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Brilliant ending to a great story!

Perfect ending. I enjoyed reading this story. I hope you continue writing here.

Just curious about Cam’s briefs. Did Hannah keep it as a souvenir?

I've deliberately left several things open here (Cam's future adventures with the girls, the fate of his briefs, what Natalie might do next, whether Mary will ever have that talk with Hannah, etc.)

I like the idea of leaving these things for readers to imagine for themselves what happens. I don't ...

Also, I shouldn't forget to say, thank you for all the love for this story. It means a lot to me.

Can't say enough such a great story overall! I'll probably be repeating other comments but I've never been on more of a emotional roller coaster from start to finish! I love how you were able to combine heartfelt, humiliating, and making it all so realistic. I know it's an ENM story but you're story ...

Agreed!!! But also Bare4U please take that as a compliment to your writing and I understand needing a break after this well thought out story!

Lovely way to finish what has been a benchmark example of great fantasy ENM & ENF writing in the one magnificent story.

Thank you again for all your time and effort.

Freesub wrote: Mon Feb 24, 2025 2:46 am I liked it, though perhaps exposing Hannah feels like a loose end that should've been closed.

I thought it was a nice subtle way of her getting some embarrassment and keeping her in check so the pics don't circulate. After all Mia probably wouldn't be on board with humiliating Hannah

Love it! Now that he has been exposed naked to the girls and with a hardon, I expect even more embarrassment at the beach.

NickTwisp wrote: Mon Feb 24, 2025 9:43 pm The Marcie reference is an error. She did indeed go inside with Aunt Jill.

As the author you can easily edit this to correct the name