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INTRODUCTION
Michael was a high school junior good looking got good grades popular he was also someone who knew it and let others know it especially the girls.
He often treated them disrespectfully telling them they should dress sexier or show more skin. Katya was also a junior she was pretty but ...

Massageguy wrote: Wed Oct 30, 2024 10:05 pm Great concept, but painful to read. I'd be happy to help with editing...and others are available

Only the second story I have written anywhere so these are learn as you go stuff.

Caught By Friend’s Little Sister Part 5 A Surprise Visitor

Judy and Milli were coming over, and all I had was this tiny towel!
“Let’s go into the living room!” Cindy chirped.
The girls pulled us into the living room.
Every stumbly step we took, the small towel slipped!
As soon as Jon got to the ...

I repeat...

Great concept, fun plot, exciting stuff.


But the grammar is atrocious. Run on sentences...

That's easily fixed. Finding the ideas, the creativity you show - that's tough.

Strange how the writing part is easy for some, but they have trouble coming up with an idea and it's the ...

Great Chapter! Love that you brought Peter into the story, forced to entertain more much younger girls. Looking forward to what the girls subject the boys to next!

Part Forty-Two

I had to move forward to the patio door on all fours with Lexie still straddling my back and occasionally slapping my ass. All the while the younger girls ran around squealing, Denise looked on indulgently and Aditty filmed. I baulked at grazing my knees by continuing in that fashion ...

This is one going to be one fun video for Lexie to play for the adults when they get back. The current position they have him in would be great for tickling his balls.

Rob needs to work on his stamina and strength having the girls being able to physically dominate him so easily is a rather sad state for him. That said he really doesn’t put up much effort to stop them either it would be a pretty dull story if he did.

Good start, hope we get another chapters.

Rob needs to work on his stamina and strength having the girls being able to physically dominate him so easily is a rather sad state for him. That said he really doesn’t put up much effort to stop them either it would be a pretty dull story if he did.

Well, the thing is that he could overpower ...