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by docknumber
Sun Mar 02, 2025 12:46 am
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Re: Magic (New 2-28-2025)


As the writer/creator,
As a fan of the character MY character is based on,
It is a HARD decision.
I see the feedback, and I appreciate and agree,
But it it isn’t clear cut (yet)
But this current chapter is a step (in one direction)


Wait so Sam is your favorite character?
I like Jade and ...
by docknumber
Sun Mar 02, 2025 6:09 pm
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I waited all day yesterday for the new chapter, but all I can say is it was worth the wait. I like the way Mark acts as a big brother to James.
Wonder what Mark gonna do with girls given that he has control on them.
Nice chapter nudebag. You covered and opened many possibilities with this chapter.
by docknumber
Sun Mar 02, 2025 6:11 pm
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Brilliant?😅
That might be a bit much, but thank you😊
I almost deleted the entire pharmacy encounter, but I felt it was important as a character moment.
I hope it was okay 😓


I am a bit confused with the girls getting emotional after the pharmacy encounter. Did the girls get emotional as Mark ...
by docknumber
Sun Mar 02, 2025 7:05 pm
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Re: Magic (New 2-28-2025)


Also also…
Remember the hint I dropped about the possible ‘side effects’ the girls’ use of magic might have?…


I still couldn’t figure out what this could be. Can you give any more hints?

My guess is it has something to do with Emily and Christine trying to have Mark for themselves (Just a ...
by docknumber
Sun Mar 02, 2025 8:39 pm
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Re: Magic (New 3-2-2025)

Themarble wrote: Sun Mar 02, 2025 8:32 pm Honestly, I'd say go how far you are comfortable with. You know best how Mark thinks, would act and react. Whatever you do, I know we will love.

So basically the line is as malleable as you'd like.
Agreed
by docknumber
Sun Mar 02, 2025 9:46 pm
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I am curious how pervy Mark could be. Also the thought Sam and Carly exposed to Mark kinda turned me on. I would love to see the girls teasing Mark even though they are submitting to him for the night.
by docknumber
Mon Mar 03, 2025 3:08 am
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Re: Bad day for a run

James didn’t realize if he gets to climax by the new much younger girls, it would be more humiliating than by the teens. Hmm maybe or maybe not?
by docknumber
Mon Mar 03, 2025 3:36 am
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James didn’t realize if he gets to climax by the new much younger girls, it would be more humiliating than by the teens. Hmm maybe or maybe not?


The general idea is the younger girls won't be thinking that way and if things start to get out of control with James Andrea and their moms could ...
by docknumber
Mon Mar 03, 2025 11:58 pm
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I really want to see how pervy and kinky Mark can be. Will he get back at the girls for all the exposure they caused him to? I’m curious will this night lead to any more power dynamics between Christine and Emily.
by docknumber
Tue Mar 04, 2025 12:50 am
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I tried it 4 different ways, and each time, it felt wrong.
It felt ‘too’ exploitative/one sided.
It’s not like Mark wants ‘revenge’,
I just had to figure out HOW things would play out.
Still working on it, but I think I’m happy with it✌🏻
Christine fans should be happy😅


When I said get back, I ...