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Have you considered making spinoff chapters about one particular game , where for example Heather is hit in the boobs and needs coach to apply cream there to help her recover in time to win the game. :D


In my "It's In the Script" story, I had a boy playing volleyball against some girls. The ...

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A bit of advice. You really should decide whether you are writing in the present tense or the past tense. Mixing them up just causes confusion.

So he said "sure. Why not?"

A new entry under "famous last words?"

While we're criticizing, you don't need that trigger warning stuff. I'm sure most of us here are trying to pretend it's not 2024 and that is an unwelcome reminder. Great story by the way, quite unique

Another sleepover? Time for some more tomfoolery!

I'm really enjoying your story. I like the way the kids have evolved with age on and off the ice. Keep going and don't listen to the critics. There are lots of other sites that have stories involving underage sex. What they are doing is very mild compared to other sites. I for one am enjoying this ...

Wait did you misunderstand? I didn't mean remove the content, i meant you don't need the warning. Like you said, it's common. And the other criticism was about tense consistency.

While we're criticising, you don't need that trigger warning stuff. I'm sure most of us here are trying to pretend it's not 2024 and that is an unwelcome reminder. Great story by the way, quite unique.


This isn’t making any sense. Such warnings are entirely positive, not an "unwelcome reminder ...

Quite interesting... Coach also helps out Heather.. what a good Samaritan