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Brilliantly, brilliantly written!

I thought you did a great job making it seem plausible that the headmaster would agree with Suzies request and allow her into the boys changing rooms. He wants the school to be progressive and he doesn't want to stop a student doing her job just because of her ...

Great chapter that really sets the scene for what's the come I'm sure.

Already thinking Julie will become one of my favourite characters, one of those classic little sister characters that causes nothing but trouble for her embarrassed big brother. Cannot wait to see her reaction to some of the ...

Really enjoyed your story! Hope Suzie’s first locker room visit happens with the oldest boys being interviewed by an 11 year old girl. Principal Martin should also be there to make sure the boys behave & get to witness his secret fantasy.

Yes, she should interview the older boys for sure.

Chapter 3: This Just In: Suzie!

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The crowd was pouring out in clumps, spilling into the orange-glow hallway lights and leaving behind the warm stink of sweat, popcorn ...

So! This installment wound up being waaaay longer than intended. But since this story is going to be a much slower burn than Little Sister’s Anatomy Lesson - so I felt like I needed to focus a lot more on dialogue, and generally building tension. That said, if i missed any glaring issues, or if you ...

So, Suzie interviews 15-year-old Aiden Braxton while he is wearing only a skimpy shirt and a jock strap including a protective cup. Then the unfortunate Aiden has his photograph featured along with Suzie's subsequent newspaper story. Truly embarrassing for Aiden! I wonder if Aiden will be the talk ...

Fantastic!

I was hoping we'd get some one on one interviews to really intensify the embarrassment of the boy that had been cornered by Suzie and that's exactly what we got. I really hope we get to see more like this, I thought you captured the character of Aiden brilliantly. His reaction to the ...

Here's hoping for a new chapter of this. I like it so far.

Can't wait.