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Hope we haven’t lost Debbiefan starting to miss the misadventure of naked Rob.

Jeepman89 wrote: Sat Oct 26, 2024 1:24 pmMe too.

Probably just got busy with life outside the site hope we get some new chapters soon it's a fun story.

Debbifan wrote: Sat Oct 26, 2024 3:47 pm

Vader wrote: Sat Oct 26, 2024 1:19 pm Hope we haven’t lost Debbiefan starting to miss the misadventure of naked Rob.

Recovering from 'man flu' which hasn't been conducive to writing

Sorry to hear that hope your feeling better if not hope your soon flu sucks big time.

Part Forty

There was finally an ad break on TV and I quickly took the opportunity to get down off of the coffee table and sit back on the sofa. The girls groaned that the dance was over but Aditty had been recording it and began setting up the TV for playback. "Do you want to see yourself Rob ...

This is going to be one entertaining video for the adults to watch when they get back. The girls could have more fun if they offered naked pony rides on Rob for any other girls who happen by.

Love all the girls getting involved in the tickling and groping session and Lexie going for a naked horsey ride! It will get even more exciting for them as they take a naked Rob out into the garden where all the girls can get a ride. It's hilarious that Aditty insists on filming all the action as ...

INTRODUCTION
Michael was a high school junior good looking got good grades popular he was also someone who knew it and let others know it especially the girls.
He often treated them disrespectfully telling them they should dress sexier or show more skin. Katya was also a junior she was pretty but ...

Massageguy wrote: Wed Oct 30, 2024 10:05 pm Great concept, but painful to read. I'd be happy to help with editing...and others are available

Only the second story I have written anywhere so these are learn as you go stuff.

I repeat...

Great concept, fun plot, exciting stuff.


But the grammar is atrocious. Run on sentences...

That's easily fixed. Finding the ideas, the creativity you show - that's tough.

Strange how the writing part is easy for some, but they have trouble coming up with an idea and it's the ...

This is one going to be one fun video for Lexie to play for the adults when they get back. The current position they have him in would be great for tickling his balls.