I promise, it’s my priority
Still rebuilding my ‘show bible’ but about halfway there.
Getting reacquainted with the world I built, and at the same time, trying NOT to change or correct anything…
I hate reading my own writing
As disappointing as this is, I can’t complain too much. I’d rather you take your time on it anyway, just building more anticipation 😜 If it helps to maintain the phenomenal quality of the story, that’s fine by me✌🏻 I’ll just tease myself by reading it over again😋
“This is my first attempt at writing this kind of fiction. Feedback welcome. It’s not likely to be the most original story ever, but let’s see how it goes!”
Just realized that this is how this story started…
Not to continue beating a dead horse, but you have done a PHENOMENAL job for this being ...
The writing is still top notch, and I believe there is more to cum, but it seems we may have seen everything Cam has to offer at this point… Or have we???? He was able to get a boner earlier. Maybe… JUST MAYBE, Cam is a grower and NOT a shower???? Ellie is obviously disappointed and that hurts ...
SPH doesn't do it for me. I like humiliation stories where the guy has a good sized cock.
Cam is only 13, so I wasn’t hoping for a ‘huge cock’ reveal. But it seems he IS underdeveloped for his age, which REALLY fucking sucks😓 But if he can bone up… That MIGHT be at least a little more ...
SPH doesn't do it for me. I like humiliation stories where the guy has a good sized cock.
I remember reading Jack and Cam are of same size when they have a boner and Ellie thought Jacks boner was decent sized. If only Cam can get a boner the girls might change their opinion.
I wouldn't call this an SPH reveal. Cameron obviously hasn't entered puberty yet, so he could look very different in only one year's time.
It being revealed that the older and larger Jack has to resort to stuffing his shorts is definitely SPH, but done in a funny way to put a bully in his place ...