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by anthelester121
Mon Aug 21, 2023 12:18 pm
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Re: Dare Me (new 8/20)

I know this has been said so many times, but I can't stop myself from praising again how exceptional neverdoubted's works are. They are miles ahead of the average erotic literature. The immaculateness, the tiny details, the aesthetics are hard to parallel. Thank you for gifting us these magical stor...
by axel_qwerty
Mon Aug 28, 2023 9:33 pm
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Re: Dare Me (new 8/27)

Fantastic story! I've been a fan of yours since Thornwood and very much look forward to seeing more of that story too.
by apolloman42
Fri Sep 15, 2023 4:31 am
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Re: Dare Me (new 9/10)

I made this account to specifically ask that you keep going with this story. It's a wonderful story, I'd very much love to read about Lucy's camp experience.
And thanks for what you have written so far.
by fuwafuwataimu
Sun Oct 01, 2023 7:08 am
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Re: Dare Me (new 9/30)

Brilliant chapter as always. I love that Lucy is starting to build a place for herself in this rough environment under the hardest starting conditions - nudity! And there's no way those boys are going to stay out of sight the whole time... I wonder what the coach told the team about Lucy's condition...
by WingDing
Wed Oct 04, 2023 8:51 am
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Re: Dare Me (new 9/30)

Tying a medical diagnosis along with citing the ADA is simply genius. With a little work Mikey can plausibly have her get nude legally almost anywhere. I can imagine any number of uncomfortably public situations she can be in someday.
by WingDing
Sat Oct 14, 2023 9:07 am
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Re: Dare Me (new 10/13)

"her train of thought was hijacked." Lovely turn of phrase there. Excellent chapter.
by perseus
Thu Oct 26, 2023 12:58 am
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Re: Lia's new reality (Part 3 - 10/24)

Congratulations on a well written story with good pacing and relatable characters! I like how you are willing to let good scenes play out and not rushing them. Beyond my standard author advice to "use dialog sparingly", my only specific feedback would be very minor. Try to avoid overusing...
by fuwafuwataimu
Sat Nov 04, 2023 5:09 am
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Re: Dare Me (new 11/3)

What a brilliant chapter! Well worth the wait. Being handcuffed naked to a strange boy of a similar age is deliciously embarrassing!
by imanewb
Wed Nov 22, 2023 12:42 am
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Re: Caroline is Confused - Part 4

Caroline is Confused - Part 4 Beautifully written, and engaging full of little details (providing 'colour'), wit and charm. Great characters (and development thereof) - one can get a real 'feel' for both Caroline and Mr. Tharson - the insights gained from his backstory, for example, explaining his ...
by student
Mon Nov 27, 2023 9:54 pm
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Re: Dare Me (new 11/27)

:D Lucy will save the day? What a cliff hanger! Anticipation is building. :twisted:

What next? The entire cheerleader camp going bare during Community Outreach?