly, her voice so calm. My face seems confused as I look from Sabrina to my wrists three or four times fast..watching this from the girls' pov was strange, and being forced to watch it with an audience of easily over a 100 people was just cruel..they were going to see everything! :/ *
^I watch with Ally and everyone else, reliving my vengeance and making her relive it as well..
"..You fucked my boyfriend." Past me said on the projected video, there was hurt and pain in my voice, but also cold, raw, anger.
The crowd's laughing turns to silent shock, their mouths agape at my the reveal that my bestfriend of all these years was a backstabbing whore..they watch silent as I grill her..
"..How long has this been going on?! Was this the first time?! Was it planned? Are you still fucking him?! How could you fuckin do this to me?!"
They watch her pathetic attempts of an apology and blaming him..the silence is only broken by a few "Oh shit.."s when I snap back at her
"..Came onto you? Came onto you? More like came into you, you fucking slut!"
The video got to the point where I was going through her phone..I didn't like this part as you can see the heartbreak in my eyes and shaking hands as I read the texts..^
*When the video reached the point of Sabrina going through my phone..and the insult was muttered:
"..YOU FUCKIN BITCH"
The video was briefly paused and dissapeared..instead the projector screen was filled with the screenshots between Adam and I..Countless disgusted glares were sent my way as the audience read the exchange..I read with them, knowing in my heart I was never gonna give him another go..but the words I sent saying otherwise..
The video resumes as my old bestfriend bitch smacks me.. calling me a slut for mentioning another round to Adam..
"..You're going to learn a lesson or two you'll never forget tonight.."
The words blare through the speaker, and I gulp..knowing this is where the video turns for the worse, a couple tears roll down my face and the humilation of being outed for what I'd done so publicly, and being forced to watch an HD video of my own demise..
The video projecting to the back of my house shows me being shoved over Sabrina's lap..I cringe in the present as Sabrina begins to spank me and the crowd begins to giggle and laugh again..
My face contorts in the video as I realize they're filming me being spanked..My pathetic voice can be heard whining..
"..guys..what the fuck?"
The crowd roars as they watch past Sabrina peeling my pajamas down my legs, my ass is already pink when my panties come into view.. she starts striking bare cheek and the slapping sounds grow louder as her hand repeatedly strikes exposed skin..
As if being helplessly spanked wasn't humiliating enough, I was trapped in my own backyard, watching a large projection of the spanking with most of my senior class..I'd never felt so embarrassed and humiliated..my face burned a constant red shade and tears welled in my eyes, I couldn't shake the thought that somehow I did deserve this..
The video continues..*
^I thought I would savor most of the rewatching of the video..and in a way I did..but I was just so eager to get on with the rest of my plan..
I had a shit grin on my face as I watched with the party as Ally begged on screen:
"..Please stop..I'm sorry..Sabrina please!"
Followed by me outing her for liking ddlg and being spanked..
Past me mocked her over the speakers as I wailed on her ass on my lap..
"..You like that? Smile for the camera!"
When the video showed me begin to wedgie her, I looked to Ally to see how she was reacting, her head was low, hardly watching anymore, I stepped closer, raising her chin, making her watch with the rest of us as I cruelly and repeatedly buried the fabric into her ass, baring all of her reddened asscheeks for the camera then, and audience now..
I hold her chin up, making her watch as the video shows the wedgies begin to get more gentle, and as I spank her softly on film, I whisper in her ear outside, the same words I'm speaking in the video:
"You probably are liking this aren't you slut?"^
*I'm forced to watch Sabrina throughly wedgie and spank my ass on video as it's being projected to the siding on my house..She holds my chin, making me watch, whispering in my ear, mocking me in the present and past simultaneously..I watch the way the wedgie made my body react..I see how much more squirmy her actions began to make me..I'm ashamed as I see myself begin to breath heavier and I watch myself get more and more turned on, nearing orgasm as she tugs the panties gently into my clit again and again..Thankfully past me was able to hold it together, enough to think to pinch my way out of it..otherwise the entire senior class would of just seen me cum by my bestfriend's hand..in her lap..being spanked like a disciplined child..then again..the very next thing on screen is her snaking her thumb past my panties and pressing it into my asshole, pulling my hair..making me submit to her..
A moment passes and then my voice can be heard through the speakers, saying the words she demanded me to say..my face burns from the truth in my statements..
"I'm never gonna fuck someone's man again!"
"I'm a slut and I deserved this for fucking my bestfriend's boyfriend! I'm sorry! Please don't show anyone this video!"
The crowd agrees with my truths..laughing at me submitted to her, saying what she wanted me to say, and submitting to the final bit of spanking..oh and of course the irony of me pleading for no one to see what we were all currently watching..
Past Sabrina mocks and belittles past me some more, asking me over and over if I liked my punishment..
Past me denys it..
There's a shot of me being thrown off her lap, and laid in the bed..
Then the most humiliating shot yet comes across the screen..her shoving her stained pant leg into my face, outing me to the girls in the room, and now the many peers seated around my yard, watching her revenge intently..
The video comes to a close with me being held to the bed, attempting to keep my legs together..
Past Sabrina coldy tells the girls to spread me..they oblige her and tears can be seen running down my face, past and present, as Sabrina ruthlessly pulls my hands away from shielding my perversion..The back of my house is filled by the projection of my nearly naked body, helplessly spread..my shirt riding up..and only my soaked panties covering my pussy..the wet material clung to my every fold and you could clearly make out my vagina under the fabric..and how sticky that fabric had gotten..the camera zooms mercilessly..blowing up my wet panties and swollen lips until my panty-molded pussy took up the entirely of the projection..My shame and humilation not being spared in the slighest..the crowd laughed, some even mocking me and calling me dirty names, openly talking about my wet pussy amongst eachother and feet from my currently bound position under the tree..I didn't know how much more humilation I could take! My knees were nearly buckling, my face burned from the constant embarrassment, I had sat for hours cuffed to my bed, wondering what they planned to do with the videos..never in a million years would I of foreseen this..I couldn't even look into any, of the many eyes, and reserved myself to looking down at the lawn as the video finished with Sabrina's words:
"Stop the video."
The screen goes blank. The ground groans in harmony that it ended to soon..I don't think I could ever explain to anyone what that feels like..over 100 people audibly being dissapointed that my body wasn't further exposed or that, my humilation video, which I was forced to watch with them, was somehow not far enough for them..not one of them stood up and said this was messed up..they all just laughed, as did my bestfriend and former friends..countless people laughing at the worst night of my life..and audibly complaining that they didn't get to see my wet pussy as if I wasn't literally standing right there..bound helplessly to a tree in my yard..I shuttered, shivering in place, shame burning inside me, wanting to run far away..but standing where Sabrina had left me..
For a moment the zoomed in shot of my panties remain on screen, but then it goes blank, and it's turned off completely..The second it is, the countless eyes go from the back of my house where the projection was..all to me..standing there in just a T shirt..no bra and my Pajamas..they looked at me like they were hungry for more..they'd all been drinking, young people beginning to get buzzed..*
^The video finally ended, watching it back with the audience was quiet a joy, especially watching how squirmy it made my trapped slut in the middle of the party. But it was time to move on with the rest of the nights activities..^
Let me know what you all think of the newest chapter! Very excited to continue working on this one, great stuff coming in future parts!
(I'm working like 70 hour weeks rn so sorry for the delay)
blueballs wrote: ↑Sun Jan 29, 2023 5:35 am
Personally, I've never felt your stories cross any lines. I see it as just complete sexual fantasy and situations far out of the norm of real life. It's the same thing as when you watch horror movies or fantasy novels. It's not something you would ever do in real life but be able to escape to a fantasy world is not something you should feel guilty about in my opinion.
Everybody has got fucked up kinks when you dig deep enough and I see nothing wrong with a bit of fantasy and your stories are very well written and easy to submerge into them and I love how your stories go into the vengeful sexual side of things as its so different than the stuff you usually read about and it's fucking hot. For me the only line I don't like being crossed really on this board is that I don't like reading about anybody under the age of 18.
But yeah that's my two cents on it, I'd say just keep up the good work your an excellent writer, and its always exciting to see what your gonna do next.
It's not necessarily that I feel guilt, as I don't, especially not for the characters in my stories in that fantasy world, but at times I feel as if the level at which I take things is not totally unique by any means, but has became fewer and further on the board, and my stories always seem to be the ones going all out with the humilations(for example we used after school brawl as a test for if this board would have censor issues)
I like to go for thorough, complete humilation, and the board often is filled with people looking for something more playful, which I'm capable of but doesn't jump at me as often, I just feel like I should atleast warn the uninformed reader that my stories could actually have a bit of violence or legitimate cruelty on a very thorough level, not just mean bully pantsing.
But some of these very thorough extreme humiliations in the past, especially when I was younger and the ages weren't that far off from my own, featured younger characters, and some of those stories, simply dissapeared from the board without me deleting them which made me feel uneasy, and to be honest bad, hundreds or thousands of stories from others through the years, and worse ones than my own of course, but a couple of mine dissapeared, this was awhile back, and I was having login issues, and ultimately thought I was banned; I debated giving up writing because it made me feel so idk strange, I'm still not certain the exact cause; or hell maybe I got really drunk sometime and deleted them myself, but I doubt this very much. I don't feel guilty or bad as everything here is fantasy, but I felt strange when my stories were coming up missing, my first story ever, as well as Sammy's Lesson both going missing, and even after school brawl pushes it on ages+being so extreme on humilation, which was the norm on the boards throughout the years, but is a combo I don't plan on releasing anymore, Things like Sammy's Lesson or After School Brawl, great reviews and praised by the community, and overall good story but leave a sour taste on my mouth reading back the further I mature. The completeness of my humilations is one of my favorite aspects, but the number in the descriptions never meant anything to me, but I worry they could to others.
So knowing myself, my interests, my readers interests, and my expertise will continue to push me to the more sadistic or thorough humilation, I don't want to feature anyone who isn't 18 in such thorough humilations,
Once again, i know myself and I know I'm not a truly bad person and definitely not into younger people, but I don't if the many anon readers are good people, and that eats at me even though I know it shouldn't.
So mostly just going to stick with that rule of thumb unless the story leans into something more playful or lighthearted or mean but not explicitly thorough or sexual
But the warning of violence or sexual nature will likely remain just for the sake of how my stories go and how there's alot of levels of this that people enjoy, and some of them, I know I'm too much for, which is more than fair, but the warning is for them, and the no younger characters in such extreme humilations, is for me and my comfort; once again I know for me, it makes these stories more believable and goes with the fantasy world we've created of new adults or younger embarrassing one another, And many playful stories this makes sense. But it doesn't for the things that come out of my head and end up on paper, and I realize that now more than I did in the past; if someone doesn't think like me and that number actually means something, then I don't want to be a part of that.
Idk I've always had some of this in the back of my mind but stories being deleted just made me question myself and things and I feel the need to speak about it, for whatever reason, I'm a long-winded person, which seems to help my stories atleast
All that aside blueballs you've always hyped me and my stories and I appreciate your longtime support and the way you help to describe what my stories and what you think of them/saying things like they're immersive or hot or whatever it may be, as simple as it is, a "thanks" on here; a compliment, or a small discussion about the work, always gives me more motivation to keep at it and not get lazy.
Really I have atleast 2 additions to ALIK written already in my head, with the key things to happen already there, and a few side things to hit on, and all I need to do is the lines to draw in between these events, this is how most of my stories are written, usually the finale or key aspect of the humilation comes to mind first, I think up some more minor key aspects to hit on before that, and I write the story until I get the events that makeup the brute of the story.
Lifeguards last ride started with the simple thought of forcing someone down the slide nude
A Lesson in Karma started with me imagining up the nowhere near getting to grand Finale and Candace humilation, and then thinking, "Why would someone deserve this" queue full fleshed out albeit neglected series comes to life
For this one I thought up the main brunt of chapter 2, but had to write up the reason and drama behind it, and then largely winged this whole chapter other than knowing I'd have Ally spanked. It's a bit of a chaotic approach, as most of it is impromptu, but when I write it..it just flows and works. Often times I post these without reading much back other than double checking for clear spelling errors or typos. It's like I have all the bullet points of a serious pre writing attempt, but they're just in my head; thankfully I seem to do well with creating characters, personalities, drama, and "reason" for the humilation and don't just slop this together to get to the exciting stuff but it's truly strange to me how easy it all comes out, and how I can suddenly take a perverted idea and make it a fully fleshed story (sound like I'm tooting my own horn alot, not the intention) it comes so easy to me that I think it lends to me taking breaks, because if I wrote daily or even at a steady pace, I'd fill the board, or carry on the same story for far too long into novel lengths which I also don't know is what people want.
No stresses or overly guilty or being weird, just some stuff I feel the need to say/or am welcoming discussion on
Thanks again to you and everyone else for the support
Fun bonus curious question: what was some of your favorite aspects or moments from chapter 1? (Others feel free to answer to)
I cried to my ex for this same reason and she basically said "Hun it's just the scenario you're attracted to, not the ages." Which is the truth, being legitimately attracted to younger people means you need help lol. But don't sweat it buddy, none of us here are attracted to those ages lol.
^The video finally ended, watching it back with the audience was quiet a joy, especially watching how squirmy it made my trapped slut in the middle of the party. But it was time to move on with the rest of the nights activities..
I spoke up over the crowd, they went silent when I spoke, eager for more of my revenge, all eyes were on Ally and I, as I circled her in the middle of her yard.
"Now that you all know why I brought you here..sit back, have some drinks, and enjoy the rest of the party..matter of fact.."
I stroll over to the nearest cooler, pulling out a tall can of White Claw, then grabbing another, the backyard is silent, all eyes on me as a stroll back over the the tree and Ally..I stand in front of her, facing the crowd with my back to her..she hangs under the tree, gagged and helpless.
" ..I'd like to make a cheers and a thank you to you all for being here.."
I open both cans, setting one to the side, and raising the other high in my hand, others begin to raise theres but stop when I speak my next words.
"..but first..I have to pour one out to a dead friendship.."
I spin around to face Ally, smiling wickedly as I raise the White Claw and slowly dump the entire can over her head. The crowd reacts enthusiastically as every single drop washes over her, soaking her hair and dripping down her face. Her white T-shirt turns a pinkish red as gravity takes the liquid further down her body..Enjoying the way it made Ally react, as well as the crowd, I grab the other can, turning it upside down over her as well. Her hair is now a wet sticky mess on top of her head, and her t shirt is more pinkish red than white.^
*I don't know how anything could surprise me after everything I'd been through tonight..but the way she spun around and just dumped the White Claws on me..I almost felt more disrespected than being slapped, mocked, and spanked. The smell was overpowering, the sticky sweet liquid dripped out of my hair and down my shirt, and by the time I blinked it out of my eyes enough to see..everyone was gawking and pointing at me..I followed their fingers, looking down at myself..and saw my tits looking back at me..the soaked sticky T-shirt was now sucked against my breasts, and all the liquid had turned the material see through..not only that..the very cold drink had made my nipples erect, they poked out against the fabric, I looked like a drunk slut at a wet t-shirt contest.. my entire upper half was now covered in a sticky pink liquid and my boobs were being gawked at by every senior within a 20 mile radius..
I squealed into my gag, helpless and frustrated, the material of the shirt clung to my body from the sticky alcoholic beverage, I might as well not be wearing a shirt with how little my chest was covered! I was seeing red both literally and figuratively, my hair still dripping the drink into my eyes, and my anger building from the sudden drink dumping..not to mention my cheeks flushing from my breasts being gawked at..
Haven't I been through enough? *
^I could tell I had her attention now, my ex-bestfriend was staring daggers at me, through her messy wet hair, now dangling in her face in random places, sticking where it rested. Her white T was doing her no favors, I let the crowd relish the sight while strutting to the nearest cooler and dragging it closer, she shivers in the summer breeze, her nipples pressing their way through the fabric.
I drag the ice chest over to Ally, leaving it a few feet from her. I open up the lid, there's a stack of solo cups on top of the ice and several drinks inside, I grab a drink for myself, cracking it open, and chugging it, the crowd let's out a light cheer and I burp aloud. I then stoop down, get two solo cups, and fill them with ice, and approach my bound ex-friend.
"Alright slut, now the real fun begins!"
I say directly to her, but loud enough to rile the crowd.
*I shiver to myself..wondering what kind of twisted shit she could consider "real fun," after everything else she'd already put me through..
Sabrina crouched at my feet, I thought of kicking her, but thought better of it..I didn't want to anger my captor and humilator any more than I already had..she gently set two solo cups on the ground, filled to the brim with ice..then without a word, she unceremoniously ripped my pajamas to my ankles, causing the crowd to roar with laughter, I wanted to just dissapear..my blue panties were now the only thing covering my lower half..and my upper half and tits was on full display because of my see through shirt. My face burned, I could feel their eyes on me, on my nearly naked body..I shuddered, but before I had the chance to process that countless of my peers were seeing me in this state of bound undress..my pants around my ankles in my own yard..Sabrina was already standing in my face, smilingly wickedly..
^It was like a burst of dopamine, peeling her pjs to her ankles in front of so many people, holding such power over her, her modesty, her comfort..to be honest I think this feeling turned me on..but I didn't have time to contemplate what that meant for my sexuality, I had a punishment to carry out..
I stepped right into her face, smilingly wickedly, my solo cups in either hand at my side..
"Buckle up sweetheart..because you're about to have quiet the overwhelming experience..enjoy the ride..beg for mercy when I allow you to..and you better really sell me on it..not that I think that will be all that difficult..I want you to remember something..you fuckin deserve this, and worse..and honestly, I deserve to be the one who teaches you this lesson.."
I whisper in a mocking, hostile tone, only loud enough for Ally to hear.
I then raise my voice loudly, speaking to the crowd instead, but making my captive jump from the change of tone, yelling in her face.
"WITH ALL THE DICKS YOU TAKE, I'M SURE YOUR PUSSY GETS SORE, don't worry..I'll ice it for you! "
With my right hand grasping the solo cup from above, I move my hand forward, gripping the blue fabric of Ally's panties with a free finger, and pull them towards me, away from her body, from as close as i am, I look down her panties and can clearly see her hairless slit, a view no one else was close enough to gaze.. I then take the cup in my left hand, and dump it aggressively down her panties, I then toss the cup to the side, and now with one whole hand free, I take a much firmer grip of the pulled out panties, and dump the entire cup of ice from my right hand..I manage these movements quickly, and the crowd roars in mocking laughter as I let the panties snap back into place at Ally's waist. The cupfuls of ice fill her panties, bulging them outwards as some pieces escape her leg holes and fall to the ground, Her eyes widen at the sensation, she has a crazed look in her eyes as my laughter joins the crowd's, and I stoop to my bag to grab another item..^
*Cold. So fuckin cold. I winced when my panties were pulled away from my body, I watched her look down my panties at my pussy, right in front of me, almost exaggerating the glance, showing me she can do whatever she wants with me right then..and she did, two full cups of ice right down my panties! My knees nearly buckled, locking together from the shock and I squealed loudly into my panty gag..
This was to far! This was evil, I shivered in place, feeling sharp daggers of ice pressing against all my sensitive parts, I was simultaneously feeling a dull cold throb in my entire pelvic region, while feeling it also begin to grow numb, with bursts of sharp icey pain in between, I could do nothing, trapped in place without enough slack to even squirm very far.. it'd only been seconds but it felt much longer, the laughing crowd made my face burn in shame, and I wished I could transfer that heat to my pelvic region..I squirmed around helplessly, my squirms knocking excess ice out a little here and there..I had lost focus of Sabrina and what she was doing, even the crowd, besides their audible laughing, I stared at the grass and suffered internally, I'd of done anything in that moment to help rid myself of this torment and unfreeze my pussy..I even wished to myself that she would just pull my panties down..yeah I'd be bared naked aside from my see through shirt, but the two cupfuls of ice wouldn't be rested against my poor pussy..do you have any idea how bad something has to be that you fuckin wish for your panties to be pulled down in front of countless people? While your hands are tied high over head? If that's what it took I didn't care..
The sharp feelings subsided to a dull numb achey feeling, which was quiet unpleasant. I'd been so disconnected in internal frozen suffering, squealing over and over into my gag while my peers laughed at me..that I hadn't seen Sabrina's next move, and was caught off guard when she began cutting my t shirt down the middle, starting at my waist, I bucked around a little, whining and temporarily forgetting about how cold my pussy was, but it was useless, within second she had my shirt in two pieces, open with my breasts bared, even though they'd been clearly visible through the shirt, this power she had over me, and the humilation of being forcibly bared made it all the worse, I shivered and shuttered, squirming in place like an idiot, desperately wanting to escape, a mixture of embarrassment and icey panties causing my body to constantly shiver and fidget. A few more seconds and snips of her scissors..and my shirt is no more, I'm naked from the waist up, my ice filled panties were my only thing keeping me from being buck naked in the open air, in front of every senior in our county..*
^Baring her tits brought another dose of dopamine, my revenge was even more satisfying than I'd fantasized it to be, it just felt so fuckin good to punish this slut for what she'd done to me..
I nodded at my girl holding the tension on the rope, and the tension was loosened enough for Ally to squirm around in a small circle, rather than helplessly in place..she continously whines into her gag, but if she thought this was bad, she really wasn't ready for what I did next..
I dig through my bag and pull out two items, turning to show them to the crowd, and keeping them a surprise for Ally..there's several nervous giggles, and even a few people with their hands over their mouths, it was about to get alot worse for her, but she was a stupid slut that deserved it, and I didn't feel bad in the slightest, especially because the crowd was totally on board, not a soul speaking up for her, they'd seen the evidence, they knew what she'd done to me, and how close we were, and they let me extract my revenge, watching in shock and awe as I turned back to Ally, allowing her to see the items in hand, her eyes grew wider and more scared, this fueled my desire for revenge and domination of my ex friend even more, I wanted her to suffer, not only did it feel good, but it was kinda getting me wet, she was so pitiful..I set the bottle on the grass, and squeezed the contents of the tube in my right hand with my left. She watched my hands as I did this. I drop the tube on the ground..stepping towards Ally as she tries to recoil away, failing to stumble more than a step or two backwards before the slack of the rope stops her retreat. ^
*Icyhot?! What the fuck?! I stumbled backwards as she tossed the tube to the ground, descending upon me, when the rope stopped my retreat, she was already upon me..she used her left hand to take a scoop of the cream out of her right palm, and smeared it on my left nipple, giving it a light twist to ensure she had properly coated my areola. She then repeated this with my other nipple..before it could even begin to take effect, she roughly grabbed the small of my back with her left hand, pulling me towards her, looking me in the eyes from inches away, she smiles, her eyes glowing with satisfaction, and plunged her right hand into my panties, with the remaining Icyhot still on her palms..Oh fuck!
"NOOO!" I squeal, but it comes out as unintelligible mmphs, as she snakes her fingers and palms, around and under the cup falls of ice, until she's made direct contact with my slit.. she then reaches even further down, until my entire sex lay below her hand, and my pussy and asshole were within millimeters of her fingers.. She then grabs me..a full handed grip on my pussy, the feeling is sensual, she grabbed it like she owned it and it was hers..I'd had doms do this before..she held her hand their momentarily, then PRESSED and SMEARED the cream as she peeled her hand up and out of my panties..
When her hand had come back into view, it was clean, not a drop of the cream left on it..she showed the crowd this as well, and I shuttered in anticipation, my nips already beginning to warm up uncomfortably..
Then it hit me, like no other feeling I've felt before, the Icyhot was warming up quickly, going from warm, to hot, to almost searing, it felt like it was burning right through my body, a small fireball eating its way from my pussy to my stomach..it felt like I was standing buck naked directly over a fire. I'd never experienced such pain and I don't want to ever again. The fire building down there, mixed with the dull ache from the ice, made this very strange, very uncomfortable literally IcyHot feeling down there! I could do nothing but whine and squeal and stumble around squirm in my binds as the sensation continued in my panties..it'd only been seconds, but I didn't know how long I could endure this. The crowd found my suffering hilarious, laughing at Sabrina's cream less hand and my building reaction to the Icyhot on my sensitive nipples and pussy..I was in a living hell, a nightmare, and laughter was the soundtrack.*
^I knew she was suffering, and I didn't care, it wouldn't kill her, and before long I'd wash it away, her pussy deserved the punishment as much as she herself did, or atleast that was my twisted reasoning at the time, keep in mind I'm still in crazy mode, punishing my ex bestfriend for fucking my boyfriend, with countless witnesses, I wasn't very sane in the moment and I admit honestly, that the icyhot might of been one step to far, she really seemed to be having extreme discomfort..but at the time I didn't care in the slighest..I wanted her to dance for me, I wanted her to squirm harder, to whine louder. She was paying no attention to me, caught up in her own world of frozen hell. When I scooped the powder off the ground, and gave her one last layer of discomfort. I stoop down, grabbing the labeled bottle at my feet. I read it's label, no ingredients listed, simply stated on the front:
ITCHING POWDER, wash with water, avoid contact with eyes, and inhalation.
Without a word if warning or ceremony to Ally or the crowd, I start dumping the powder on her squirming body, she can do nothing to stop me as I dump generous amounts on her tits, arms, legs, belly, dusting out her entire body, and draining the contents of the bottle quickly..the stuff is pretty fast acting, and she immediately starts bucking around intensely, her movements aggressive, she pulls down, trying to free her bound wrists, but fails, her body continues to convulse, her curvy figure jiggling aggressively as she stumbles and jerks around without rhyme or reason..
With a little left in the bottle, I sneak behind her, being careful not to get hit by her thrashing body, and grab the waistband of her panties from behind, her bound wrists are pulled tighter momentarily limiting her thrashing, I pull the panties away from her ass, and dump the remains of the bottle into the back of her panties, turning it upside down and shaking every last drop, she shivers, moving around as much as the tighter binds allowed, whining endlessly as her entire body was itchy, and she couldn't even attempt to relief the itch. I wedge the powdered panties up her asscrack, hard, 3 times fast, then leave them buried in her asshole. This effectively presses the remaining ice further against her, and I step back, nodding once more for her to have some more slack. I had achieved all of this within a minute, and I watched with the crowd for 5ish minutes, letting her suffer, and squirm and jiggle for the crowd, I'd give her some relief soon enough, I relished this moment, chugging another drink and watching with the crowd. They laughed and watched intently, some silenced by my acts, struggling to process that this was really happening in front of their eyes, no one objected, we just laughed and watched her suffer, stumbling around helplessly trying to relief herself, but finding nothing to scratch her body against. She began high stepping in what I can only assume was an attempt to itch her asscrack.. which we all found hilarious..^
*Eternity, hours, hours they all laughed, and watched me, stumbling around with the little slack they gave me on my bound wrists, my pussy continued to freeze/burn, but I hardly noticed with how desperately I needed to claw every inch of my body..it was bad enough as it was..but when she'd wedged the powder up my ass..oh my fuckin god! The itch almost felt like things crawling on me, I felt it everywhere, but how deep she'd left my panties in my ass..it felt like things were crawling in my butthole! I could hardly take it, and after thrashing around and being unable to itch anywhere, I realized that high stepping in place, caused my asscheeks to rub together enough to itch my crack, which felt so good after not having any relief in hours. It didn't even stop the itching, but it did something..so I continued to do it, not caring how pathetic I looked to the crowd or Sabrina..The icyhot/ice pressed against my slit peaked in temperature, not getting any hotter thankfully, but not cooling either..you'd think the ice would have helped even a little but it didn't..I continued highstepping, looking at the ground, shameful tears in my face, I don't know if anyone has ever been as humiliated as I was in that moment or throughout that night..*
^God what a thrill, I'm no sadist but watching that slut helplessly endure my twisted idea of torture in front of all these people, nearly naked..it was even better feeling than I thought it'd be when I planned it. Her endless squirming, jiggling, and whining, was both hilarious and unintentionally very sexy, I'd made the slut unintelligibly dance for the past 5 minutes in just her panties in front of countless guys and girls from our school and others! I'd won, my plan was going better than I could have intended..but I wasn't finished..
I stepped up to the highstepping jet black haired slut, her large tits flopping around as she continued itching her crack with her steps. I figured 5 minutes was enough of this, but she would remember who'd she'd wronged. I nod to Courtney and she heads away to retrieve the water hose, I speak to Ally as I wait.
"Hold still."
The crowd laughs at my request.
Ally continues highstepping and squirming around in general, desperate to relief her body of these sensations, but somewhat in her own world, she didn't hear me.
"If you want me to rinse it off you're gonna have to hold still.." I say a bit louder.
Now I have her attention.
She stops highstepping but continues squirming about.^
*"Hold still?" Fucking hold still was she crazy? I willed everything in my body to stop moving about from the itchy feeling, and still trembled in place. Courtney hands Sabrina my water hose, the same one we'd had in my backyard for a few years now. I eye it, desperate for relief from this itchy substance, and my crotch throbbing from the burning icyhot and the cupfuls of ice in my panties. Sabrina took her time, fidgeting with the hose for a moment, no water was coming out of it yet, then she spoke to me, the crowd was silent, the only other noises were the crickets in the background.
"Do you think you've learned your lesson yet? You want me to rinse you off?"
I nodded eagerly, still fidgeting in place helplessly.
"Hm..why don't you ask nicely? And hold the fuck still.."
She suddenly rips the tape off my mouth, and pulls my panties from earlier out..the crowd recognizes them from the video and finds this amusing..I'm taken off guard and for a moment silent, before instincts take over and I start pleading for her to rinse me off..
"Please Sabrina get it off, all of it, I learned my lesson, I'm sorry I fucked him!"
I keep trembling, the adrenaline surging through me and the constant itch and icyhot crotch driving me mad.
"Hm..ask me once more, really make it believable, and hold still when you do it.."
Sabrina says twiddling the hose right in my face.
I will everything inside me and lock my body in place and speak again, my voice somewhat hoarse from being gagged so long.
"Please wash me off Sabrina, I'm sorry, and I've learned my lesson."*
^I have to give her mercy before the crowd turns from amused to concerned. And she had finally managed to hold still, atleast long enough to request the rinse..so I nod to Courtney once more and the water begins to flow from the hose, Ally sighs in relief, a comfort I'd rather her not have, but this stage wasn't meant to be more than a few minutes as the crowd may grow uneasy.
Without another word I stick my thumb over the edge of the hose, and start hosing off the nearly naked slut in her backyard. She squeals aloud as I blast her hair and face first, then move onto her body, she both recoils from the chilly water, and leans towards it, spinning a bit to make sure every inch of her body gets relief from the itching powder..the powder is made for water to be the antidote and she is cleaned immediately, she basically moans aloud from the relief, I rinse her everywhere, even making sure to give extra attention to her icyhot coated nipples, you've never belief a girl would be so happy to be hosed off naked in her own yard in front of so many people, but given the right circumstances..I skip her panty clad front, the mound of ice had shrank significantly by this point, nearly melted. I also leave her wedgied ass alone, temporarily leaving it to itch, and set the hose down, nodding for Courtney to turn off the water again, and retrieving the last item from my bag, a pistol grip hose attachment..bought for this very moment, it had many settings but I'll get into that in just a moment. The water was off, and Ally was getting fussy that her ass and pussy wasn't getting the relief from the hose yet. The crowd remained mostly silent, in awe at the sight of this popular girl so throughly humiliated by what was once her bestfriend. I screwed the attachment on as she began to whine aloud, nodding to Courtney to turn it on for the final time once it was attached, the attachment held the pressure waiting for me to pull the trigger..:^
*"Are you gonna get this stuff off my pussy and out of my asscrack..? It burns and itches.." I plea..
I then feel the pressure on my wrists release even more, and I lower them naturally as the pressure is released.
Sabrina then commands me to turn around, I obey her immediately, she tells me to bend over..
My shame burns deep, cooperating with my humilation felt even worse somehow, but my crack itched so badly, an itchy, crawly feeling that had been buried deep into my crack when she'd powdered my panties and wedged them into me..they were still up there..the feeling was intensified by the rest of my body being reliefed..I had no choice but to do as she asked..I bent at the hips, the extra slack I'd been given on my ropes allowed me to bend my body into an "r" but then more was given and I was told to bend even further..I'd already came this far so I brought my bound hands to the grass, grimacing ass I did.. my ass fully presented to the crowd behind me..my panties covering nothing but my holes themselves..leaving little to imagination I'm sure..
I had the instinct to beg to be let go, but after everything tonight, I had a feeling saying the wrong thing to Sabrina would just anger her more, so I mostly stayed silent, hinged at the waist, my hands on the grass, awaiting my ass to be rinsed of this awful itchy feeling..
After a few seconds without being sprayed with the cold water again..I spoke..
"I'm uh ready.."*
^"oh sorry, I was distracted by the view.." I say, smacking Ally's ass a couple times, making her jump and her wedgied booty jiggle..
Her current position was comical, bent over pleading for me to rinse her asscrack..but how could I hit a target I couldn't see?
Without warning, I grip Ally's waistband from behind, yanking the blue panties out of her asscrack, and down her legs rapidly. She cringes and her body grows tense..but she holds her position..the remaining ice from when I dumped the cups in her crotch, spills on the grass, and I pull her last remaining item of clothing off of her feet, chucking it behind me to the crowd, where there's a small scuffle and a guy and girl pull from either side trying to get the souvenir, the panties rip, and they each get half of the remaining shreds. She's now butt naked, and her bent in a position that fully presents not only her asshole, but her entire pussy as well, the icyhot cream can still be seen from where I smeared it against her lips, but the melting ice had diluted it for sure. She quivered in place, silent, awaiting the last of her rinse..naked as the day she was born, I aimed the pistol attachment, turning a couple of the dials..^
*Sabrina then told me to tell her exactly what I wanted..I shamefully obliged her, fully aware and mortified to know that there was now absolutely nothing I could do, and that I was now 100% exposed to so many people, I hoped the relief would be worth the humilation as I pleaded for her to "rinse this stuff off my ass and pussy please!" Before going obediently silent again..
She didn't say anything, I just finally felt a burst of water hit me in the left asscheek, it made me jump, but the relief from the itch was magical..the water felt colder though..? And the pressure was different..it kinda felt nice but not as good as the itch going away..the pulsating water massaged it's way across and down my left cheek, then my right, then I felt it hit the top of my crack..and it kinda gave me chills, she moved the pressure down slowly, until it was nearing my itchy asshole, I couldn't help but let out silent moans from the relief and the pulsating pressure hitting my sensitive hole..then the pressure suddenly changed and a aggressive burst of water hit my exposed asshole, it wasn't painful but it was a shock compared to the comforting pulsating feeling before, it nearly made me stand back up, before I bent back over, taking the extra pressure for a moment longer before it changed again..to a more gentle spray, nothing quiet made it inside me..thank God! As a forced enema would be the grossest and most humiliating thing ever! The water then suddenly stopped, and I remained bent, waiting for my irritated pussy to be cleaned..
I can't see the crowd from my current position, but I can feel them staring at my most private regions, being power washed..another powerful jet hits me again, a different one..this time striking my asscheeks, its not painful, but definitely gives a bit of discomfort as the pressure unwillingly makes my cheeks bounce around and jiggle, the crowd laughs. Sabrina seems fueled by this, and changes the setting on the water once more, warming it somehow and setting it back to a pulsating, but powerful Jetstream, she then commands me to twerk..
I'm a broken woman at this point apparently because I listen to exactly what she says, not even bothering to protest, I might as well of still been gagged. And looking back, my silence is probably what let the crowd continue to spectate and never speak up as to what happened next..
My only comfort is the twerking was allowing me to finally get some of the icyhot off my pussy..*
^Ally bounces her asscheeks as I blast her with the hose, gifting her with warmer and warmer water for her obedience. I hadn't really planned for this, but the crowd seemed to be enjoying the forced dance, this one much more coordinated and practiced than the itchy uncoordinated spasms from earlier.
I drop the hose, ending the Jetstream, but Ally keeps twerking obediently, until I'm behind her and smack her ass, making her jump, I grab her by her hip, and wet hair pulling her from her bent position and back to her feet, spinning her around in the process.
She stands, naked and vulnerable, no doubt hoping this is finally the end, her shoulders hunch in defeat, her body soaking wet, thankfully for her it was a warm summer night and she only shivered a little, which could just as easily been from the humilation..
Much to her disappointment, I nod to Leslie, nodding for her to change the ropes tension once more, and Ally's eyes grow wide as her hands inch towards the sky again, until she's only just, flat footed..the tension locks as Leslie ties the slack to the tree again, Ally's hands are raised high, and she faces a sea of eyes staring back at her soaking wet naked body, her red and irritated pussy, and her erect nipples. She never cries, surprisingly, or protests, but a concerned look crosses her face as she is trapped back into place.
I gather another rope, and crouch at her feet, it's already prepared with a knot..she kicks at me when I grab her ankle, but I pull the knot tight, and the rope is cinched to her ankle..
Another nod, and her ankle and leg begins being dragged vertically by the rope as well..she's always been a flexible girl..when the pulling stops and the tension is locked, Ally is butt naked, her hands bound high over her head, her legs helplessly spread wide open, her toes pointing to the sky, and standing on one leg..the tension on the ropes at her wrists and one ankle holds her steady..awaiting the completion of her humilation...
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