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by Pattareth
Mon Jul 08, 2024 12:51 am
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Re: A Tangled Web

Bump! Looking forward to the next update Drew.
by Pattareth
Fri Jul 12, 2024 3:48 am
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Re: A Tangled Web

With the first of Ben’s videos leaked, it feels like we are rapidly approaching the climax of this story in terms of the lewd stuff. I’m getting hyped for another chapter I know I’ll never forget. Just hope Craig gets to see Bailey au-natural before anyone else does. Speaking of things I’ll never fo...
by Pattareth
Wed Jul 24, 2024 1:56 am
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Re: Holly Humiliated

Nice story, but would be easier to follow if speech was in speech marks. Agreed. Quotation marks would be helpful whenever someone is speaking. Too hard to follow otherwise. I read that as “Question marks would be helpful” and was very confused. Had to reread it 5 times for my brain to put the lett...
by Pattareth
Wed Jul 31, 2024 12:50 am
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Re: A Tangled Web

Omg, the anticipation is killing me. I demand my payoff already! Also, idk if you’re the type to make the narrative as you write or if you have a concrete direction in mind before you even start, but if you are the former then thank you for pandering to my desire for romance in this story. Now I get...
by Pattareth
Thu Aug 08, 2024 1:50 am
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Re: A Tangled Web

Well, considering that Leslie is literally the one who kick-started all the events of this story by pantsing Bailey in chapter one, and their opponents being who they are, and everyone is already both drunk and horny, this’ll probably go in a direction I will not like. For the sake of my own mental ...