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Sarah had just dried off after swimming at the beach. she often visited this beach but today was a bit different you see Sarah is normally very shy but also has an exhibitionist streak. she normally would ...
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- Fri Mar 26, 2021 1:05 pm
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- Tue Mar 30, 2021 1:06 am
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Re: sarah the shy exhibitionist First attempt at a story-criticism welcome.
As to the capitalization I think that's a side effect of typing on a phone into a word document app.
The new version also has a few errors in it (the drink and ice cream bought twice and the line "Tom, the ringleader called outshone wants to see Sarah naked!”").
These are probably a mix of ...
- Thu Apr 01, 2021 1:34 am
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Re: sarah the shy exhibitionist First attempt at a story-criticism welcome.
Last update for a bit
I've changed a few things around and fixed the issue with capitalization (hopefully).I've tried to keep the story more sexy than extreme(in my opinion anyhow). I may try to modify/add to this story in the future however in the meantime if anyone wants to modify/add to/rewrite ...
I've changed a few things around and fixed the issue with capitalization (hopefully).I've tried to keep the story more sexy than extreme(in my opinion anyhow). I may try to modify/add to this story in the future however in the meantime if anyone wants to modify/add to/rewrite ...