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What an intense story your have managed to create! I am loving every chapter so far. Your pacing, on balance is quite good, though if I am honest, I would love to see you spend a wee bit more time (and details) on the embarrassing situations Annie/Sophie finds herself in rather just just describing ...

What an intense story your have managed to create! I am loving every chapter so far. I really appreciate that. This story isn't getting as many reactions as the first one, so it is hard to gauge how well it is being received. Your pacing, on balance is quite good, though if I am honest, I would lov...

As it turns out, more people have reached out complimenting the first Becca chapter and asking for followup there than have engaged on all of my previous stories combined in the three and a half years I've been publishing. Because of this, I've been stockpiling ideas and thinking about the world con...

Dare Me - Chapter 16 - Wait, What Happened at Camp? (Part 1) As soon as she stepped on that bus, I sped off through the rain with erotic visions of Miss Easterling dancing in my head. I went straight home and headed up to my room, grabbing Riviera Dave's tub of lotion along the way. I had found it e...

Hey Everyone, this is just a story I wrote with the assistance of an AI, and I thought it turned out pretty good, I figured I don't post here that often, so I should at least post this here. Enjoy. ============= Emily sat in the corner of the room, nervously twisting her hands in her lap. She was th...

I like the way you all think! Some of these ideas pretty close to what I have planned. I will say that the nature of Lia's punishment is going to change quite a bit. Not in a way Lia is going to like

She’s the kind of girl who climbed the ladder of success wrong by wrong. – Mae West More Therapy - Chapter 12 “Sophie! Heel!” Dr. Crowe commanded for at least the 100th time. That and, “Sophie, stop.” Or “Sophie, walk.” We had been walking for at least an hour. Twelve blocks doesn’t sound like that...

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This chapter was intentionally deleted, as I have decided to go a different direction for the remainder of the story. The new Chapter 13 is posted below.

Thank you all so much for your comments. I appreciate each and every one of them and the thumbs ups as well, as it helps give me the motivation to continue. I'll admit, sometimes it's difficult, but I don't want to let anyone of you reading my stories down. So, thanks again.

Abbie could feel her heart racing as she headed for the school auditorium. She had a good hunch that this would end up being the largest group of people she had ever been naked in front of. Whatever this health presentation would entail, she knew that the entire 7th grade class at her school was mea...