Trying to get into writing needed to start somewhere

[Revengedpirate]

Hopefully is a good short story haven’t written in a while. Enjoy.

I was playing in the park with friends. We were playing on the climbing frame when these bigger kids came to the park. We huddled together and I was dared to prank the biggest of the new comers by getting them to catch a fake ball.

I go over and get the big guy to play catch with me, I used my best baseball pitch, but taken by surprise the big guy fell over and got covered in mud with everyone laughing at him.

He got angry and chased me, he caught my blue and white skirt and pulled it clean off. I was so embarrassed in just my white panties I tried to run off home. But he grabbed me and pulled me over his lap. In front of everyone he pulled my knickers to my ankles and started spanking me.

My face must’ve been redder then my backside. Once he had finished spanking my bare bum in front of my friends and the crowd that had gathered, he stands me up and pulls my top clean off. There I am stood head to toe naked in front of all my peers laughing at me and body shaming me.

In just my trainers I ran home and cried into my pillow.

[SDS]

Very short but a fun little story.

A little bit of extra descriptions and extra discussion on their shame would have gone a long too! That would be my main area for improvements but still a nice read.

[Hooked6]

GREAT to see you writing again. I agree with your approach that sometimes after a long absence from writing it is a good idea to work on short stories and snippets of ideas to get the creative juices flowing again.

In any case, it is wonderful to see you posting again.

Hooked6

[Frank89]

Speaking of long absence from writing, when can we expect to get the creative juices flowing again from your direction, dear Hooked6?

It would be wonderful to see you posting again too.