This topic is going to be doing alternate versions of actual movie scenes. These movies will likely all have been filmed on the
European continent, where scenes of physical contact between young actors was common during the1970s to
the 1990s. I will be keeping as much as I can in the original scenes in the stories, with some changes.
I might change the age of an actress from late twenties age to the age of 18.
If the scene has too many boys, I'll switch some out to become girls.
If the original scene has the character naked, but shot only above the waist, the new scene will include below the waist.
I will provide a link to the original scene. If the link goes to a full length movie, I will provide the info on what minutes in the
movie to fast forward to. If you don't want to view a younger person potentially nude, don't click on the link.
I am hoping that others here will provide links or info on where to find movies with interesting scenes involving teenagers and young adults.
These will be scenes from what is considered mainstream movies for the general public, Rated R, at least from a European point of view, not an
American point of view. Links will be from youtube mainly, not from any site that focuses on "Adult" material.
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il Ragazzo Invisible
Italian made movie about The Invisible Boy. Link to a trailer of the film.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SAXqRSZndpw
In this story the boy becomes invisible to everyone. In the re-write I'm going to make some younger people able to see the naked
boy, kinda at random, so it always catches him by surprise when someone can see his nakedness.
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Re-writing stories: Story One.
The Invisible Boy
Part 1
Romeo is a terrible name for a boy to have. Everyone knows the name Romeo from the Shakespear plays. Everyone remembers Leonardo
DiCaprio playing Romeo in a movie. Romeo, age 13, of Middleton Junior High, is no Leonardo. He is well known at the school, but for all
the wrong reasons. He's been the butt of jokes and on the receiving end of several pranks that ended up getting videoed and distributed.
And now this school day is off to a fine start. Romeo got to school on his bike, only to realize he had forgotten his gym bag, and his notebook
with his homework in it. PE is his third class period, and he hopes the coach will be forgiving that he has no uniform to put on.
"No PE uniform to wear?" the coach said, looking like she'd never seen that happen before. "Take off those clothes. You will do the class in
your underwear."
Sometimes Romeo has on his white briefs underwear, but today he had on boxers, and these are not ones of the button fly variety. Romeo comes
out of the locker room, into the gym and all the girls and some of the boys laugh.
"Hey Romeo, did you just sneak out of some girl's bed? You lover boy."
"Do you ever eat? Those boxers look like they're about to fall down"
And the boxers are too loose, one size too big. His mom always gets things too big so he can grow into them. However, it seems to take
forever for him to outgrow anything.
"We are going to do the usual exercises today, but 25 jumping jacks will be added to the routine," the coach says, as she looks right at Romeo,
then down at his boxers.
The coach has them do their stretches, followed by situps and pushups and then came the jumping jacks. Romeo is quite aware of how
his penis flops around inside the material of the slightly over sized boxers. The 25 jumping jacks are done, and Romeo stands with his
hands on his hip, panting slightly from the effort, when he hears first one, then several giggles and hushed remarks from the other
students. Romeo looks down to see his penis is sticking out through the fly.
For a slender 13 year old boy, Romeo has a surprisingly thick dick. It's not super long, but he has a lot more girth to it than one would
expect. It doesn't hang down as much as a less thick dick would, but sticks out, kinda like a permanent hardon, but he's not hard.
It just points outward and looks hard.
"Romeo's got a hardon" one of the other boys yells, as if he's an expert on such things.
Romeo adjusts his boxers, getting himself tucked back in, but half the class, and the coach has seen it hanging out.
"Romeo, don't let your dick slip out again. I hope you're not turning into a pervert," and this makes all the girls in class giggle again.
"I wish I was invisible," Romeo says under his breath. "I wish they didn't even know I was here."
The Invisible Boy
Part 1
Romeo is a terrible name for a boy to have. Everyone knows the name Romeo from the Shakespear plays. Everyone remembers Leonardo
DiCaprio playing Romeo in a movie. Romeo, age 13, of Middleton Junior High, is no Leonardo. He is well known at the school, but for all
the wrong reasons. He's been the butt of jokes and on the receiving end of several pranks that ended up getting videoed and distributed.
And now this school day is off to a fine start. Romeo got to school on his bike, only to realize he had forgotten his gym bag, and his notebook
with his homework in it. PE is his third class period, and he hopes the coach will be forgiving that he has no uniform to put on.
"No PE uniform to wear?" the coach said, looking like she'd never seen that happen before. "Take off those clothes. You will do the class in
your underwear."
Sometimes Romeo has on his white briefs underwear, but today he had on boxers, and these are not ones of the button fly variety. Romeo comes
out of the locker room, into the gym and all the girls and some of the boys laugh.
"Hey Romeo, did you just sneak out of some girl's bed? You lover boy."
"Do you ever eat? Those boxers look like they're about to fall down"
And the boxers are too loose, one size too big. His mom always gets things too big so he can grow into them. However, it seems to take
forever for him to outgrow anything.
"We are going to do the usual exercises today, but 25 jumping jacks will be added to the routine," the coach says, as she looks right at Romeo,
then down at his boxers.
The coach has them do their stretches, followed by situps and pushups and then came the jumping jacks. Romeo is quite aware of how
his penis flops around inside the material of the slightly over sized boxers. The 25 jumping jacks are done, and Romeo stands with his
hands on his hip, panting slightly from the effort, when he hears first one, then several giggles and hushed remarks from the other
students. Romeo looks down to see his penis is sticking out through the fly.
For a slender 13 year old boy, Romeo has a surprisingly thick dick. It's not super long, but he has a lot more girth to it than one would
expect. It doesn't hang down as much as a less thick dick would, but sticks out, kinda like a permanent hardon, but he's not hard.
It just points outward and looks hard.
"Romeo's got a hardon" one of the other boys yells, as if he's an expert on such things.
Romeo adjusts his boxers, getting himself tucked back in, but half the class, and the coach has seen it hanging out.
"Romeo, don't let your dick slip out again. I hope you're not turning into a pervert," and this makes all the girls in class giggle again.
"I wish I was invisible," Romeo says under his breath. "I wish they didn't even know I was here."
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I have found it helps me develop a character, and therefore character development and plot development, when I have an image of
someone that matches the character I'm writing. When reading the story, you can refer to the look of the boy in the movie scene at the
link, about an invisible boy. Go ahead and imagine this boy when reading the story.
someone that matches the character I'm writing. When reading the story, you can refer to the look of the boy in the movie scene at the
link, about an invisible boy. Go ahead and imagine this boy when reading the story.
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The Invisible Boy
Part 2
After PE class is over in the gym, Romeo gets to the locker room as fast as he can. There are lockers for everyone to put their things in, but
everyone has to bring their own lock. Romeo's lock is with his gym bag or course, so Romeo stashed his stuff in a locker without locking it.
Romeo opens the locker that has his stuff in it, and he pulls off his boxers and tosses them into the locker. After closing the locker, Romeo heads
to the showers. The other boys pick on Romeo, but they rarely do that while he is in the shower with them. It's not that easy for a 13 year old
boy, who wants to be a bully, to say sarcastic things to another 13 year old boy who has a penis twice as big.
After the shower Romeo has to drip dry in front of his locker. Standing there, with the water dripping down from his head, a few drops still
forming and dripping from the end of his penis, Romeo notices how often the other boys make glances at him, mainly making furtive glances
toward his penis. Everybody checks everybody out in a locker room. Romeo wasn't one of those to walk around a locker room and flaunt it.
He's too shy for that.
Having gotten reasonably dry, Romeo opens the locker and pulls his clothes out. He can't find his boxers. Checking again, they are not there.
Romeo looks around the locker room, looking to see if anyone looking his way has a guilty look on his face. Everyone nearby is looking a
different direction. Romeo pulls his trousers on and notices his belt is missing. Not only were his missing boxers a size to big, so are his
trousers. Romeo hears a few snickers behind him and he turns around. Everyone is looking the other way. Romeo puts the rest of his clothes
on and he leaves the locker room.
An hour later Romeo stands in line at the cafeteria. He gets his tray of food and is walking toward a table, the losers table. Every cafeteria
in every school has a losers table, maybe more than one for the semi-losers and the loser losers. Romeo is halfway to the table when his
trousers are yanked down, all the way to the ankles. Romeo, holding his tray with both hands, doesn't have a chance to grab the side of his
trousers in time. The kids at the nearest tables notice right away. Some probably knew it was coming, and they've been waiting in
eager anticipation. Romeo doesn't want to step closer to a table, so tries to step back, tripping over his own feet, going down on his butt.
Romeo's food on the tray, creamed spinach, pinto beans and two drum sticks with BBQ sauce, lands on Romeo's chest. The laughter is
deafening to his ears. Everyone is laughing at or pointing at the kid on the floor with his pants around his ankles and his dick and balls
showing. There's a girl standing over him. It's Suzie. A girl yanked his pants down, and she stands over him getting a good view of it all.
Romeo tosses the tray aside and he reaches down and yanks his pants up. All he can do at this point is get up and walk off as fast as he can,
wishing he could just disappear.
When the terrible day is over and Romeo gets home, things just get worse. Mrs. Reston, Romeo's mother, got a phone call from school, and
she got a report she didn't like. Romeo had been marked down for not having his homework assignments to turn in for all his classes. He had
been marked down for not having his gym clothes with him. And believe it or not, he had been marked down for having tossed his food tray
on the floor in the cafeteria.
"What the hell am I going to do with you?" his mother asks, just as Romeo's younger sister, Deedra who is eleven years old and another
source of anxiety in his life, walks into the living room.
"Is big brother in trouble again?" says Deedra, who loves to see her brother in trouble.
"I don't care if you're thirteen. Bend over and get ready for a spanking. Wait, what? Where is your belt? Where is the belt for your
trousers?"
"My belt was stolen. Someone took it from my locker at the gym."
"Do you know how much a good belt costs young man?" Romeo's mother shouts, and she bends her son over and she yanks down on his pants,
yanks them all the way down.
Deedra, who is standing behind her brother, lets out a happy squeal.
"Where is your underwear? Romeo, where is your underwear?" Mrs. Reston asks her son.
"It got stolen out of my locker when I took a shower." Romeo says, wanting to pull up his pants and run for the door.
Deedra watches, a big grin on her face, as her mother spanks her older brother on the bare ass, using her bare hand. Romeo gets ten swats
on the butt that don't hurt that much. The pain is to his dignity and pride. Romeo is only bent over halfway, but Deedra still gets a good
look at Romeo's balls, which are a good match for his penis, being much larger than one would guess on such a slender and young boy.
Romeo bends lower to pull his pants up.
"Take those off," his mother says. "Deedra, go to your brother's room and get him another underwear, right now young lady."
Deedra takes off to Romeo's room. Romeo slips his pants off and he stands up, covering himself. His mother picks the pants up from the
floor and hangs onto them. A minute later Deedra returns, and she has another pair of boxers. Deedra just beams as she comes up to hand
them to her brother. Romeo has to bend over slightly again to put them on, showing his ass to his sister.
Mrs. Reston says, "Stay here," and she heads off to the kitchen. A minute later she is back with a round serving tray with a plastic bowl
on it. The bowl is mostly filled up with water.
"OH SHIT" Romeo says when he says the tray.
"OH YES" says Deedra.
"Go get the other tray, Deedra," Mrs. Reston says.
Mrs. Reston brings the tray with the bowl on it to Romeo. Mrs. Reston had been a waitress for a number of years in a high end
restaurant. She had to be good at holding a serving tray with drinks or plates of food. She can walk across a busy restaurant, while holding
two serving trays loaded down with plates, and not lose her balance or a tray. It's very exhausting on the arms, mainly the shoulders to hold
a serving tray above your head for an extended period of time. Now she uses this as an ingenious punishment.
Deedra comes out with the second tray with a bowl of water on it. Romeo takes the first tray from his mother and balances it in his right
hand, raises his right arm up so the tray is up by his head. Mrs. Reston takes the second tray and she gets it positioned on the palm of
Romeo's left hand. Romeo raises his left hand and that tray is by his head.
"Hold that for fifteen minutes." Romeo's mother says, and she leaves the room.
Fifteen minutes is an eternity, when holding two trays like this. He can't tip the trays over, the bowl of water will spill, and he will have to do
it over again. Deedra laughs and she walks off.
A couple minutes later Deedra is back and she has something with her that terrifies Romeo. She has a cat toy. A big feathery and stiff cat toy.
"No, Deedra, no" Romeo says, but his little sister just grins and she pushes the tip of the feather toy into Romeo's armpit.
Romeo does his best not to laugh, and he can't move his body. Any sudden jerking motion will cause a bowl to slide toward the side of the
tray, upsetting the balance and tipping the tray over. Romeo tries not to breathe, as Deedra jiggles the feather toy as she pulls it down
Romeo's side, then the feathers tickle Romeo's tummy. "Please stop that. I'll give you anything. Just stop." But Deedra doesn't stop there,
oh no, does not stop. Deedra takes the end of the long cat toy, and she pokes it through the fly slit of Romeo's boxers.
"Stop that you little brat." Romeo says, and his little sister just laughs.
The poking around in there is prodding something to start pushing and poking out. The head of Romeo's penis appears, and it starts reaching
outward. Deedra giggles and she tilts her end of the stick upward, the other end going downward, and she tickles her brother's balls with the
feathers. "OH god, please stop that. Don't make me get hard." Deedra pulls the feather toy out, and just as soon as Romeo thinks his torture
is finished, Deedra places the feathers against the uncovered head of Romeo's dick.
Romeo's dick jerks and his body nearly jerks as well. He can feel the water sloshing around in the bowls on the trays. His sister keeps applying
the feather torture to the head of his dick, and there is nothing he can do to make it stop from getting harder.
"I think you've grown some big brother," Deedra says, as she watches her brother's penis reach full erection, sticking out six inches beyond the
boxers and looking oh so fat and pretty. And with an impressively big head, turning a darker shade.
For the next couple minutes Romeo has to endure the grins on his sister's mouth, and the gaze of his sister's eyes on his raging erection, as
the feathers continue to rub up and down the thick shaft. Then both of them hear a sound coming from the kitchen, the sound of footsteps.
Deedra takes off with the feather cat toy, and she is disappears from the room. Romeo's mother comes into the room, and she stops, and she
gasps. If her son had lost one of the trays with the water bowl she would not have been surprised. To see her son showing off a huge erection,
sticking out of his boxers, is a sight unexpected.
Romeo wishes to himself that he was out of sight and out of mind.
"I just want them to stop looking at me so much."
He wishes he too could disappear.
Part 2
After PE class is over in the gym, Romeo gets to the locker room as fast as he can. There are lockers for everyone to put their things in, but
everyone has to bring their own lock. Romeo's lock is with his gym bag or course, so Romeo stashed his stuff in a locker without locking it.
Romeo opens the locker that has his stuff in it, and he pulls off his boxers and tosses them into the locker. After closing the locker, Romeo heads
to the showers. The other boys pick on Romeo, but they rarely do that while he is in the shower with them. It's not that easy for a 13 year old
boy, who wants to be a bully, to say sarcastic things to another 13 year old boy who has a penis twice as big.
After the shower Romeo has to drip dry in front of his locker. Standing there, with the water dripping down from his head, a few drops still
forming and dripping from the end of his penis, Romeo notices how often the other boys make glances at him, mainly making furtive glances
toward his penis. Everybody checks everybody out in a locker room. Romeo wasn't one of those to walk around a locker room and flaunt it.
He's too shy for that.
Having gotten reasonably dry, Romeo opens the locker and pulls his clothes out. He can't find his boxers. Checking again, they are not there.
Romeo looks around the locker room, looking to see if anyone looking his way has a guilty look on his face. Everyone nearby is looking a
different direction. Romeo pulls his trousers on and notices his belt is missing. Not only were his missing boxers a size to big, so are his
trousers. Romeo hears a few snickers behind him and he turns around. Everyone is looking the other way. Romeo puts the rest of his clothes
on and he leaves the locker room.
An hour later Romeo stands in line at the cafeteria. He gets his tray of food and is walking toward a table, the losers table. Every cafeteria
in every school has a losers table, maybe more than one for the semi-losers and the loser losers. Romeo is halfway to the table when his
trousers are yanked down, all the way to the ankles. Romeo, holding his tray with both hands, doesn't have a chance to grab the side of his
trousers in time. The kids at the nearest tables notice right away. Some probably knew it was coming, and they've been waiting in
eager anticipation. Romeo doesn't want to step closer to a table, so tries to step back, tripping over his own feet, going down on his butt.
Romeo's food on the tray, creamed spinach, pinto beans and two drum sticks with BBQ sauce, lands on Romeo's chest. The laughter is
deafening to his ears. Everyone is laughing at or pointing at the kid on the floor with his pants around his ankles and his dick and balls
showing. There's a girl standing over him. It's Suzie. A girl yanked his pants down, and she stands over him getting a good view of it all.
Romeo tosses the tray aside and he reaches down and yanks his pants up. All he can do at this point is get up and walk off as fast as he can,
wishing he could just disappear.
When the terrible day is over and Romeo gets home, things just get worse. Mrs. Reston, Romeo's mother, got a phone call from school, and
she got a report she didn't like. Romeo had been marked down for not having his homework assignments to turn in for all his classes. He had
been marked down for not having his gym clothes with him. And believe it or not, he had been marked down for having tossed his food tray
on the floor in the cafeteria.
"What the hell am I going to do with you?" his mother asks, just as Romeo's younger sister, Deedra who is eleven years old and another
source of anxiety in his life, walks into the living room.
"Is big brother in trouble again?" says Deedra, who loves to see her brother in trouble.
"I don't care if you're thirteen. Bend over and get ready for a spanking. Wait, what? Where is your belt? Where is the belt for your
trousers?"
"My belt was stolen. Someone took it from my locker at the gym."
"Do you know how much a good belt costs young man?" Romeo's mother shouts, and she bends her son over and she yanks down on his pants,
yanks them all the way down.
Deedra, who is standing behind her brother, lets out a happy squeal.
"Where is your underwear? Romeo, where is your underwear?" Mrs. Reston asks her son.
"It got stolen out of my locker when I took a shower." Romeo says, wanting to pull up his pants and run for the door.
Deedra watches, a big grin on her face, as her mother spanks her older brother on the bare ass, using her bare hand. Romeo gets ten swats
on the butt that don't hurt that much. The pain is to his dignity and pride. Romeo is only bent over halfway, but Deedra still gets a good
look at Romeo's balls, which are a good match for his penis, being much larger than one would guess on such a slender and young boy.
Romeo bends lower to pull his pants up.
"Take those off," his mother says. "Deedra, go to your brother's room and get him another underwear, right now young lady."
Deedra takes off to Romeo's room. Romeo slips his pants off and he stands up, covering himself. His mother picks the pants up from the
floor and hangs onto them. A minute later Deedra returns, and she has another pair of boxers. Deedra just beams as she comes up to hand
them to her brother. Romeo has to bend over slightly again to put them on, showing his ass to his sister.
Mrs. Reston says, "Stay here," and she heads off to the kitchen. A minute later she is back with a round serving tray with a plastic bowl
on it. The bowl is mostly filled up with water.
"OH SHIT" Romeo says when he says the tray.
"OH YES" says Deedra.
"Go get the other tray, Deedra," Mrs. Reston says.
Mrs. Reston brings the tray with the bowl on it to Romeo. Mrs. Reston had been a waitress for a number of years in a high end
restaurant. She had to be good at holding a serving tray with drinks or plates of food. She can walk across a busy restaurant, while holding
two serving trays loaded down with plates, and not lose her balance or a tray. It's very exhausting on the arms, mainly the shoulders to hold
a serving tray above your head for an extended period of time. Now she uses this as an ingenious punishment.
Deedra comes out with the second tray with a bowl of water on it. Romeo takes the first tray from his mother and balances it in his right
hand, raises his right arm up so the tray is up by his head. Mrs. Reston takes the second tray and she gets it positioned on the palm of
Romeo's left hand. Romeo raises his left hand and that tray is by his head.
"Hold that for fifteen minutes." Romeo's mother says, and she leaves the room.
Fifteen minutes is an eternity, when holding two trays like this. He can't tip the trays over, the bowl of water will spill, and he will have to do
it over again. Deedra laughs and she walks off.
A couple minutes later Deedra is back and she has something with her that terrifies Romeo. She has a cat toy. A big feathery and stiff cat toy.
"No, Deedra, no" Romeo says, but his little sister just grins and she pushes the tip of the feather toy into Romeo's armpit.
Romeo does his best not to laugh, and he can't move his body. Any sudden jerking motion will cause a bowl to slide toward the side of the
tray, upsetting the balance and tipping the tray over. Romeo tries not to breathe, as Deedra jiggles the feather toy as she pulls it down
Romeo's side, then the feathers tickle Romeo's tummy. "Please stop that. I'll give you anything. Just stop." But Deedra doesn't stop there,
oh no, does not stop. Deedra takes the end of the long cat toy, and she pokes it through the fly slit of Romeo's boxers.
"Stop that you little brat." Romeo says, and his little sister just laughs.
The poking around in there is prodding something to start pushing and poking out. The head of Romeo's penis appears, and it starts reaching
outward. Deedra giggles and she tilts her end of the stick upward, the other end going downward, and she tickles her brother's balls with the
feathers. "OH god, please stop that. Don't make me get hard." Deedra pulls the feather toy out, and just as soon as Romeo thinks his torture
is finished, Deedra places the feathers against the uncovered head of Romeo's dick.
Romeo's dick jerks and his body nearly jerks as well. He can feel the water sloshing around in the bowls on the trays. His sister keeps applying
the feather torture to the head of his dick, and there is nothing he can do to make it stop from getting harder.
"I think you've grown some big brother," Deedra says, as she watches her brother's penis reach full erection, sticking out six inches beyond the
boxers and looking oh so fat and pretty. And with an impressively big head, turning a darker shade.
For the next couple minutes Romeo has to endure the grins on his sister's mouth, and the gaze of his sister's eyes on his raging erection, as
the feathers continue to rub up and down the thick shaft. Then both of them hear a sound coming from the kitchen, the sound of footsteps.
Deedra takes off with the feather cat toy, and she is disappears from the room. Romeo's mother comes into the room, and she stops, and she
gasps. If her son had lost one of the trays with the water bowl she would not have been surprised. To see her son showing off a huge erection,
sticking out of his boxers, is a sight unexpected.
Romeo wishes to himself that he was out of sight and out of mind.
"I just want them to stop looking at me so much."
He wishes he too could disappear.
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The Invisible Boy
Part 3.
Mrs. Reston comes into the living room to see her son has succeeded in holding up the trays with the bowls of water. Romeo is also showing
how high up his penis can point, having a full on erection sticking out of the boxers.
"Why is your penis out like that, Romeo?"
"Deedra made it come out." Romeo says.
"Are you telling me your sister reached into your boxers and pulled your penis out?"
"No, it didn't exactly happen that way. She tickled and teased me."
"Even if it slipped out on its own, it shouldn't be standing up like that. Deedra. Get in here, Deedra." says Mrs. Reston, going to get to the
bottom of his.
Deedra comes into the room, looking oh so sweet and innocent.
"Did you take your brother's penis out?"
"No mother. I didn't."
"Did you tickle and tease him, make him get an erection?"
"Of course not, mother. I wasn't even in here." Deedra says, maintaining her composure perfectly in the face of the accusations.
Romeo loses his composure, "You lying little bitch." and he loses his hold with the tray in his left hand. The bowl slides over to one side,
tray tilts over, bowl of water crashes to the floor.
"You apologize to your sister for those words," Romeo's mother demands.
"I can't apologize, because it's true. Deedra is a little devil," and Romeo loses the balance with the other tray and the bowl crashes down,
spilling more water on the living room floor, which fortunately is a tiled floor.
Mrs. Reston has had enough. "Besides cleaning up this mess, Deedra will choose a punishment for you, since you won't apologize for what
you called her. What punishment do you choose, Deedra?"
"Romeo goes without his clothes for the rest of the day. And he can't stay in his room. He has to stay out here and not cover up. If he covers
himself I can add another punishment."
"Naked for the rest of the day? It's only 4:45," Romeo says, as he looks at the clock.
Romeo's mother looks at her son. With all the commotion of the falling water bowls, and the accusations and counter charges between him
and his sister, Romeo hasn't gotten around to tucking his penis into his boxers. It's still sticking way out, though it's lost some of its hardness.
"Well, if he's so comfortable showing himself to everyone, and I did hear in the report from school that you showed your dick to everyone
in PE class, including the girls. I agree with the punishment. Romeo, take those clothes off. You can get dressed again after your
breakfast tomorrow."
"No clothes till almost 8am?"
Breakfast is usually on the table at 7:30am. Incredibly, Romeo's mother has expanded the timeframe for the punishment.
"Take em off big brother," Deedra says, and she holds out her hand.
Romeo takes off his shirt and he hands it to his sister. Then he takes off his boxers, his boner now mostly disappeared. Deedra takes off
with the clothes. Romeo is busy cleaning up the water spill when...
"Oh shoot. I forgot." Mrs. Reston says.
"What did you forget?" asks Deedra.
"I have a tutoring session from 5:30 to 7:00. Marty and Julia, my pre-algebra students."
Romeo looks up and over in their direction. "Oh shit" he says to himself. Marty and Julia come over once a week. Marty is the same age
as Romeo, and Julia is a high school freshman. A high school girl is going to see him naked, and he has to stay in the living room.
"They didn't put the bathroom off limits. I'll take a long shower." Romeo says quietly.
Marty and Julia show up at 5:30, and they get set up at the dining room table, which has a good view of most of the living room.
Part 3.
Mrs. Reston comes into the living room to see her son has succeeded in holding up the trays with the bowls of water. Romeo is also showing
how high up his penis can point, having a full on erection sticking out of the boxers.
"Why is your penis out like that, Romeo?"
"Deedra made it come out." Romeo says.
"Are you telling me your sister reached into your boxers and pulled your penis out?"
"No, it didn't exactly happen that way. She tickled and teased me."
"Even if it slipped out on its own, it shouldn't be standing up like that. Deedra. Get in here, Deedra." says Mrs. Reston, going to get to the
bottom of his.
Deedra comes into the room, looking oh so sweet and innocent.
"Did you take your brother's penis out?"
"No mother. I didn't."
"Did you tickle and tease him, make him get an erection?"
"Of course not, mother. I wasn't even in here." Deedra says, maintaining her composure perfectly in the face of the accusations.
Romeo loses his composure, "You lying little bitch." and he loses his hold with the tray in his left hand. The bowl slides over to one side,
tray tilts over, bowl of water crashes to the floor.
"You apologize to your sister for those words," Romeo's mother demands.
"I can't apologize, because it's true. Deedra is a little devil," and Romeo loses the balance with the other tray and the bowl crashes down,
spilling more water on the living room floor, which fortunately is a tiled floor.
Mrs. Reston has had enough. "Besides cleaning up this mess, Deedra will choose a punishment for you, since you won't apologize for what
you called her. What punishment do you choose, Deedra?"
"Romeo goes without his clothes for the rest of the day. And he can't stay in his room. He has to stay out here and not cover up. If he covers
himself I can add another punishment."
"Naked for the rest of the day? It's only 4:45," Romeo says, as he looks at the clock.
Romeo's mother looks at her son. With all the commotion of the falling water bowls, and the accusations and counter charges between him
and his sister, Romeo hasn't gotten around to tucking his penis into his boxers. It's still sticking way out, though it's lost some of its hardness.
"Well, if he's so comfortable showing himself to everyone, and I did hear in the report from school that you showed your dick to everyone
in PE class, including the girls. I agree with the punishment. Romeo, take those clothes off. You can get dressed again after your
breakfast tomorrow."
"No clothes till almost 8am?"
Breakfast is usually on the table at 7:30am. Incredibly, Romeo's mother has expanded the timeframe for the punishment.
"Take em off big brother," Deedra says, and she holds out her hand.
Romeo takes off his shirt and he hands it to his sister. Then he takes off his boxers, his boner now mostly disappeared. Deedra takes off
with the clothes. Romeo is busy cleaning up the water spill when...
"Oh shoot. I forgot." Mrs. Reston says.
"What did you forget?" asks Deedra.
"I have a tutoring session from 5:30 to 7:00. Marty and Julia, my pre-algebra students."
Romeo looks up and over in their direction. "Oh shit" he says to himself. Marty and Julia come over once a week. Marty is the same age
as Romeo, and Julia is a high school freshman. A high school girl is going to see him naked, and he has to stay in the living room.
"They didn't put the bathroom off limits. I'll take a long shower." Romeo says quietly.
Marty and Julia show up at 5:30, and they get set up at the dining room table, which has a good view of most of the living room.
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Part 4.
Marty and Julia have arrived for the tutoring session, so Romeo is taking a nice long and hot shower. Romeo wasn't there to see the kids come in, taking that moment to sneak off to the bathroom. He's been in the shower for about twenty minutes. He's taken a long shower before, and the
hot water lasted for around 45 minutes or so. Then he can slowly dry off. Maybe the math tutoring will be over, and Marty and Julia will be gone
by the time Romeo is missed. Romeo starts singing in the shower the song "HIGH HOPES" from a Frank Sinatra move.
"Just what makes that little old ant
Think he'll move that rubber tree plant
anyone knows an ant, can't
move a rubber tree plant"
Romeo lathers up his hand real good and he soaps up his crotch and he cleans with a little extra vigor.
"Whoops there goes another rubber tree plant"
The steamy hot water and the scrubbing is getting Romeo feeling good. Best he's felt all day. The heat of the water has his balls loose and
hanging down, his dick on the rise to get nice and high...
"Cause he had hiiiiiigh hopes, he had hiiiiigh hopes
he had high apple pie, in the skyyyyy hopes" ...the hot water suddenly is gone. Romeo stops singing.
"Damn. Where did the hot water go?"
Romeo does a quick rinse, and he turns off the now cold water. He flings open the shower curtain and "Aaaahhhh". Deedra is sitting on the
toilet, the toilet lid down, and 14 year old Julia is standing right next to her. They are both laughing. Instinctively Romeo covers himself.
"Romeo, you're covering yourself. That violates the rules. I get to add another punishment." Deedra says and she cackles.
"What is she doing in here?" Romeo says, standing wet and surprised and shocked that this guest at the house was brought into the bathroom
while he showered, while he was singing in the shower, but Romeo knows he's not supposed to cover up anywhere and he drops his hands.
Romeo's dick points up high to the sky, but his hopes are dashed.
"So it's true. He can't cover up," Julia says, and she is all smiles on a super pretty face. And she looks closer and her jaw drops, she puts
a hand over her mouth to stifle her gasp, then her giggles.
"We did catch him covering up, so I get to add a punishment. Get out of the shower Romeo and say hi to Julia."
Romeo gets out of the shower. "Hi Julia" he says, and he grabs the towel. He starts to dry off, starting with his hair, then works his way
down the back. "You know the bathroom should be considered off limits. That is totally not fair."
It's total agony. Drying off with a towel he can't cover up with, his dick hard as a rock pointing outward toward Julia. He's only dried off his
head and back so far. Deedra gets off the toilet seat and she moves forward quickly. She grabs the towel.
"We're going to finish drying you." Deedra says, and she motions for Julia to step closer.
"Is this his punishment for covering up?" Julia asks.
"Nope, we're just giving him a helping hand," Deedra says, and she rubs the towel on Romeo's leg. She seems to be more intent on having her
brother exposed than in getting him dry. All Romeo can do is stand there. "For his punishment I will think of something."
"Awesome. I can't wait to see what it is." Julia says.
Now Julia is interested in what will happen to him next, and wants to be around to see it. Romeo's little sister finishes with his legs and she
holds the towel out to Julia. "His balls are still dripping."
Julia takes the towel and she rubs it on Romeo's penis and then his balls. She rubs vigorously, giving it no chance to soften up and come down.
Romeo knows if this keeps up much longer he might blow a gasket. Talking might take his mind off the sensation of towel rubbing his dick head.
"What happened to the water? The hot water should have lasted longer." Romeo asks.
"When we couldn't find you, and I heard the shower running, mom went to the water heater. She knows how to turn off the water outflow
valve. I think he's dry enough. Let's all go to the dining room. You haven't said hello to Marty yet. We do have another guest."
This doesn't bother Romeo all that much. Marty and Romeo have seen each other is the gym shower before. Marty is a little behind most
of the other boys, not having started getting any hair down there yet.
Romeo enters the dining room, Deedra holding onto his right hand and Julia happily holding onto his left hand. Romeo stops walking when he
sees there is another person at the dining room table. His mother sits at the table, and so does Marty, but there is another girl there. It's
Marty's younger sister, probably a 6th grader, two years younger than Romeo, and he doesn't know her name. Both Marty and his sister look
up from their math book and they are shocked to say the least. Romeo stands just a few feet from the table all naked with a huge hardon.
Mrs. Reston sees the look on her student's faces, and she turns to look over.
"Romeo. Why are you showing yourself off like that again?" Mrs. Reston asks.
"I uhhh, I can't help it. I was showering and they burst into the bathroom."
"People are not interested in seeing you like that. If you're doing it just to show off" --
"I'm not trying to show off, mom." Romeo says, and he's at least thankful Julia has let go of his hand and she takes a seat at the table.
"Are you a nudist, Romeo?" Marty asks.
Deedra steps over to the table. "He's being punished for being naughty at school. He has to stay naked till tomorrow. We caught him covering
up. I get to add a punishment."
Marty's younger sister is still gawking at the naked boy in front of her.
"Romeo, this is Marty's sister Chelsea. This is her first time here, and she picked a good day for it." and then Mrs. Rendon turns to Chelsea,
"Romeo is good at math. He'll work with you on your percentage's problems."
Romeo has to help his mom tutor the students, specifically Chelsea, and with his mom and three kids sitting at the table, Romeo will have to
stand. The table only has four chairs.
Part 4.
Marty and Julia have arrived for the tutoring session, so Romeo is taking a nice long and hot shower. Romeo wasn't there to see the kids come in, taking that moment to sneak off to the bathroom. He's been in the shower for about twenty minutes. He's taken a long shower before, and the
hot water lasted for around 45 minutes or so. Then he can slowly dry off. Maybe the math tutoring will be over, and Marty and Julia will be gone
by the time Romeo is missed. Romeo starts singing in the shower the song "HIGH HOPES" from a Frank Sinatra move.
"Just what makes that little old ant
Think he'll move that rubber tree plant
anyone knows an ant, can't
move a rubber tree plant"
Romeo lathers up his hand real good and he soaps up his crotch and he cleans with a little extra vigor.
"Whoops there goes another rubber tree plant"
The steamy hot water and the scrubbing is getting Romeo feeling good. Best he's felt all day. The heat of the water has his balls loose and
hanging down, his dick on the rise to get nice and high...
"Cause he had hiiiiiigh hopes, he had hiiiiigh hopes
he had high apple pie, in the skyyyyy hopes" ...the hot water suddenly is gone. Romeo stops singing.
"Damn. Where did the hot water go?"
Romeo does a quick rinse, and he turns off the now cold water. He flings open the shower curtain and "Aaaahhhh". Deedra is sitting on the
toilet, the toilet lid down, and 14 year old Julia is standing right next to her. They are both laughing. Instinctively Romeo covers himself.
"Romeo, you're covering yourself. That violates the rules. I get to add another punishment." Deedra says and she cackles.
"What is she doing in here?" Romeo says, standing wet and surprised and shocked that this guest at the house was brought into the bathroom
while he showered, while he was singing in the shower, but Romeo knows he's not supposed to cover up anywhere and he drops his hands.
Romeo's dick points up high to the sky, but his hopes are dashed.
"So it's true. He can't cover up," Julia says, and she is all smiles on a super pretty face. And she looks closer and her jaw drops, she puts
a hand over her mouth to stifle her gasp, then her giggles.
"We did catch him covering up, so I get to add a punishment. Get out of the shower Romeo and say hi to Julia."
Romeo gets out of the shower. "Hi Julia" he says, and he grabs the towel. He starts to dry off, starting with his hair, then works his way
down the back. "You know the bathroom should be considered off limits. That is totally not fair."
It's total agony. Drying off with a towel he can't cover up with, his dick hard as a rock pointing outward toward Julia. He's only dried off his
head and back so far. Deedra gets off the toilet seat and she moves forward quickly. She grabs the towel.
"We're going to finish drying you." Deedra says, and she motions for Julia to step closer.
"Is this his punishment for covering up?" Julia asks.
"Nope, we're just giving him a helping hand," Deedra says, and she rubs the towel on Romeo's leg. She seems to be more intent on having her
brother exposed than in getting him dry. All Romeo can do is stand there. "For his punishment I will think of something."
"Awesome. I can't wait to see what it is." Julia says.
Now Julia is interested in what will happen to him next, and wants to be around to see it. Romeo's little sister finishes with his legs and she
holds the towel out to Julia. "His balls are still dripping."
Julia takes the towel and she rubs it on Romeo's penis and then his balls. She rubs vigorously, giving it no chance to soften up and come down.
Romeo knows if this keeps up much longer he might blow a gasket. Talking might take his mind off the sensation of towel rubbing his dick head.
"What happened to the water? The hot water should have lasted longer." Romeo asks.
"When we couldn't find you, and I heard the shower running, mom went to the water heater. She knows how to turn off the water outflow
valve. I think he's dry enough. Let's all go to the dining room. You haven't said hello to Marty yet. We do have another guest."
This doesn't bother Romeo all that much. Marty and Romeo have seen each other is the gym shower before. Marty is a little behind most
of the other boys, not having started getting any hair down there yet.
Romeo enters the dining room, Deedra holding onto his right hand and Julia happily holding onto his left hand. Romeo stops walking when he
sees there is another person at the dining room table. His mother sits at the table, and so does Marty, but there is another girl there. It's
Marty's younger sister, probably a 6th grader, two years younger than Romeo, and he doesn't know her name. Both Marty and his sister look
up from their math book and they are shocked to say the least. Romeo stands just a few feet from the table all naked with a huge hardon.
Mrs. Reston sees the look on her student's faces, and she turns to look over.
"Romeo. Why are you showing yourself off like that again?" Mrs. Reston asks.
"I uhhh, I can't help it. I was showering and they burst into the bathroom."
"People are not interested in seeing you like that. If you're doing it just to show off" --
"I'm not trying to show off, mom." Romeo says, and he's at least thankful Julia has let go of his hand and she takes a seat at the table.
"Are you a nudist, Romeo?" Marty asks.
Deedra steps over to the table. "He's being punished for being naughty at school. He has to stay naked till tomorrow. We caught him covering
up. I get to add a punishment."
Marty's younger sister is still gawking at the naked boy in front of her.
"Romeo, this is Marty's sister Chelsea. This is her first time here, and she picked a good day for it." and then Mrs. Rendon turns to Chelsea,
"Romeo is good at math. He'll work with you on your percentage's problems."
Romeo has to help his mom tutor the students, specifically Chelsea, and with his mom and three kids sitting at the table, Romeo will have to
stand. The table only has four chairs.
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Part 5.
Romeo can't believe the horrible hand he's been dealt. Not only is he standing naked, naked with a full hardon, in front of three students his
mother is tutoring, he's been asked to help the younger girl with her math problems. And you thought you had problems.
Romeo steps over to the table, steps up to the chair Chelsea is sitting in.
"Hello Chelsea. What problem are you working on?"
Chelsea isn't looking at her book. Romeo stands right next to her chair, his thick dick still standing up and out at full length. The young girl's face
only a couple feet away, and her eyes are locked on it. Romeo can feel, and looking down, can see his dick is starting to lower down some and
has reached 75 percent hard, heading for 50 percent hard. Chelsea's eyes are transfixed, watching it subside. Chelsea looks from dick to Romeo's face. "You and Marty are in the same grade, right? You're a lot bigger."
Marty gives his little sister a "Not Happy" look, and apparently Mrs. Reston isn't happy either.
"Let's concentrate on your math problems, Chelsea."
Normally when tutoring sessions take place, both Romeo and Deedra stay in their rooms. Romeo is forced to stay at the table. Deedra is free to
go to her room, but she hangs around the table. She's not about to leave while her brother is out on display. The session started at 5:30. Romeo
joined the tutoring at 6:00. He has an hour of this to go. Chelsea is starting to get the hang of it, sort of. Finally, Romeo's penis has gotten
down to flaccid state, much to Romeo's relief. Romeo then gets snacks for everyone. In the kitchen he gets out little paper plates and a package
of Oreo cookies. He brings out a plate of cookies for everyone. After getting her plate, Julia hugs Romeo around the waist, actually, more around the hips, while saying "Thank you Romeo, you're such a gentleman". Hugging like that, while sitting down, this places Julia's face no more than a foot away from Romeo's dick, and then she drops her pencil on the floor on the other side of Romeo.
"I'll get it," Romeo says, and he turns away from Julia's chair, bends over to pick up the pencil. It's the gentleman thing to do. Julia is not perfectly
ladylike, slapping Romeo's butt as he is bent over. The only one at the table not laughing is Mrs. Reston.
"Everyone settle down." Mrs. Reston says, and then the phone rings. Her cellphone is on a counter in the kitchen.
Deedra runs over to the kitchen and brings back the phone and Mrs. Reston answers it.
"What, the car won't start? You're stuck at where again?" After listening for a moment, "Yes, I can come get you," and Mrs. Reston hangs up the
call.
"Marty, Chelsea, your mother is stranded at the Walmart. Her car won't start, probably the battery. I told her I'll pick her up and bring her
over here, then I will drive all of you home. And you too Julia, since you came over in Mrs. Maynard's car."
Mrs. Reston gets up and grabs her purse. "There's twenty minutes left on the math session. Work on your problems for another twenty minutes.
But it may be an hour before I get back with Mrs. Maynard. You kids just have fun. Watch some tv or something."
"We'll be watching something," Deedra says.
Romeo, seeing his mother grabbing her purse and getting out her car keys, realizes being alone with his sister and the three other kids might
not be in his best interest. "Mom. Can I go with you?"
"I can't take you with me. Deedra isn't old enough to be in charge when we have three students here. Hey everybody, Romeo is in charge, and he's going to help you all with your math problems." Mrs. Rendon says.
"Gotcha mom. Romeo is in charge, but he has to stay naked. Can I give him the extra punishment, or do I have to wait till you get back?" and
Deedra is doing her "Mom's little angel" routine again.
"I don't care. Do whatever you want with that. I have to go." and Romeo's mother leaves the house.
Romeo locks the door. Turning to face the others, he knows he's in trouble. It's on all their faces, well not Marty's face. Marty can't see the
faces of the three girls. Deedra's face looks wicked, but that's to be expected. Julia's face has a slightly wicked look. Chelsea has the look of
an eleven year old girl who is about to be served a banana split, except the banana and the two scoops of ice cream are tucked between Romeo's
legs.
"What do we do now?" Marty asks.
"We do math till 7:00, like mom said. Like your tutor said." Romeo tells the group, as he steps back over to the table.
Deedra starts jumping up and down. She's so excited about something she's about to pee on the rug. "Mom said you have to participate with our
math studies, right?"
"Yeah, that's right," Romeo says.
"I name the math problem and you help solve it," says Deedra.
"Chelsea's problems are percentage questions," Romeo says.
"That's okay. They'll be percentage math problems that only you can help solve. The first percentage problem is... How much bigger is Romeo's
dick when it's hard, compared to when it's soft?"
Romeo is so shocked by the question, he's stunned, speechless.
"That's an awesome question" says Julia.
"Yes. I love math. For the first time I love math," says Chelsea, and Romeo could swear he sees the young girl's tongue sticking out and saliva
running down her chin. "We need a ruler. Somebody get a ruler," the wild eyed girl says.
Part 5.
Romeo can't believe the horrible hand he's been dealt. Not only is he standing naked, naked with a full hardon, in front of three students his
mother is tutoring, he's been asked to help the younger girl with her math problems. And you thought you had problems.
Romeo steps over to the table, steps up to the chair Chelsea is sitting in.
"Hello Chelsea. What problem are you working on?"
Chelsea isn't looking at her book. Romeo stands right next to her chair, his thick dick still standing up and out at full length. The young girl's face
only a couple feet away, and her eyes are locked on it. Romeo can feel, and looking down, can see his dick is starting to lower down some and
has reached 75 percent hard, heading for 50 percent hard. Chelsea's eyes are transfixed, watching it subside. Chelsea looks from dick to Romeo's face. "You and Marty are in the same grade, right? You're a lot bigger."
Marty gives his little sister a "Not Happy" look, and apparently Mrs. Reston isn't happy either.
"Let's concentrate on your math problems, Chelsea."
Normally when tutoring sessions take place, both Romeo and Deedra stay in their rooms. Romeo is forced to stay at the table. Deedra is free to
go to her room, but she hangs around the table. She's not about to leave while her brother is out on display. The session started at 5:30. Romeo
joined the tutoring at 6:00. He has an hour of this to go. Chelsea is starting to get the hang of it, sort of. Finally, Romeo's penis has gotten
down to flaccid state, much to Romeo's relief. Romeo then gets snacks for everyone. In the kitchen he gets out little paper plates and a package
of Oreo cookies. He brings out a plate of cookies for everyone. After getting her plate, Julia hugs Romeo around the waist, actually, more around the hips, while saying "Thank you Romeo, you're such a gentleman". Hugging like that, while sitting down, this places Julia's face no more than a foot away from Romeo's dick, and then she drops her pencil on the floor on the other side of Romeo.
"I'll get it," Romeo says, and he turns away from Julia's chair, bends over to pick up the pencil. It's the gentleman thing to do. Julia is not perfectly
ladylike, slapping Romeo's butt as he is bent over. The only one at the table not laughing is Mrs. Reston.
"Everyone settle down." Mrs. Reston says, and then the phone rings. Her cellphone is on a counter in the kitchen.
Deedra runs over to the kitchen and brings back the phone and Mrs. Reston answers it.
"What, the car won't start? You're stuck at where again?" After listening for a moment, "Yes, I can come get you," and Mrs. Reston hangs up the
call.
"Marty, Chelsea, your mother is stranded at the Walmart. Her car won't start, probably the battery. I told her I'll pick her up and bring her
over here, then I will drive all of you home. And you too Julia, since you came over in Mrs. Maynard's car."
Mrs. Reston gets up and grabs her purse. "There's twenty minutes left on the math session. Work on your problems for another twenty minutes.
But it may be an hour before I get back with Mrs. Maynard. You kids just have fun. Watch some tv or something."
"We'll be watching something," Deedra says.
Romeo, seeing his mother grabbing her purse and getting out her car keys, realizes being alone with his sister and the three other kids might
not be in his best interest. "Mom. Can I go with you?"
"I can't take you with me. Deedra isn't old enough to be in charge when we have three students here. Hey everybody, Romeo is in charge, and he's going to help you all with your math problems." Mrs. Rendon says.
"Gotcha mom. Romeo is in charge, but he has to stay naked. Can I give him the extra punishment, or do I have to wait till you get back?" and
Deedra is doing her "Mom's little angel" routine again.
"I don't care. Do whatever you want with that. I have to go." and Romeo's mother leaves the house.
Romeo locks the door. Turning to face the others, he knows he's in trouble. It's on all their faces, well not Marty's face. Marty can't see the
faces of the three girls. Deedra's face looks wicked, but that's to be expected. Julia's face has a slightly wicked look. Chelsea has the look of
an eleven year old girl who is about to be served a banana split, except the banana and the two scoops of ice cream are tucked between Romeo's
legs.
"What do we do now?" Marty asks.
"We do math till 7:00, like mom said. Like your tutor said." Romeo tells the group, as he steps back over to the table.
Deedra starts jumping up and down. She's so excited about something she's about to pee on the rug. "Mom said you have to participate with our
math studies, right?"
"Yeah, that's right," Romeo says.
"I name the math problem and you help solve it," says Deedra.
"Chelsea's problems are percentage questions," Romeo says.
"That's okay. They'll be percentage math problems that only you can help solve. The first percentage problem is... How much bigger is Romeo's
dick when it's hard, compared to when it's soft?"
Romeo is so shocked by the question, he's stunned, speechless.
"That's an awesome question" says Julia.
"Yes. I love math. For the first time I love math," says Chelsea, and Romeo could swear he sees the young girl's tongue sticking out and saliva
running down her chin. "We need a ruler. Somebody get a ruler," the wild eyed girl says.
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