Ivana Katerova was a 25-year old Ukrainian girl who recently moved to the UK amid the fall-out from her country’s ongoing military conflict with Russia.
Ivana wasn’t a refugee as such, she had been planning to move to the UK for some time. She was a part-time model, had a degree in Fashion Design from a Ukrainian university and wanted to work in the fashion industry in the UK, where there were a lot more opportunities than in her native country.
The war with Russia just expedited her expatriation, and she was now living in a suburb of Birmingham, in the midlands. Her ultimate aim was to get a job in London and move there, but for the time being she was working in hospitality in central Birmingham while job hunting.
Ivana was stunning. She stood at 5’10” and had an amazing figure. She loved the gym, and had a curvy and toned physique, with large natural DD breasts, incredible 42-inch legs and peach of a bum.
One Autumn day, Ivana drove down to the large park near where she lived, which was a huge green area with fields and streams. It was a Tuesday morning, around 11am, and the weather was warm. Ivana was wearing a cute, flowing light blue skirt which came down to halfway down her thighs, a white t-shirt, a pink zip-down hoodie and matching pink adidas trainers.
Ivana parked up and walked about 10 mins into the park, and then sat down and started to do a job application on her MacBook. She was posted up near a wooded area, and the park was very quiet at this time on a weekday. Ivana then lay on her front and stopped working on her laptop for a bit to listen to some music.
While Ivana was laying on her front, her mind just drifting in and out of the lyrics of the Taylor Swift song that was playing in her headphones, she felt a jolt of shock as her skirt was lifted and the material thrown forwards onto her lower back, exposing her bum and the white panties she was wearing. She then felt a hand slap her bum.
She turned in shock, while simultaneously reaching down to pull her skirt back down over her bum. As she looked, up she saw a sneering, chavy-looking young boy, aged around 10, wearing a cheap tracksuit.
‘Oh my God!’ she exclaimed in disgust. She looked around to see if there were any witnesses to this boy’s perverted act, but there was no one in sight.
The boy laughed and started walking off, cool as a cucumber.
Enraged, Ivana grabbed her bag, stuffed her Mac and her headphones into it quickly and stood up. She then instinctively started to chase after the young boy, determined to slap him.
Ivana was very athletic, had a sporty background, had taken self-defence classes previously and was certainly not physically intimidated by this scrawny young boy. When the boy saw Ivana tearing after him, he panicked slightly and ran into the nearby wooded area.
It didn’t take Ivana long to chase him down with those long, luscious legs motoring at full throttle. The boy hit the ground and rolled after Ivana tripped him up from behind. Ivana dropped her bag off her shoulder and walked over to the boy as he clambered back to his feet. Ivana then delivered a hard slap to his face.
‘Don’t ever fucking do anything like that to a woman again!’ she shouted at him.
‘I’m sorry, I’m sorry’ the boy whimpered.
‘Stupid boy!’ she said.
As Ivana then started to walk back out in the direction of where she'd run from, she realised she’d left her bag on the floor and turned to get it. It was no longer on the ground, instead it was now being held by the boy.
The boy then sprinted with the bag further into the wooded area. Ivana gave chase once more. This time however, the boy ran right up to a large fast-flowing stream that ran through this part of the park. Ivana ground to a halt when she saw the boy dangle her bag, with so many valuable items, over the water.
Her laptop, phone, wallet, car keys and house keys were all in there. The amount of life admin it would create if that bag was dropped in the stream was huge.
‘Don’t you dare!’ she shouted.
‘Step back, or I’ll throw all your shit in the river’ he ordered.
Ivana refused to step back but she didn’t move any closer.
‘I’m serious, step back away from me, or I’ll drop it in. Then you’ll be fucked. I can see a nice laptop in there, your phone, keys, the lot. Now step back and do as you're told or I’ll throw all this shit in the river and you’re fucked’.
Ivana knew that losing all those items would create untold amounts of hassle and difficulty, so she obeyed and took a few steps back.
‘Good dog’ the boy said mockingly.
Ivana felt a sense of revulsion at being labelled a dog by this disgusting little boy.
She then looked back to see if anyone was around to help. They were in a very secluded area, and there was no one in sight. Ivana had an idea, she’d simply run back to area where she was initially sitting and surely someone would turn up. She started to dart back in that direction when the kid yelled, ‘If you leave ima just ditch all this shit in the river right now and run out through the woods’ he said pointing into the trees.
‘I know this place inside out, I can easily scarper out of this place through the woods. By the time you’ve found someone to help you, all your stuff will be gone in the river and I’ll be long gone. So, if you don’t want me to throw all this shit in there, you better not leave.’
Ivana thought for a second and decided better against leaving to find another adult.
‘Just give me my bag you dickhead’, she barked.
‘Just give me my bag you dickhead’ the kid mimicked in Ivana’s accent. ‘Where the fuck you from anyway?’ he asked.
‘I’m not answering your questions, you stupid fuck!’ she said defiantly.
The boy then coolly reached into Ivana’s bag, withdrew a bottle of perfume and casually tossed it into the stream.
‘Fuck!’ she exclaimed starting to move towards the kid.
‘Stop!’ he said lowering the bag closer to the water.
Ivana didn’t know where this was heading but she figured if she delayed things, then someone might hear the commotion and turn up. So she stopped and waited for the boy’s next move.
‘I asked you a question, where are you from bitch?’
‘Ukraine’ she said quietly.
‘Ooooh, so you’re the ones getting battered by Russia’ he said laughing.
‘We’re winning the war you dumb fuck!’ Ivana blasted back.
‘That’s not what I heard. I heard loads of you are being bombed and that Ukraine is about to waive the white flag’ he said mockingly.
‘That will never happen’ Ivana hissed.
‘Oh really? Well maybe Ukraine won’t surrender to Russia, but you’re gonna surrender to me!’ the kid said boldly.
‘I noticed when I lifted your skirt and slapped your sexy arse, that you’re wearing white panties. Well, if you want your stuff back, I want you to take off your panties and waive them in the air! You’re gonna waive the white panties!’ he said.
Ivana was stunned. What the hell kind of demand was that?!
‘You’re fucking insane’ she said. ‘And also a little creep!’
‘Yep’ the kid said, smirking.
Ivana couldn’t bear the idea of removing her panties in front of this kid, let alone waive them in the air in a symbolic surrender! But also if the kid chucked all her valuables into the water, it would cause her huge amounts of hassle and expense.
‘Do it bitch!’ the kid demanded.
Ivana stood silently for a few seconds, before coming to her senses. There was no way she would humiliate herself like that. Fuck it, she could always get a locksmith to let her back into her flat, get her spare car keys, and buy a new laptop and phone.
‘Fuck you!’ Ivana said defiantly. ‘I’m not ever going to do that! Throw all that stuff in the river you creep!’
As Ivana said these words, she heard footsteps approaching them. A guy was walking in their direction through the trees. He was young, thin, white, looked about 16 and was wearing a dark hoodie, combats and had a pouch over his shoulder. He was also carrying a heavy-looking piece of broken tree branch.
‘You need some help, miss’ he said.
‘Yes please!’ Ivana pleaded. ‘This boy has stolen my bag’
The older boy walked up to Ivana and said, ‘I know this kid, he’s a proper little cunt, let me sort him out for you’
‘Thank you!’ Ivana said, ‘That bag contains so many important items to me’.
The younger boy now looked scared and said, ‘Easy mate, no need to get involved to help this Ukrainian bitch’
‘Shut up’ the older boy said, ‘you’re gonna get it now!’
Ivana was loving this turning of the tables and looked at the kid holding her bag. ‘Give me my bag now and I’ll ask him not to beat the shit out of you!’
Just as Ivana said those words, there was a thud as the older boy cracked Ivana in the back of the neck with the branch.
‘Agghhh’, Ivana hit the ground, not even seeing it coming. She was clutching the back of her neck in pain.
‘Stupid Ukrainian bitch’ the older boy said, and delivered another blow, this time to the back of Ivana’s head, rendering her defenceless.
What Ivana hadn’t realised was that this older boy was a 16-year-old drug dealer and gang member, named Josh Moxley. The younger boy was Max Dickenson, a young member of the same gang.
‘Time to go to work on this sexy bitch’, Josh said ominously, opening his pouch and removing a pair of black cable-ties and some duct tape.
Ivana was still conscious and was stirring, but was too weak to defend herself as Josh knelt down and forcefully applied a strip of duct tape over her mouth.
She attempted to use her hands to rip the tape off her mouth, but Josh delivered a knee to the side of Ivana’s neck and grabbed her hands, pulling them behind her back. He then used the cable-ties to securely fasten Ivana’s hands behind her back.
‘Waheyy, there we go’ Josh said rubbing Ivana’s bound hands and then standing up to admire the sight of the captured Ukrainian stunner.
‘What you gonna do with her?’, Max asked.
‘I’m gonna fuck her!’ Josh proclaimed. ‘She’s fucking insanely hot!’
Ivana was groggy from the blows she’d received, but she heard those words and they sent ice-cold terror pulsing through her veins.
She looked desperately at the younger boy, Max, trying to beg for help, but couldn’t muster anything more than sounds of muffled panic through the duct tape.
‘I’ll need around 5-10 minutes with her’ Josh said, make sure you warn me if you hear anyone coming.
‘Ok boss’ Max said.
Max then watched on as Josh dragged Ivana by her feet, still lying front down, into the trees a few metres away. Ivana’s eyes, sparkling with fear, locked with Max’s as she was dragged away to her fate. As much as Ivana hated the younger boy, she was desperate for his help. But deep down she knew that her fate was sealed.
As Ivana felt herself being dragged by her feet into the dark trees by the 16-year boy, she felt a searing sense of humiliation and powerlessness. A tall, glamorous, athletic 25-year old woman, completely overpowered and rendered helpless by this skinny boy.
Once he had her safely out of sight, Josh reached back into his pouch and took out a knife. He then knelt down next to Ivana, who was still laying front down, and held the weapon in her eye line. He then menacingly tapped the blade against her cheek.
‘Meet the chopper’, he said. ‘You struggle, and I’ll stab you up right here’.
Ivana was almost paralysed with fear and tears were now tricking down her beautiful cheeks.
‘Now meet my other chopper’, Josh said with a smirk, pulling down his trousers and boxers to reveal his semi-erect penis.
Ivana was horrified by the sight and darted her eyes away. Josh then took out a condom and strapped himself up for what he knew would be a thrilling ride on this Eastern European rollercoaster.
Josh walked around behind Ivana and lifted her skirt up, revealing her bum. He then grabbed the sides of her panties and pulled them down her legs, over her shoes, and tossed them to the side. Ivana’s bare legs and naked bum looked incredible. Josh’s cock was now fully hard.
Josh mockingly pressed the tip of his knife into Ivana’s right bum cheek, which sent a bolt of fear through her body.
‘This is a cake I’d love to cut into pieces’ he said sadistically.
Josh then lay on top of his prey and used his left hand to move Ivana’s cable-tied hands out of the way of his entry into her private parts. He used his right hand to hold the knife against the back of Ivana’s neck, to keep her subdued.
Josh then pushed his erect his penis into Ivana’s vagina from behind as he lay on top of her. Ivana felt sensations she’d never felt before. A hot, helpless feeling washing over her entire body. Her mind frazzled. Tears streaming down her face.
After a few minutes, the 16-year old youth said, ‘Turn over’.
Ivana was too frazzled mentally to even process the order. Josh then moved onto his knees and turned Ivana onto her back. He then climbed back on top of the beautiful woman, in between her legs, and held the blade of the knife against her throat as he pushed his penis into her vagina once again.
He had sex with Ivana for a few more minutes before he ejaculated into the condom. Just after he climaxed, he whispered into Ivana’s ear, ‘Putin hasn’t conquered Ukraine yet, but I just conquered your arse! That’s what you call a hostile takeover!’.
Max was standing guard nearby and eventually saw Josh emerge from the trees where he’d just raped the stunning Ivana.
‘Let’s get the fuck out of here!’ Josh said to his younger affiliate. The two males quietly but rapidly left the park through the trees.
Ivana lay exposed on the cold, dirty ground, hands still tied behind her back and mouth still taped shut, wondering how this could have possibly happened.
Eventually Ivana clambered out, headed into the main park and found help. The police were called, officers and forensic investigators came in droves. The incident made television news. However, despite the police’s best efforts, their exhaustive investigation never traced the culprits. The police knew it was two gang members, but the gangland code of silence halted every lead they could muster.
Ivana Katerova had refused to waive her white panties, but she’d certainly lost the war.
Ivana – Ukranian loses the War (Warning: Rape)
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Hi all - been a while since I've posted on here.
I whipped this story up recently. I wrote it pretty quickly but I hope you enjoy.
I whipped this story up recently. I wrote it pretty quickly but I hope you enjoy.
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Re: Ivana – Ukranian loses the War (Warning: Rape)
I appreciate the effort put into the story but personally I find it in rather poor taste as there are real people dying, being raped and starved to death in a real war in that very country at the time of your post. It is hard to see the eroticism of your story whose aim is to provide jack-off material at the expense of real people's suffering regardless of your viewpoint on the Ukrainian war. I have no issue with rape or force in a story but rather the close tie to a very real war and for me at least that kills any enjoyment I might have gotten from the story for the sake of eroticism and yes, I realize that your characters are fictional but I can't help being reminded of the suffering being endured on both sides of this conflict and that makes it very hard to find pleasure in your work. I post this in case such feedback might help in your writing.
Perhaps if the story was set in a different fictional country set in a time not tied to current events I might feel differently.
You are free to write what you wish, of course, but I fear your story might not be as well received as it could have been.
Perhaps if the story was set in a different fictional country set in a time not tied to current events I might feel differently.
You are free to write what you wish, of course, but I fear your story might not be as well received as it could have been.
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I'm afraid the story lost me with the title warning.
I just don't think rape is erotic at all; it's the very opposite.
As for making the victim Ukrainian, well that part has been dealt with in another post
I just don't think rape is erotic at all; it's the very opposite.
As for making the victim Ukrainian, well that part has been dealt with in another post
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Thanks for the feedback.Hooked6 wrote: ↑Sat Dec 03, 2022 12:29 pm I appreciate the effort put into the story but personally I find it in rather poor taste as there are real people dying, being raped and starved to death in a real war in that very country at the time of your post. It is hard to see the eroticism of your story whose aim is to provide jack-off material at the expense of real people's suffering regardless of your viewpoint on the Ukrainian war. I have no issue with rape or force in a story but rather the close tie to a very real war and for me at least that kills any enjoyment I might have gotten from the story for the sake of eroticism and yes, I realize that your characters are fictional but I can't help being reminded of the suffering being endured on both sides of this conflict and that makes it very hard to find pleasure in your work. I post this in case such feedback might help in your writing.
Perhaps if the story was set in a different fictional country set in a time not tied to current events I might feel differently.
You are free to write what you wish, of course, but I fear your story might not be as well received as it could have been.
I understand what you mean about the Ukraine references.
Initially I wasn't even thinking of making her Ukrainian tbh, but I just had this image of her being forced to waive her panties, and then the 'white flag' concept and Ukraine thing just flowed from there. I think in my mind, the Ukraine references were just tongue in cheek, rather than overtly mocking the real life issues going on there.
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Thanks for the comment.
Fair enough, I know rape is a concept some people don't like writing/reading about.
Initially when I was drawing up the story, I was just going to have the girl hand over her panties to the kid to save her possessions. But then that just felt forced because in real life I can't imagine a woman doing that. So then I thought of her being knocked down and having her hands tied etc. by a second antagonist.
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