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Hmm.

Well... The funniest thing just happened...

The very next thread I checked after giving my two cents here was the thread for my current WIP story, and the latest comment was a near-perfect prediction of how I've been planning my story to end.

So.... can I change my answer? :lol:

It's the ...

Fucking with the original plan would likely produce something not as good, or not good at all. Ever see the end season of Game of Thrones? That's what happens when a bunch of crack-chugging assmonkeys are obsessed with being unpredictable instead of being focused on being good.


I think I ...

You’re right, I did figuratively and literally provide a shopping list for the reader. I guess I just didn’t realise how obvious the next steps and subsequent escalation of events would be to the reader. I’m taking this all on as constructive feedback, and hopefully I can fine-tune some of these ...

This was fun. I enjoyed how the reveal of the misunderstanding dawned on Jake in the very same moment that it was too late for him to do anything about his exposure to the class. It really helped make that realisation all the more impactful.

I'm glad you've taken the plunge after years of not ...

Apologies for bumping this thread without a substantial update. I felt I should mention it might be a few weeks still before I post part 3, as some other things in life have taken me away from home, and they will leave me with little writing time until around the 27th. Thanks for your patience.

There is a balance to a proper ENP victim. Most of the time it's sexier if the victim is pure and innocent, but then you start to feel sorry for them for going through such humiliation at all. This makes things feel unbalanced and wrong.

One of the tricks that I began using to adjust the balance ...

Ha, yeah, sorry about the extended hiatus. I'll be back with the final part soon. It's been slow going.

I don't get a lot of time alone to write, and then when I do get time to myself, it can take me some time to get momentum going again. Hence why I'm a slow writer at the best of times.

But it is ...

When I started reading this story back at the time of your first post, I was jealous. See, I had an idea for a story that began very similarly in my "future story ideas" file, and was a little saddened to have to delete the little synopsis I'd composed for it. But then, as you laid out each new part ...

Hope everyone’s having a wonderful festive season.

It is no secret that when it comes to being an author, my unannounced absences far outweigh my writing output. I still have an unfinished ENF story here that I fully intend on completing early in the new year, as well as multiple other stories ...

I came up with a stripping game with the intention of basing a story around it, but then realised that while it is quite a fun idea for a game, it would be nigh impossible to base a story around. Not because it isn’t a compelling game, but because every second paragraph would have to refresh the ...