The Ten Commandments of Michelle O’Dell the Irish Girl. Part Un (Part huit now available)

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Andrew sat at his desk starring out of the window. It was raining outside, all dark and gloomy looking. Andrew was 5 foot 10 inches tall Caucasian with dark brown hair. He was quite skinny and fairly plain looking. He wasn’t very popular and a bit of a nerd.

James came up to him. James was more robust of a character but quite short and stocky build. He was a friend of Andrew’s.

“Hey Andrew, who would you fancy going on a date with?” He asked.

Andrew was brought abruptly out of his day dream.
“Hey James, what do you mean? In school?” Replied Andrew.

“Yeah, if you could pick any girl.” Said James.

“Well, clearly, I’d pick the hottest girl in our year, but that’s never going to happen is it.” Andrew said.

“Yeah, I guess, unless..” said James.

“Unless what?” Andrew asked.

“Never mind forget what I said.” James replied.

“Come on James don’t leave your sentence hanging.” Said Andrew.

“Fine!! Bribe or blackmail them.” Said James.

Andrew thought for a moment.

“It’s a silly idea. Forget I said anything.” Said James.

“No wait, I’ve an idea that just might work.”

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Meanwhile in another part of the school building, in a boring English Lesson, Sat Amy, Laura, Zoe, and Michelle. The Four girls sat at the back, hidden from the view of the teacher. Amy was the shortest, at 5-foot-1 inch tall. She had brown hair but dyed her fringe red with highlights. Laura was blonde and 5 foot 3 inches tall. Zoe was of Asian descent, and was 5 foot 5 inches tall, with black hair and brown eyes. Michelle was tallest at 5 foot 7 inches tall, with mousey brown hair and hazel eyes.
“Hey Michelle, tell us what’s it like to date the hottest guy in school?” Asked Zoe.
“Yeah, tell us all the details, Michelle.” Said Amy.
“What exactly do you want to know?” Asked Michelle.
“Is Dave good? You know, in bed?” Laura whispered the last two words.
“I don’t know, I’ve not slept with him yet.” Answered Michelle.
“Seriously, your boyfriend is the hottest guy in school, and you haven’t slept with him, what have you done together?” Asked Zoe.
“Well, honestly, just kiss, and flirt.” Said Michelle.
“Seriously, I’ve done more than that with Matt,” said Amy.
“I’m not confident like you Amy, and I just don’t give it away either. I like my guys to work for it.” Said Michelle.
“You’re such a prude Michelle.” Said Laura.
“I’m not!! Besides, who are you dating Laura?” Said Michelle.
“All the guys I fancy are taken.” Said Laura.
“What about, Luke? He’s single.” Said Zoe.
“Yuck, he’s not my type.” Said Laura.
“What about James?” Asked Amy.
“Oh, I like James he’s so sexy and makes me laugh.” Spoke Zoe.
“Yes, I could go out with James, that sounds like fun.” Said Laura thoughtfully.
“What about his friend Andrew though?” Asked Michelle.
“He’s o.k. just a bit too dull for me though.” Said Laura.
Just then the bell went to signal the end of class. The four girls packed their things into their bags. They stood up and filed out into the corridor. The four girls bid each other good day and headed home in separate directions.

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The school had several exits, but Michelle and Andrew both left via the main entrance. Andrew was a little behind Michelle and followed her until they were almost completely alone.
“Hey, Michelle? Isn’t it?” Asked, Andrew.
“Urm Yeah, your Andrew, right?” Asked, Michelle.
“I Wasn’t expecting to catch you, but since I have.” Started Andrew.
“What do you want?” Asked Michelle.
“Well have you heard of the ten commandments?” Asked Andrew.
“Yes, but I’m not helping you study Religious Education if that’s what you want.” Said Michelle.
“You misunderstand, I’m going to give you ten commands, and you’re going to obey them like a good little girl.” Said, Andrew.
Michelle hated being called a little girl.
“Why would I obey them, especially after your insult?” Asked Michelle.
“Because I know your secrets. I know you shower after all the girls have changed and left the changing room. I know why you shower alone and why you’re so secretive about it.” Said, Andrew.
“You’re lying.” Said Michelle, inadvertently and subtly covering her chest with her arms and turning slightly red.
“It wasn’t possible was it, that this boy knew her secrets.” Michelle thought to herself.
“I’ve got the proof too; from the hidden camera, I installed nearly two months ago. It’s all on this disc, would you like to watch it yourself if you don’t believe me?” Said, Andrew holding up a compact disc in the air.
Michelle looked sheepishly at the disc in his hand. If he was telling the truth and that disc went public at school. Her reputation as one of the hottest girls in school would be destroyed.
“He must have the footage as he wouldn’t be so cocksure of himself and wouldn’t offer me a viewing either.” Thought Michelle to herself.
“I hope she buys my bluff.” Thought Andrew.
“Give me that disc and any copies you have.” Said Michelle trying to sound unnerved though feeling very rattled at the same time.
“I will, but only on completion of you following my ten commandments.” Said, Andrew.
“Tell me the ten commandments and I’ll decide.” Said Michelle.
“Actually, I have got ten copies of this disc, in various places, hidden. Once a commandment is completed only then will I delete a copy. You will only get one commandment a day. Failure to complete a commandment will result in an extra commandment the following day, which will be executed along with the failed commandment. If you fail three commandments the disc becomes public.” Said, Andrew.

“What are the commandments?” Asked Michelle again.
“I’ll start tomorrow meet me an hour before school, in the park opposite. There you will receive your first commandment, failure to turn up, means you have decided to let the school see the disc. See you tomorrow.” Said, Andrew.
Andrew walked off leaving Michelle to stand there flabbergasted and with horrible thoughts running through her head.

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The next morning Michelle woke. She felt very panicked, what if Andrew just released her shower video regardless of the commandments? Everyone would surely make fun of her if they saw it. Wild and terrible thoughts raced through her mind as she did her morning chores. She brushed her teeth, showered, and had breakfast as quickly as she could. Got dressed and rushed to the park. When she got to the park, she saw Andrew standing there and felt a little relieved.
“Good morning little girl. I see you’ve agreed to do the ten commandments,” said Andrew.
Michelle scowled again at being called a little girl.
“Good morning, Andrew.” Said Michelle grumpily.
“You’re first commandment for today is to wear this Disney princess pamper, all day.” Said, Andrew.
Michelle looked totally shocked and surprised.
“But how do I go to the toilet? I’ll surely rip it when I take it down.” Said Michelle.
“I’m glad you asked; therefore you will carry three spare Disney princess pampers in your bag with you at all times. Before you start school today you will give these extra three to the school nurse. You are not allowed to use the bathroom and you must go to the nurse when you have had an accident. You are not allowed to leave any class during the middle to go to the nurse. This is your commandment for today.” Said, Andrew.
“What happens if I don’t do as you say? How will you know if I follow your rules?” Said Michelle.
“Because I have more hidden cameras around school, and I’ll Have your knickers and tights in my bag all day. If you’re not wearing your new underwear, you’ll be going commando around the school. Also, I expect to see you during the morning break, lunch break, and dinner break, when you will be checked by the removal of your skirt. Here’s your first Nappy, do you need help putting it on?” Asked Andrew.
“You expect me to change here? In a public park? With you watching or assisting me?” Said Michelle incredulously.
“Yes. Remember I’ve already seen everything you have unless you have a new tattoo I don’t know about. Now strip off and put the nappy on, I do have a towel in my bag, which I can hold around your waist if it makes you more comfortable?” Said, Andrew.
“When will destroy the first disc?” Said Michelle.
Michelle let Andrew wrap the towel around her waist, and quickly undid her skirt, before pulling it, along with her knickers and tights to her ankles.
“At five o’clock this afternoon once the day is complete.” Said, Andrew.
Michelle kicked her trainers off and removed her skirt, knickers, and tights. She now stood in the middle of a massive public park, just 300 or so meters from the school, in just a towel and socks covering her lower half. Andrew gave Michelle the nappy, and Michelle looked at it ominously. Michelle tucked it between her legs and pulled it up both sides but soon came to the realization that she couldn’t do up the tapes. Michelle was forced to do the unthinkable.

“Andrew, I Need your help, please. Can you do up the tapes?” Asked Michelle.
“No problem” Andrew Said.
With that he let the towel drop to Michelle’s ankles.
“Argh!!!” Screamed Michelle as her bare legs, came into view. Andrew looked longingly at them but tried to act normally as if he had already seen them.
“Nice Legs, just how I remember them.” Andrew lied.
“Thanks” Responded Michelle blushing slightly.
Andrew did up the tapes on the nappy, and handed Michelle back her skirt, before putting Michelle’s tights and knickers in his bag. Michelle did her skirt up and pulled her trainers on.
“You look good, can hardly notice that you’re wearing a nappy.” Said, Andrew.
Michelle blushed again but this time more out of embarrassment. Andrew handed her the three spare nappies. Michelle put all six in her bag as she didn’t want them seen by anyone else. The pair then headed off to school together.

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Once at the school gates Andrew and Michelle parted ways. Michelle felt very aware of her current state of dress. The wind on her lower legs reminded her of her bare legs, and the funny feeling around her groin reminded her of the nappy. Michelle headed off towards the nurse’s office to give the school nurse her three spare nappies as instructed. Michelle didn’t realize at this time just how much these commandments were going to change her life although she was in for a taster, because outside the nurse’s office she met Laura. As it turned out Laura was also seeing the nurse.
“Hey, Michelle.” Said Laura.
“Hey, Laura.” Said Michelle.
“Why are you here?” Asked Laura.
“Um, er.” Said Michelle trying to think of an excuse.
Luckily for Michelle, that’s when the nurse appeared out of her office.
“Hello ladies, Michelle what can I do for you?” Asked the nurse.
“Can’t you see Laura first? She was here before me.” Said Michelle.
Unluckily for Michelle, the nurse replied.
“It’s all right young lady, I see the nappies in your bag. It’s nothing to be ashamed of. You’ve obviously come here to be changed. I’ll Change you first if Laura doesn’t mind waiting?” Said the nurse.
Michelle was scarlet.
“No, I don’t mind.” Said Laura with a huge grin on her face.
“Very well. Laura, you can sit in my outer office, Whilst I change little Michelle here.” Said the nurse with a grin on her face.
Michelle was absolutely mortified as she went into the office, but it got worse, as she had just gotten through the door when the nurse whipped her skirt away. The nurse shut the office door, and Michelle could see Laura almost rolling around the office floor in hysterical laughter.
“At Least it’s just a girl seeing me standing here in just a nappy, and regulation school top.” Thought Michelle.
When she looked round the room, however, there was her crush, her long-term boyfriend Dave. She nearly died.
“How long have you been in nappies for, Miss O’Dell?” Asked the nurse.
“Er, um 10 er day,” Michelle said scrambling up her words.
“Did you rush to put this nappy on? It’s not on very well. You did use powder and cream?” asked the nurse.
“Um, no. was I sposed to?” asked Michelle.
“Lie down on my table.” Said the nurse.
Michelle walked gingerly over to the table, her eyes not leaving Dave’s horrified expression. Michelle lay on the table.
“Sorry about this.” Said the nurse.
“It’s O.K.,” said Michelle.
“I wasn’t talking to you. I was talking to David.” Said the nurse, and with that, the nurse pulled Michelle’s nappy clean off in one go.
Michelle’s hands had been by her side. David and Laura had seen her full frontal bottom half naked as the day she was born, with a totally unobstructed view. Laura almost wet herself and David just looked more horrified. Michelle hadn’t started growing any hair yet, so her perfect coin slot slit was on display for her crush and long-term boyfriend, and best friend. Michelle quickly moved her hands to cover but it was too late the damage was done.
“Right David why are you here?” asked the nurse. She had moved away from the semi-naked girl over to Dave.
“I need my insulin injection.” Dave Said.
“Hold out your arm.” Said the nurse, before injecting him.
David held his arm out, and the nurse injected him.
“Rest for five minutes then you may go. Laura, why are you here?” Asked the nurse.
Laura stopped laughing and tried to remember.
“Ah, I’m Here, Because I’ve just used my last lady product, and needed a few extra to get me through today.” Said Laura blushing slightly.
“No need to blush Laura real women have regular periods, it’s perfectly natural.” Said the nurse.
Laura smiled a little, but Michelle went slightly red.
“Here you are, dear.” Said the nurse passing Laura some tampons. Laura took them graciously and placed them in her bag.
“You can both go now, David you should be fine.” Said the nurse.
“Can we say goodbye to Michelle quickly?” Asked Laura.
“Of course, but hurry I need to change Michelle before your next class starts.” Said the nurse.
Michelle held onto her crotch for dear life as both Laura and Dave came over to her.
“I’m Going to remember this day for a very long time.” Whispered Laura giggling.
“I’m dumping you; I want to be with a beautiful blonde, who isn’t still potty training.” Said Dave harshly and stormed out.
Laura ran after him giggling, but as she caught him up, just before they left the doorway and out of sight, Michelle saw them holding hands. She wished today had gone differently and it wasn’t even 8:30 yet. The nurse came back over and without warning or saying a thing she pulled Michelle’s hands away and started to clean her pussy and bum like a toddler. Michelle was flushed red, as the nurse cleaned, what was an hour ago, her most private of areas.

It was when the nurse applied the nappy rash cream and talcum powder was when Michelle felt most violated but was grateful when the new nappy was finally put on her and her skirt back on covering it. Michelle left the nurse’s office and headed to her first lesson of the day, which was English. As Michelle walked down the corridor, she felt today couldn’t get any worse.

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Michelle’s English lesson went without incident as did her geography lesson. Michelle couldn’t believe she had made it through two lessons without a word said to her regarding her nappy. When the bell went, she went to meet Andrew like promised in the seclusion of an empty classroom on the first floor.
“Hello Michelle, I hear you’ve had quite an interesting morning.” Said, Andrew.
“Hello, Andrew. You made my boyfriend dump me and go off with my best mate. Deals off show me in the shower to everyone it can’t be worse than this.” Said Michelle.
“Firstly, I’ve only made you do things. Secondly, only they know about your nappy. Thirdly if I show your video everyone will see the real you, warts and all.” Said, Andrew.
“Your right I guess.” Said Michelle.
“Good now remove your skirt and prove to me you’re still wearing a nappy.” Said, Andrew.
“Fine!!!” said Michelle pulling her skirt off.
Andrew moved closer and put his finger down the back of the nappy, before pulling it away from Michelle’s skin. Michelle flinched in response.
“Hey what are you doing?” Asked Michelle.
“Checking to make sure you’re clean, and what is the white stuff? That wasn’t there this morning.” Said, Andrew.
“The nurse covered me in talcum powder and rash cream. It wasn’t too bad; it was worse when Dave saw me bottomless.” Said Michelle.
FLASH, FLASH, FLASH three blinding lights went off on Andrew’s phone.
“Wait what are you doing?” Asked Michelle.
“Gathering photo evidence to prove you’re actually wearing a nappy.” Said, Andrew.
“But only you are seeing me like this.” Said Michelle.
“Yes, and I’ll delete everything after your ten days are up.” Said, Andrew.
“You promise?” Asked Michelle.
“Yes. Now put your skirt back on and go to morning break, remember you’re not allowed the toilet and only allowed to use the nurse after a lesson has finished.” Said Andrew reminding her of the rules.
“I’ll see you after lunch today, back here.” Said Michelle.
“Yes, I’ll be here, see you later.” Said Andrew and left the classroom.
He left Michelle on her own to put her skirt back on. Andrew had cheered Michelle up a bit, and she left the classroom, she headed to her next class because she didn’t feel like taking a break. Michelle’s next lesson, Maths, and lunch went quickly.
She saw Andrew again and once again had her picture taken. Michelle now only had two lessons to get through today and another break, and then she could go home. Michelle Sat through R.E. hoping time would speed up. It had now been several hours till she went to the toilet last. It was only fifteen minutes into her R.E. lesson when her bladder gave up, and Michelle soaked the nappy.
Michelle sat there quietly in her soaking wet nappy for ten more minutes before the nurse showed up to her class. The only other time she had seen the nurse today was when she had been stripped bottomless in front of her crush and best friend. This wouldn’t be that bad, surely the nurse would just force her to go to her office.
“Hello, Ms. Mackenzie. I’m here to see Michelle.” Said the nurse.
The class watched on curiously.
“Hello Nurse Green, Yes Michelle is over there, why do you need to see her?” Asked Ms. Mackenzie.
“I need to make sure she is clean, as she has only seen me once today.” Said the nurse.
“Clean? She looks clean to me. Michelle come here please.” Said Ms. Mackenzie.
Michelle slowly stood. Slowly as possible Michelle walked to the front of the class.
“See Michelle definitely looks clean.” Said Ms. Mackenzie.
“Not her appearance, this.” Said the nurse and without hesitation removed Michelle’s skirt. Her classmates all burst into laughter at the sight of Michelle in just her nappy.

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Michelle just stood there in shock hands by her side. Her skirt was now out of sight and her classmates were now seeing her in a soaking-wet nappy. Michelle stood still on the spot until the nurse pulled her from the room by her hand. Michelle hadn’t registered the fact she was now being dragged down school corridors in just her wet nappy from the waist down. As soon as Michelle realized the full extent of her situation, she blushed red, and tears formed in the corners of her eyes.
Luckily the corridors toward the nurse’s office were empty because everyone else was still in class. The nurse led Michelle inside her office and over to the shower that was in there. The nurse turned the shower on and again with little instruction began to undress Michelle till Michelle was head to toe naked. Michelle was then forced onto a bright pink potty in the middle of the nurse’s office.
Michelle sat on the potty bright red and covered her chest with her arms.
“You will sit on the potty for five minutes. Try and use it. I want no more accidents from you today.” Said the nurse sternly.
Michelle sat there and tried to use the potty, but it was no use, after five minutes she had her shower and then dried herself on the towel the nurse gave her. The nurse then put a fresh nappy on Michelle. Michelle sat up and looked around.
“Where are my clothes?” Asked Michelle.
“You left your skirt in your R.E. class. As for everything else, I’ve put it in the wash, and you’ll get it all back at the end of the school day.” Said the nurse.
“But What am I supposed to wear to my last lesson?” Asked Michelle.
“Here are your trainers, and a pair of clean socks. I’ll just see if there’s anything in lost property.” Said the nurse.
Michelle put on the trainers and socks whilst the nurse looked through the lost property. The nurse returned with a bright pink tracksuit; Michelle looked at it in disgust.
“This is the only thing I have, unfortunately, put it on, and I’ll escort you to your next class.” Said the Nurse.
Michelle reluctantly put the tracksuit on, which turned out to have a picture of “HELLO KITTY” on the front. Michelle covered her chest as she was escorted down several corridors to her next class. When they arrived at Michelle’s science class, Michelle quickly took her seat whilst the nurse explained everything to the teacher. Five minutes later the rest of her classmates turned up. No one noticed Michelle’s attire and Michelle breathed easy.

At the end of class, Michelle didn’t move till all the other students were gone. Michelle was able to slip out unnoticed and headed for the nurse’s office. The nurse looked surprised to see Michelle again.
“Hi, it’s home time, I need my clothes back.” Said Michelle.
“Oh, I’m sorry dear but I’ve sent them along with a note to your mother. They will arrive there in tomorrow’s post. Unfortunately, they’re all the clothes you have.” Said the nurse shutting her door in Michelle’s face with a slight smile.

Michelle looked at her watch and remembered she had to meet Andrew after school in the park. Giving up on her school clothes Michelle walked to her rendezvous. Andrew had been waiting a while for her. When he saw her, he smirked a little at her attire.
“Think my appearance is funny, do you?” Snapped Michelle.
“A little yes. What happened to your school clothes?” Asked Andrew.
“The bitch of a Nurse took them from me and sent them home,” Michelle said angrily.
“Oh well, down to business. You’ve gained two extra commandments for not doing as you were instructed.” Said, Andrew.
“What!!! I did everything you told me.” Said Michelle shocked.
“No, you didn’t. Firstly, you were to meet me at EVERY break time. Secondly, you were not allowed to leave class during your lesson no matter what.” Said, Andrew.
“I was in the Nurse’s office during the last break, being changed for the second time today. The Nurse dragged me out of class there was nothing I could do.” Said Michelle.
“Well, never the less you have broken the rules twice that’s two more commandments. Unless you want the shower video released.” Said, Andrew.
“Fine.” Said Michelle.
“Right, I’ll give you one extra commandment tonight. You must wear your nappy all night long and still be wearing it in the morning. If you must remove it because it is too wet or soiled, (he smiled at this) you are to ask my permission first. You can do this by text or phone call. My number is 07987 654 321.” Said, Andrew.
“Fine, is that all for today?” Asked Michelle.
“No drop your tracksuit bottoms for your last picture today.” Said, Andrew.
“OOO fine,” Michelle said stamping her foot and dropping her tracksuit bottoms.
“Nice legs. I’ve just had an idea. Do you want to go back to your nine commandments tomorrow?” Asked Andrew.
“Yes, oh wait.” Said Michelle realizing what he was about to ask.
“Give me your trackie bottoms and walk home in just nappy and jumper.” Said, Andrew.
“Fine. Half my year has seen me like this anyway.” Said Michelle throwing her bottoms at him.
“Not your sisters, Brother, or Mum. See you before school tomorrow. Here same time.” Said Andrew smiling and running off with the tracksuit bottoms, leaving Michelle standing there red-faced and bottomless.

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Luckily Michelle managed to get home, change, have her dinner, and go to bed, without her sister’s, brother or mum noticing. Also she had managed to make the walk home without bumping into any body, and pulling her jumper down had hidden her nappy from any distance. It was now the next day, and her and Andrew were back in the park talking over her commandments again.

“Well Michelle, I notice you are still wearing the same nappy. I’m surprised it’s staying in place it’s so wet. You’re to go to the school nurse first thing and get it changed.” Said Andrew.

“Fine at least I’ll be more comfortable and one commandment less.” Said Michelle.

“Oh, that isn’t an extra commandment, it’s the finish of yesterday’s. Today, I’m giving you a choice of three commandments, it’s entirely up to you, which you do. But it’ll only count as one even if you manage to pull off all three.” Said Andrew.

Michelle’s face dropped. She had hoped changing the nappy was her commandment.
“O.k.” Said Michelle.

“Option one, during P.E. You are to remove all of Laura’s clothes, and make her do P.E. In just her underwear.
Option two, spread a convincing rumour that Zoe is a lesbian and has a girlfriend. Or Option three, pants Amy in the middle of the cafeteria at lunch time. Which one you do is upto you. If you fail to do all three, you will get an extra commandment. Obviously all three are you’re best friends so if you fail to even attempt one of these, then you will be punished by me. Am I clear?” Asked Andrew.

Michelle shamefully nodded and headed towards school, knowing she had to pull one of these pranks on her best friends, even though she wouldn’t mind getting Laura back for yesterday. Michelle got to school and headed for the nurse to be changed. Michelle dreaded what today would bring if she didn’t attempt at least one of the pranks.