One thing I'd suggest is to start a new paragraph for each new speaker. This has the added benefit of breaking the story up so it's more readable.
Look forward to reading more.
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Re: Lisa on the Beach, Part-1
Two comments. First, it is ALWAYS proper etiquette and form to give the original author credit for his or her work. It is NEVER acceptable to post another's work giving the impression that this posted work was your own which is what you did by posting KrylB's work under your own name. That, my frien...