Legitimately,
I hope to have Chapter 40 out yet tonight.
Working within the rules of the world I’ve built, I’ve tried to craft a chapter that works, without breaking any of those established ‘rules’…
This has been my most challenging chapter yet
I’m trying
Why not both? Mean in her naivety? Because she is curious, she doesn't care for James' feelings in the moment? She just wants to satisfy whatever idea is on her mind and as such, causes trouble and or embarrassment for James?
Okay, I’m already pretty far in at this point, but… Julie… Do you prefer mean? Or naive?
I'm VERY biased if you can't tell from my own stories, but I like a great mix of both! She's his younger sister and is having a lot of fun at his expense while he's going through a very humiliating time ...
It wasn't a long wait really but it felt like AGES without a new chapter, I've really missed this story :D
Of course this was worth the wait, it was brilliant. I especially loved how the girls were just treating it as some lighthearted fun where as to Alex this was ...
I think too you could maybe have her being sympathetic to her brother and maybe even secretly feeling a little sorry for him but also at the end of the day she's a young girl and she can't help but enjoy seeing him embarrassed and naked and she can't resist joining in with the other girls in ...
It wasn't a long wait really but it felt like AGES without a new chapter, I've really missed this story :D
Of course this was worth the wait, it was brilliant. I especially loved how the girls were just treating it as some lighthearted fun where as to Alex this was ...
She is still relishing in her dominant position over a naked boy. Especially since James is 13! And don’t forget, she’s already seen Mark😈 These are ALL factors I’ve been taking in as I write this chapter. I’d put Julie’s character as an incredibly ‘provoking’ character, but she doesn’t realize what ...
She is still relishing in her dominant position over a naked boy. Especially since James is 13! And don’t forget, she’s already seen Mark😈 These are ALL factors I’ve been taking in as I write this chapter. I’d put Julie’s character as an incredibly ‘provoking’ character, but she doesn’t realize ...
Glad to see she gets to do the interviews in the locker room. Principal Martin getting excited about the fact that the boys will be exposed to Suzie was a surprise!