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Writing it now-
Holy shit!
The tension is high
Mark might be a bit of a perv

The tension of us as readers will also be high, we are excited to see what you have planned!!!


I try and put myself in the characters’ positions as much as possible when writing.
Having written them, I obviously SHOULD know how they each think and react.
The girls having to submit to what MARK ...

Okay,
Just the tiniest bit of a spoiler…
Currently, the girls of our little coven are becoming VERY close

Sorry
This latest chapter is a real challenge for me.
I’ve written and scrapped 3 complete drafts.
I’m trying to keep it incredibly kinky, but still be within character between the 4 of them.
They’ve got to maintain their ‘Tainted Virgin’ status, and I’m trying to think of things Mark could do/have ...

I think I figured it out

I tried it 4 different ways, and each time, it felt wrong.
It felt ‘too’ exploitative/one sided.
It’s not like Mark wants ‘revenge’,
I just had to figure out HOW things would play out.
Still working on it, but I think I’m happy with it
Christine fans should be happy

This will (essentially) be the 3rd “Ritual” we’ve seen.

The 1st) The girls forced Mark to act based on THEIR wills.

The 2nd) Mark had to do things of his OWN will.

The 3rd) This one, Mark is in FULL control over the girls.

It’s a complete power shift.

Like I said,
I think I figured this chapter out and…
Hoooooo boy!
Mark’s teenage hormones seem to be in charge more than he is

Sooooo,
This might turn into a multi chapter mini thing as I wrap up the current segment.
It ran REALLY long lol.
Mark just put the girls through an INCREDIBLY humiliating ordeal for ANY 13 year old girl, no matter HOW you look at it.
I’m not sure how I feel about it, but I’m sticking with it.

Magic Chapter 35 Part 2

“Tonight, Mark, we’ll let you be in control of us.” Emily said.
My heart was pounding!
“What?” I asked again.
Emily walked over and shut and locked my door.
Christine giggled and tugged at her onesy sleeve.
“Pretend we’re under a spell, if that makes it easier!” Christine ...