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by Somebody
Sun Oct 20, 2024 4:25 am
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Re: Stripped to the Core

I must concur, both that it is a great story and that, from the moment I heard her long hair described, I thought this story should really involve her losing it. Maybe not all of it, but cut short so she can't cover herself with it at all. And of course, certain other hair might be hiding something...
by Somebody
Tue Oct 22, 2024 7:33 pm
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Re: Stripped to the Core New 10/22

Glad to see our suggestions used, but the AI program you're using really has kind of lost the plot, which happens to me when I try to use them too, especially around shaving. they don't seem to understand that you don't "shave someone's hair (on their head)" or feel the sting of metal. Raz...
by Somebody
Tue Dec 10, 2024 7:23 pm
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Re: Heather Plays Hockey [Ch8 Posted on 12/10/24] (trigger warning - underage nudity)

While we're criticizing, you don't need that trigger warning stuff. I'm sure most of us here are trying to pretend it's not 2024 and that is an unwelcome reminder. Great story by the way, quite unique
by Somebody
Wed Dec 11, 2024 8:08 pm
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Re: Heather Plays Hockey [Ch8 Posted on 12/10/24] (trigger warning - underage nudity)

Wait did you misunderstand? I didn't mean remove the content, i meant you don't need the warning. Like you said, it's common. And the other criticism was about tense consistency.
by Somebody
Wed Dec 25, 2024 7:31 pm
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Re: Janet's Story (Part 1 - 5) Updated 12-24-2024

Always wonderful to see things continued
by Somebody
Mon Dec 30, 2024 7:27 pm
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Re: The Family Tradition: Picture Day (2l - June 28th)

In ways it will be impossible to put into words. I have enjoyed your work for so long, and as the pool of websites is being drained, starting in our erotic shallow end, the loss of even a drop, let alone a bucket like yourself, hurts all the more. I understand that issues that go on in one's real li...
by Somebody
Sat Jan 11, 2025 1:26 am
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Re: The Last Straw (new 1/10)

Beautiful, I was wondering how you were gonna rope her in. Lots of unexpected twists here.
by Somebody
Wed Jan 15, 2025 7:58 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 1/14)

So glad you are back. There is one idea but it might ruin the rest of the ideas. Could make her tell her parents that she's become a nudist
by Somebody
Fri Jan 24, 2025 3:17 am
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Re: Melody on her Best behavior cmnf section

I think, since it said make legs into an M, that it means having both knees up, both feet down, spread slightly so that looking at the legs from the front, you get an M, or like an eagle's wings. I imagine that's a foreign term that our good Wastelander has translated literally because I don't think...