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by JustHere10
Sat Feb 15, 2025 5:52 pm
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Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (Part 11 -14 Feb)


This chapter was the hardest (pun intended) to write so far. It went through multiple iterations before I felt it was in a fit state to be posted. There was a tamer version, which felt like it didn't really live up to all the build-up from the previous chapters. There was a more extreme version ...
by JustHere10
Tue Feb 18, 2025 9:55 pm
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Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (Part 12 -18 Feb)

Love love love! Can't believe I ever started to not like Ellie. I remember in the beginning of the story I thought it was just Mia with her devious scheming but Ellie has proved herself haha. Cam can't seem to catch a break with Mark and Jack in the end ugh haha. I would never want to you to change ...
by JustHere10
Sat Feb 22, 2025 2:26 am
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Re: A Simple Little Prank Part 4 (Finale)

Part 4 Claire (Finale)

A month has gone by since that faithful day of my sister Juliana streaking through the neighborhood. Every day at school I witnessed her getting teased constantly. I kept telling her people would eventually move on. I did feel bad for her, but let's be honest...I'm mostly ...
by JustHere10
Sun Feb 23, 2025 10:42 pm
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Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (complete)

Can't say enough such a great story overall! I'll probably be repeating other comments but I've never been on more of a emotional roller coaster from start to finish! I love how you were able to combine heartfelt, humiliating, and making it all so realistic. I know it's an ENM story but you're story ...
by JustHere10
Sun Feb 23, 2025 11:06 pm
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Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (complete)

Agreed!!! But also Bare4U please take that as a compliment to your writing and I understand needing a break after this well thought out story!
by JustHere10
Mon Feb 24, 2025 12:00 am
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Re: A Game of Golf part 2

Part 2 Bad to Worse

Christine and Tina made James take the lead down 3 flights of stairs and stopped at the doorway that leads to the lobby of the front desk. Through the window they could all see that Abby was indeed working the front desk. James attempted to make one last plea.

"Please girls ...
by JustHere10
Mon Feb 24, 2025 12:55 am
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Re: A Game of Golf part 2

Will do thanks! I've always been a reader not writer so wasn't sure how my thoughts come across when I wrote lol.
by JustHere10
Mon Feb 24, 2025 4:48 am
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Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (complete)

Freesub wrote: Mon Feb 24, 2025 2:46 am I liked it, though perhaps exposing Hannah feels like a loose end that should've been closed.
I thought it was a nice subtle way of her getting some embarrassment and keeping her in check so the pics don't circulate. After all Mia probably wouldn't be on board with humiliating Hannah
by JustHere10
Tue Feb 25, 2025 9:16 pm
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The Intern Rivalry

This story contains both Enf and Enm. It's a little bit unrealistic but hopefully it still comes across okay. Everyone in the story is 18+

It all started when Pearson Financials decided to hire two aspiring college students to participate in their prestigious Summer Intern program. The program had ...
by JustHere10
Wed Mar 05, 2025 8:30 pm
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Re: Maya’s Debasement

I like the setup! It's interesting because will Savannah succeed or will it backfire since Maya knows that she's capable of?? Great writing!