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Trapped in the Shower -- Part 25 (August 11)
So as odd as this might sound, I felt the need to find models for the three girls in their nude states. I guess you could consider this a before and after when joined with the other picture I made of them.
What He Sees
He Sees Them Nude
PS: The next part will be the final update and will include a bit of an epilogue.
What He Sees
He Sees Them Nude
PS: The next part will be the final update and will include a bit of an epilogue.
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Re: Trapped in the Shower -- Part 25 (August 11)
Wow Executionus! What a beautiful piece you have written here, with Erik and the girls first time together. I especially loved the way you wrote Erik and Kelly's first time. What a lucky guy he is to have these three gorgeous girls in his life. I bet he would think back to all the embarrassment he felt in the first few parts and feel really silly now.
You beat me to the punch! I was just going to ask you if we could see what he sees once the girls clothes come offExecutionus wrote: ↑Thu Aug 11, 2022 7:18 am So as odd as this might sound, I felt the need to find models for the three girls in their nude states. I guess you could consider this a before and after when joined with the other picture I made of them.
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Re: Trapped in the Shower -- Part 25 (August 11)
I've attempted to keep three distinct moods with the three girls all story. With Jennifer it's two alphas meeting their match. With Lisa it's adventurous excitement and childlike glee with everything being brand new. With Kelly it's deep emotional intensity from two people who are obsessed with making others feel good leading to a feedback loop of pleasure when they're together. I've enjoyed the Kelly character a lot because I haven't ever written someone before who felt everything at an 11/10 at every moment.superevil7 wrote: ↑Fri Aug 12, 2022 5:43 am Wow Executionus! What a beautiful piece you have written here, with Erik and the girls first time together. I especially loved the way you wrote Erik and Kelly's first time. What a lucky guy he is to have these three gorgeous girls in his life. I bet he would think back to all the embarrassment he felt in the first few parts and feel really silly now.
Excellent, a man of taste!superevil7 wrote: ↑Fri Aug 12, 2022 5:43 am You beat me to the punch! I was just going to ask you if we could see what he sees once the girls clothes come off
Just like last time I had the easiest time finding Kelly and the hardest time finding a good Lisa. I swear it's difficult to find cutesy yet horny Hispanic girl pics these days. Also the internet keeps marking Asians as "Hispanic" for some dumbass reason so that flooded my searches.
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Re: Trapped in the Shower -- Part 25 (August 11)
That's really interesting. I tend to start out with a generalization for my characters, bubbly, mischievous, kind, bashful, stuck up, until I get to know them better as I write for them more.Executionus wrote: ↑Fri Aug 12, 2022 1:41 pm I've attempted to keep three distinct moods with the three girls all story. With Jennifer it's two alphas meeting their match. With Lisa it's adventurous excitement and childlike glee with everything being brand new. With Kelly it's deep emotional intensity from two people who are obsessed with making others feel good leading to a feedback loop of pleasure when they're together. I've enjoyed the Kelly character a lot because I haven't ever written someone before who felt everything at an 11/10 at every moment.
I think personally I enjoy Lisa's characterization the best. All that crazy energy. I don't know that I could take that in real life, but all that sexual energy she has is super hot for the story.
I have to add, I think I like the two girls you found to represent Lisa best as well.Executionus wrote: ↑Fri Aug 12, 2022 1:41 pm Just like last time I had the easiest time finding Kelly and the hardest time finding a good Lisa. I swear it's difficult to find cutesy yet horny Hispanic girl pics these days. Also the internet keeps marking Asians as "Hispanic" for some dumbass reason so that flooded my searches.
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Re: Trapped in the Shower -- Part 25 (August 11)
The most hilarious part of all of that is that as the character of Lisa developed, she began resembling my ex wife more and more. I unconsciously merged a lot of her quirks and traits into Lisa without meaning to do it. I only noticed about halfway through the story.superevil7 wrote: ↑Fri Aug 12, 2022 2:39 pm I think personally I enjoy Lisa's characterization the best. All that crazy energy. I don't know that I could take that in real life, but all that sexual energy she has is super hot for the story.
So I actually HAVE endured someone like Lisa in real life lol. The bouncy, giggly, cutesy, easily excited nature of my ex was a big draw in the beginning. Of course over the years it all went to hell, but still.
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Re: Trapped in the Shower -- Part 25 (August 11)
So I was asked in a PM about the models for the girls in their nude pic, and I figured I might as well post their identities here as well as links to them all. I specifically chose three girls from the same porn studio (Rylsky) because I was wanting the photo and camera styles to match well when joined together.
Jessica Model Victoria Minina
Lisa Model Precious
Kelly Model Orabelle (Shower gallery)
As a note, I edited the pictures that I used for the girls in Photoshop slightly in order to make them more in line with the characters. The original versions of each picture will look a little different.
Jessica Model Victoria Minina
Lisa Model Precious
Kelly Model Orabelle (Shower gallery)
As a note, I edited the pictures that I used for the girls in Photoshop slightly in order to make them more in line with the characters. The original versions of each picture will look a little different.
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Trapped in the Shower -- Part 26 (Complete!)
Part 26:
We four, the Diamond, have now lost our virginities to one-another. I, the lone boy of the group, got the honor of having sex with all three of my beloved best friends. I guess at this point they are much more than just my friends. They are my lovers, all of them. And our amazing night together needed to end with all four of us cumming together.
I explained my idea for making this work to the girls, who were all completely in agreement with me. With big smiles and dripping private parts, we all joined together to make this finale the most spectacular orgasm any of the four of us had ever experienced.
The first thing we had to do was bringing the three girls right to the edge. I was already on the edge myself after having sex with them all back to back like that, so now the girls were going to get lots of special treatment. We just had to decide how.
Jennifer suddenly shivered and flailed her hands for a second with an idea, but then quickly crossed her arms as if she was too shy to say her idea out loud. We prodded her about it until she looked at Lisa and said "Well...there's something I want to try with Lisa, if she's up to it, but it's probably asking too much. I don't want to push you too fast."
Lisa suddenly sat on Jennifer's lap facing her, legs wrapped around Jennifer's waist and arms wrapped around her shoulders, face only inches from the startled tall girl. Lisa smiled brightly and replied "But what if I LIKE being pushed? Haven't you noticed yet? I kinda...like...when somebody I trust and love physically makes me do sexy things. I like being held down while struggling. I like being pinned to the wall helplessly. I like having my clothes taken from me by force. I like having my arms ripped away if I'm covering up. I like losing bets or taking dares that force me to do scary and sexy things in front of people. And for you, Jennifer, I would really like if you pushed me into bisexuality as hard and as fast as possible. If you make me do it, it makes it easier for me and way WAY more intense. So come ooooon, what's your idea?"
Jennifer kissed Lisa quickly and then answered her "I would be honored and delighted, you delicious little snack, if you and I could 69. Earlier you kissed me and licked me down there a couple times and it drove me wild! But I never got to return the favor. I want to know what your cum tastes like! I mean, you're so wet down there, it's like you were designed to be a buffet for a thirsty girl like me. And technically you promised me earlier that you were gonna make me cum with your tongue if I was a good girl, so you owe me."
Lisa giggled "Wow, I'm sorry! I accidentally forgot about promising to get you off with my tongue earlier. Erik just kinda sorta caught us off guard with his fingers, didn't he? Oh well. A 69 sounds AWESOME! I liked the way you tasted earlier. It was sweet, just like you. I really hope you like how I taste. I...uh...tasted myself in the past. I think I taste ok at least."
Jennifer then pushed Lisa backwards onto the bed, pinning her arms down, and told her "Well I need to find out for myself!"
Lisa shivered "Oooo, that was hot. I love how strong you are! I don't think I can move right now. I kinda like that."
Jennifer smirked "Hmmm. So what would you do if I held you down where you couldn't move or escape, and then I MADE you do a 69 whether you wanted to or not?"
Lisa wiggled and looked at Jennifer with lusty intensity as she answered "Do that! Do it do it dooooo iiiiiiit!"
Jennifer gently bit Lisa's ear and then replied "As you command, my goddess"
Lisa gasped at the use of the "goddess" nickname, while Jennifer spun around on top of her. Because Jennifer is quite tall and very athletic, she was easily able to pin Lisa's arms to the bed using her legs while angling her pussy right in front of Lisa's face. Jennifer then used her arms to pin Lisa's thighs apart, staring at the tasty treat right in front of her eyes. Much like before, Lisa attempted to struggle free but was unable to escape from the much-stronger girl's hold on top of her. Lisa was quickly moaning happily. The girls wasted no time tasting each other while Kelly and I watched on in horny silence.
I finally forced myself to look over at Kelly after watching the other two engage in such a sexy act for several minutes. Kelly was staring hard at them, very red in the face, one hand rubbing her nipple while the other was moving between her legs. Her fetish for watching us was still extremely powerful. When I looked at her it caught her attention. When she noticed me watching her playing with herself she jumped and moved both of her hands shyly to her sides.
I chuckled at her "You don't have to be shy about that you know."
She smiled at me as she slowly moved her arms back to her sensitive parts "Sorry! I'm always going to be shy probably."
I rubbed her lone unrubbed nipple for her, causing her eyes to roll back for a second. I then told her "Your shyness is the cutest thing ever. Never lose it! Do you want me to lick you like them to get you warmed up?"
She cringed a little "Um...is it ok if I say no? I think I'd rather watch those two for now. Watching them is getting me plenty warmed up!"
I nodded "Yeah me too. Wanna sit on my lap then, both of us facing them while I touch you all over?"
Her eyes opened wide "Ok! That sounds really nice."
Kelly sat on my lap, her back against my chest, while my hands roamed all over her chest, legs, tummy, and pussy at will. My dick was pushing upwards between her legs as her pussy rested on it, and both of us greatly enjoyed the contact down there. It reminded us about the fact that we just actually had sex a few minutes ago, and we were getting ready to do it again. While we watched Lisa and Jennifer squirming around, licking, kissing, biting, and moaning loudly right in front of us, Kelly was breathing very hard and her own wetness was starting to rub on me down there. With her back pulled against my chest I could feel her heart beating (and she could probably feel mine). Our hearts felt like they adjusted their rhythms to match each other, beating at the exact same time every beat. It was all so romantic and sexy, so I couldn't resist whispering sweet and sexy secrets into her ear while the girls were distracted. The things I whispered into Kelly's ear were treasures for her and her alone to hear as I felt her melting into my body with every word.
Once the girls were all brought very close to climaxing, I had the three of them lie down next to each other on the side of my bed, with their legs apart and interlocked and their pussies right up on the edge for easy access by me. Jennifer, Kelly, Lisa, lying down in that order with Kelly in the middle of the others. All three beautiful naked women side by side as an amazing display of sexual perfection, my dick jumped just looking at that view. I snatched a couple pictures of them like that, explaining to them how this was the type of view that could finish me off quickly when I'm by myself. The girls seemed to enjoy that idea a lot, but they also wanted me to hurry up and finish all four of us tonight.
First I slid my dick into Jennifer's pussy, going back and forth a couple times to torment her while rubbing her clit. After a few seconds I left her, moving to Lisa instead. Lisa purred loudly at being penetrated again as she dripped all over my bed sheets. I was going to have lots of wet spots after this night but I honestly didn't care. After giving Lisa a last bit of dick, it was time to move to Kelly. Kelly and the others knew that once I went inside of Kelly this time, that I wasn't leaving until I came inside of her.
As I slid my dick slowly into Kelly's still-tight pussy, I also simultaneously slid three fingers from my left hand into Jennifer's pussy and three fingers from my right hand into Lisa's. I managed to enter and penetrate all three girls at the exact same time, which caused a very sexy triple-moan from the girls which gave me quite a shiver. As I started fucking all three of them together, their hands ran quickly over their neighbors' bodies to rub all of the good places. Kelly had both of her hands rubbing the clits of the other girls, while Jennifer was rubbing Kelly's clit masterfully. Lisa had both arms playing with Kelly's boobs, while Jennifer's long left arm reach over Kelly and squeezed Lisa's right breast tightly.
I couldn't help but grunt and groan loudly with every thrust into Kelly, as her overall tightness and constant bouts of squeezing me were sending me to the edge very fast. The girls were moaning in harmony with my thrusts into them using my hands or my dick, and the sound of all three girls moaning together perfectly was among the biggest turn ons of this entire wild and crazy night. I wasn't going to last long at all, so even though I was only fucking them for 30 seconds at this point I really hoped that the girls were ready.
As they moaned together over and over again, I announced "Fuck I'm close! You three are just so damn hot. I'm going to begin the countdown now. When I hit zero, we all go off. Ready?"
They all yelled "YES!" perfectly synchronized.
"10" All of us breathed in and out together, feeling the magic of the moment.
"9" I sped up a little, listening to my song of sirens singing for me.
"8" My God I'm so close. Speeding up may have been a mistake. I'm about to explode!
"7" I'm trying to hold out until the end. Kelly tensing on me is making that very difficult.
"6" I'm speeding up my countdown or else I'm going to lose it. I doubt the girls mind.
"5" Lisa's entire body is twitching and her legs are almost kicking free. I think she's about to cum early!
"4" Seeing Lisa lose it is sending Jennifer over the edge too as she squirms and purrs.
"3" Kelly gasps and squeezes me firmly. She's losing her control as well.
"2" None of the girls are moaning in sync anymore as they're all grabbing on desperately trying to reach zero without going off early.
"1" My dick is full of my cum and vibrating out of control, I can't hold back even one more second!
"0" We all scream together!
I shoot everything I have into Kelly, thrust after thrust. As she trembles her pussy grabs me like a vice and milks every drop, not letting even one drop stay behind in my dick. Lisa kicks wildly, her right leg pinned by my torso, as I feel my right arm and hip get completely sprayed by her. This was her wettest orgasm so far and she can't even catch her breath. Jennifer tenses up on my left hand, squeezing it almost as hard as Kelly does to my dick. Jennifer's hands squeeze Lisa's breast and Kelly's lips as she holds on for dear life and the pleasure overpowers every inch of her. Our orgasms and their afterglow last for a very long time, possibly an entire 30 seconds before any of us can really think straight again.
I'm the first of us to speak while I keep my fingers and dick inside the three girls "That...was...amazing!"
Kelly had her hands over her face, seemingly shy about something but not telling us yet. Jennifer wiggled her hips on my fingers gently and said "That was such a good idea, Erik. Wow. We have to do this again. Many times. HAVE TO! I'm not asking. I'll kidnap all three of you if need be."
Lisa giggled "You can kidnap me for sex any time! Um Erik...I think I made a big mess of your bedroom just now. I'm really sorry about that."
I quickly told her "Don't be sorry. Your wet orgasms are super sexy. It feels good having your cum on my arm and hip. Messes are easy to clean. We'll just set up towels with you in the future."
Lisa's mouth dropped "Jesus I got your hip too? The carpet must be a complete puddle now."
I moved my foot to check. I answered her "Yeeeep. But don't be sorry. It's super sexy, just like the rest of you"
Kelly finally moved her hands from her face "Erik...wow. I don't know what to say. Just, so wonderful. I have a new fetish now apparently that I'm embarrassed to admit, especially because Lisa and Jennifer can't try it."
Jennifer looked at her "You really liked being filled with cum didn't you?"
Kelly sheepishly nodded "Uh huh. It's...it's hard to explain what it feels like. But it's SO hot. I think I actually came twice back to back. I felt like I might have. Girls you have both GOT to get on the pill as soon as possible."
Jennifer chuckled and sarcastically replied "Yeah sure, I'll just tell my parents that I need pills now so that I can get creampied by the neighbor boy. I'm sure that'll work out exactly as planned."
Lisa then added "We do have to tell our parents that we're all together soon though. Hopefully they'll be mature about it. My mom has actually asked me directly if I was sleeping with Erik on a couple occasions. I think all of our parents are kinda...I dunno...expecting this?"
I laughed "Yeah I know my mom has been. She has actually encouraged me to date all of you at once a few times. I used to get upset about that because I really wanted it but never thought it would be possible. I'm going to tell her tomorrow about the Diamond. And...I should probably tell her that we're sexually active now, if only to get her to buy me some condoms."
Kelly then asked "Should we stay in the morning to talk with her with you, instead of leaving before she gets here like we planned? I feel like we should do this together."
I nodded "Yeah, I think that's a good idea. But for now, we should get cleaned up and actually go to bed. It's late as hell."
I finally exited the girls, which produced a mild panic as Kelly instantly started leaking my jizz and none of us were ready for that. A rush for paper towels got everything taken care of, including the wet spot on the carpet and the various spots on the sheets. Eventually we all snuggled together in my bed, all of us still naked, and we finally allowed ourselves to fall asleep in our giant cozy cuddle. We made sure to close the door, since my mom was unlikely to open it while I was asleep in here. We really didn't want her walking in on us like this.
***Epilogue***
We woke up at noon, which wasn't a big surprise seeing as how late we stayed up and how worn out we all were. Luckily my mom left us alone (not that she knew the girls were in here with me or anything). We all quickly got dressed and headed out of the bedroom. Amusingly, my mom was asleep, meaning that we could make an easy getaway if we wanted to do so.
When my mother woke up later in the afternoon, we flagged her down for the big talk. I was shocked by the fact that she WASN'T shocked by what we were telling her. In fact, the thing that surprised my mom the most was our insistence that we had never done anything sexual together before last night. We were then informed that she and the other parents had been suspecting something for quite a while, and literally every adult knew that my house when my mom was at work was the perfect place for unsupervised hookups and things like that. They've been keeping a sly eye on us for months looking for clues and hints that we were doing things, and especially paying attention to if any of the girls ever went into my house with me at night.
This also meant that were were totally going to get busted for the girls lying about whose house they stayed over at last night. Yikes! That'll be a fun chat I'm sure.
When my mom learned about the Diamond, she smiled and did a fist pump in the air while saying "I knew it! Score! And they thought I was crazy."
Horribly confused, we asked what she was talking about. Turns out most of the parents in this neighborhood (and not just for these three girls) had all been running a secret betting game were everybody bet on which local girl would be the first to get with me, the only boy in the neighborhood since all of the girls loved spending time with me. Apparently most of the parents bet on their own daughters, while my mom actually put her own money on a poly romance with me having a harem. That means we just won my mom all the money.
My mom also joked about how Hayley's dad was going to be very sad that his daughter wasn't part of the Diamond, since he's apparently been shipping her and me hardcore. We all found that pretty funny, since Hayley is a very nice girl but she and I don't have a lot in common and don't hang out nearly as much as I do with my Diamond mates. Lisa had this naughty grin on her face hearing about this, and I could see wheels turning in her mind about how to use this information.
After we told her everything, my mother announced various ground rules moving forward. Rule #1 was condoms every time, no excuses, and she didn't give a flying fuck who was on the pill. She made us all swear to this, which we did. Rule #2 was that we never used her bed, because that was a hard line in her mind. Rule #3 was that we always use towels and stuff to keep from making messes, because she warned us that sex was a very messy thing (as we were all very aware now). Rule #4 was a very longwinded and drawn-out lecture about consent which we really didn't need what-so-ever, but she felt the need to give us the speech anyway. And finally Rule #5 was her asking that all of us (the girls too) feel free to talk with her about anything in our relationship at any time, including private things we didn't want to tell the others for whatever reasons.
My mom agreed to tell the parents of the girls about everything, and I think partially she was wanting to gloat about winning the bet. She calmed us all by telling us that their parents would all be fine with this as long as we promised to be honest with them and never lie about where we were again.
The rest of the day was spent telling everybody else we knew about the Diamond. We gathered the entire group of girls we knew together, even the ones we didn't hang out with all that much. Their ages ranged from 15 to 10. We all hung out in our favorite private wooded hangout in the neighborhood where nobody could see us and adults never bothered us.
The other girls were astonished when they learned that not only were we all in a relationship together now, but that we all actually had sex with each other all last night. Soooooo many questions. Kelly was blushing hard from most of the questions we were asked, but it was still fun to answer them. Jennifer was surprised by how positive the response to her being bisexual was, with Lisa telling everybody that she had also turned kinda bi because of how awesome Jennifer and Kelly are. Jennifer's mouth dropped when in response to this confession, two of the others we hang out with confessed to finding girls attractive sexually too. The four of us in the Diamond couldn't help but keep physical contact with each other at all time, which the other girls found adorable. Apparently we were all glowing.
And then there's Lisa, who let slip that we all took a boatload of nudes and sex vids of each other last night. Naturally most of the girls wanted to see them and were sad when we declined. Lots of the girls were looking at me with fairly hungry eyes, which I certainly noticed. It's like the existence of nudie pictures of me (and the tales of how good I am in bed and how big I was in my pants) had turned me into the center of attention for every girl in the neighborhood now. My next door neighbor Hayley was blushing at almost Kelly levels. Perhaps it wasn't just her dad that was shipping the two of us, or at the very least she found me attractive.
Lisa then shocked every single one of us by asking "So ladies...who here would be willing to get naked right now, if it meant that Erik got naked too and let you see his penis?"
A dozen simultaneous gasps could be heard. I was about to protest when Lisa moved in front of me, kissed me, and then asked me in a sexy voice "Erik, you hot little boy, would you be willing to strip naked for the entire neighborhood of beautiful girls in exchange for seeing literally all of them naked right back?"
I blushed a little and looked over at the crowd of estrogen staring at me. I think all of us were considering this. I timidly replied "Maybe?"
Lisa suddenly took all of her clothes off while we all watched completely stunned. She was suddenly naked, fully naked head to toe without even her sandals on, outside in front of everyone we know! She grinned huge as she twirled for the viewing pleasure of the crowd. The other girls shrieked and stared, not believing what they were witnessing.
Lisa then asked again "Come on, ladies! I know it's really scary to think about a boy seeing you naked. Trust me, I was SO scared when I did it the first time. But it feels SUPER hot when you do it. It feels like you're going to cum just from being looked at, it's so fucking hot. It feels better than anything you've ever felt, I swear it. You'll see. And it's Erik, we can trust him 100%. He would never make fun of us or hurt us. Instead he'll get super horny for us and we get to see him all naked and horny for us. And he's totally hot without clothes, believe me!"
The girls trembled in place, all of them pretty nervous about what was being asked of them. Jennifer then told them "No phones by the way, no pictures. This is just for us to enjoy and remember. It means a lot to Lisa for all of us to stop being shy with each other now that we're in puberty. She's told me before how she wants all of us to see everyone else naked, including seeing Erik and him seeing us, so that we'll all stop being so awkward and nervous around him. I think it's a good idea."
As we all watched, Jennifer took her clothes off next. She was far more nervous about doing it than Lisa was, but once she was naked Lisa ran over and gave her a giant naked hug. Kelly sheepishly went next, blushing like crazy yet also smiling very brightly while looking at everyone. Once naked, Kelly looked me up and down in a very naughty way, as if her imagination was running away with this. I think the idea of showing me off to all of the other girls was starting to turn Kelly on. Knowing her fetish for watching, I had a strong suspicion that she was going to get extremely wet from watching all of our friends staring at my body and getting aroused by the sight.
Once all three of my lovers were naked, the other girls knew it was their turns next. Unsurprisingly, Lisa's 10-year-old little sister Mary was the first of the crowd to strip. Mary is just as wild as her older sister, and it was easy to see that this little girl was going to do just about anything that was asked of her in order to see a real live naked boy in front of her. We of the Diamond cheered for Mary, and I told her that she was super sexy just like her sister. I wasn't lying either, she was pretty hot for her age.
Slowly the others started to undress as peer pressure and increased arousal kicked in. Even my very cute and very shy neighbor Hayley stripped to her bra and panties before chickening out. One by one the girls got naked for me, and my eyes were probably huge. I made it a point to tell each and every single one of them how good they looked once they were naked, usually complimenting something specific about their bodies that I liked. I could always see this wave of joy and relaxation wash over each nervously nude girl when I told them that they were beautiful.
The last one to hold out was Hayley, shivering in her undies unable to go any farther. She pleaded "Can't I please keep these on? I can't go any farther.... I'm too shy."
All of us, including the other newly-naked girls, began showering Hayley with compliments and encouragement to get her to finish stripping down. Somehow it wasn't enough though, as she kept shivering in place. Words weren't going to work with her. She was just too scared of letting a boy see her naked, even with peer pressure and positive encouragement on this magnitude. It may have also been a sign that she really did have some level of crush on me specifically, which made it extra hard for her to strip in front of me specifically.
I looked over at Kelly and asked her "Can I do something special to help Hayley out?"
She looked back at me with a smile and I could tell she knew exactly what I was asking. She answered "Go for it!"
With Kelly's blessing, I walked over in front of Hayley and wrapped my arms around her. She instantly went massively red and stared at me in shock. She didn't resist though, not even a tiny bit.
I looked into her eyes and asked "If I give you a really good kiss right now, will you let me take your clothes off during the kiss?"
Hayley gasped. She then silently blinked five times in a row before slowly nodding yes. I locked my lips onto hers and used all of the skills I had learned last night about how to completely rock a woman with a kiss. I felt Hayley melt, almost collapsing to the ground as her knees gave out. With my hands behind her back, I undid her bra for her and pulled it off. She moaned from that as I quickly moved to pull down her panties. When she was naked I purposely avoided touching her in any naughty places, but my hands rubbing her back were making her into a very happy girl. The other girls shrieked excitedly at us kissing.
Finally I broke the kiss and backed away, looking at her uncovered beauty. I then told her "You are absolutely gorgeous. Why would you ever be shy or hide such a sexy body? I really like what I see. Also you're a nice kisser, that was fun."
She nervously responded "Thanks. That...uh...was my first kiss. I really was good?"
I smiled "Yep! 100% truth. You're going to make some boy VERY happy some day, I promise. But first, I guess I have to make you and all of the other girls very happy on this day."
I walked in front of the girls, who had gathered into an audience all facing me now. Even my lovers were in the crowd excited to watch me strip. It occurred to me that none of the Diamond had ever actually seen me take any clothes off, since I was naked in the shower when they first walked in on me.
Trying my best to put on a sexy show, I pulled off my shirt for the dozen sexy naked girls watching. I flexed my arms and chest a little bit before slipping off my shoes and socks. The girls were cheering and giving me tons of encouragement, and I could see how excited they were all getting from this. When my pants went down and I was only in my underwear, most of the girls began to tremble from the excitement and anticipation. Lisa had her hand moving between her legs, not even caring if any of us saw what she was doing.
Amazingly I wasn't nearly as embarrassed as I thought I would be when stripping for literally every girl that I knew and played with. This should be so scary and mortifying, the idea that every single one of them was about to see my dick. And yet it really wasn't, because each and every one of them was stark naked in front of me first and that made me rock freaking hard. All of them could see the bulge in my blue briefs, and those briefs were about to come down. I think after all of us thinking she was crazy, Lisa may have been the smartest of us all along. If we're ALL naked together, then it's no longer scary or embarrassing. It's just hot as fuck! And here we were, acting out her giant fantasy of having the entire neighborhood strip for each other, and all of us were much more turned on than shy. Lisa was right all along.
With a pose, I slowly lowered my briefs. I wanted to really torture the girls because the anticipation was killing them. Even the ones who had already seen me naked last night were over there drooling from the strip show, and I planned to milk this for all it was worth. I inched my waistband lower and lower until my hip bones were showing. The top of my pubes came into view and there wasn't a single blinking eye in the audience. As I inched lower and lower, I pulled the back side down all the way first. If any girl had been behind me they would be able to see my entire butt, but the entire crowd was in front of me staring at the blue fabric stretched like crazy by my erection and not covering anything else on me. At this point I slowed down even more, just gently pulling down on the sides of my undies. Tiny bit by tiny bit the waistband moved down my body until the base of my shaft was exposed. Slowly, torturing the girls, I inched it down my long erection while they all shivered and squealed in delight. When I eventually reached the tip, feeling like it took an eternity to get there, I purposely jerked downwards causing my dick to pop up and stick out pointed towards them all. The girls extreme reaction to seeing my complete naked dick was utter pandemonium. It was the boy band screams all over again.
Once I was naked I turned to let the girls see my butt. I also got to enjoy a view of all of the girls from behind when they turned for me, and even got them all to bend over for me so that I could see them from behind completely. A few of the girls exposed their lips by bending over so much, which was totally hot.
We all stared at each other, all of us overflowing with sexual energy. Lisa kept going back to touching herself, seemingly unable to stop. She then dared all of us to masturbate too and to quit being afraid. The moment she said that, and I mean the precise moment her sentence finished, Kelly's hand went to her fuzzy kitty and started rubbing herself frantically. It was as if she had only barely been keeping it together and Lisa's dare was the last straw which broke her. Quickly all of the girls did the same, as a dozen sexy naked girls were standing there rubbing their pussies right in front of me!
As I started stroking my dick for them in return, I realized that there was no chance of me lasting a super long time when I was this horny. How the hell was I this sensitive even after cumming three times last night? I guess seeing literally every girl I know naked and fingering themselves was just too powerful of a stimulant.
Some of the girls were having trouble while standing, so Jennifer ordered all of them to sit on the grass and spread their legs for me. For a few seconds I had a complete unblocked view of a dozen wide-opened pussies pointed right at me, which was nearly enough to make me cum right then and there. I held back out of pure willpower, but then the girls all started rubbing themselves like that. I wasn't going to make it, so I had to release the pressure and move my hand around my dick instead of touching it for a little bit in order to last longer. I was trembling a little and getting very ready to blow.
Kelly then yelled at me "Erik! Don't be shy. Cum for us, darling! We want to see you cum!"
The other girls all joined in begging me to cum. Twelve beautiful, naked, masturbating girls, each one important to me, each one my friend, each one sexy as fuck, and each one moaning and begging me to cum for them. That set me off like nothing else ever had! Not even sex itself had sent me off the deep edge as fast as that moment did. I came so hard and so fast once they started begging me that I growled like a grizzly, shooting cum all over the grass while pointed at the girls. I thrusted and grunted, shooting again and again. I shot 6 times before it finally stopped.
After seeing me do that, the girls all began to cum one after the other. I stood there watching in awe as each one reached the point of squirming and twitching, usually shouting as she did. Kelly came and refused to stop, rubbing herself frantically at high speeds. As more and more of the girls climaxed, including Lisa who seemed very proud of getting off unassisted for the first time, Kelly just never stopped. Kelly went off three more times until she was the last of us still masturbating. Everyone was watching her in awe as she just kept going and going, looking around at all of the eyes on her and blushing crimson but never stopping or slowing down.
I couldn't resist her any more as I ran over to her position and pounced her into a deep unbroken kiss. I lied her down using my left arm as a pillow while my right hand took over for her rubbing her clit. My touch pushed Kelly to a whole 'nother level of pleasure as she came again loudly in front of our friends. I didn't stop rubbing or kissing her, and quickly I felt the hands of Lisa and Jennifer reaching in to rub her nipples. With all of us rubbing her she came again just 10 seconds after the last one. Kelly had told us that she could go again and again without stopping, usually only giving up when she literally collapsed out of exhaustion. Kelly had made it very, VERY clear that she liking cumming repeatedly until she physically can't anymore. And knowing that, we were all here to give her what she needed.
Jennifer then pushed things to the next level by calling out "Come on, girls! Everyone come help rub Kelly or grab her hands."
Kelly made a very high pitched noise of excitement into my mouth when she heard Jennifer say that. The entire neighborhood quickly dove onto her. I couldn't see much since I was kissing her, but I could feel hands and girls fumbling everywhere. They rubbed every inch of Kelly's legs, her arms, two girls held her hands tightly on either side of her, and it felt like a couple of the girls were rubbing her pubic region next to where my hand was. Wanting to drive Kelly to absolute maximum 100%, I took my lips off of her and instead bit her neck fiercely. She screamed like a banshee and came instantly while I gripped her neck tightly.
She loudly begged "Don't stop! Oh fuck don't stop! Fuck fuck fuck FUCK FUCK THIS IS SO GOOD!! FUUUUUUUUUCK!"
We all kept stimulating her as she came six more times, moaning and begging for more constantly. For the last orgasm Kelly was too tired to even make much noise, just slightly twitching her hips and barely grunting. I signaled everyone to stop and let her come down finally. This beautiful woman in my arms was lost in pure bliss, almost in a dream state and barely still awake. Her eyes were glossy and barely able to stay open, and her mouth hung open as she quietly breathed heavily. I gave her a gentle kiss to relax her, bringing a cute smile on her face.
I softly told her "You are truly amazing, Kelly. You deserve this. All of us, everyone you know, wanted to give you the best experience ever."
She looked into my eyes "You did. You really, truly did."
I then kissed her forehead, causing her to shiver slightly. With a smile I said to her "Rest for a little bit. I'll stay here with you."
Jennifer and Lisa both lied down in the grass with us, with Jennifer saying "We're here too."
The rest of the girls were amazed at everything that they've seen today. We were all still hanging out in this wooded area, totally naked, having all masturbated together and then worked together to let Kelly experience her true maximum. Our neighbors began to celebrate our Diamond and tell us how badly they all wanted something like that for themselves. Several of the girls made it clear that they were open to joining us for more bits of open public fun like this if we ever wanted to do it again. Lisa seemed into that idea for sure. I had a feeling that it wouldn't be proper for me to initiate anything with the other girls myself, but I honestly would be very open to another mutual masturbation session with all of the girls naked and watching me if that is on the table. Who knows? There are no rules to any of this really, other than us four always trying to make the others happy in any way that we can.
****
As the days and weeks went on we experimented with all sorts of things, trying out any fantasies or ideas that one of us had. We all enjoyed embracing the unique fetishes and tastes that made up all four of us.
Kelly really grew to enjoy watching others more and more, to the point where she wanted one night for us to be forbidden from touching her until she said otherwise. She wanted to just watch me, Lisa, and Jennifer have a threesome without her even being in it, while she sat nearby fingering herself to the live porn. It wound up getting her crazy hot and bothered, and the three of us made sure to put on a good show for her. After we all came (her several times) she then wanted massive cuddles and group snuggles. While Kelly enjoyed watching sexual acts, if she watched us do romantic and sweet acts she immediately wanted in on all of that and couldn't bear to just watch. Kelly was always huge on hugs, kisses, and skin-on-skin romantic contact with all of us (and especially me). While she did eventually get far less shy, she never lost her ability to blush all over her entire upper body any time that I turned up the heat with her. She knew that I preferred red Kelly over regular Kelly, and the fact that she knew her blushes turned me on only served to make her blush twice as hard every time she noticed herself blushing. It was a glorious vicious cycle that I will always enjoy.
Lisa, as we had always suspected, began to embrace her natural exhibitionism now that a lot of her fear of being seen naked was gone. People looking at her when she was naked never stopped being a huge turn-on for Lisa, and not just one of us three. She started to really enjoy others looking at her too, as long as she liked and trusted the person. Lisa really enjoyed organizing events where the other girls in the neighborhood could get naked too and watch us, including getting me to have sex with her outside in the grass while everyone else watched. By force of willpower she developed a very strong attraction to girls which rivaled her attraction to boys, meaning Lisa started enjoying getting the neighbor girls naked just as much as I did.
Lisa also started asking us to "force" her to be naked in public places, which was a game were either me or Jennifer would steal her clothes and restrain her arms so that she couldn't cover up. We would do this in public places where nobody could see her, but the risk of getting caught by someone while naked would cause her to drip down her legs the entire time we held her in place. One day Lisa even requested that the three of us all strip her naked and hold her arms and legs apart when this cute boy she knew from school was over at her house hanging out. The boy's eyes almost escaped his skull staring at the naked Lisa, who fought and struggled to escape us holding her on the floor like an X completely and explicitly exposed for the boy. Being "forced" naked in front of that boy got Lisa so soaked and horny that she managed to have two back to back orgasms that day. As time went on, Lisa really embraced this particular kink of hers. While Lisa wasn't comfortable showing off to random people, if she liked you (boy or girl) and she had at least one of us in the Diamond to protect her there was a good chance that she would set something up to let you see her skin.
Jennifer grew into herself as time went on, really embracing publicly her enjoyment of female bodies in addition to male ones. It really touched her how all of our friends were ok with her being attracted to them, and a bunch of the girls really enjoyed getting Jennifer to look at them (even when they were nude). I could understand fully the feelings that Jennifer brought in the girls. She was always the role model, the oldest, the tallest, and the one we all sought to impress all of the time. Once we figured out that Jennifer was sexually attracted to us, both me and the neighborhood girls all had this compulsion to show off for her in order to get her approval. She really enjoyed the fact that most of her friends were having fun flashing her, flirting, or otherwise teasing her all of the time. Since Jennifer prefers to keep herself in an aroused state constantly over very long periods of time, all of this attention and stimulation helped her do so. While Jennifer enjoyed looking at all of the girls, it was well known that no girl would ever have her heart the way Lisa did (and the feeling was mutual). Jennifer also made certain to let EVERYONE at school know about the Diamond on our first day back, taking a special pleasure in flaunting in front of my old bullies about the fact that I now regularly had foursomes with three gorgeous women while they didn't get shit.
And me? I'm living my absolute dream. I can't even imagine wishing for more even if I had a genie, because my three wishes were already granted in the forms of Jennifer, Lisa, and Kelly. I make it a point to go along with anything they want from me on a sexual level, as I enjoy making them happy more than anything. Every single day is a dream come true both emotionally and sexually. My emotional closeness with Kelly grows exponentially by the day, to the point where we can make the other shiver with just eye contact and very subtle motions signifying our thoughts in the moment. I was initially worried about Lisa and Jennifer getting sad or jealous of the closeness Kelly and I had, but Jennifer explained that it's all perfectly ok for us four to have our #1 favorites. Her favorite was Lisa and mine was Kelly, but we were all always going to be together as the Diamond. Us having couples in the foursome just meant that none of us were ever left out or alone. It's so incredible to me to think that I used to be terrified of admitting my feelings for the girls and I was massively embarrassed by any and all discussions about them trying to see me naked. I was so afraid of any of the girls I know seeing me naked and possibly not liking what they saw that it filled me with far too much self doubt and a lack of my real worth. I thought being seen naked would feel horrible and potentially ruin my life. Fast forward a little bit and now I'm having naked sex with three of them, often posing nude for most of the others, and I've never been happier in my life.
And that's the real take away from all of this. I'm happy! I'm so unstoppably happy with them. To think our lives as we know them now all started because the girls got so horny one day that they trapped me in the shower in order to see me naked. The most embarrassing, humiliating moment of my life quickly transformed into the sexiest, most amazing moment of my life. Them being thirsty for me (and me them) led to all of us becoming an inseparable unit of love and passion. So I guess my advice to all of you reading this goes as follows: If you're lonely or feeling unworthy of love, just leave your doors unlocked and get naked. Maybe your true love will walk in on you to come join you when you give it bait that appealing. Don't say it'll never work, because I'm living proof that sometimes it does!
The End.
We four, the Diamond, have now lost our virginities to one-another. I, the lone boy of the group, got the honor of having sex with all three of my beloved best friends. I guess at this point they are much more than just my friends. They are my lovers, all of them. And our amazing night together needed to end with all four of us cumming together.
I explained my idea for making this work to the girls, who were all completely in agreement with me. With big smiles and dripping private parts, we all joined together to make this finale the most spectacular orgasm any of the four of us had ever experienced.
The first thing we had to do was bringing the three girls right to the edge. I was already on the edge myself after having sex with them all back to back like that, so now the girls were going to get lots of special treatment. We just had to decide how.
Jennifer suddenly shivered and flailed her hands for a second with an idea, but then quickly crossed her arms as if she was too shy to say her idea out loud. We prodded her about it until she looked at Lisa and said "Well...there's something I want to try with Lisa, if she's up to it, but it's probably asking too much. I don't want to push you too fast."
Lisa suddenly sat on Jennifer's lap facing her, legs wrapped around Jennifer's waist and arms wrapped around her shoulders, face only inches from the startled tall girl. Lisa smiled brightly and replied "But what if I LIKE being pushed? Haven't you noticed yet? I kinda...like...when somebody I trust and love physically makes me do sexy things. I like being held down while struggling. I like being pinned to the wall helplessly. I like having my clothes taken from me by force. I like having my arms ripped away if I'm covering up. I like losing bets or taking dares that force me to do scary and sexy things in front of people. And for you, Jennifer, I would really like if you pushed me into bisexuality as hard and as fast as possible. If you make me do it, it makes it easier for me and way WAY more intense. So come ooooon, what's your idea?"
Jennifer kissed Lisa quickly and then answered her "I would be honored and delighted, you delicious little snack, if you and I could 69. Earlier you kissed me and licked me down there a couple times and it drove me wild! But I never got to return the favor. I want to know what your cum tastes like! I mean, you're so wet down there, it's like you were designed to be a buffet for a thirsty girl like me. And technically you promised me earlier that you were gonna make me cum with your tongue if I was a good girl, so you owe me."
Lisa giggled "Wow, I'm sorry! I accidentally forgot about promising to get you off with my tongue earlier. Erik just kinda sorta caught us off guard with his fingers, didn't he? Oh well. A 69 sounds AWESOME! I liked the way you tasted earlier. It was sweet, just like you. I really hope you like how I taste. I...uh...tasted myself in the past. I think I taste ok at least."
Jennifer then pushed Lisa backwards onto the bed, pinning her arms down, and told her "Well I need to find out for myself!"
Lisa shivered "Oooo, that was hot. I love how strong you are! I don't think I can move right now. I kinda like that."
Jennifer smirked "Hmmm. So what would you do if I held you down where you couldn't move or escape, and then I MADE you do a 69 whether you wanted to or not?"
Lisa wiggled and looked at Jennifer with lusty intensity as she answered "Do that! Do it do it dooooo iiiiiiit!"
Jennifer gently bit Lisa's ear and then replied "As you command, my goddess"
Lisa gasped at the use of the "goddess" nickname, while Jennifer spun around on top of her. Because Jennifer is quite tall and very athletic, she was easily able to pin Lisa's arms to the bed using her legs while angling her pussy right in front of Lisa's face. Jennifer then used her arms to pin Lisa's thighs apart, staring at the tasty treat right in front of her eyes. Much like before, Lisa attempted to struggle free but was unable to escape from the much-stronger girl's hold on top of her. Lisa was quickly moaning happily. The girls wasted no time tasting each other while Kelly and I watched on in horny silence.
I finally forced myself to look over at Kelly after watching the other two engage in such a sexy act for several minutes. Kelly was staring hard at them, very red in the face, one hand rubbing her nipple while the other was moving between her legs. Her fetish for watching us was still extremely powerful. When I looked at her it caught her attention. When she noticed me watching her playing with herself she jumped and moved both of her hands shyly to her sides.
I chuckled at her "You don't have to be shy about that you know."
She smiled at me as she slowly moved her arms back to her sensitive parts "Sorry! I'm always going to be shy probably."
I rubbed her lone unrubbed nipple for her, causing her eyes to roll back for a second. I then told her "Your shyness is the cutest thing ever. Never lose it! Do you want me to lick you like them to get you warmed up?"
She cringed a little "Um...is it ok if I say no? I think I'd rather watch those two for now. Watching them is getting me plenty warmed up!"
I nodded "Yeah me too. Wanna sit on my lap then, both of us facing them while I touch you all over?"
Her eyes opened wide "Ok! That sounds really nice."
Kelly sat on my lap, her back against my chest, while my hands roamed all over her chest, legs, tummy, and pussy at will. My dick was pushing upwards between her legs as her pussy rested on it, and both of us greatly enjoyed the contact down there. It reminded us about the fact that we just actually had sex a few minutes ago, and we were getting ready to do it again. While we watched Lisa and Jennifer squirming around, licking, kissing, biting, and moaning loudly right in front of us, Kelly was breathing very hard and her own wetness was starting to rub on me down there. With her back pulled against my chest I could feel her heart beating (and she could probably feel mine). Our hearts felt like they adjusted their rhythms to match each other, beating at the exact same time every beat. It was all so romantic and sexy, so I couldn't resist whispering sweet and sexy secrets into her ear while the girls were distracted. The things I whispered into Kelly's ear were treasures for her and her alone to hear as I felt her melting into my body with every word.
Once the girls were all brought very close to climaxing, I had the three of them lie down next to each other on the side of my bed, with their legs apart and interlocked and their pussies right up on the edge for easy access by me. Jennifer, Kelly, Lisa, lying down in that order with Kelly in the middle of the others. All three beautiful naked women side by side as an amazing display of sexual perfection, my dick jumped just looking at that view. I snatched a couple pictures of them like that, explaining to them how this was the type of view that could finish me off quickly when I'm by myself. The girls seemed to enjoy that idea a lot, but they also wanted me to hurry up and finish all four of us tonight.
First I slid my dick into Jennifer's pussy, going back and forth a couple times to torment her while rubbing her clit. After a few seconds I left her, moving to Lisa instead. Lisa purred loudly at being penetrated again as she dripped all over my bed sheets. I was going to have lots of wet spots after this night but I honestly didn't care. After giving Lisa a last bit of dick, it was time to move to Kelly. Kelly and the others knew that once I went inside of Kelly this time, that I wasn't leaving until I came inside of her.
As I slid my dick slowly into Kelly's still-tight pussy, I also simultaneously slid three fingers from my left hand into Jennifer's pussy and three fingers from my right hand into Lisa's. I managed to enter and penetrate all three girls at the exact same time, which caused a very sexy triple-moan from the girls which gave me quite a shiver. As I started fucking all three of them together, their hands ran quickly over their neighbors' bodies to rub all of the good places. Kelly had both of her hands rubbing the clits of the other girls, while Jennifer was rubbing Kelly's clit masterfully. Lisa had both arms playing with Kelly's boobs, while Jennifer's long left arm reach over Kelly and squeezed Lisa's right breast tightly.
I couldn't help but grunt and groan loudly with every thrust into Kelly, as her overall tightness and constant bouts of squeezing me were sending me to the edge very fast. The girls were moaning in harmony with my thrusts into them using my hands or my dick, and the sound of all three girls moaning together perfectly was among the biggest turn ons of this entire wild and crazy night. I wasn't going to last long at all, so even though I was only fucking them for 30 seconds at this point I really hoped that the girls were ready.
As they moaned together over and over again, I announced "Fuck I'm close! You three are just so damn hot. I'm going to begin the countdown now. When I hit zero, we all go off. Ready?"
They all yelled "YES!" perfectly synchronized.
"10" All of us breathed in and out together, feeling the magic of the moment.
"9" I sped up a little, listening to my song of sirens singing for me.
"8" My God I'm so close. Speeding up may have been a mistake. I'm about to explode!
"7" I'm trying to hold out until the end. Kelly tensing on me is making that very difficult.
"6" I'm speeding up my countdown or else I'm going to lose it. I doubt the girls mind.
"5" Lisa's entire body is twitching and her legs are almost kicking free. I think she's about to cum early!
"4" Seeing Lisa lose it is sending Jennifer over the edge too as she squirms and purrs.
"3" Kelly gasps and squeezes me firmly. She's losing her control as well.
"2" None of the girls are moaning in sync anymore as they're all grabbing on desperately trying to reach zero without going off early.
"1" My dick is full of my cum and vibrating out of control, I can't hold back even one more second!
"0" We all scream together!
I shoot everything I have into Kelly, thrust after thrust. As she trembles her pussy grabs me like a vice and milks every drop, not letting even one drop stay behind in my dick. Lisa kicks wildly, her right leg pinned by my torso, as I feel my right arm and hip get completely sprayed by her. This was her wettest orgasm so far and she can't even catch her breath. Jennifer tenses up on my left hand, squeezing it almost as hard as Kelly does to my dick. Jennifer's hands squeeze Lisa's breast and Kelly's lips as she holds on for dear life and the pleasure overpowers every inch of her. Our orgasms and their afterglow last for a very long time, possibly an entire 30 seconds before any of us can really think straight again.
I'm the first of us to speak while I keep my fingers and dick inside the three girls "That...was...amazing!"
Kelly had her hands over her face, seemingly shy about something but not telling us yet. Jennifer wiggled her hips on my fingers gently and said "That was such a good idea, Erik. Wow. We have to do this again. Many times. HAVE TO! I'm not asking. I'll kidnap all three of you if need be."
Lisa giggled "You can kidnap me for sex any time! Um Erik...I think I made a big mess of your bedroom just now. I'm really sorry about that."
I quickly told her "Don't be sorry. Your wet orgasms are super sexy. It feels good having your cum on my arm and hip. Messes are easy to clean. We'll just set up towels with you in the future."
Lisa's mouth dropped "Jesus I got your hip too? The carpet must be a complete puddle now."
I moved my foot to check. I answered her "Yeeeep. But don't be sorry. It's super sexy, just like the rest of you"
Kelly finally moved her hands from her face "Erik...wow. I don't know what to say. Just, so wonderful. I have a new fetish now apparently that I'm embarrassed to admit, especially because Lisa and Jennifer can't try it."
Jennifer looked at her "You really liked being filled with cum didn't you?"
Kelly sheepishly nodded "Uh huh. It's...it's hard to explain what it feels like. But it's SO hot. I think I actually came twice back to back. I felt like I might have. Girls you have both GOT to get on the pill as soon as possible."
Jennifer chuckled and sarcastically replied "Yeah sure, I'll just tell my parents that I need pills now so that I can get creampied by the neighbor boy. I'm sure that'll work out exactly as planned."
Lisa then added "We do have to tell our parents that we're all together soon though. Hopefully they'll be mature about it. My mom has actually asked me directly if I was sleeping with Erik on a couple occasions. I think all of our parents are kinda...I dunno...expecting this?"
I laughed "Yeah I know my mom has been. She has actually encouraged me to date all of you at once a few times. I used to get upset about that because I really wanted it but never thought it would be possible. I'm going to tell her tomorrow about the Diamond. And...I should probably tell her that we're sexually active now, if only to get her to buy me some condoms."
Kelly then asked "Should we stay in the morning to talk with her with you, instead of leaving before she gets here like we planned? I feel like we should do this together."
I nodded "Yeah, I think that's a good idea. But for now, we should get cleaned up and actually go to bed. It's late as hell."
I finally exited the girls, which produced a mild panic as Kelly instantly started leaking my jizz and none of us were ready for that. A rush for paper towels got everything taken care of, including the wet spot on the carpet and the various spots on the sheets. Eventually we all snuggled together in my bed, all of us still naked, and we finally allowed ourselves to fall asleep in our giant cozy cuddle. We made sure to close the door, since my mom was unlikely to open it while I was asleep in here. We really didn't want her walking in on us like this.
***Epilogue***
We woke up at noon, which wasn't a big surprise seeing as how late we stayed up and how worn out we all were. Luckily my mom left us alone (not that she knew the girls were in here with me or anything). We all quickly got dressed and headed out of the bedroom. Amusingly, my mom was asleep, meaning that we could make an easy getaway if we wanted to do so.
When my mother woke up later in the afternoon, we flagged her down for the big talk. I was shocked by the fact that she WASN'T shocked by what we were telling her. In fact, the thing that surprised my mom the most was our insistence that we had never done anything sexual together before last night. We were then informed that she and the other parents had been suspecting something for quite a while, and literally every adult knew that my house when my mom was at work was the perfect place for unsupervised hookups and things like that. They've been keeping a sly eye on us for months looking for clues and hints that we were doing things, and especially paying attention to if any of the girls ever went into my house with me at night.
This also meant that were were totally going to get busted for the girls lying about whose house they stayed over at last night. Yikes! That'll be a fun chat I'm sure.
When my mom learned about the Diamond, she smiled and did a fist pump in the air while saying "I knew it! Score! And they thought I was crazy."
Horribly confused, we asked what she was talking about. Turns out most of the parents in this neighborhood (and not just for these three girls) had all been running a secret betting game were everybody bet on which local girl would be the first to get with me, the only boy in the neighborhood since all of the girls loved spending time with me. Apparently most of the parents bet on their own daughters, while my mom actually put her own money on a poly romance with me having a harem. That means we just won my mom all the money.
My mom also joked about how Hayley's dad was going to be very sad that his daughter wasn't part of the Diamond, since he's apparently been shipping her and me hardcore. We all found that pretty funny, since Hayley is a very nice girl but she and I don't have a lot in common and don't hang out nearly as much as I do with my Diamond mates. Lisa had this naughty grin on her face hearing about this, and I could see wheels turning in her mind about how to use this information.
After we told her everything, my mother announced various ground rules moving forward. Rule #1 was condoms every time, no excuses, and she didn't give a flying fuck who was on the pill. She made us all swear to this, which we did. Rule #2 was that we never used her bed, because that was a hard line in her mind. Rule #3 was that we always use towels and stuff to keep from making messes, because she warned us that sex was a very messy thing (as we were all very aware now). Rule #4 was a very longwinded and drawn-out lecture about consent which we really didn't need what-so-ever, but she felt the need to give us the speech anyway. And finally Rule #5 was her asking that all of us (the girls too) feel free to talk with her about anything in our relationship at any time, including private things we didn't want to tell the others for whatever reasons.
My mom agreed to tell the parents of the girls about everything, and I think partially she was wanting to gloat about winning the bet. She calmed us all by telling us that their parents would all be fine with this as long as we promised to be honest with them and never lie about where we were again.
The rest of the day was spent telling everybody else we knew about the Diamond. We gathered the entire group of girls we knew together, even the ones we didn't hang out with all that much. Their ages ranged from 15 to 10. We all hung out in our favorite private wooded hangout in the neighborhood where nobody could see us and adults never bothered us.
The other girls were astonished when they learned that not only were we all in a relationship together now, but that we all actually had sex with each other all last night. Soooooo many questions. Kelly was blushing hard from most of the questions we were asked, but it was still fun to answer them. Jennifer was surprised by how positive the response to her being bisexual was, with Lisa telling everybody that she had also turned kinda bi because of how awesome Jennifer and Kelly are. Jennifer's mouth dropped when in response to this confession, two of the others we hang out with confessed to finding girls attractive sexually too. The four of us in the Diamond couldn't help but keep physical contact with each other at all time, which the other girls found adorable. Apparently we were all glowing.
And then there's Lisa, who let slip that we all took a boatload of nudes and sex vids of each other last night. Naturally most of the girls wanted to see them and were sad when we declined. Lots of the girls were looking at me with fairly hungry eyes, which I certainly noticed. It's like the existence of nudie pictures of me (and the tales of how good I am in bed and how big I was in my pants) had turned me into the center of attention for every girl in the neighborhood now. My next door neighbor Hayley was blushing at almost Kelly levels. Perhaps it wasn't just her dad that was shipping the two of us, or at the very least she found me attractive.
Lisa then shocked every single one of us by asking "So ladies...who here would be willing to get naked right now, if it meant that Erik got naked too and let you see his penis?"
A dozen simultaneous gasps could be heard. I was about to protest when Lisa moved in front of me, kissed me, and then asked me in a sexy voice "Erik, you hot little boy, would you be willing to strip naked for the entire neighborhood of beautiful girls in exchange for seeing literally all of them naked right back?"
I blushed a little and looked over at the crowd of estrogen staring at me. I think all of us were considering this. I timidly replied "Maybe?"
Lisa suddenly took all of her clothes off while we all watched completely stunned. She was suddenly naked, fully naked head to toe without even her sandals on, outside in front of everyone we know! She grinned huge as she twirled for the viewing pleasure of the crowd. The other girls shrieked and stared, not believing what they were witnessing.
Lisa then asked again "Come on, ladies! I know it's really scary to think about a boy seeing you naked. Trust me, I was SO scared when I did it the first time. But it feels SUPER hot when you do it. It feels like you're going to cum just from being looked at, it's so fucking hot. It feels better than anything you've ever felt, I swear it. You'll see. And it's Erik, we can trust him 100%. He would never make fun of us or hurt us. Instead he'll get super horny for us and we get to see him all naked and horny for us. And he's totally hot without clothes, believe me!"
The girls trembled in place, all of them pretty nervous about what was being asked of them. Jennifer then told them "No phones by the way, no pictures. This is just for us to enjoy and remember. It means a lot to Lisa for all of us to stop being shy with each other now that we're in puberty. She's told me before how she wants all of us to see everyone else naked, including seeing Erik and him seeing us, so that we'll all stop being so awkward and nervous around him. I think it's a good idea."
As we all watched, Jennifer took her clothes off next. She was far more nervous about doing it than Lisa was, but once she was naked Lisa ran over and gave her a giant naked hug. Kelly sheepishly went next, blushing like crazy yet also smiling very brightly while looking at everyone. Once naked, Kelly looked me up and down in a very naughty way, as if her imagination was running away with this. I think the idea of showing me off to all of the other girls was starting to turn Kelly on. Knowing her fetish for watching, I had a strong suspicion that she was going to get extremely wet from watching all of our friends staring at my body and getting aroused by the sight.
Once all three of my lovers were naked, the other girls knew it was their turns next. Unsurprisingly, Lisa's 10-year-old little sister Mary was the first of the crowd to strip. Mary is just as wild as her older sister, and it was easy to see that this little girl was going to do just about anything that was asked of her in order to see a real live naked boy in front of her. We of the Diamond cheered for Mary, and I told her that she was super sexy just like her sister. I wasn't lying either, she was pretty hot for her age.
Slowly the others started to undress as peer pressure and increased arousal kicked in. Even my very cute and very shy neighbor Hayley stripped to her bra and panties before chickening out. One by one the girls got naked for me, and my eyes were probably huge. I made it a point to tell each and every single one of them how good they looked once they were naked, usually complimenting something specific about their bodies that I liked. I could always see this wave of joy and relaxation wash over each nervously nude girl when I told them that they were beautiful.
The last one to hold out was Hayley, shivering in her undies unable to go any farther. She pleaded "Can't I please keep these on? I can't go any farther.... I'm too shy."
All of us, including the other newly-naked girls, began showering Hayley with compliments and encouragement to get her to finish stripping down. Somehow it wasn't enough though, as she kept shivering in place. Words weren't going to work with her. She was just too scared of letting a boy see her naked, even with peer pressure and positive encouragement on this magnitude. It may have also been a sign that she really did have some level of crush on me specifically, which made it extra hard for her to strip in front of me specifically.
I looked over at Kelly and asked her "Can I do something special to help Hayley out?"
She looked back at me with a smile and I could tell she knew exactly what I was asking. She answered "Go for it!"
With Kelly's blessing, I walked over in front of Hayley and wrapped my arms around her. She instantly went massively red and stared at me in shock. She didn't resist though, not even a tiny bit.
I looked into her eyes and asked "If I give you a really good kiss right now, will you let me take your clothes off during the kiss?"
Hayley gasped. She then silently blinked five times in a row before slowly nodding yes. I locked my lips onto hers and used all of the skills I had learned last night about how to completely rock a woman with a kiss. I felt Hayley melt, almost collapsing to the ground as her knees gave out. With my hands behind her back, I undid her bra for her and pulled it off. She moaned from that as I quickly moved to pull down her panties. When she was naked I purposely avoided touching her in any naughty places, but my hands rubbing her back were making her into a very happy girl. The other girls shrieked excitedly at us kissing.
Finally I broke the kiss and backed away, looking at her uncovered beauty. I then told her "You are absolutely gorgeous. Why would you ever be shy or hide such a sexy body? I really like what I see. Also you're a nice kisser, that was fun."
She nervously responded "Thanks. That...uh...was my first kiss. I really was good?"
I smiled "Yep! 100% truth. You're going to make some boy VERY happy some day, I promise. But first, I guess I have to make you and all of the other girls very happy on this day."
I walked in front of the girls, who had gathered into an audience all facing me now. Even my lovers were in the crowd excited to watch me strip. It occurred to me that none of the Diamond had ever actually seen me take any clothes off, since I was naked in the shower when they first walked in on me.
Trying my best to put on a sexy show, I pulled off my shirt for the dozen sexy naked girls watching. I flexed my arms and chest a little bit before slipping off my shoes and socks. The girls were cheering and giving me tons of encouragement, and I could see how excited they were all getting from this. When my pants went down and I was only in my underwear, most of the girls began to tremble from the excitement and anticipation. Lisa had her hand moving between her legs, not even caring if any of us saw what she was doing.
Amazingly I wasn't nearly as embarrassed as I thought I would be when stripping for literally every girl that I knew and played with. This should be so scary and mortifying, the idea that every single one of them was about to see my dick. And yet it really wasn't, because each and every one of them was stark naked in front of me first and that made me rock freaking hard. All of them could see the bulge in my blue briefs, and those briefs were about to come down. I think after all of us thinking she was crazy, Lisa may have been the smartest of us all along. If we're ALL naked together, then it's no longer scary or embarrassing. It's just hot as fuck! And here we were, acting out her giant fantasy of having the entire neighborhood strip for each other, and all of us were much more turned on than shy. Lisa was right all along.
With a pose, I slowly lowered my briefs. I wanted to really torture the girls because the anticipation was killing them. Even the ones who had already seen me naked last night were over there drooling from the strip show, and I planned to milk this for all it was worth. I inched my waistband lower and lower until my hip bones were showing. The top of my pubes came into view and there wasn't a single blinking eye in the audience. As I inched lower and lower, I pulled the back side down all the way first. If any girl had been behind me they would be able to see my entire butt, but the entire crowd was in front of me staring at the blue fabric stretched like crazy by my erection and not covering anything else on me. At this point I slowed down even more, just gently pulling down on the sides of my undies. Tiny bit by tiny bit the waistband moved down my body until the base of my shaft was exposed. Slowly, torturing the girls, I inched it down my long erection while they all shivered and squealed in delight. When I eventually reached the tip, feeling like it took an eternity to get there, I purposely jerked downwards causing my dick to pop up and stick out pointed towards them all. The girls extreme reaction to seeing my complete naked dick was utter pandemonium. It was the boy band screams all over again.
Once I was naked I turned to let the girls see my butt. I also got to enjoy a view of all of the girls from behind when they turned for me, and even got them all to bend over for me so that I could see them from behind completely. A few of the girls exposed their lips by bending over so much, which was totally hot.
We all stared at each other, all of us overflowing with sexual energy. Lisa kept going back to touching herself, seemingly unable to stop. She then dared all of us to masturbate too and to quit being afraid. The moment she said that, and I mean the precise moment her sentence finished, Kelly's hand went to her fuzzy kitty and started rubbing herself frantically. It was as if she had only barely been keeping it together and Lisa's dare was the last straw which broke her. Quickly all of the girls did the same, as a dozen sexy naked girls were standing there rubbing their pussies right in front of me!
As I started stroking my dick for them in return, I realized that there was no chance of me lasting a super long time when I was this horny. How the hell was I this sensitive even after cumming three times last night? I guess seeing literally every girl I know naked and fingering themselves was just too powerful of a stimulant.
Some of the girls were having trouble while standing, so Jennifer ordered all of them to sit on the grass and spread their legs for me. For a few seconds I had a complete unblocked view of a dozen wide-opened pussies pointed right at me, which was nearly enough to make me cum right then and there. I held back out of pure willpower, but then the girls all started rubbing themselves like that. I wasn't going to make it, so I had to release the pressure and move my hand around my dick instead of touching it for a little bit in order to last longer. I was trembling a little and getting very ready to blow.
Kelly then yelled at me "Erik! Don't be shy. Cum for us, darling! We want to see you cum!"
The other girls all joined in begging me to cum. Twelve beautiful, naked, masturbating girls, each one important to me, each one my friend, each one sexy as fuck, and each one moaning and begging me to cum for them. That set me off like nothing else ever had! Not even sex itself had sent me off the deep edge as fast as that moment did. I came so hard and so fast once they started begging me that I growled like a grizzly, shooting cum all over the grass while pointed at the girls. I thrusted and grunted, shooting again and again. I shot 6 times before it finally stopped.
After seeing me do that, the girls all began to cum one after the other. I stood there watching in awe as each one reached the point of squirming and twitching, usually shouting as she did. Kelly came and refused to stop, rubbing herself frantically at high speeds. As more and more of the girls climaxed, including Lisa who seemed very proud of getting off unassisted for the first time, Kelly just never stopped. Kelly went off three more times until she was the last of us still masturbating. Everyone was watching her in awe as she just kept going and going, looking around at all of the eyes on her and blushing crimson but never stopping or slowing down.
I couldn't resist her any more as I ran over to her position and pounced her into a deep unbroken kiss. I lied her down using my left arm as a pillow while my right hand took over for her rubbing her clit. My touch pushed Kelly to a whole 'nother level of pleasure as she came again loudly in front of our friends. I didn't stop rubbing or kissing her, and quickly I felt the hands of Lisa and Jennifer reaching in to rub her nipples. With all of us rubbing her she came again just 10 seconds after the last one. Kelly had told us that she could go again and again without stopping, usually only giving up when she literally collapsed out of exhaustion. Kelly had made it very, VERY clear that she liking cumming repeatedly until she physically can't anymore. And knowing that, we were all here to give her what she needed.
Jennifer then pushed things to the next level by calling out "Come on, girls! Everyone come help rub Kelly or grab her hands."
Kelly made a very high pitched noise of excitement into my mouth when she heard Jennifer say that. The entire neighborhood quickly dove onto her. I couldn't see much since I was kissing her, but I could feel hands and girls fumbling everywhere. They rubbed every inch of Kelly's legs, her arms, two girls held her hands tightly on either side of her, and it felt like a couple of the girls were rubbing her pubic region next to where my hand was. Wanting to drive Kelly to absolute maximum 100%, I took my lips off of her and instead bit her neck fiercely. She screamed like a banshee and came instantly while I gripped her neck tightly.
She loudly begged "Don't stop! Oh fuck don't stop! Fuck fuck fuck FUCK FUCK THIS IS SO GOOD!! FUUUUUUUUUCK!"
We all kept stimulating her as she came six more times, moaning and begging for more constantly. For the last orgasm Kelly was too tired to even make much noise, just slightly twitching her hips and barely grunting. I signaled everyone to stop and let her come down finally. This beautiful woman in my arms was lost in pure bliss, almost in a dream state and barely still awake. Her eyes were glossy and barely able to stay open, and her mouth hung open as she quietly breathed heavily. I gave her a gentle kiss to relax her, bringing a cute smile on her face.
I softly told her "You are truly amazing, Kelly. You deserve this. All of us, everyone you know, wanted to give you the best experience ever."
She looked into my eyes "You did. You really, truly did."
I then kissed her forehead, causing her to shiver slightly. With a smile I said to her "Rest for a little bit. I'll stay here with you."
Jennifer and Lisa both lied down in the grass with us, with Jennifer saying "We're here too."
The rest of the girls were amazed at everything that they've seen today. We were all still hanging out in this wooded area, totally naked, having all masturbated together and then worked together to let Kelly experience her true maximum. Our neighbors began to celebrate our Diamond and tell us how badly they all wanted something like that for themselves. Several of the girls made it clear that they were open to joining us for more bits of open public fun like this if we ever wanted to do it again. Lisa seemed into that idea for sure. I had a feeling that it wouldn't be proper for me to initiate anything with the other girls myself, but I honestly would be very open to another mutual masturbation session with all of the girls naked and watching me if that is on the table. Who knows? There are no rules to any of this really, other than us four always trying to make the others happy in any way that we can.
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As the days and weeks went on we experimented with all sorts of things, trying out any fantasies or ideas that one of us had. We all enjoyed embracing the unique fetishes and tastes that made up all four of us.
Kelly really grew to enjoy watching others more and more, to the point where she wanted one night for us to be forbidden from touching her until she said otherwise. She wanted to just watch me, Lisa, and Jennifer have a threesome without her even being in it, while she sat nearby fingering herself to the live porn. It wound up getting her crazy hot and bothered, and the three of us made sure to put on a good show for her. After we all came (her several times) she then wanted massive cuddles and group snuggles. While Kelly enjoyed watching sexual acts, if she watched us do romantic and sweet acts she immediately wanted in on all of that and couldn't bear to just watch. Kelly was always huge on hugs, kisses, and skin-on-skin romantic contact with all of us (and especially me). While she did eventually get far less shy, she never lost her ability to blush all over her entire upper body any time that I turned up the heat with her. She knew that I preferred red Kelly over regular Kelly, and the fact that she knew her blushes turned me on only served to make her blush twice as hard every time she noticed herself blushing. It was a glorious vicious cycle that I will always enjoy.
Lisa, as we had always suspected, began to embrace her natural exhibitionism now that a lot of her fear of being seen naked was gone. People looking at her when she was naked never stopped being a huge turn-on for Lisa, and not just one of us three. She started to really enjoy others looking at her too, as long as she liked and trusted the person. Lisa really enjoyed organizing events where the other girls in the neighborhood could get naked too and watch us, including getting me to have sex with her outside in the grass while everyone else watched. By force of willpower she developed a very strong attraction to girls which rivaled her attraction to boys, meaning Lisa started enjoying getting the neighbor girls naked just as much as I did.
Lisa also started asking us to "force" her to be naked in public places, which was a game were either me or Jennifer would steal her clothes and restrain her arms so that she couldn't cover up. We would do this in public places where nobody could see her, but the risk of getting caught by someone while naked would cause her to drip down her legs the entire time we held her in place. One day Lisa even requested that the three of us all strip her naked and hold her arms and legs apart when this cute boy she knew from school was over at her house hanging out. The boy's eyes almost escaped his skull staring at the naked Lisa, who fought and struggled to escape us holding her on the floor like an X completely and explicitly exposed for the boy. Being "forced" naked in front of that boy got Lisa so soaked and horny that she managed to have two back to back orgasms that day. As time went on, Lisa really embraced this particular kink of hers. While Lisa wasn't comfortable showing off to random people, if she liked you (boy or girl) and she had at least one of us in the Diamond to protect her there was a good chance that she would set something up to let you see her skin.
Jennifer grew into herself as time went on, really embracing publicly her enjoyment of female bodies in addition to male ones. It really touched her how all of our friends were ok with her being attracted to them, and a bunch of the girls really enjoyed getting Jennifer to look at them (even when they were nude). I could understand fully the feelings that Jennifer brought in the girls. She was always the role model, the oldest, the tallest, and the one we all sought to impress all of the time. Once we figured out that Jennifer was sexually attracted to us, both me and the neighborhood girls all had this compulsion to show off for her in order to get her approval. She really enjoyed the fact that most of her friends were having fun flashing her, flirting, or otherwise teasing her all of the time. Since Jennifer prefers to keep herself in an aroused state constantly over very long periods of time, all of this attention and stimulation helped her do so. While Jennifer enjoyed looking at all of the girls, it was well known that no girl would ever have her heart the way Lisa did (and the feeling was mutual). Jennifer also made certain to let EVERYONE at school know about the Diamond on our first day back, taking a special pleasure in flaunting in front of my old bullies about the fact that I now regularly had foursomes with three gorgeous women while they didn't get shit.
And me? I'm living my absolute dream. I can't even imagine wishing for more even if I had a genie, because my three wishes were already granted in the forms of Jennifer, Lisa, and Kelly. I make it a point to go along with anything they want from me on a sexual level, as I enjoy making them happy more than anything. Every single day is a dream come true both emotionally and sexually. My emotional closeness with Kelly grows exponentially by the day, to the point where we can make the other shiver with just eye contact and very subtle motions signifying our thoughts in the moment. I was initially worried about Lisa and Jennifer getting sad or jealous of the closeness Kelly and I had, but Jennifer explained that it's all perfectly ok for us four to have our #1 favorites. Her favorite was Lisa and mine was Kelly, but we were all always going to be together as the Diamond. Us having couples in the foursome just meant that none of us were ever left out or alone. It's so incredible to me to think that I used to be terrified of admitting my feelings for the girls and I was massively embarrassed by any and all discussions about them trying to see me naked. I was so afraid of any of the girls I know seeing me naked and possibly not liking what they saw that it filled me with far too much self doubt and a lack of my real worth. I thought being seen naked would feel horrible and potentially ruin my life. Fast forward a little bit and now I'm having naked sex with three of them, often posing nude for most of the others, and I've never been happier in my life.
And that's the real take away from all of this. I'm happy! I'm so unstoppably happy with them. To think our lives as we know them now all started because the girls got so horny one day that they trapped me in the shower in order to see me naked. The most embarrassing, humiliating moment of my life quickly transformed into the sexiest, most amazing moment of my life. Them being thirsty for me (and me them) led to all of us becoming an inseparable unit of love and passion. So I guess my advice to all of you reading this goes as follows: If you're lonely or feeling unworthy of love, just leave your doors unlocked and get naked. Maybe your true love will walk in on you to come join you when you give it bait that appealing. Don't say it'll never work, because I'm living proof that sometimes it does!
The End.
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Very happy and awesome ending! I love how they all come together, and cum together at the same time! I hope I didn't steal some of your countdown thunder. I swear I had no idea when I was writing my story.
Nice advice from Erik. I only wish something like this could be true in real life.So I guess my advice to all of you reading this goes as follows: If you're lonely or feeling unworthy of love, just leave your doors unlocked and get naked. Maybe your true love will walk in on you to come join you when you give it bait that appealing. Don't say it'll never work, because I'm living proof that sometimes it does!
Is this part meant to be Jennifer instead of Jessica?Jessica was surprised by how positive the response to her being bisexual was, with Lisa telling everybody that she had also turned kinda bi because of how awesome Jennifer and Kelly are.
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Damnit, I missed that one. I'll fix that now.superevil7 wrote: ↑Sun Aug 14, 2022 7:48 am Is this part meant to be Jennifer instead of Jessica?
So something about me that I don't think I've ever brought up before is that I have significant dyslexia that causes me to switch around certain words that fit certain criteria when I talk or write. One of my key triggers is words that have the same starting sound, syllable count, and similar meaning. That probably sounds convoluted as hell, but my crazy brain constantly swaps things that fit that mold. You guys have no idea how much I do that in my life. My friends and family find it amusing.
I will never name a character Jennifer ever again. Constantly, CONSTANTLY, I kept typing her name as Jessica. I did this all the damn time and kept having to correct it. Something about the name Jennifer just triggered my brain very strongly.
I try really hard to proofread and catch those switches when I write, but sometimes I miss them. I don't switch words reading, only when speaking or writing. I have had to edit stories before because I've caught switches on a re-read. It's quite annoying.
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That is interesting but understandable. I have my own problem, sort of similar, where when I am writing I will put adjectives and adverbs in the wrong order for a sentence. Especially in longer sentences. It's not until I go back to review what I have wrote that I notice my mistakes. As a quick example of what I mean: 'It wasn't until he saw her that he noticed she was very really shy.' Where it should be 'really very shy'. But I'm constantly having to correct mistakes like that.Executionus wrote: ↑Sun Aug 14, 2022 8:48 am I have significant dyslexia that causes me to switch around certain words that fit certain criteria when I talk or write.
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