Trapped in the Shower

[Executionus]

Author's Note: So it turns out that part of the reason that the next chapter was taking me so long to write was the silly little detail of it having nearly 12,000 words and over 65,000 characters. Wanna know a secret? This board has a character limit of 60,000 per post. I had no choice but to split this part in half just to be able to post it. But hey, you guys get a double-sized update to make up for me going a week without any new chapters!

[hightab]

WOW! these chapters are awesome. I will be sad when its over.

[jimmythehand]

Great continuation, well worth the wait. That extra four days must be killing Kelly though!

[Executionus]

Great continuation, well worth the wait. That extra four days must be killing Kelly though!

To add insult to injury, her part isn't even next. Part 21 is going to be Lisa and Jennifer in Erik's bedroom.

[jimmythehand]

To add insult to injury, her part isn't even next. Part 21 is going to be Lisa and Jennifer in Erik's bedroom.

You're a cruel, cruel man... but that does sound like a fun chapter.

[GeekGuy]

Author's Note: So it turns out that part of the reason that the next chapter was taking me so long to write was the silly little detail of it having nearly 12,000 words and over 65,000 characters. Wanna know a secret? This board has a character limit of 60,000 per post. I had no choice but to split this part in half just to be able to post it. But hey, you guys get a double-sized update to make up for me going a week without any new chapters!

WORTH IT!!!

[Executionus]

WORTH IT!!!

Hope so, since I've got a feeling that it might happen again. The next part may take me a while since I've been busy and tired lately. It won't be up tonight, that's for sure.

[GeekGuy]

WORTH IT!!!

Hope so, since I've got a feeling that it might happen again. The next part may take me a while since I've been busy and tired lately. It won't be up tonight, that's for sure.

no worries don't rush we ain't going anywhere.

[Nickwhite97]

Such an amazing story definitely one of my favorites from this site

[Executionus]

I'm very glad that everyone seems to like this story so much now. I was actually worried about people getting bored of it after too many tease parts, since it seemed to largely be ignored for the longest time.

I was working on the next part some but it really wasn't coming out good at all, so I'm redoing parts of it with a different overall mood imposed. Not even counting that I'm still pretty behind. I've been too tired to write for any extended period of time all July it seems. I blame the heat and me working in the brutal sunlight all day.

Random trivia: Lisa's exact issue with reaching orgasm is based on a true story from my distant past. I used to know several teen girls who admitted to me that they couldn't finish, or at least couldn't do it solo. I made it a mission to write custom stories for them to fix this problem (with very high success I might add). One of the girls literally confessed afterwards that she figured out that her problem was that she always went hard right out the gate and then got too sore. She had it in her head that fast=pleasure. When I wrote her a story that included edgeplay and teasing, she copied all of it on herself in bed one night and was astounded at how easily she got off when she was ironically trying to NOT get off for a change.