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- Sun Aug 25, 2024 7:50 pm
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Re: The Last Straw (new 8/23)
The only thing I'd like to see more of is for the pace of Mary exposure to be picked up a smidge, but that's just personal preference. You know, a bit slow burn, but with more and more peeks or perhaps extended looks at her nether regions. Slow burn?! It's already day two of their vacation. You rea...
- Tue Aug 27, 2024 3:01 pm
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Re: The Last Straw (new 8/23)
Thank you for your insightful feedback. The reasons or causes for ENF run a wide gamut. You are correct that, while Thornwood and Dare Me do have some parallels, they are based on very different premises. Dare Me is generally more along the lines of streaking or thrill-seeking. But in Thornwood, Rac...
- Sat Sep 07, 2024 2:22 pm
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Re: Connie Is Confused - If it's inappropriate for a girl's panties to be seen... should I get naked?
Wow! I'm honored by this homage. And I like what you've done with it. You've managed to distill the concept down into a much more digestible short story in a way I never seem able to do. I envy authors who are able to get to the point without seven chapters of backstory. I also loved the "age 1...
- Sun Sep 08, 2024 6:09 pm
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The Last Straw - Chapter 10
When I happily reported that our trip to the hardware store could go ahead as planned, Mary said nothing and mostly just stared back at me with a mixture between dread and terror. Since it meant she would be taking a nude walk through the middle of a strange town, I suppose I can forgive her for not...
- Tue Sep 10, 2024 6:40 pm
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- Fri Sep 20, 2024 1:17 pm
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The Last Straw - Chapter 11
According to the road atlas, we had a long way to go before reaching our next overnight destination. With Mary curled up and hiding her most interesting bits, I had nothing good to look at and had to settle for looking for other beautiful hills and valleys out the window. After a couple hours, we st...
- Mon Sep 23, 2024 2:45 pm
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Re: Dare Me (new 7/29)
This is one of my favorites. I'm looking forward to more. I just hope the Dares escalate to "helping her brother out." Thank you for the encouragement. I'm afraid this story does not play out exactly like you're hoping. But your comments do raise a salient question. Why does Mikey need he...
- Sat Sep 28, 2024 3:47 pm
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The Last Straw - Chapter 12
******************************** with a commanding lead in the September poll, I have decided to post an extra chapter this month. ******************************** Before dawn, I awoke with a groan and tried to work circulation back into my aching joints. As uncomfortable as my night had been, as my...
- Sat Sep 28, 2024 7:40 pm
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Re: The Last Straw (new 9/28)
I fear his pj's are not long for this world...
- Thu Oct 10, 2024 2:02 pm
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The Last Straw - Chapter 13
Making up for lost time, I openly gawked at Mary's healthy, naked chest as we took a southerly route out of town. Her boobs seemed extra bouncy this morning, and her nipples especially perky. I had missed them! I felt like a little kid riding next to the most desirable toy in the world. It would be ...