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Hi, was going to continue to write a bit of an epic here, but I think I need some feedback on whether people like the direction and what I can do better before I commit any more time. If people things it's too slow or something, might edit/re-upload/delete.
Been reading stories ...

FYIs from author.

Thanks for all the generous feedback last time. I'm afraid I don't think I've actually put any suggestions in yet (except to write what I like :p), maybe in future though. Enjoy, hopefully :).


Part 2 - This time shit actually happens

Chapter 5 – Not playing by the rules ...

FYI's:
-Decided I will make this thread for the third part, but will put updates in here from now on, so check for new parts if you're interested.
-Hopefully this story is going in a direction and style people like, let me know :).
-Feel like there's something about the style of my writing that's a ...

==Part 4==

Chapter 12 – A sight to behold

The air of anticipation as Mona released the clasp. She held the unfastened bra over her bust to wait for a last minute reprieve, none came.

She finally let the bra drop into her hand, revealing her perky c cup breasts. The two delightful globes ...

Part 5

FYI from author. Thanks for all your nice messages <3! Sorry this part is quite a bit shorter than then others, not sure how the direction is going to be received since we're getting very into kinda thing I like now. Possibly I'm biting of more than I can chew haha. Anyway enjoy ...

Part 6

FYI from author
Consider a new part to this my christmas gift to you (sorry if you asked for an ipad). I quite like the part personally, tried to pick the pace up a little reckon it'll probably finish around part 10. Let me know what you think <3.


Chapter 17 – More dignity is shaved ...

FYIs from the Author:

-Thank you very much to Cober for providing ideas/editing/bits of story even for this part, very much appreciated
-Sorry if I've taken a while to get this part out, but I thank you for your kind feedback, now on to humiliating Mona some more

Part 7

Chapter 20 – Mona ...

PROLOGUE

Marie couldn’t believe it.

Could. Not. Believe. It.

How could this happen to her?

Her parents’ horrifying words still echoed in her head. At Lakewood High, Marie was one of the most popular girls at school for her age. While only sixteen, nearly everyone knew her name. She was ...

Okay, I promise this one won't have any huge delays like some of my other stories! I wrote the prologue, and then the second half, and then Part One, so I could get something posted for Halloween. Once I write the next part or two, the whole thing will basically be done once I link this part and the ...

PART TWO

Today was the day. Halloween.

Marie felt her face flush as she knocked on Brooke’s door. Normally, she wouldn’t be nervous, not even when it came to dealing with a girl more popular than her, but her current appearance made her inwardly squirm as she waited for Brooke to answer the door ...