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I’d love some feedback on this! What am I doing well? What can I be doing better? What fun ideas do you have for Riley to do? Your story is good written and well thought. It is consistent. What you can do better? I’m not judging you on that Ideas, posted one idea for you. Think of something else. B...

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Good luck!

As said before I hope not, if everyone saw her naked, this great story could end very quick and that would be a shame. But who am I

I guess you lost me here. All previous chapters I felt what Riley feels, this one not. In my opinion it is way out of line with previous chapter which were to humiliate Riley, this on isn’t about humiliation anymore. Too bad…… I was afraid this would happen one time. Probably my last feedback on the...

What do you all think of the direction this story is going? Too much action? Not enough action? How far should things go with the boys? I must admit, to me you are getting the story back on track. You found a good pace of action. Concerning the boys, you wrote Riley is still a virgin, so I would sa...

These next few parts will probably be the most challenging for me to write. I don’t really have any experience with guys so it may be a bit harder to write about. Regardless, I’m looking forward to the challenge. As always, I’m definitely open to any ideas anybody may have! Well you got me really b...

Reread the chapters with the boys. You started real strong, but the last chapter wasn’t your strongest in this story. If it was for me the boys don’t come back. You are more stronger with girl to girl action/humiliation. But you gave it a shot and it didn’t completely fail. Writing is also trying an...

I really, really hope you never let Riley give up her virginity forced or not for a stupid game. It would really be a storykiller for me. And if you let Riley agree to take the pill, you are planning that. It’s a real shame :shock: The real thing as you call it, interferes your story, it isn’t playf...

I really, really hope you never let Riley give up her virginity forced or not for a stupid game. It would really be a storykiller for me. And if you let Riley agree to take the pill, you are planning that. It’s a real shame :shock: The real thing as you call it, interferes your story, it isn’t play...

I saw your stories on Sue page, but couldn’t comment there. So I’m happy to see you here as well.
I really love your stories, great build up, great character descriptions.
The story of miss Lovelace really need a follow up. Looking forward to all your coming stories!