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I have been hoping for someone to finish the ENF side of this story, and you have done a wonderful job so far. I am eagerly waiting to lean Ally’s fate, and for that first swim…

With a risk of sounding a bit entitled I'm going to feel a significant amount of distress if this story doesn't get finished. One of my favorite of the recent stories for sure.


Oh my, no pressure then :mrgreen: Well here's another chapter. And I'm chipping away at another (obvious) one. No ...

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Glorious. No notes.

Just like you've done with Jenny and Piper before her, I love every decision you've made for Ally's character. I had wondered if/how her tomboyishness would feed into how she handled things, and I was pleasantly surprised by how you had that feed into her mannerisms ...

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Glorious. No notes.

Just like you've done with Jenny and Piper before her, I love every decision you've made for Ally's character. I had wondered if/how her tomboyishness would feed into how she handled things, and I was pleasantly surprised by how you had that feed into her mannerisms ...

Chapter 4 – Wet, wet, wet

I assumed that this development was obvious and predictable. From the girls’ astounded expressions, it seemed like it was anything but. I was quickly learning it was far easier to be smart and devious and think ahead when you were the person dishing out the teasing and ...

I'm too late to the party on providing thoughts for the next chapter, but that's fine as Executionus and Fred had articulated everything and anything I might have wanted to say anyway, and the vote I had submitted was aligned with theirs. Fred's breakdown of Piper's insecurities and where her head ...

Long time fan of CaughtofLore and really enjoying this, would love to find/read more of your work mars357, please keep contributing both of you! :D

Bit of a suggestion/request I thought I'd make (but feel free to ignore at your discretion)!

Miriam Henkins, though not guilty of a big 'crime', was ...

Long time fan of CaughtofLore and really enjoying this, would love to find/read more of your work mars357, please keep contributing both of you! :D

Bit of a suggestion/request I thought I'd make (but feel free to ignore at your discretion)!

Miriam Henkins, though not guilty of a big 'crime ...

Chapter 5 — Mercy… and War

I didn’t miss a beat. As soon as I closed the door, I turned towards the three of them, all trying to cover up and hang on what little modesty there was left to be had and spoke, out loud and with clarity and smoothness that surprised even me.

Turns out arousal and ...

Funny what a bottle or two will do for a woman. I lost count==did Piper stick two or three feet in her mouth? Boyd couldn't have planned it better if he tried. I've GOT to stick around to see the end of this!