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First, I want to say how much I've been enjoying Johndoe06's Erica stories as of late, as they are partly the reason I felt motivated to write some more Erica stories lately, so shout out to him. This is basically another CHYOA thread that I've been writing over time, and decided to post it here for...

Hello! I’m a long time lurker and first time writer. I have never written anything outside of school in my life. I have a lot of ideas for this story, but before I continue I was hoping for some feedback in terms of the writing. Is it easy enough to follow? I had no idea writing characters talking b...