Great story as always Nikolai, I like the stealing phone and changing password idea, and the revenge was fun.
3 points though:
-I don't understand what you mean by the title? Some context?
-The story repeats from about 3/4 down, mistaken copy paste of some kind (was disappointed there wasn't as much story left as I thought haha)
-The actual stripping and after felt a little rushed.
Almost lost my first story, something else in the works.
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Re: Almost lost my first story, something else in the works.
Is it just me or has this story disappeared?
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Re: Almost lost my first story, something else in the works.
This is the "make up your own story" story board.
Since you come up with story yourself, you won't be disappointed in the ending.
Since you come up with story yourself, you won't be disappointed in the ending.
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