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Readers, thanks for the input, updated version I stepped into the biology classroom, my heart pounding like a jackhammer in my chest, still reeling from the humiliation of the day. The sharp, sterile scent of disinfectant clung to the air, a clinical reminder of where I was, but it did nothing to wa...

Very good chapter and I love the storyline, but even after the reedit, there are some plot gaps. Emma is declared to be hairless above the neck before the first clippers have touched her long hair. Little things like that break my concentration as a reader. Having said that, please don't stop, I loo...

Read that gap as well. But I look at who said that was a teen and teenagers are known to speak before their actions.

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--PART 11-- At lunch break earlier that day, Lucas had sent a text to only carefully selected boys so that it didn't get passed onto either of their 'victims', and spook them. It read, "Want to see that girl naked in person? She'll be here after school, so hide in the trees". This was fol...

--PART 12-- Within a matter of seconds an unruly, raucous crowd of around two dozen had surrounded the pair, comprised mostly teenagers (but a few were in their early twenties) - and the majority of them were male. Wherever Sarah looked she saw boys' leering faces ogling her body - many she knew pe...

Chapter 42 The room grew eerily quiet, the only sounds being Rachel’s slow, deliberate breaths and the occasional snicker from the other girls. Riley felt like a trapped animal, her body tense and ready to flee at the slightest opportunity. Rachel's eyes narrowed, and she leaned down, her lips brus...

I’d love to hear thoughts on the new part! I might post another part later today, depending on how feedback is!

Chapter 5A: A Moment of Solitude I was almost to the restroom when a group of five students—four girls and one guy—blocked my path. My heart raced as I recognized them from my Extreme Graphic Art course. Their bodies were bare, adorned with a chaotic tapestry of words and drawings, each mark a testa...

so that hints on what I said before in a comment this is is for the very long term, for the rest of her high school career, not just this year or this semester. This is the way of life for them.

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