Trapped in the Shower

[Executionus]

That is interesting but understandable. I have my own problem, sort of similar, where when I am writing I will put adjectives and adverbs in the wrong order for a sentence. Especially in longer sentences. It's not until I go back to review what I have wrote that I notice my mistakes. As a quick example of what I mean: 'It wasn't until he saw her that he noticed she was very really shy.' Where it should be 'really very shy'. But I'm constantly having to correct mistakes like that.

That would get annoying quick. I've never known anyone with that specific issue before.



I'm happy to finally have this story finished! It's crazy to think that I originally planned this as a SHORT story when I was burned out from TG2 taking so long. I ended up adding so much to this story that it wound up even longer than TG2. It took 3 months and 156k words (Almost exactly equal to Tolkien's The Two Towers).

That being said, this is definitely one of my favorite things that I've ever written. I have no regrets! Definitely taking a major break after I finish this final Summer Slam phase though, aside from running the Halloween contest I have planned.

[saiprakash]

can someone one pls suggest me stories like this, with this intensity

[Bikeskull]

This is one of the hottest stories I've ever read. I've written things with some similar themes but not close to this detailed. Great job. This has almost all my kinks without going to far. The only things I wish there was more of is ticking and restraining. I read it start to finish and couldn't even take a break

[Executionus]

Thanks!

I was attempting to have all three girls fall over time into their particular kinks pretty hard while avoiding much overlap, so that was part of why there wasn't as much restraint as there otherwise would have been. Lisa had such a powerful fetish for being restrained or forced, but the other two generally didn't so those scenes were focused on Lisa alone usually.

As for tickling, I must confess that I don't find it sexual so that's part of why I don't use it much. I have legitimately NEVER been with a woman who didn't hate tickling and have it as a hard limit, so I haven't ever used it in a sexual manner in my life.

[SweetChardonnay]

Wow wow wow. I've spent years in Literotica and Solotouch and BooksieSilk and all these stripping forums, but I am so glad I finally found this board, this story, and this author.

Absolutely incredible, one of my new all time favorites, instantly. The detail of emotions and bodies, how everyone feels, the shyness and excitement. Riding that line of being pushed but with thorough consent. It's erotic and wholesome and the perfect slow escalation: everything this fetish hits best. I think it may have even uncovered some new fetishes in me (apparently I'm going to be thinking about that restraint and groping under the clothes dare for a WHILE).

Mostly, big thank you to Executionus for the time and effort you put in. I can't wait to continue diving deeper into your catalogue. Do you have your own favorite stories and inspirations? How do I get more of this?

[saiprakash]

I also had similar experience after reading this story

[Executionus]

Wow wow wow. I've spent years in Literotica and Solotouch and BooksieSilk and all these stripping forums, but I am so glad I finally found this board, this story, and this author.

Absolutely incredible, one of my new all time favorites, instantly. The detail of emotions and bodies, how everyone feels, the shyness and excitement. Riding that line of being pushed but with thorough consent. It's erotic and wholesome and the perfect slow escalation: everything this fetish hits best. I think it may have even uncovered some new fetishes in me (apparently I'm going to be thinking about that restraint and groping under the clothes dare for a WHILE).

Mostly, big thank you to Executionus for the time and effort you put in. I can't wait to continue diving deeper into your catalogue. Do you have your own favorite stories and inspirations? How do I get more of this?

Oh hey, I finally noticed this comment! I'm not around here nearly as often as I used to be. Thanks for the post! I'm glad you enjoyed this so much.

This story was probably my most in-depth character-based story that I ever did. I was highly focused on the four members of the Diamond and developing their relationships and innocent experimentation. A lot of my other stories focused more on the events themselves and were shorter. The closest to this style that I did were Sophie Digitally Naked in School, All Things Seen, and The Passion of Jessica Christ. All of those were designed with deep characters and their feelings in mind.

As for favorites and inspirations, there's a large number of authors who fall under that group. Hooked6 and TheSparkZone (Literotica) are considered the Grandfather and Grandmother of this community in a lot of ways and their libraries are legendary. SDS, Neverdoubted/Ribeye, Nikolai, SuperEvil, BlushingPrincess, and plenty of others have multiple good stories over the years. Perseus, Drew, and my gf MissAriel all also have great stories but fewer.

I might go back to writing stories in this community again at some point, but in the last year or more I've been exceedingly busy with work and other activities and haven't been as motivated to sit and write a full story out. I do have a couple of neat ideas for potential stories, but it'll probably be quite awhile before I ever get around to doing anything with them.

[ingridguerci94]

OMG, are you kidding me this build up is epic? I read through without pausing.phim sex việt nam Thank you very much. A truly wonderful story.