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Alternative version! The opening is the same, I marked where it diverges below if you want to just skip there.

It was a typical weekday evening, the kind where the only company was the occasional rumble of distant thunder and the comforting hum of the central heating. I had just finished a long day ...

Wow excellent part 2! So many great things happening, watching him from her room and walking in to brush her teeth with him, and especially the way she teases him, the way he let her see for a moment, the "boing!", that he actually cleaned the sink before wrapping the towel around himself, that she ...

"Alright, Jim," the swimming teacher called out, "time for laps!"

The last day of swimming lessons and he had the whole pool to himself. The other students in his class had all disappeared for summer vacations, leaving him and the young, fit instructor, Rachel. She was young but still some years ...

New story, similar idea, Jim has been taking swimming lessons at a distance neighbor's backyard pool, only this time he forgot to bring his swimsuit!

"You're late," Mrs. Castellanos called out as she opened the door to the sight of Jim, flustered and out of breath, his cheeks a rosy hue.

Jim ...

One hot summer, our entire family spent a week at a cottage on a lake. My older sister Jessica, my parents, and I drove to a dock, rented a motorboat that could comfortably seat us, and took it on the water, riding for 20 minutes until we reached a secluded cottage that could only be accessed by ...

Thanks, go ahead, I don't mind, it would be interesting for me to read how you modify the story.

I don't view it as wrong, it's the internet, I can't think of anything less offensive than someone modifying content I've created.

I read the modified version, it's not my cup of tea but it's fine, feel free to post it, no need to apologize.

Thanks to Lola for inspiring the idea for this story.

Growing up, my older sister Jessica and I loved watching movies, we only owned a few but we had watched them all dozens of times and we knew all the words. The Lion King, Toy Story, Babe, Titanic, Aladdin, Home Alone, The land Before Time ...